Talk:Sword Art Online:Aria Part 16 to 20 - Revision history

Ghost: Since it is fixed, i will remove my comment ^^

2012-04-27T04:40:57Z

Since it is fixed, i will remove my comment ^^

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	I see... then can the words "draw his fire" be good in this instance, it's an English figure of speech that fits the situation perfectly. However, 無理(Muri) translates to ''unreasonable'', ''impossible'', ''force'' and ''forcibly'' (I cross-checked with google translate) so my suggestion can be used partially at least, ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills'' can be used. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 18:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		I see... then can the words "draw his fire" be good in this instance, it's an English figure of speech that fits the situation perfectly. However, 無理(Muri) translates to ''unreasonable'', ''impossible'', ''force'' and ''forcibly'' (I cross-checked with google translate) so my suggestion can be used partially at least, ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills'' can be used. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 18:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	~~Is it really "eighty thousand players"? ~ [[User:Ghost\|Ghost]] - 11:03, 27 April 2012 (GMT + 8)~~

Pryun: Undo revision 151477 by Pryun (talk)don't mind me, I misread. getting someone to fix.

2012-04-27T03:09:35Z

Undo revision 151477 by Pryun (talk)don't mind me, I misread. getting someone to fix.

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	Is it really "eighty thousand players"? ~ [[User:Ghost\|Ghost]] - 11:03, 27 April 2012 (GMT + 8)		Is it really "eighty thousand players"? ~ [[User:Ghost\|Ghost]] - 11:03, 27 April 2012 (GMT + 8)

	~~Probably an approximation. --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 22:06, 26 April 2012 (CDT)~~

Pryun at 03:06, 27 April 2012

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	Is it really "eighty thousand players"? ~ [[User:Ghost\|Ghost]] - 11:03, 27 April 2012 (GMT + 8)		Is it really "eighty thousand players"? ~ [[User:Ghost\|Ghost]] - 11:03, 27 April 2012 (GMT + 8)

			Probably an approximation. --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 22:06, 26 April 2012 (CDT)

Ghost at 03:04, 27 April 2012

2012-04-27T03:04:35Z

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	I see... then can the words "draw his fire" be good in this instance, it's an English figure of speech that fits the situation perfectly. However, 無理(Muri) translates to ''unreasonable'', ''impossible'', ''force'' and ''forcibly'' (I cross-checked with google translate) so my suggestion can be used partially at least, ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills'' can be used. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 18:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		I see... then can the words "draw his fire" be good in this instance, it's an English figure of speech that fits the situation perfectly. However, 無理(Muri) translates to ''unreasonable'', ''impossible'', ''force'' and ''forcibly'' (I cross-checked with google translate) so my suggestion can be used partially at least, ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills'' can be used. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 18:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

			Is it really "eighty thousand players"? ~ [[User:Ghost\|Ghost]] - 11:03, 27 April 2012 (GMT + 8)

Zero2001 at 23:15, 25 April 2012

2012-04-25T23:15:33Z

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	Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	... '''this''' kido(軌道) refers to trajectory.Muri(無理) here means unreasonable, impossible, or Overdone.--[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 10:07, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		... '''this''' kido(軌道) refers to trajectory.Muri(無理) here means unreasonable, impossible, or Overdone.--[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 10:07, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

			I see... then can the words "draw his fire" be good in this instance, it's an English figure of speech that fits the situation perfectly. However, 無理(Muri) translates to ''unreasonable'', ''impossible'', ''force'' and ''forcibly'' (I cross-checked with google translate) so my suggestion can be used partially at least, ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills'' can be used. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 18:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

Pryun at 15:07, 25 April 2012

2012-04-25T15:07:31Z

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	:First one's Romaji: ''Sore ga hanasaku mae ni tsubomi no mama chirasa rete shimau koto wa, VRMMO gēmu ni mise rareta mono to shite dōshitemo yōnin dekinai.'' It seems like you were right to a certain extent. I appologise. However I can suggest an improvement: ''For a bud(Asuna) to be scattered(killed) before it blooms(she becomes strong), is absolutely unacceptable for anyone fanscinated by VRMMO games(Kirito and others).'' What do you think? It is more closer to what is being said, no? And it reatains the meaning of what you said. Once again I apologise. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:First one's Romaji: ''Sore ga hanasaku mae ni tsubomi no mama chirasa rete shimau koto wa, VRMMO gēmu ni mise rareta mono to shite dōshitemo yōnin dekinai.'' It seems like you were right to a certain extent. I appologise. However I can suggest an improvement: ''For a bud(Asuna) to be scattered(killed) before it blooms(she becomes strong), is absolutely unacceptable for anyone fanscinated by VRMMO games(Kirito and others).'' What do you think? It is more closer to what is being said, no? And it reatains the meaning of what you said. Once again I apologise. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」'' My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」 My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)
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	Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

			... '''this''' kido(軌道) refers to trajectory.Muri(無理) here means unreasonable, impossible, or Overdone.--[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 10:07, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

