Talk:Utsuro no Hako:Volume2 May 2 - Revision history

Dteviot at 23:19, 26 July 2016

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	: Similar thing here. "Yes ...But may I ask something first?" He doesn't actually follow this with a question. [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 08:31, 15 July 2013 (CDT)		: Similar thing here. "Yes ...But may I ask something first?" He doesn't actually follow this with a question. [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 08:31, 15 July 2013 (CDT)
	:: Good points. I'm not fully convinced if "desperate" really fits in all cases, but should be better than having different kinds of expressions. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] ([[User talk:EusthEnoptEron\|talk]]) 11:43, 15 July 2013 (CDT)		:: Good points. I'm not fully convinced if "desperate" really fits in all cases, but should be better than having different kinds of expressions. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] ([[User talk:EusthEnoptEron\|talk]]) 11:43, 15 July 2013 (CDT)

			Hi,

			I'm dteviot, the person who wrote/updates the Chrome plug-in to convert Baka-Tsuki web pages into EPUB.
			Anyway, the story Utsuro no Hako:Volume 2, chapters “May 2nd (Saturday) 00:11” and “May 2nd (Saturday) 00:31” are entirely in italics. This appears to be due to an unclosed <i> tag in the first chapter, with a closing </i> tag in the following chapter.
			I suspect that this is a typo and is probably due to an unclosed <i> tag at the end of the preceeding chapter.
			Anyway, if the chapters are not supposed to be in italics, you will probably want to remove the tags. If the chapters ARE supposed to be in italics, could you please put an opening and closing <i> tag for each chapter. At the moment, my web to epub converter is removing the <i> tag because it can't match across chapters.
			Thank you for your time.

EusthEnoptEron at 16:43, 15 July 2013

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	Should Maria be saying 'desperate' instead of 'hopeless' considering how the guy possessing Kazuki never said 'hopeless' out-loud? Or is this another case of her somehow reading his mind? :P [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 07:46, 15 July 2013 (CDT)		Should Maria be saying 'desperate' instead of 'hopeless' considering how the guy possessing Kazuki never said 'hopeless' out-loud? Or is this another case of her somehow reading his mind? :P [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 07:46, 15 July 2013 (CDT)
	: Similar thing here. "Yes ...But may I ask something first?" He doesn't actually follow this with a question. [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 08:31, 15 July 2013 (CDT)		: Similar thing here. "Yes ...But may I ask something first?" He doesn't actually follow this with a question. [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 08:31, 15 July 2013 (CDT)
			:: Good points. I'm not fully convinced if "desperate" really fits in all cases, but should be better than having different kinds of expressions. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] ([[User talk:EusthEnoptEron\|talk]]) 11:43, 15 July 2013 (CDT)

MatrixM at 13:31, 15 July 2013

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	Should Maria be saying 'desperate' instead of 'hopeless' considering how the guy possessing Kazuki never said 'hopeless' out-loud? Or is this another case of her somehow reading his mind? :P [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 07:46, 15 July 2013 (CDT)		Should Maria be saying 'desperate' instead of 'hopeless' considering how the guy possessing Kazuki never said 'hopeless' out-loud? Or is this another case of her somehow reading his mind? :P [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 07:46, 15 July 2013 (CDT)
			: Similar thing here. "Yes ...But may I ask something first?" He doesn't actually follow this with a question. [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 08:31, 15 July 2013 (CDT)

MatrixM at 12:46, 15 July 2013

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	"That must also be '''the''' why" -> "That must also be '''the reason''' why" or "That must also '''be why'''" [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 07:36, 15 July 2013 (CDT)		"That must also be '''the''' why" -> "That must also be '''the reason''' why" or "That must also '''be why'''" [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 07:36, 15 July 2013 (CDT)

			Should Maria be saying 'desperate' instead of 'hopeless' considering how the guy possessing Kazuki never said 'hopeless' out-loud? Or is this another case of her somehow reading his mind? :P [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 07:46, 15 July 2013 (CDT)

