Tasogare-iro no Uta Tsukai:Volume1 Final Play - Revision history

Cres: /* Part 2 */

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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

	One versus several tens. Although they faced only one opponent, of the original nearly a hundred chimeras, less than half remained. Just when she wanted to confirm the exact number, another one was shot down. Some were knocked down by a sweeping tail, others were batted away by wings. Their overwhelming number didn’t give the chimeras an advantage.		One versus several tens. Although they faced only one opponent, of the original nearly one hundred chimeras, less than half remained. Just when she wanted to confirm the exact number, another one was shot down. Some were knocked down by a sweeping tail, others were batted away by wings. Their overwhelming number didn’t give the chimeras an advantage.

	“What is……that?”		“What is……that?”
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	When the Recited creature suddenly called out her name, her body automatically stiffened.		When the Recited creature suddenly called out her name, her body automatically stiffened.

	“It’s already too dangerous here. You should know, right? A fight between True Spirits will turn their surroundings into scorched earth. I don’t know when the sparks will start flying, so to take refuge near the first-year school building.”		“It’s already too dangerous here. You should know, right? A fight between True Spirits will turn their surroundings into scorched earth. I don’t know when the sparks will start flying, so take refuge near the first-year school building.”

	Her heartbeat became noticeably louder. You should know, right— what did those words mean? This True Spirit spoke as if she seemed to know her.		Her heartbeat became noticeably louder. You should know, right— what did those words mean? This True Spirit spoke as if she seemed to know her.
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	“Eh?”		“Eh?”

	'''''~~Fourty~~-first key from the <Goetia seventy-second pillar>, Focalor'''''<br>		'''''Forty-first key from the <Goetia seventy-second pillar>, Focalor'''''<br>
	''—orbie clar, dremre : Goetia : Focalor—''		''—orbie clar, dremre : Goetia : Focalor—''

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	“Is your hand okay? It’s fractured, isn’t it?”		“Is your hand okay? It’s fractured, isn’t it?”

	All too suddenly, the True Spirit touched his left hand, something that a shadow shouldn’t be able to do. He didn’t consider her to be acting too ~~intimate~~, because from a long time ago, there was a single person he was this familiar with.		All too suddenly, the True Spirit touched his left hand, something that a shadow shouldn’t be able to do. He didn’t consider her to be acting too intimately, because from a long time ago, there was a single person he was this familiar with.

	Just one person. In other words, there wasn’t any other person who came to mind. Everything was the same as back then. A nostalgic feeling that he couldn’t put into words filled the crevice in his heart. A crevice that had lasted more than ten years.		Just one person. In other words, there wasn’t any other person who came to mind. Everything was the same as back then. A nostalgic feeling that he couldn’t put into words filled the crevice in his heart. A crevice that had lasted more than ten years.

	“You acted ~~rash~~, didn’t you? How unlike you.”		“You acted rashly, didn’t you? How unlike you.”

	A finger that should have been made of shadow traced over his left hand. There was warmth in that finger. There was no way he could accept everything that was happening before his eyes. But, he simply couldn’t deny that warmth.		A finger that should have been made of shadow traced over his left hand. There was warmth in that finger. There was no way he could accept everything that was happening before his eyes. But, he simply couldn’t deny that warmth.
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	Landing on the rooftop, Arma folded his wings. Rather than saying most, it would be more appropriate to call it entirely wiped out. Looking up at the sky, there was only the pale white moonlight and twinkling of the stars.		Landing on the rooftop, Arma folded his wings. Rather than saying most, it would be more appropriate to call it entirely wiped out. Looking up at the sky, there was only the pale white moonlight and twinkling of the stars.

	~~“……I’m~~ never ~~accompanying~~ you on flying ~~practices~~ again.”		“……I’ll never accompany you on flying practice again.”