Zero2001 at 14:40, 25 April 2012

2012-04-25T14:40:48Z

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	:First one's Romaji: ''Sore ga hanasaku mae ni tsubomi no mama chirasa rete shimau koto wa, VRMMO gēmu ni mise rareta mono to shite dōshitemo yōnin dekinai.'' It seems like you were right to a certain extent. I appologise. However I can suggest an improvement: ''For a bud(Asuna) to be scattered(killed) before it blooms(she becomes strong), is absolutely unacceptable for anyone fanscinated by VRMMO games(Kirito and others).'' What do you think? It is more closer to what is being said, no? And it reatains the meaning of what you said. Once again I apologise. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:First one's Romaji: ''Sore ga hanasaku mae ni tsubomi no mama chirasa rete shimau koto wa, VRMMO gēmu ni mise rareta mono to shite dōshitemo yōnin dekinai.'' It seems like you were right to a certain extent. I appologise. However I can suggest an improvement: ''For a bud(Asuna) to be scattered(killed) before it blooms(she becomes strong), is absolutely unacceptable for anyone fanscinated by VRMMO games(Kirito and others).'' What do you think? It is more closer to what is being said, no? And it reatains the meaning of what you said. Once again I apologise. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」 My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」'' My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)
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	Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

Zero2001 at 14:38, 25 April 2012

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	@Xplorer30's comment: Yes, you're right. Gimme a couple of minutes or so to change it, thanks for your "suggestion" ^^. ----[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 19:37, 24 April 2012 (CDT)		@Xplorer30's comment: Yes, you're right. Gimme a couple of minutes or so to change it, thanks for your "suggestion" ^^. ----[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 19:37, 24 April 2012 (CDT)

	:First one's Romaji: ''Sore ga hanasaku mae ni tsubomi no mama chirasa rete shimau koto wa, VRMMO gēmu ni mise rareta mono to shite dōshitemo yōnin dekinai.'' It seems like you were right to a certain extent. I appologise. However I can suggest an improvement: ''For a bud(Asuna) to be scattered(killed) before it blooms(she becomes strong), is absolutely unacceptable for anyone fanscinated by VRMMO games(Kirito and others).'' What do you think? It is more closer to what is being said, no? And it reatains the meaning of what you said. Once again I apologise. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:First one's Romaji: ''Sore ga hanasaku mae ni tsubomi no mama chirasa rete shimau koto wa, VRMMO gēmu ni mise rareta mono to shite dōshitemo yōnin dekinai.'' It seems like you were right to a certain extent. I appologise. However I can suggest an improvement: ''For a bud(Asuna) to be scattered(killed) before it blooms(she becomes strong), is absolutely unacceptable for anyone fanscinated by VRMMO games(Kirito and others).'' What do you think? It is more closer to what is being said, no? And it reatains the meaning of what you said. Once again I apologise. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」 My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword ~~skill~~, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」 My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

			:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

Pryun: No idea why or how I edited out some text......

2012-04-25T11:19:37Z

No idea why or how I edited out some text......

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	:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」 My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」 My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only ~~get~~ around 60% of it. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

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	:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only get around 60% of it. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only get around 60% of it. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	Go ahead and implement it, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

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	Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	... '''this''' kido(軌道) refers to trajectory.Muri(無理) here means unreasonable, impossible, or Overdone.--[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 10:07, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		... '''this''' kido(軌道) refers to trajectory.Muri(無理) here means unreasonable, impossible, or Overdone.--[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 10:07, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

			I see... then can the words "draw his fire" be good in this instance, it's an English figure of speech that fits the situation perfectly. However, 無理(Muri) translates to ''unreasonable'', ''impossible'', ''force'' and ''forcibly'' (I cross-checked with google translate) so my suggestion can be used partially at least, ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills'' can be used. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 18:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

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	:First one's Romaji: ''Sore ga hanasaku mae ni tsubomi no mama chirasa rete shimau koto wa, VRMMO gēmu ni mise rareta mono to shite dōshitemo yōnin dekinai.'' It seems like you were right to a certain extent. I appologise. However I can suggest an improvement: ''For a bud(Asuna) to be scattered(killed) before it blooms(she becomes strong), is absolutely unacceptable for anyone fanscinated by VRMMO games(Kirito and others).'' What do you think? It is more closer to what is being said, no? And it reatains the meaning of what you said. Once again I apologise. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:First one's Romaji: ''Sore ga hanasaku mae ni tsubomi no mama chirasa rete shimau koto wa, VRMMO gēmu ni mise rareta mono to shite dōshitemo yōnin dekinai.'' It seems like you were right to a certain extent. I appologise. However I can suggest an improvement: ''For a bud(Asuna) to be scattered(killed) before it blooms(she becomes strong), is absolutely unacceptable for anyone fanscinated by VRMMO games(Kirito and others).'' What do you think? It is more closer to what is being said, no? And it reatains the meaning of what you said. Once again I apologise. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」'' My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」 My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)
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	Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

			... '''this''' kido(軌道) refers to trajectory.Muri(無理) here means unreasonable, impossible, or Overdone.--[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 10:07, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

