Talk:Utsuro no Hako:Volume3 Beginning - Revision history

MatrixM: /* Down-to-earth */ sleep-deprived >.>

2013-07-15T19:46:57Z

Down-to-earth: sleep-deprived >.>

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	== Down-to-earth ==		== Down-to-earth ==

	Down-to-earth means pragmatic. If one is down-to-earth, he is realistic. Also, it should be hyphenated. I think I see what you mean but down-to-earth just sound quite right in this case. Did Maria mean that gothic lolitas were just a fantasy? Or unreal like a fairytale? [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 11:04, 15 July 2013 (CDT)		Down-to-earth means pragmatic. If one is down-to-earth, he is realistic. Also, it should be hyphenated. I think I see what you mean but down-to-earth just doesn't sound quite right in this case. Did Maria mean that gothic lolitas were just a fantasy? Or unreal like a fairytale? [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 11:04, 15 July 2013 (CDT)

MatrixM: /* Down-to-earth */ new section

2013-07-15T16:04:18Z

Down-to-earth: new section

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	Just now, I just did some rather massive editing on this, frequently changing sentence structure and words. Somewhere I read that I should open a section on the Talk-page when I do this, so here it is. In many cases I tried to improve the flow of the text, make it more succinct or further strengthen the mood I felt. Apart from correcting slight grammatical errors and things like that. Any feedback? Did I succeed at my attempts? Did I make it worse? Where? Was I too disrespectful towards the translator (which was in now way intended)?--[[User:Kadi\|Kadi]] 15:13, 24 April 2010 (UTC)		Just now, I just did some rather massive editing on this, frequently changing sentence structure and words. Somewhere I read that I should open a section on the Talk-page when I do this, so here it is. In many cases I tried to improve the flow of the text, make it more succinct or further strengthen the mood I felt. Apart from correcting slight grammatical errors and things like that. Any feedback? Did I succeed at my attempts? Did I make it worse? Where? Was I too disrespectful towards the translator (which was in now way intended)?--[[User:Kadi\|Kadi]] 15:13, 24 April 2010 (UTC)
	:Looks fine, thanks! :D Don't worry about being [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Be_bold too bold] when editing, though. If something seems awkward to you, just edit it (also helps me to improve my English). I look over most of the edits, so if you change something for the worse, I'll fix it. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 23:10, 24 April 2010 (UTC)		:Looks fine, thanks! :D Don't worry about being [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Be_bold too bold] when editing, though. If something seems awkward to you, just edit it (also helps me to improve my English). I look over most of the edits, so if you change something for the worse, I'll fix it. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 23:10, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

			== Down-to-earth ==

			Down-to-earth means pragmatic. If one is down-to-earth, he is realistic. Also, it should be hyphenated. I think I see what you mean but down-to-earth just sound quite right in this case. Did Maria mean that gothic lolitas were just a fantasy? Or unreal like a fairytale? [[User:MatrixM\|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM\|talk]]) 11:04, 15 July 2013 (CDT)

EusthEnoptEron: /* Rather massive editing by Kadi */

2010-04-24T23:10:46Z

Rather massive editing by Kadi

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	Just now, I just did some rather massive editing on this, frequently changing sentence structure and words. Somewhere I read that I should open a section on the Talk-page when I do this, so here it is. In many cases I tried to improve the flow of the text, make it more succinct or further strengthen the mood I felt. Apart from correcting slight grammatical errors and things like that. Any feedback? Did I succeed at my attempts? Did I make it worse? Where? Was I too disrespectful towards the translator (which was in now way intended)?--[[User:Kadi\|Kadi]] 15:13, 24 April 2010 (UTC)		Just now, I just did some rather massive editing on this, frequently changing sentence structure and words. Somewhere I read that I should open a section on the Talk-page when I do this, so here it is. In many cases I tried to improve the flow of the text, make it more succinct or further strengthen the mood I felt. Apart from correcting slight grammatical errors and things like that. Any feedback? Did I succeed at my attempts? Did I make it worse? Where? Was I too disrespectful towards the translator (which was in now way intended)?--[[User:Kadi\|Kadi]] 15:13, 24 April 2010 (UTC)
			:Looks fine, thanks! :D Don't worry about being [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Be_bold too bold] when editing, though. If something seems awkward to you, just edit it (also helps me to improve my English). I look over most of the edits, so if you change something for the worse, I'll fix it. [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 23:10, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

