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Akirasav at 23:28, 29 December 2008

2008-12-29T23:28:19Z

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	JBV^_^		JBV^_^

	~~== New Questions ==~~
	~~Is there a better translation of "livelihood tackle?"~~

	~~"Various livelihood tackle were placed in there."~~

	--

	~~Is there a better word than "Reminiscing" here?~~

	~~"Reminiscing the words, Saito hung his head, embarrassed."~~

	--

	~~Retranslate please:~~

	~~"From 50 mails in the total length, to 100 mails in size, many hundreds of ships were queued up, making it a grand and a beautiful spectacle to behold."~~

Akirasav: /* New Questions */

2008-12-29T00:21:59Z

New Questions

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	~~Do insances of "Flame" actually mean "Fire element" or is it a seperate concept?~~

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Akirasav at 23:56, 28 December 2008

2008-12-28T23:56:08Z

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	~~== 40 lines of ships ==~~

	~~Sorry, but this should read "40 ships of the line."~~

	Sailing ships (which these are based on) come in several types. Battleships and frigates are Ships of the Line. They are designed to sail in parallel lines next to the enemy ships, and pound them with round-shot. This term died out with the introduction of the Dreadnaught class ironclad.

	~~The "Dragon Carrier" is not one of these (SoL), but is basically an aircraft carrier (CV). This is not designed to go into direct battle with the enemy.~~

	~~The rest are troup transports.~~

	~~BTW, the lengths should be meters, not mails and definitely not miles!~~

	~~JBV^_^~~

	== Deck Landing. ==		== Deck Landing. ==

Akirasav: /* New Questions */

2008-12-28T01:06:41Z

New Questions

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	Is there a better word than "Reminiscing" here?		Is there a better word than "Reminiscing" here?

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	Retranslate:
			Retranslate please:

	"From 50 mails in the total length, to 100 mails in size, many hundreds of ships were queued up, making it a grand and a beautiful spectacle to behold."		"From 50 mails in the total length, to 100 mails in size, many hundreds of ships were queued up, making it a grand and a beautiful spectacle to behold."

Akirasav: New questions, I'll ask about the others too.

2008-12-26T22:16:03Z

New questions, I'll ask about the others too.

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	~~"Peron’s magic technique mixes with impurities anyway."~~
	~~Is this supposed to be "A person's magic technique mixes with impurites anyway" or is there someone named Peron?[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 12:17, 4 August 2008 (PDT)~~

	== 40 lines of ships ==		== 40 lines of ships ==

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	JBV^_^		JBV^_^

			== New Questions ==
			Is there a better translation of "livelihood tackle?"

			"Various livelihood tackle were placed in there."

			--
			Is there a better word than "Reminiscing" here?

			"Reminiscing the words, Saito hung his head, embarrassed."

			--

			Do insances of "Flame" actually mean "Fire element" or is it a seperate concept?

			--
			Retranslate:

			"From 50 mails in the total length, to 100 mails in size, many hundreds of ships were queued up, making it a grand and a beautiful spectacle to behold."

JackBassV: Deck Landing.

2008-11-17T04:45:25Z

Deck Landing.

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	BTW, the lengths should be meters, not mails and definitely not miles!		BTW, the lengths should be meters, not mails and definitely not miles!

			JBV^_^

			== Deck Landing. ==

			This whole part makes no sense at all.

			The A6M Zero is fitted with an arrester hook, that is lowered from the tail. This engages a wire stretched across the flight-deck and brings the aircraft to a halt is a very short distance (approx 50").

			''And, the ropes began to be put on the deck. The soldiers grabbed each end of the ropes and placed them right across deck.'' this is fine (just a couple of minor word changes.)

			''Saito's right hand moves throw up a hook to the ship.'' Saito's right hand moves to lower the arrester hook.

			''Colbert who noticed the hook, was likely to have told to the crew of Varsenda to stretch out the ropes across the deck to help zero fighter land.'' this is fine too.

			''They approached the Varsenda.'' as is this (add "the" cuz it's a ship. )

			''Then other hooks from the warship followed, fastening wings and tail'' This makes no sense as the plane is in flight. Maybe this would work: Ropes were prepared on the warship for fastening the wings and tail after landing. This would make more sense if it was moved two lines down (after the approach.)

			''The flaps were lowered.'' Even if there is only one, Flaps are refered in the plural, not singular.

			''Saito carefully approached from the rear side towards the ship.'' again, no problem. You could change rear side to stern though.

			'' The hook wired up zero fighter with the carrier, where it was fastened to.'' The Zero hooked onto the carrier where it was fastened down. Moved from the line where Saito's right hand lowers the hook.

	JBV^_^		JBV^_^

JackBassV: 40 lines of ships

2008-11-17T04:19:29Z

40 lines of ships

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	Is this supposed to be "A person's magic technique mixes with impurites anyway" or is there someone named Peron?[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 12:17, 4 August 2008 (PDT)		Is this supposed to be "A person's magic technique mixes with impurites anyway" or is there someone named Peron?[[User:DissmalScientist\|DissmalScientist]] 12:17, 4 August 2008 (PDT)

			== 40 lines of ships ==

			Sorry, but this should read "40 ships of the line."

			Sailing ships (which these are based on) come in several types. Battleships and frigates are Ships of the Line. They are designed to sail in parallel lines next to the enemy ships, and pound them with round-shot. This term died out with the introduction of the Dreadnaught class ironclad.

			The "Dragon Carrier" is not one of these (SoL), but is basically an aircraft carrier (CV). This is not designed to go into direct battle with the enemy.

			The rest are troup transports.

			BTW, the lengths should be meters, not mails and definitely not miles!

			JBV^_^

Vaelis: Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume6 Chapter6 moved to Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume6 Chapter6 ~Preview~

2008-08-11T15:48:03Z

Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume6 Chapter6 moved to Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume6 Chapter6 ~Preview~

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DissmalScientist: New page: "Peron’s magic technique mixes with impurities anyway." Is this supposed to be "A person's magic technique mixes with impurites anyway" or is there someone named Peron?~~~~

2008-08-04T19:17:55Z

New page: "Peron’s magic technique mixes with impurities anyway." Is this supposed to be "A person's magic technique mixes with impurites anyway" or is there someone named Peron?~~~~

New page

"Peron’s magic technique mixes with impurities anyway."
Is this supposed to be "A person's magic technique mixes with impurites anyway" or is there someone named Peron?[[User:DissmalScientist|DissmalScientist]] 12:17, 4 August 2008 (PDT)