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	:First one's Romaji: ''Sore ga hanasaku mae ni tsubomi no mama chirasa rete shimau koto wa, VRMMO gēmu ni mise rareta mono to shite dōshitemo yōnin dekinai.'' It seems like you were right to a certain extent. I appologise. However I can suggest an improvement: ''For a bud(Asuna) to be scattered(killed) before it blooms(she becomes strong), is absolutely unacceptable for anyone fanscinated by VRMMO games(Kirito and others).'' What do you think? It is more closer to what is being said, no? And it reatains the meaning of what you said. Once again I apologise. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:First one's Romaji: ''Sore ga hanasaku mae ni tsubomi no mama chirasa rete shimau koto wa, VRMMO gēmu ni mise rareta mono to shite dōshitemo yōnin dekinai.'' It seems like you were right to a certain extent. I appologise. However I can suggest an improvement: ''For a bud(Asuna) to be scattered(killed) before it blooms(she becomes strong), is absolutely unacceptable for anyone fanscinated by VRMMO games(Kirito and others).'' What do you think? It is more closer to what is being said, no? And it reatains the meaning of what you said. Once again I apologise. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」 My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」'' My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)
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	Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

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	@Xplorer30's comment: Yes, you're right. Gimme a couple of minutes or so to change it, thanks for your "suggestion" ^^. ----[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 19:37, 24 April 2012 (CDT)		@Xplorer30's comment: Yes, you're right. Gimme a couple of minutes or so to change it, thanks for your "suggestion" ^^. ----[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 19:37, 24 April 2012 (CDT)

	:First one's Romaji: ''Sore ga hanasaku mae ni tsubomi no mama chirasa rete shimau koto wa, VRMMO gēmu ni mise rareta mono to shite dōshitemo yōnin dekinai.'' It seems like you were right to a certain extent. I appologise. However I can suggest an improvement: ''For a bud(Asuna) to be scattered(killed) before it blooms(she becomes strong), is absolutely unacceptable for anyone fanscinated by VRMMO games(Kirito and others).'' What do you think? It is more closer to what is being said, no? And it reatains the meaning of what you said. Once again I apologise. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:First one's Romaji: ''Sore ga hanasaku mae ni tsubomi no mama chirasa rete shimau koto wa, VRMMO gēmu ni mise rareta mono to shite dōshitemo yōnin dekinai.'' It seems like you were right to a certain extent. I appologise. However I can suggest an improvement: ''For a bud(Asuna) to be scattered(killed) before it blooms(she becomes strong), is absolutely unacceptable for anyone fanscinated by VRMMO games(Kirito and others).'' What do you think? It is more closer to what is being said, no? And it reatains the meaning of what you said. Once again I apologise. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」 My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword ~~skill~~, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」 My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

			:Thanks. Next time I'll be sure to ask for the Japanese version first. That way something like this will have a much lesser chance of happening again. I thank you for explaining it to me. So... about the second one... I would like some feedback on the minor adjustments I made. The use of the word ''kido'' could mean ''activate'' which is what Kirito seems to be saying, that he'll ''provoke the activation of the skill''. And also ''Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo'' can be translated to ''You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill'' or ''Even if you don't force yourself to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skills''. I'd like some thoughts on this. ''Muri'' here in this line can mean ''forcing oneself to'' so I thought these two lines would be best suited here. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 09:38, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

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	:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」 My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:Second one's Romaji: ''「Bosu o ushiro made kakomu to zen hōi kōgeki ga kuru zo! Waza no kidō wa ore ga iukara, shōmen no yatsu ga ukete kure! Muri ni sōdosukiru de sōsai shinakute mo, tate ya buki de kitchiri mamoreba ō Damēji wa kuwanai!」 My suggestion is: ''If the boss is surrounded from the back it will use an omni-directional attack. I'll provoke the activation of its attack skill, so the guys in the front have to receive it! You don't have to force yourselves to unreasonably try and cancel it with sword skill, if you block it properly with a weapon or a shield then you can avoid large damage!'' This is the best I can suggest. Any feedback? [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only ~~get~~ around 60% of it. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		:The reason I can't translate is because I need to first convert the writing to romaji and then I can only understand it around 60% of the time (I am self taught). The novels I can get on the web are in picture format so running it through a romanjifier is no good. I can use Capture2Text OCR program to extract the Japanese text but that doesn't work so good for long lines. Sorry my japanese isn't that good. However my English is A+. That's why I can only edit and suggest. Luckily the above ones were easy, plus there were already suggestions that I could draw upon for aid in understanding. Sorry. [[User:Zero2001\|Zero2001]] - [[User_talk:Zero2001\|Talk]] - 04:15, 25 April 2012 (CDT)

	Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)		Go ahead and implement the first one, since the meaning is retained, which is all I'm after. BTW, my knowledge of JP is probably not much better than yours... --[[User:Pryun\|Pryun]] - [[User_talk:Pryun\|Talk]] 05:16, 25 April 2012 (CDT)