Talk:Suzumiya Haruhi:Volume7 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Smidge204: /* Maroon? */

2008-07-28T12:59:18Z

Maroon?

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	::俺の右隣《みぎどなり》で朝比奈さんの'''粟色《くりいろ》'''の髪《かみ》がふわふわと揺《ゆ》れているが、表情は髪のように軽《かろ》やかではなく、雪を降らせる直前の曇《くも》り空に近かった。		::俺の右隣《みぎどなり》で朝比奈さんの'''粟色《くりいろ》'''の髪《かみ》がふわふわと揺《ゆ》れているが、表情は髪のように軽《かろ》やかではなく、雪を降らせる直前の曇《くも》り空に近かった。
	: Here, 栗色 (Pronounced くりいろ / kuriiro) means "chestnut-color" which is actually not that far from maroon. It's possible this snuck in though the Chinese version (Which, since I believe HolyCow translated this chapter, is what was used.) Millet seed is actually a bright yellow (often the main ingredient in bird seed mix) so clearly that doesn't work. I would suggest changing the wording to "Asahina-san’s long, chestnut-colored hair" if any change is to be made. [[User:Smidge204\|Smidge204]] 05:56, 28 July 2008 (PDT)		: Here, 栗色 (Pronounced くりいろ / kuriiro) means "chestnut-color" which is actually not that far from maroon. It's possible this snuck in though the Chinese version (Which, since I believe HolyCow translated this chapter, is what was used.) Millet seed is actually a bright yellow (often the main ingredient in bird seed mix) so clearly that doesn't work. I would suggest changing the wording to "Asahina-san’s long, chestnut-colored hair" if any change is to be made. [[User:Smidge204\|Smidge204]] 05:56, 28 July 2008 (PDT)
			::Self-correction - Apparently Indian Millet is red. The proper translation is still "Chestnut" though. [[User:Smidge204\|Smidge204]] 05:59, 28 July 2008 (PDT)

Smidge204: /* Maroon? */

2008-07-28T12:56:51Z

Maroon?

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	This sounds wrong, since Asahina-san's hair is certainly not maroon in official art, and nor is it likely to be, since maroon is a dark red. According to a transcription of the novel, the adjective should be "粟色" - "millet-coloured".		This sounds wrong, since Asahina-san's hair is certainly not maroon in official art, and nor is it likely to be, since maroon is a dark red. According to a transcription of the novel, the adjective should be "粟色" - "millet-coloured".


			: Hi. The context of the word is in this sentence:
			::俺の右隣《みぎどなり》で朝比奈さんの'''粟色《くりいろ》'''の髪《かみ》がふわふわと揺《ゆ》れているが、表情は髪のように軽《かろ》やかではなく、雪を降らせる直前の曇《くも》り空に近かった。
			: Here, 栗色 (Pronounced くりいろ / kuriiro) means "chestnut-color" which is actually not that far from maroon. It's possible this snuck in though the Chinese version (Which, since I believe HolyCow translated this chapter, is what was used.) Millet seed is actually a bright yellow (often the main ingredient in bird seed mix) so clearly that doesn't work. I would suggest changing the wording to "Asahina-san’s long, chestnut-colored hair" if any change is to be made. [[User:Smidge204\|Smidge204]] 05:56, 28 July 2008 (PDT)

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2008-07-28T11:15:18Z

Maroon?

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	Yea, can't believe I screwed up so bad. This is almost equavalent to the "Mass Naked Child Event" lol. My bad, my bad. Sorry for all the confusion.		Yea, can't believe I screwed up so bad. This is almost equavalent to the "Mass Naked Child Event" lol. My bad, my bad. Sorry for all the confusion.
	--[[User:HolyCow\|HolyCow]] 01:28, 13 December 2006 (PST)		--[[User:HolyCow\|HolyCow]] 01:28, 13 December 2006 (PST)

			== Maroon? ==

			"Standing on my right, Asahina-san’s long, maroon hair danced peacefully in the wind. Her expression, however, was far from peaceful, just like the darkening of the evening sky before a snowstorm."

			This sounds wrong, since Asahina-san's hair is certainly not maroon in official art, and nor is it likely to be, since maroon is a dark red. According to a transcription of the novel, the adjective should be "粟色" - "millet-coloured".

Euphemism: /* '''Ellipsis''' */

2007-02-08T22:40:15Z

'''Ellipsis'''

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	Ellipsis = ...		Ellipsis = ...
	Indicates silence or intentional removal of dialogue or thoughts or words within literature. Ellipses is the plural of ellipsis.		Indicates silence or intentional removal of dialogue or thoughts or words within literature. Ellipses is the plural of ellipsis.