	For the sake of dodging the chimeras’ attacks, he had dived down and swooped up, making Kluele lose her breath. As for the number of somersaults the Night-colored lizard did, she had lost count after ten. Because of all that, Kluele felt like her lifespan had shortened. She envied Neight, who had lost consciousness.		For the sake of dodging the chimeras’ attacks, he had dived down and swooped up, making Kluele lose her breath. As for the number of somersaults the Night-colored lizard did, she had lost count after ten. Because of all that, Kluele felt like her lifespan had shortened. She envied Neight, who had lost consciousness.
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	—Dawn was drawing closer.		—Dawn was drawing closer.


	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

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	==Final Play: The Joy of Your Desires —Evhe Smiles ~~in the~~ Dawn—==		==Final Play: The Joy of Your Desires —Evhe Smiles at Dawn—==

	===Part 1 ===		===Part 1 ===

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	The red snake spat red-hot breaths at the dodging girl.		The red snake spat red-hot breaths at the dodging girl.

	—{{Furigana\|Ruguz\|Blue Song}}—		——[{{Furigana\|Ruguz\|Blue Song}}]——

	Just before the flames hit the True Spirit of Night, they were blocked by a film of water that Xins called out.		Just before the flames hit the True Spirit of Night, they were blocked by a film of water that Xins called out.
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	That would be different from “Xins Airwincle’s Recitation”.		That would be different from “Xins Airwincle’s Recitation”.

	~~“Xins~~, let’s keep working hard. We can’t give up at the very end.”		'Xins, let’s keep working hard. We can’t give up at the very end.'

	In these ten years, Enne’s heart had become stronger.		In these ten years, Enne’s heart had become stronger.

	~~“After~~ seeing Kluele-san’s Recitation today…… I thought that I should reconsider a bit…… Kluele-san seemed to be having so much fun. Therefore, I thought that I also want to have fun while Reciting.”		'After seeing Kluele-san’s Recitation today…… I thought that I should reconsider a bit…… Kluele-san seemed to be having so much fun. Therefore, I thought that I also want to have fun while Reciting.'

	The young Reciter reconsidered his ~~lifestyle~~.		The young Reciter reconsidered his way of life.

	The Night-colored girl was like that. After throwing away everything, she ended up here.		The Night-colored girl was like that. After throwing away everything, she ended up here.

Mystrael at 01:43, 28 June 2013

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	[It would seem so wouldn't it? Kluele-san.]		[It would seem so wouldn't it? Kluele-san.]

	Kluele was startled after suddenly being called by her name. Just like the divine bird she had ~~recited~~ out, why did even the True Spirit of Night know her name?		Kluele was startled after suddenly being called by her name. Just like the divine bird she had called out, why did even the True Spirit of Night know her name?

	[Fufu, that child told me.]		[Fufu, that child told me.]
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	"Hey, Mirror, are we dreaming?"		"Hey, Mirror, are we dreaming?"

	Forgetting to even wipe away the sweat running down his face, Zessel continued to look up at the dragon overhead. In the middle of the night-colored curtain, the jet-black dragon that flapped its wings in the air was too large and majestic. It should unmistakably be a ~~recited~~ creature, but just what ~~Color is~~ that True Spirit?		Forgetting to even wipe away the sweat running down his face, Zessel continued to look up at the dragon overhead. In the middle of the night-colored curtain, the jet-black dragon that flapped its wings in the air was too large and majestic. It should unmistakably be a Recited creature, but just what color did that True Spirit belong to?

	"......I just remembered something from long ago. Something from a very long time ago."		"......I just remembered something from long ago. Something from a very long time ago."

Mystrael at 00:13, 21 June 2013

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Angelanime: /* Part 1 */

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	—What I want to do is Night Color Recitations—		—What I want to do is Night Color Recitations—

	In the time of Elfand Academy, the one girl in the class who hadn’t socialized with anyone and sat by herself in a corner of the classroom. When he had chosen to devote himself to Red Recitations, ~~Miller~~ chose Blue Recitations, and Enne chose White Recitations, only one girl struggled to pursue a non-existing color.		In the time of Elfand Academy, the one girl in the class who hadn’t socialized with anyone and sat by herself in a corner of the classroom. When he had chosen to devote himself to Red Recitations, Mirror chose Blue Recitations, and Enne chose White Recitations, only one girl struggled to pursue a non-existing color.

