Talk:Utsuro no Hako:Volume1 27754th time - Revision history

EusthEnoptEron at 15:52, 25 October 2010

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	"Without a doubt, if she really is «Aya Otonashi», then there's be no way she'd be as kind to me as to reach out her hand."<br>		"Without a doubt, if she really is «Aya Otonashi», then there's be no way she'd be as kind to me as to reach out her hand."<br>
	The part "then '''there's be''' no way" seems incorrect. I think removing "be" fixes it.--[[User:Lighthalzen\|Lighthalzen]] 09:57, 25 October 2010 (UTC)		The part "then '''there's be''' no way" seems incorrect. I think removing "be" fixes it.--[[User:Lighthalzen\|Lighthalzen]] 09:57, 25 October 2010 (UTC)
			:Thanks for mentioning. It's "there'd (there would)" and not "there's", though, so it should be fine. But I changed it anyway to make things clearer. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 15:52, 25 October 2010 (UTC)

Lighthalzen: minor sentence error?

2010-10-25T09:57:58Z

minor sentence error?

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	:The former. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 21:05, 22 July 2010 (UTC)		:The former. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 21:05, 22 July 2010 (UTC)


			"Without a doubt, if she really is «Aya Otonashi», then there's be no way she'd be as kind to me as to reach out her hand."<br>
			The part "then '''there's be''' no way" seems incorrect. I think removing "be" fixes it.--[[User:Lighthalzen\|Lighthalzen]] 09:57, 25 October 2010 (UTC)

EusthEnoptEron at 21:05, 22 July 2010

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	Is she saying that he has an amazingly complete lack of comprehension, or that his comprehension is peculiar in that he understands some things easily and others not at all, and that it seems to be an arbitrary distinction?		Is she saying that he has an amazingly complete lack of comprehension, or that his comprehension is peculiar in that he understands some things easily and others not at all, and that it seems to be an arbitrary distinction?
	- [[User:Senile seinen\|Senile seinen]] 20:52, 22 July 2010 (UTC)		- [[User:Senile seinen\|Senile seinen]] 20:52, 22 July 2010 (UTC)

			:The former. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 21:05, 22 July 2010 (UTC)

Senile seinen at 20:52, 22 July 2010

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	Also, would it be more dramatic to drop contraction's on some sentences? Like "There IS no one in the classroom" instead of "There's".		Also, would it be more dramatic to drop contraction's on some sentences? Like "There IS no one in the classroom" instead of "There's".
	-SwiftStrike		-SwiftStrike

			" Why do you only lack comprehension so much... "
			Is she saying that he has an amazingly complete lack of comprehension, or that his comprehension is peculiar in that he understands some things easily and others not at all, and that it seems to be an arbitrary distinction?
			- [[User:Senile seinen\|Senile seinen]] 20:52, 22 July 2010 (UTC)

Swiftstrike at 01:34, 1 February 2010

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	" Come to think of it, since when can't I see the sun? "		" Come to think of it, since when can't I see the sun? "

	Wording seems confusing to me (and I don't want to change the meaning) Is he trying to say "When was the last time I saw the sun?" or "why can't I see the sun?"? Getting more intense by the chapter.		Wording seems confusing to me (and I don't want to change the meaning) Is he trying to say "When was the last time I saw the sun?" or "why can't I see the sun?"? Getting more intense by the chapter.
			Also, would it be more dramatic to drop contraction's on some sentences? Like "There IS no one in the classroom" instead of "There's".
	-SwiftStrike		-SwiftStrike

Swiftstrike at 01:33, 1 February 2010

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	Wording seems confusing to me (and I don't want to change the meaning) Is he trying to say "When was the last time I saw the sun?" or "why can't I see the sun?"? Getting more intense by the chapter.		Wording seems confusing to me (and I don't want to change the meaning) Is he trying to say "When was the last time I saw the sun?" or "why can't I see the sun?"? Getting more intense by the chapter.
	-SwiftStrike		-SwiftStrike

Swiftstrike: New page: " Come to think of it, since when can't I see the sun? " Wording seems confusing to me (and I don't want to change the meaning) Is he trying to say "When was the last time I saw the sun?"...

2010-02-01T01:32:47Z

New page: " Come to think of it, since when can't I see the sun? " Wording seems confusing to me (and I don't want to change the meaning) Is he trying to say "When was the last time I saw the sun?"...

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" Come to think of it, since when can't I see the sun? "

Wording seems confusing to me (and I don't want to change the meaning) Is he trying to say "When was the last time I saw the sun?" or "why can't I see the sun?"? Getting more intense by the chapter.
-SwiftStrike