			--Since Ellipsis refers to '...', the phrase 'those three ellipses' implies nine dots. Shouldn't it then be 'those three dots' or maybe 'those three dots of the ellipsis' or just 'The ellipsis'? [[User:Euphemism\|Euphemism]] 14:40, 8 February 2007 (PST)

	== '''Yukimura Sanada''' ==		== '''Yukimura Sanada''' ==

76.16.198.198: /* '''Ellipsis''' */

2006-12-28T11:46:08Z

'''Ellipsis'''

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	Ellipsis = ...		Ellipsis = ...
	Indicates silence or intentional removal of dialogue or thoughts or words within literature.		Indicates silence or intentional removal of dialogue or thoughts or words within literature. Ellipses is the plural of ellipsis.

	~~''And yet,~~ the plural of ellipsis ~~is ellipses (as parenthesis -> parentheses)~~. ~~So why, exactly, does the text read 'three ellipsis'? -- Kuraiou, 12/28/2006 5:29 CST''~~

	== '''Yukimura Sanada''' ==		== '''Yukimura Sanada''' ==

76.16.198.198: /* '''Ellipsis''' */

2006-12-28T11:29:59Z

'''Ellipsis'''

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	Indicates silence or intentional removal of dialogue or thoughts or words within literature.		Indicates silence or intentional removal of dialogue or thoughts or words within literature.

			''And yet, the plural of ellipsis is ellipses (as parenthesis -> parentheses). So why, exactly, does the text read 'three ellipsis'? -- Kuraiou, 12/28/2006 5:29 CST''

	== '''Yukimura Sanada''' ==		== '''Yukimura Sanada''' ==

HolyCow: /* [http://project.baka-tsuki.net/index.php?title=Suzumiya_Haruhi%3AVolume7_Chapter_1&diff=8916&oldid=8903] */

2006-12-13T09:28:42Z

[http://project.baka-tsuki.net/index.php?title=Suzumiya_Haruhi%3AVolume7_Chapter_1&diff=8916&oldid=8903]

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	==[http://project.baka-tsuki.net/index.php?title=Suzumiya_Haruhi%3AVolume7_Chapter_1&diff=8916&oldid=8903]==		==[http://project.baka-tsuki.net/index.php?title=Suzumiya_Haruhi%3AVolume7_Chapter_1&diff=8916&oldid=8903]==
	Somehow, it makes more sense all of a sudden :) [[User:Darkoneko\|DarkoNeko]] <small>[[User_Talk:Darkoneko\|talk]]</small> 00:54, 13 December 2006 (PST)		Somehow, it makes more sense all of a sudden :) [[User:Darkoneko\|DarkoNeko]] <small>[[User_Talk:Darkoneko\|talk]]</small> 00:54, 13 December 2006 (PST)

			Yea, can't believe I screwed up so bad. This is almost equavalent to the "Mass Naked Child Event" lol. My bad, my bad. Sorry for all the confusion.
			--[[User:HolyCow\|HolyCow]] 01:28, 13 December 2006 (PST)

Darkoneko: /* '''"Operation Payback"''' */

2006-12-13T08:54:12Z

'''"Operation Payback"'''

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	Kyon is referring to the incident which he and Mikuru went out on a date during "The Melancholy of Asahina Mikuru" in Volume 6.		Kyon is referring to the incident which he and Mikuru went out on a date during "The Melancholy of Asahina Mikuru" in Volume 6.

			==[http://project.baka-tsuki.net/index.php?title=Suzumiya_Haruhi%3AVolume7_Chapter_1&diff=8916&oldid=8903]==
			Somehow, it makes more sense all of a sudden :) [[User:Darkoneko\|DarkoNeko]] <small>[[User_Talk:Darkoneko\|talk]]</small> 00:54, 13 December 2006 (PST)

82.46.239.66: Typo

2006-12-09T18:11:11Z

Typo

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	A form of hair loss that usually originates from the scalp. It usually causes spot baldness on the head, and is sometimes known as "spot baldness". For ~~mroe~~ info, see http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alopecia_areata		A form of hair loss that usually originates from the scalp. It usually causes spot baldness on the head, and is sometimes known as "spot baldness". For more info, see http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alopecia_areata

Uraleech: /* '''Yukimura Sanada''' */

2006-12-09T07:18:43Z

'''Yukimura Sanada'''

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	A Japanese Samurai. He is most noted for his absensce during the Siege of Osaka, which many consider the prime reason for ~~it's~~ failure. See http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yukimura_Sanada		A Japanese Samurai. He is most noted for his absensce during the Siege of Osaka, which many consider the prime reason for its failure. See http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yukimura_Sanada


	== '''Nijo Castle''' ==		== '''Nijo Castle''' ==