Talk:Suzumiya Haruhi:Volume6 Asahina Mikuru's Adventure Episode 00 - Revision history

Smidge204: Added translation discussion

2007-03-09T11:57:16Z

Added translation discussion

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			= Translation Issue =

			An anonymous contributor (218.251.17.243) has altered the translation. Here is the text before the edit:

			::"I cannot explain right now, but one day you will understand. You have two choices: To travel around the universe with me or to explore the possibilities of the future with her."

			And here is the text after the edit:

			::"I cannot explain right now, but one day you will understand. You have two choices: To put back the earth to what's supposed to be with me or to take away the possibilities of the future with her."

			I believe neither of these are correct, but the first version is slightly more accurate. The original Japanese is:

			::「今は説明できない。しかしいずれ理解を得ることもあるだろう。あなたの選択肢《せんたくし》は二つある。わたしとともに宇宙をあるべき姿へと進行させるか、彼女に味方して未来の可能性を摘《つ》み取ることである」

			Based on this, I believe the proper translation is actually very close to that used in the Anime (as fansubbed by A.F.K). It mentions outer space and it's proper form, and picking the possibilities of the future. Therefore, I have borrowed the fansub translation and inserted it into the text until we can get a proper consensus. [[User:Smidge204\|Smidge204]] 03:57, 9 March 2007 (PST)

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	"Only the did he raise his pitch and made a serious face." This sentence needs to be re-examined. There must be some translation error or missing words because it makes no sense to me.		"Only the did he raise his pitch and made a serious face." This sentence needs to be re-examined. There must be some translation error or missing words because it makes no sense to me.

Andiyar at 12:38, 20 October 2006

2006-10-20T12:38:48Z

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24.31.100.122 at 03:35, 17 September 2006

2006-09-17T03:35:44Z

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	"One morning, Mikuru found a letter inside her shoe letter."		"One morning, Mikuru found a letter inside her shoe letter."
	changed to "letter inside her shoe ~~box~~." ?		changed to "letter inside her shoe locker." ?
	-Teisu		-Teisu

Teisu at 23:12, 15 September 2006

2006-09-15T23:12:04Z

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	The word "eaten" in English is used almost exclusively with chewing and/or food. I think that a more appropriate word might be "fondled,		The word "eaten" in English is used almost exclusively with chewing and/or food. I think that a more appropriate word might be "fondled,
	or "leered at". - Teisu		or "leered at". - Teisu
	~~changed~~ to "molested". -Teisu
			Changed to "molested". -Teisu

Teisu at 23:11, 15 September 2006

2006-09-15T23:11:20Z

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	-Psy		-Psy

	Changed to "Only then did he raise the pitch of his voice and make a serious face." -Teisu		Changed to "Only then did he raise the pitch of his voice and make a serious face." -Teisu

24.31.100.122 at 22:57, 15 September 2006

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			Changed to "Only then did he raise the pitch of his voice and make a serious face." -Teisu


	"One morning, Mikuru found a letter inside her shoe letter."		"One morning, Mikuru found a letter inside her shoe letter."
			changed to "letter inside her shoe box." ?
	~~Should this be~~ "letter inside her shoe box." ?
	-Teisu		-Teisu

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	The word "eaten" in English is used almost exclusively with chewing and/or food. I think that a more appropriate word might be "fondled,		The word "eaten" in English is used almost exclusively with chewing and/or food. I think that a more appropriate word might be "fondled,
	or "leered at". - Teisu		or "leered at". - Teisu
			changed to "molested". -Teisu

24.31.100.122 at 22:09, 15 September 2006

2006-09-15T22:09:39Z

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	Should this be "letter inside her shoe box." ?		Should this be "letter inside her shoe box." ?
	-Teisu		-Teisu

			"You look as though you got eaten by an old geezer."
			The word "eaten" in English is used almost exclusively with chewing and/or food. I think that a more appropriate word might be "fondled,
			or "leered at". - Teisu

24.31.100.122 at 21:59, 15 September 2006

2006-09-15T21:59:53Z

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	"letter ~~from a~~ shoe letter."		"One morning, Mikuru found a letter inside her shoe letter."

	Should this be "letter ~~from a~~ shoe box." ?		Should this be "letter inside her shoe box." ?
	-Teisu		-Teisu

24.31.100.122 at 21:58, 15 September 2006

2006-09-15T21:58:06Z

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			"letter from a shoe letter."

			Should this be "letter from a shoe box." ?
			-Teisu

131.191.92.66: further translation needed.

2006-08-28T22:14:33Z

further translation needed.

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"Only the did he raise his pitch and made a serious face." This sentence needs to be re-examined. There must be some translation error or missing words because it makes no sense to me.

-Psy