	However, it couldn’t be her, could it? First of all, if she had completed Night Color Recitations, her name should have resounded throughout the world. Just like the Rainbow Reciter’s had been.		However, it couldn’t be her, could it? First of all, if she had completed Night Color Recitations, her name should have resounded throughout the world. Just like the Rainbow Reciter’s had been.

Angelanime: /* Part 1 */

2013-06-13T08:07:16Z

Part 1

Arczyx at 10:54, 23 March 2013

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	He remained standing in place. Furthermore, next to him was the figure of her friend who was supposed to be resting in the hall.		He remained standing in place. Furthermore, next to him was the figure of her friend who was supposed to be resting in the hall.

	"Neight, Kululu run awaaaaaaayyyy!"		"Neight, Kululu, run awaaaaaaayyyy!"

	Mio raised her voice from the rooftop. There was no way they could hear her. But even so, she couldn't help but shout. At this rate the three of them would be trampled by that monster...... Eh?...... Three of them?		Mio raised her voice from the rooftop. There was no way they could hear her. But even so, she couldn't help but shout. At this rate the three of them would be trampled by that monster...... Eh?...... Three of them?
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	Before she had time to decide whether to ask that question or not, Kluele’s body floated upwards. Without any warning, the Night-colored dragon had grabbed the two of them in his foreleg and flapped its wings.		Before she had time to decide whether to ask that question or not, Kluele’s body floated upwards. Without any warning, the Night-colored dragon had grabbed the two of them in his foreleg and flapped its wings.

	"Wa-~~wait~~, carry us more carefully!"		"Wa-Wait, carry us more carefully!"

	While still burdened with Neight, Arma had grabbed them. Although he wasn’t flying very fast, because of the unstable footing, a little mistake could shake them off.And even more importantly, the dragon was flying in an awkward manner. Could it be a bad habit? Compared to the bird deity that she had come here with, he was too clumsy.		While still burdened with Neight, Arma had grabbed them. Although he wasn’t flying very fast, because of the unstable footing, a little mistake could shake them off.And even more importantly, the dragon was flying in an awkward manner. Could it be a bad habit? Compared to the bird deity that she had come here with, he was too clumsy.
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	That one simple word caused her whole body to shake with fright.		That one simple word caused her whole body to shake with fright.

	Howl...... Wa-~~wait~~ a minute! My left hand is injured and my right hand is carrying Neight. There’s no way for me to cover my ears, so please restrain yourself—		Howl...... Wa-Wait a minute! My left hand is injured and my right hand is carrying Neight. There’s no way for me to cover my ears, so please restrain yourself—

	Her wish was in vain. When the jet-black dragon let loose a howl, Kluele lost consciousness for a single moment.		Her wish was in vain. When the jet-black dragon let loose a howl, Kluele lost consciousness for a single moment.
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	"Hey, Mirror, are we dreaming?"		"Hey, Mirror, are we dreaming?"
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	“Wha-~~what’s~~ with that sudden howl!”
			“Wha-What’s with that sudden howl!”

	With her hands covering her still-buzzing ears, Kluele roared back. From her point of view, it really was a terrible disaster.		With her hands covering her still-buzzing ears, Kluele roared back. From her point of view, it really was a terrible disaster.
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	Her voice was filled with anger, but also included a faint feeling of delight.		Her voice was filled with anger, but also included a faint feeling of delight.


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	“Now, go.”		“Now, go.”

	“B-~~but—”~~		“B-But—”

	The True Spirit ~~seemd~~ to sigh and crossed her arms.		The True Spirit seemed to sigh and crossed her arms.