MatrixM at 12:36, 15 July 2013

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	EEE: "common law husband" > "de facto husband" ... but it's still pretty clinical. maybe a more liberal edit like "lover" etc would work better? It pops up a lot in this ch... [[User:Grrarr\|Grrarr]] ([[User talk:Grrarr\|talk]]) 20:57, 6 May 2013 (CDT)		EEE: "common law husband" > "de facto husband" ... but it's still pretty clinical. maybe a more liberal edit like "lover" etc would work better? It pops up a lot in this ch... [[User:Grrarr\|Grrarr]] ([[User talk:Grrarr\|talk]]) 20:57, 6 May 2013 (CDT)

			"That must also be '''the''' why" -> "That must also be '''the reason''' why" or "That must also '''be why'''" [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 07:36, 15 July 2013 (CDT)

Grrarr: EEE: "common law husband" > "de facto husband" ... but it's still pretty clinical. maybe a more liberal edit like "lover" etc would work better? It pops up a lot in this ch...

2013-05-07T01:57:08Z

EEE: "common law husband" > "de facto husband" ... but it's still pretty clinical. maybe a more liberal edit like "lover" etc would work better? It pops up a lot in this ch...

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	(Same source as last paragraph: have now read the rest! Significant happiness. smiles)		(Same source as last paragraph: have now read the rest! Significant happiness. smiles)

			EEE: "common law husband" > "de facto husband" ... but it's still pretty clinical. maybe a more liberal edit like "lover" etc would work better? It pops up a lot in this ch... [[User:Grrarr\|Grrarr]] ([[User talk:Grrarr\|talk]]) 20:57, 6 May 2013 (CDT)

131.111.229.54 at 15:35, 19 April 2010

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	Very pleasant part regarding the return home on the bike. The 'your relations with your classmates are forever destroyed' part left a bitter taste in my mouth. The 'Aya' part is curious... am I forgetting something important from earlier, or was the information he doesn't have never revealed to us in the first place, putting us in his position in terms of puzzlement? Hmm. Curious to see whether the plotline will be resolved acceptably.		Very pleasant part regarding the return home on the bike. The 'your relations with your classmates are forever destroyed' part left a bitter taste in my mouth. The 'Aya' part is curious... am I forgetting something important from earlier, or was the information he doesn't have never revealed to us in the first place, putting us in his position in terms of puzzlement? Hmm. Curious to see whether the plotline will be resolved acceptably.

			(Same source as last paragraph: have now read the rest! Significant happiness. smiles)

131.111.229.54 at 13:55, 19 April 2010

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	poor him:(i now they want to make him a murderer!!		poor him:(i now they want to make him a murderer!!

			Very pleasant part regarding the return home on the bike. The 'your relations with your classmates are forever destroyed' part left a bitter taste in my mouth. The 'Aya' part is curious... am I forgetting something important from earlier, or was the information he doesn't have never revealed to us in the first place, putting us in his position in terms of puzzlement? Hmm. Curious to see whether the plotline will be resolved acceptably.

79.22.188.207: New page: poor him:(i now they want to make him a murderer!!

2010-03-29T20:42:53Z

New page: poor him:(i now they want to make him a murderer!!

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poor him:(i now they want to make him a murderer!!

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	Should Maria be saying 'desperate' instead of 'hopeless' considering how the guy possessing Kazuki never said 'hopeless' out-loud? Or is this another case of her somehow reading his mind? :P [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 07:46, 15 July 2013 (CDT)		Should Maria be saying 'desperate' instead of 'hopeless' considering how the guy possessing Kazuki never said 'hopeless' out-loud? Or is this another case of her somehow reading his mind? :P [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 07:46, 15 July 2013 (CDT)
	: Similar thing here. "Yes ...But may I ask something first?" He doesn't actually follow this with a question. [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 08:31, 15 July 2013 (CDT)		: Similar thing here. "Yes ...But may I ask something first?" He doesn't actually follow this with a question. [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 08:31, 15 July 2013 (CDT)
			:: Good points. I'm not fully convinced if "desperate" really fits in all cases, but should be better than having different kinds of expressions. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] ([[User talk:EusthEnoptEron\|talk]]) 11:43, 15 July 2013 (CDT)