Kadi: /* Rather massive editing by Kadi */ new section

2010-04-24T15:13:41Z

Rather massive editing by Kadi: new section

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	thank you eusth! XD<br>		thank you eusth! XD<br>
	"admittedly it doesn't look too Gothloli-ish." << that's where a fan-art worth it :3		"admittedly it doesn't look too Gothloli-ish." << that's where a fan-art worth it :3

			== Rather massive editing by Kadi ==

			Just now, I just did some rather massive editing on this, frequently changing sentence structure and words. Somewhere I read that I should open a section on the Talk-page when I do this, so here it is. In many cases I tried to improve the flow of the text, make it more succinct or further strengthen the mood I felt. Apart from correcting slight grammatical errors and things like that. Any feedback? Did I succeed at my attempts? Did I make it worse? Where? Was I too disrespectful towards the translator (which was in now way intended)?--[[User:Kadi\|Kadi]] 15:13, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

RandomPasserBy at 08:02, 24 April 2010

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	........ i really want to see that Gothloli Maria..... orz		........ i really want to see that Gothloli Maria..... orz
	:[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Image:UtsuroNoHako3_3.jpg] - well, admittedly it doesn't look too Gothloli-ish. :D [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 07:38, 24 April 2010 (UTC)		:[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Image:UtsuroNoHako3_3.jpg] - well, admittedly it doesn't look too Gothloli-ish. :D [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 07:38, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

			o_O today's lesson : check the illustration page OFTEN<br>
			thank you eusth! XD<br>
			"admittedly it doesn't look too Gothloli-ish." << that's where a fan-art worth it :3

EusthEnoptEron at 07:38, 24 April 2010

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	........ i really want to see that Gothloli Maria..... orz		........ i really want to see that Gothloli Maria..... orz
			:[http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Image:UtsuroNoHako3_3.jpg] - well, admittedly it doesn't look too Gothloli-ish. :D [[User:EusthEnoptEron\|EusthEnoptEron]] 07:38, 24 April 2010 (UTC)

RandomPasserBy at 04:57, 24 April 2010

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	And the sentence about the girl made me Intrigued.		And the sentence about the girl made me Intrigued.
	Maybe that girl links Kazuki to the box?		Maybe that girl links Kazuki to the box?

			........ i really want to see that Gothloli Maria..... orz

64.255.180.222 at 13:29, 22 April 2010

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	I don't know about that... He did betray Maria, even if for a little while. So, he might be tempted... [[User:Liardiary\|Liardiary]] 11:48, 22 April 2010 (UTC)Liardiary		I don't know about that... He did betray Maria, even if for a little while. So, he might be tempted... [[User:Liardiary\|Liardiary]] 11:48, 22 April 2010 (UTC)Liardiary

			And the sentence about the girl made me Intrigued.
			Maybe that girl links Kazuki to the box?

Liardiary at 11:48, 22 April 2010

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	hmm... i don't think he will ever receive the box even if it's emergency		hmm... i don't think he will ever receive the box even if it's emergency

			I don't know about that... He did betray Maria, even if for a little while. So, he might be tempted... [[User:Liardiary\|Liardiary]] 11:48, 22 April 2010 (UTC)Liardiary

RandomPasserBy at 10:32, 22 April 2010

2010-04-22T10:32:57Z

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	What kind of box would Kazuki obtain? box of everyday living? O.O I think that would contradict his entire being somewhat...		What kind of box would Kazuki obtain? box of everyday living? O.O I think that would contradict his entire being somewhat...

			hmm... i don't think he will ever receive the box even if it's emergency