	“Enne Revinesia. Your personality of being concerned about everyone still hasn’t changed.”		“Enne Revinesia. Your personality of being concerned about everyone still hasn’t changed.”
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	A low, heavy voice seemed to resound directly into Enne’s head. Nodding, the griffon began to flap its wings.		A low, heavy voice seemed to resound directly into Enne’s head. Nodding, the griffon began to flap its wings.

	“W-~~why~~ does a True Spirit know my full na-……”		“W-Why does a True Spirit know my full na-……”

	The rest of her words were drowned out by the sound of the griffon’s wings.		The rest of her words were drowned out by the sound of the griffon’s wings.
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	—Dawn was drawing closer.		—Dawn was drawing closer.



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	His oath hadn’t been fulfilled yet. I still haven’t shown you the true Rainbow Color Recitations.		His oath hadn’t been fulfilled yet. I still haven’t shown you the true Rainbow Color Recitations.

	—Idiot. You were so late to realize ~~it.—~~		—Idiot. You were so late to realize it—

	The wind carried along the girl’s voice. In this battle that was frozen at a stalemate, being distracted for a single instant could be fatal. But even so— even though the opponent was an unprecedented monster, the promised girl looked only at him.		The wind carried along the girl’s voice. In this battle that was frozen at a stalemate, being distracted for a single instant could be fatal. But even so— even though the opponent was an unprecedented monster, the promised girl looked only at him.
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	Only one person in the world, the Night-colored girl, continued to gaze at the light for eternity.		Only one person in the world, the Night-colored girl, continued to gaze at the light for eternity.



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	Yes. It's your fault that his arm is broken.		Yes. It's your fault that his arm is broken.

	~~"Even~~ though it's our first reunion after about ten years, ruining it is a great sin!"		『Even though it's our first reunion after about ten years, ruining it is a great sin!』

	The <Woman of Origin> leaped off the iron pole into the air.		The <Woman of Origin> leaped off the iron pole into the air.

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	Finally, she understood what her classmate had said.		Finally, she understood what her classmate had said.

	That wasn't the sky. What she had thought was the sky, were actually deep blueish-purple flames. The Night-colored flames burned in the campus were converging overhead. Their concentration turned to where the huge vortex of flames were concentrated at a small point. Before they noticed it, a dimly shining {{Furigana\|Recital Gate\|Channel}} had been born. Because it was so big, she didn't notice it until had been pointed out.		That wasn't the sky. What she had thought was the sky, were actually deep blueish-purple flames. The Night-colored flames burned in the campus were converging overhead. Their concentration turned to where the huge vortex of flames were concentrated at a small point. Before they noticed it, a dimly shining {{Furigana\|Recital Gate\|Channel}} had been born. Because it was so big, she didn't notice it until it had been pointed out.

	What is that? The {{Furigana\|Recital Gate\|Channel}} that they didn't know the reason for, it was way too gigantic. They had never seen such a showy {{Furigana\|Recital Gate\|Channel}} before.		What is that? The {{Furigana\|Recital Gate\|Channel}} that they didn't know the reason for, it was way too gigantic. They had never seen such a showy {{Furigana\|Recital Gate\|Channel}} before.
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	"Are you the True Spirit of Night?"		"Are you the True Spirit of Night?"

	『It would seem so wouldn't it? Kluele-~~san』~~		『It would seem so wouldn't it? Kluele-san.』

	Kluele was startled after suddenly being called by her name. Just like the divine bird she had recited out, why did even the True Spirit of Night know her name?		Kluele was startled after suddenly being called by her name. Just like the divine bird she had recited out, why did even the True Spirit of Night know her name?
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	For a moment, Kluele saw the illusion that someone was behind her. Just like the {{Furigana\|Divine Bird of Dawn\|Phoenix}} and Arma, that person had a voice that seemed to come out of nowhere. The voice suspended in air was a human woman's voice.		For a moment, Kluele saw the illusion that someone was behind her. Just like the {{Furigana\|Divine Bird of Dawn\|Phoenix}} and Arma, that person had a voice that seemed to come out of nowhere. The voice suspended in air was a human woman's voice.

