Talk:Suzumiya Haruhi:Volume6 Live A Live - Revision history

201.195.159.166 at 02:27, 8 December 2008

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	JBV^_^		JBV^_^

			:I think its ''The secret switch that only exists in Haruhi's mind has been switched on...'' or at least that's what the translators of the anime thought. Besides, it makes more sense to me, since it probably was a typing error.

	== Plural Mistake ==		== Plural Mistake ==

201.195.159.166 at 01:43, 8 December 2008

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			== Plural Mistake ==

			In the sentence:
			"For Tsuruya-san, "a moment" probably meant a little over half an hour, because we had to wait for about thirty minutes before we finally arrived at the front of the queue and was let in the classroom."

			I think you mean "... at the front of the queue and '''were''' let in the classroom."

JackBassV: The Secret Switch

2008-11-21T15:56:04Z

The Secret Switch

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	And that leader, bassist and and drummer actually agreed?		And that leader, bassist and and drummer actually agreed?

			== The Secret Switch ==

			''The secret switch that only exists in Haruhi's has been switched on and was generating strange ideas once again.''

			As it stands, the sentence implies that something that is part of Harui or that she owns has a secret switch, but doesn't actually say where the switch is.

			This should changed to say ''The secret switch that only exists in Haruhi's brain has been switched on...'' or just ''The secret switch that only exists in Haruhi has been switched on...'' I've changed it to the latter as I think it's the better option.

			JBV^_^

99.242.197.200 at 07:14, 2 September 2008

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	"speaking of waitresses, all my dirty mind could think of was that tight uniform she wore in the movie, giving me a great urge to want to '''molest''' her."		"speaking of waitresses, all my dirty mind could think of was that tight uniform she wore in the movie, giving me a great urge to want to '''molest''' her."
	Is molest an appropriate word? I can understand this transation if the original text said such a thing, but it seems out of Kyon's personality to say something like that.		Is molest an appropriate word? I can understand this transation if the original text said such a thing, but it seems out of Kyon's personality to say something like that.

			==and and==

			And that leader, bassist and and drummer actually agreed?

124.171.51.161 at 07:48, 16 October 2007

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	:I forgot to sign, so the signature is the same as the signature for this reply. -_-; --[[User:Partymetroid\|Aaron]] 23:31, 11 September 2007 (PDT)		:I forgot to sign, so the signature is the same as the signature for this reply. -_-; --[[User:Partymetroid\|Aaron]] 23:31, 11 September 2007 (PDT)

			==Molestation==

			Quoested from this chapter:
			"speaking of waitresses, all my dirty mind could think of was that tight uniform she wore in the movie, giving me a great urge to want to '''molest''' her."
			Is molest an appropriate word? I can understand this transation if the original text said such a thing, but it seems out of Kyon's personality to say something like that.

Partymetroid: /* Singular to Plural Feminine Inflection */

2007-09-12T06:31:47Z

Singular to Plural Feminine Inflection

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	"Why? The sight of Haruhi and Nagato in her school festival outfit made me want to close my eyes. Why were those two in a Pop Music Society band?" Instead of "her" outfit, it should be "their" outfits.		"Why? The sight of Haruhi and Nagato in her school festival outfit made me want to close my eyes. Why were those two in a Pop Music Society band?" Instead of "her" outfit, it should be "their" outfits.

	Oh and: "The original lead singer and main guitarist was absent due to some unforseen events." - "was" should be "were".		Oh and: "The original lead singer and main guitarist was absent due to some unforseen events." - "was" should be "were". --[[User:Partymetroid\|Aaron]] 23:31, 11 September 2007 (PDT)

			:I forgot to sign, so the signature is the same as the signature for this reply. -_-; --[[User:Partymetroid\|Aaron]] 23:31, 11 September 2007 (PDT)

Partymetroid: /* Singular to Plural Feminine Inflection */ another grammatical error.

2007-09-12T00:13:08Z

Singular to Plural Feminine Inflection: another grammatical error.

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	==Singular to Plural Feminine Inflection==		==Singular to Plural Feminine Inflection==
	"Why? The sight of Haruhi and Nagato in her school festival outfit made me want to close my eyes. Why were those two in a Pop Music Society band?" Instead of "her" outfit, it should be "their" outfits.		"Why? The sight of Haruhi and Nagato in her school festival outfit made me want to close my eyes. Why were those two in a Pop Music Society band?" Instead of "her" outfit, it should be "their" outfits.

			Oh and: "The original lead singer and main guitarist was absent due to some unforseen events." - "was" should be "were".

Partymetroid: /* Singular to Plural Feminine Inflection */

2007-09-11T23:55:54Z

Singular to Plural Feminine Inflection

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	:Could it not be a pun, concerning the fact that Haruhi performed in a LIVE (concert)? It could also be a nod to the Super Nintendo RPG [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Live_A_Live Live A Live], in which the player takes on the role of one of the characters, and the other characters' separate plots converge (this is the first time in which the SOS Brigade is off doing their own thing, but come together at the LIVE ... heh.) --[[User:Partymetroid\|Aaron]] 16:51, 11 September 2007 (PDT)		:Could it not be a pun, concerning the fact that Haruhi performed in a LIVE (concert)? It could also be a nod to the Super Nintendo RPG [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Live_A_Live Live A Live], in which the player takes on the role of one of the characters, and the other characters' separate plots converge (this is the first time in which the SOS Brigade is off doing their own thing, but come together at the LIVE ... heh.) --[[User:Partymetroid\|Aaron]] 16:51, 11 September 2007 (PDT)

			==Singular to Plural Feminine Inflection==
			"Why? The sight of Haruhi and Nagato in her school festival outfit made me want to close my eyes. Why were those two in a Pop Music Society band?" Instead of "her" outfit, it should be "their" outfits.

Partymetroid: /* The proper tranalation of the title */

2007-09-11T23:51:18Z

The proper tranalation of the title

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	:I concur. The Katakana can't be said any other way anyway. [[User:150.101.121.216\|150.101.121.216]] 05:47, 14 November 2006 (PST)		:I concur. The Katakana can't be said any other way anyway. [[User:150.101.121.216\|150.101.121.216]] 05:47, 14 November 2006 (PST)

			:Could it not be a pun, concerning the fact that Haruhi performed in a LIVE (concert)? It could also be a nod to the Super Nintendo RPG [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Live_A_Live Live A Live], in which the player takes on the role of one of the characters, and the other characters' separate plots converge (this is the first time in which the SOS Brigade is off doing their own thing, but come together at the LIVE ... heh.) --[[User:Partymetroid\|Aaron]] 16:51, 11 September 2007 (PDT)

150.101.121.216: /* The proper tranalation of the title */

2006-11-14T13:47:20Z

The proper tranalation of the title

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	The title of this chapter should be Live Alive - it is the title that appeared in the Chinese tranlated version of the novel (Chinese version is published by Kadokawa Taiwan - subsidary of [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kadokawa_Shoten Kadokawa Shoten]). --Leeyc0		The title of this chapter should be Live Alive - it is the title that appeared in the Chinese tranlated version of the novel (Chinese version is published by Kadokawa Taiwan - subsidary of [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kadokawa_Shoten Kadokawa Shoten]). --Leeyc0

			:I concur. The Katakana can't be said any other way anyway. [[User:150.101.121.216\|150.101.121.216]] 05:47, 14 November 2006 (PST)