Talk:Toradora!:Volume1 Chapter4 - Revision history

Vaelis at 16:54, 15 May 2008

2008-05-15T16:54:34Z

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	I couldn't really understand what you meant by this:		I couldn't really understand what you meant by this:
	"Aisaka '''''loosened up''''' her hands... '''''and then her buttocks'''''... and then her tiny body as well..."		"Aisaka '''''loosened up''''' her hands... '''''and then her buttocks'''''... and then her tiny body as well..."
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	To "loosen up" is slang for "relax" - so Taiga was tense because she was so nervous. The author tries to show how nervous she is by showing she has to relax her whole body. ~Dan		To "loosen up" is slang for "relax" - so Taiga was tense because she was so nervous. The author tries to show how nervous she is by showing she has to relax her whole body. ~Dan

	Well I know expression itself, but loosen up her buttocks seemed a bit strange. But nevermind, thanks for the answer.		Well I know expression itself, but loosen up her buttocks seemed a bit strange. But nevermind, thanks for the answer. --[[User:83.216.59.181\|83.216.59.181]]

	I know, I doubt anyone gets so nervous they tighten their buttocks. Maybe the author just wanted to throw in some random sexual comment? Also, I saw this edit, but isn't "furball" one word? I don't think it is hyphenated. ~Dan		I know, I doubt anyone gets so nervous they tighten their buttocks. Maybe the author just wanted to throw in some random sexual comment? ~Dan

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			Also, I saw this edit, but isn't "furball" one word? I don't think it is hyphenated. ~Dan

	Neither do I, nor does Google(search), so you are probably right. I couldn't even find "fur-ball" and "Fur Ball" is the name of some kind of charity gala aiming to raise funds for helping thrown out pets. --[[User:77.111.67.54\|77.111.67.54]] 08:08, 13 May 2008 (PDT)		Neither do I, nor does Google(search), so you are probably right. I couldn't even find "fur-ball" and "Fur Ball" is the name of some kind of charity gala aiming to raise funds for helping thrown out pets. --[[User:77.111.67.54\|77.111.67.54]] 08:08, 13 May 2008 (PDT)

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	"while on her lips was covered a layer of think semi-translucent pink lipstick" I'm not sure if it's supposed to be thick, or thin (since the typo could go either way)		"while on her lips was covered a layer of think semi-translucent pink lipstick" I'm not sure if it's supposed to be thick, or thin (since the typo could go either way)
	and I can't edit it until I'm sure of which it's supposed to be. The conversation implies thin, but I'd rather be sure by comparing the source material. ~Ike		and I can't edit it until I'm sure of which it's supposed to be. The conversation implies thin, but I'd rather be sure by comparing the source material. ~Ike

			In the japanese raw it's 薄く= thin. [[User:Vaelis\|Vaelis]] 09:54, 15 May 2008 (PDT)

Ikepuska: Discussion

2008-05-15T15:23:06Z

Discussion

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	Neither do I, nor does Google(search), so you are probably right. I couldn't even find "fur-ball" and "Fur Ball" is the name of some kind of charity gala aiming to raise funds for helping thrown out pets. --[[User:77.111.67.54\|77.111.67.54]] 08:08, 13 May 2008 (PDT)		Neither do I, nor does Google(search), so you are probably right. I couldn't even find "fur-ball" and "Fur Ball" is the name of some kind of charity gala aiming to raise funds for helping thrown out pets. --[[User:77.111.67.54\|77.111.67.54]] 08:08, 13 May 2008 (PDT)

	~~== Proposed change ==~~		"while on her lips was covered a layer of think semi-translucent pink lipstick" I'm not sure if it's supposed to be thick, or thin (since the typo could go either way)
			and I can't edit it until I'm sure of which it's supposed to be. The conversation implies thin, but I'd rather be sure by comparing the source material. ~Ike
	"while on her lips was covered a layer of think semi-translucent pink lipstick"
	I'm not sure if it's supposed to be thick, or thin (since the typo could go either way)
	and I can't edit it until I'm sure of which it's supposed to be.
	The conversation implies thin, but I'd rather be sure by comparing the source material.