	"Thank you very much. Neight by himself would never have been able to call me out. It is surely because of you that I am now here. In Neight's place, I thank you. If are able to, please continue helping this child."		"Thank you very much. Neight by himself would never have been able to call me out. It is surely because of you that I am now here. In Neight's place, I thank you. If you are able to, please continue helping this child."

	'This child'? That was not a normal way of speaking. It was almost like she was speaking about her own child. Isn't it unfitting for a True Spirit to use such wording when talking about humans?		'This child'? That was not a normal way of speaking. It was almost like she was speaking about her own child. Isn't it unfitting for a True Spirit to use such wording when talking about humans?
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	"Wa-Wait, carry us more carefully!"		"Wa-Wait, carry us more carefully!"

	While still burdened with Neight, Arma had grabbed them. Although he wasn’t flying very fast, because of the unstable footing, a little mistake could shake them off.And even more importantly, the dragon was flying in an awkward manner. Could it be a bad habit? Compared to the bird deity that she had come here with, he was too clumsy.		While still burdened with Neight, Arma had grabbed them. Although he wasn’t flying very fast, because of the unstable footing, a little mistake could shake them off. And even more importantly, the dragon was flying in an awkward manner. Could it be a bad habit? Compared to the bird deity that she had come here with, he was too clumsy.

	『Because I haven’t flown in a long time.』		『Because I haven’t flown in a long time.』
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	Her voice was filled with anger, but also included a faint feeling of delight.		Her voice was filled with anger, but also included a faint feeling of delight.


	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

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	For a moment, Kluele saw the illusion that someone was behind her. Just like the {{Furigana\|Divine Bird of Dawn\|Phoenix}} and Arma, that person had a voice that seemed to come out of nowhere. The voice suspended in air was a human woman's voice.		For a moment, Kluele saw the illusion that someone was behind her. Just like the {{Furigana\|Divine Bird of Dawn\|Phoenix}} and Arma, that person had a voice that seemed to come out of nowhere. The voice suspended in air was a human woman's voice.

	~~『Thank~~ you very much. Neight by himself would never have been able to call me out. It is surely because of you that I am now here. In Neight's place, I thank you. If are able to, please continue helping this child.』		"Thank you very much. Neight by himself would never have been able to call me out. It is surely because of you that I am now here. In Neight's place, I thank you. If are able to, please continue helping this child."

	'This child'? That was not a normal way of speaking. It was almost like she was speaking about her own child. Isn't it unfitting for a True Spirit to use such wording when talking about humans?		'This child'? That was not a normal way of speaking. It was almost like she was speaking about her own child. Isn't it unfitting for a True Spirit to use such wording when talking about humans?
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	Without a trace, the True Spirit of Night disappeared from the place it had just been standing. Just before the hydra judged that it was too quick.		Without a trace, the True Spirit of Night disappeared from the place it had just been standing. Just before the hydra judged that it was too quick.

	~~『Too~~ bad, but this school is also an important place to me.』		"Too bad, but this school is also an important place to me."

	The hydra heard that voice coming from overhead. Turning in the direction of the voice, its five heads glared at its surroundings in search of the enemy.		The hydra heard that voice coming from overhead. Turning in the direction of the voice, its five heads glared at its surroundings in search of the enemy.

	~~『Let~~ me express my thanks for coming along and doing whatever you please.』		"Let me express my thanks for coming along and doing whatever you please."

	Before long, ten eyes concentrated on one end of the campus. At a height of easily twenty meters above ground.		Before long, ten eyes concentrated on one end of the campus. At a height of easily twenty meters above ground.
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	Yes. It's your fault that his arm is broken.		Yes. It's your fault that his arm is broken.

	~~『Even~~ though it's our first reunion after about ten years, ruining it is a great sin!』		"Even though it's our first reunion after about ten years, ruining it is a great sin!"

	The <Woman of Origin> leaped off the iron pole into the air.		The <Woman of Origin> leaped off the iron pole into the air.