Ikepuska: Proposed change

2008-05-15T15:19:34Z

Proposed change

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	Neither do I, nor does Google(search), so you are probably right. I couldn't even find "fur-ball" and "Fur Ball" is the name of some kind of charity gala aiming to raise funds for helping thrown out pets. --[[User:77.111.67.54\|77.111.67.54]] 08:08, 13 May 2008 (PDT)		Neither do I, nor does Google(search), so you are probably right. I couldn't even find "fur-ball" and "Fur Ball" is the name of some kind of charity gala aiming to raise funds for helping thrown out pets. --[[User:77.111.67.54\|77.111.67.54]] 08:08, 13 May 2008 (PDT)

			== Proposed change ==

			"while on her lips was covered a layer of think semi-translucent pink lipstick"
			I'm not sure if it's supposed to be thick, or thin (since the typo could go either way)
			and I can't edit it until I'm sure of which it's supposed to be.
			The conversation implies thin, but I'd rather be sure by comparing the source material.

77.111.67.54 at 15:08, 13 May 2008

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	I know, I doubt anyone gets so nervous they tighten their buttocks. Maybe the author just wanted to throw in some random sexual comment? Also, I saw this edit, but isn't "furball" one word? I don't think it is hyphenated. ~Dan		I know, I doubt anyone gets so nervous they tighten their buttocks. Maybe the author just wanted to throw in some random sexual comment? Also, I saw this edit, but isn't "furball" one word? I don't think it is hyphenated. ~Dan

			Neither do I, nor does Google(search), so you are probably right. I couldn't even find "fur-ball" and "Fur Ball" is the name of some kind of charity gala aiming to raise funds for helping thrown out pets. --[[User:77.111.67.54\|77.111.67.54]] 08:08, 13 May 2008 (PDT)

Dan at 00:01, 13 May 2008

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	Well I know expression itself, but loosen up her buttocks seemed a bit strange. But nevermind, thanks for the answer.		Well I know expression itself, but loosen up her buttocks seemed a bit strange. But nevermind, thanks for the answer.

			I know, I doubt anyone gets so nervous they tighten their buttocks. Maybe the author just wanted to throw in some random sexual comment? Also, I saw this edit, but isn't "furball" one word? I don't think it is hyphenated. ~Dan

83.216.59.181 at 19:40, 12 May 2008

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	I couldn't really understand what you ~~ment under~~ this:		I couldn't really understand what you meant by this:
	"Aisaka '''''loosened up''''' her hands... '''''and then her buttocks'''''... and then her tiny body as well..."		"Aisaka '''''loosened up''''' her hands... '''''and then her buttocks'''''... and then her tiny body as well..."
	What does it mean? --[[User:83.216.59.181\|83.216.59.181]] 11:16, 12 May 2008 (PDT)		What does it mean? --[[User:83.216.59.181\|83.216.59.181]] 11:16, 12 May 2008 (PDT)
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	To "loosen up" is slang for "relax" - so Taiga was tense because she was so nervous. The author tries to show how nervous she is by showing she has to relax her whole body. ~Dan		To "loosen up" is slang for "relax" - so Taiga was tense because she was so nervous. The author tries to show how nervous she is by showing she has to relax her whole body. ~Dan

			Well I know expression itself, but loosen up her buttocks seemed a bit strange. But nevermind, thanks for the answer.

Dan at 19:10, 12 May 2008

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	"Aisaka '''''loosened up''''' her hands... '''''and then her buttocks'''''... and then her tiny body as well..."		"Aisaka '''''loosened up''''' her hands... '''''and then her buttocks'''''... and then her tiny body as well..."
	What does it mean? --[[User:83.216.59.181\|83.216.59.181]] 11:16, 12 May 2008 (PDT)		What does it mean? --[[User:83.216.59.181\|83.216.59.181]] 11:16, 12 May 2008 (PDT)


			To "loosen up" is slang for "relax" - so Taiga was tense because she was so nervous. The author tries to show how nervous she is by showing she has to relax her whole body. ~Dan

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2008-05-12T18:16:30Z

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I couldn't really understand what you ment under this:
"Aisaka '''''loosened up''''' her hands... '''''and then her buttocks'''''... and then her tiny body as well..."
What does it mean? --[[User:83.216.59.181|83.216.59.181]] 11:16, 12 May 2008 (PDT)