Tasogare-iro no Uta Tsukai:Volume2 1st Play - Revision history

Rxls at 06:01, 24 May 2018

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	==1st Play – Wanting to Become a Copper-Colored Song User==		==1st Play: Wanting to Become a Copper-Colored Song User==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

Mystrael at 17:24, 20 August 2013

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	“……What an unsettling way of talking.”		“……What an unsettling way of talking.”

	Neight heard a familiar voice coming from somewhere behind him. Turning around, there stood Kluele with a cup ~~of drinks<!--cup or drink alone should suffice here?-->~~ in each hand. Standing opposite to Kluele who was raising an eyebrow, the girl shouldering a backpack waved her hand cheerfully.		Neight heard a familiar voice coming from somewhere behind him. Turning around, there stood Kluele with a cup in each hand. Standing opposite to Kluele who was raising an eyebrow, the girl shouldering a backpack waved her hand cheerfully.

	“No no, there wasn’t any deep meaning behind that. Also, Kluele, make sure your left shoulder heals quickly!”		“No no, there wasn’t any deep meaning behind that. Also, Kluele, make sure your left shoulder heals quickly!”

Cres at 14:16, 20 August 2013

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	“……It’s really hot!”		“……It’s really hot!”

	Taking shelter in the shadow of a school building, Neight wiped the sweat from his forehead. He should have worn some light clothes like Kluele ~~was~~, but he had reflexively ~~wore~~ his usual white school uniform. He could return to his dorm and change, but that was just as troublesome.		Taking shelter in the shadow of a school building, Neight wiped the sweat from his forehead. He should have worn some light clothes like Kluele, but he had reflexively worn his usual white school uniform. He could return to his dorm and change, but that was just as troublesome.

	“……Kluele-san still hasn’t returned yet.”		“……Kluele-san still hasn’t returned yet.”
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	Her words sounded like that of a natural comeback.		Her words sounded like that of a natural comeback.

	“Her enthusiasm is amazing. These few days, she seems to be coming to the library at seven in the morning just to wait for it to open. She was even bragging about how she’s the earliest student to arrive.”		“Her enthusiasm is amazing. These last few days, she seems to be coming to the library at seven in the morning just to wait for it to open. She was even bragging about how she’s the earliest student to arrive.”

	“……Hmm.”		“……Hmm.”
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	“……What an unsettling way of talking.”		“……What an unsettling way of talking.”

	Neight heard a familiar voice coming from somewhere behind him. Turning around, there stood Kluele with a cup of drinks in each hand. Standing opposite to Kluele who was raising an eyebrow, the girl shouldering a backpack waved her hand cheerfully.		Neight heard a familiar voice coming from somewhere behind him. Turning around, there stood Kluele with a cup of drinks<!--cup or drink alone should suffice here?--> in each hand. Standing opposite to Kluele who was raising an eyebrow, the girl shouldering a backpack waved her hand cheerfully.

	“No no, there wasn’t any deep meaning behind that. Also, Kluele, make sure your left shoulder heals quickly!”		“No no, there wasn’t any deep meaning behind that. Also, Kluele, make sure your left shoulder heals quickly!”

	With the sleeve of her one-piece dress fluttering in the wind, Kluele’s shoulder was slightly exposed to the sunlight. The ~~while~~ bandage seemed pitiful against her slightly flushed skin. It was a wound she had gotten two weeks ago, during the incident that happened on campus. According to her, it could be called healed already.		With the sleeve of her one-piece dress fluttering in the wind, Kluele’s shoulder was slightly exposed to the sunlight. The white bandage seemed pitiful against her slightly flushed skin. It was a wound she had gotten two weeks ago, during the incident that happened on campus. According to her, it could be called healed already.

	“……Got it.”		“……Got it.”
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	……In other words, someone I know?		……In other words, someone I know?


	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

Cres: Sentence structure

2013-08-20T14:00:58Z

Sentence structure

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	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

	Perhaps it was a special case due to being at the edge of the continent, but it was a high school which thousands of students who specialized in Recitation attended— Tremia Academy. The campus was several times larger than other Recitation schools, ~~with~~ both the facilities and ~~quality of~~ the teaching staff couldn’t be described as inferior to other prestigious schools.		Perhaps it was a special case due to being at the edge of the continent, but it was a high school which thousands of students who specialized in Recitation attended— Tremia Academy. The campus was several times larger than other Recitation schools, while the quality of both the facilities and the teaching staff couldn’t be described as inferior to other prestigious schools.

	Located in the center of the campus was a building in the shape of a dome-shaped arch.		Located in the center of the campus was a building in the shape of a dome-shaped arch.
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	“The café nearby should be open. I’ll go buy some cold drinks, so wait here.”		“The café nearby should be open. I’ll go buy some cold drinks, so wait here.”


	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

Arczyx at 13:15, 19 August 2013

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	“……Ada-san?”		“……Ada-san?”

	Ada ~~Yun—~~ The girl before his eyes was someone in the same class as him and Kluele. It was the familiar face of a classmate.		Ada Yung— The girl before his eyes was someone in the same class as him and Kluele. It was the familiar face of a classmate.

	“Ada-san, is that a spear?”		“Ada-san, is that a spear?”

Mystrael: fixed line. thanks for pointing it out!

2013-07-29T00:41:29Z

fixed line. thanks for pointing it out!

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	……I see. She somewhat understood. Looking up, she exchanged glances with Mirror, who stood in front of her. She and Mirror both nodded slightly.		……I see. She somewhat understood. Looking up, she exchanged glances with Mirror, who stood in front of her. She and Mirror both nodded slightly.

	“I understand the situation. ~~You’re~~ saying that while the first-year students go on their summer camp, we should go ~~to express our complaints~~ to the head of the branch facility.”		“I understand the situation. So you’re saying that while the first-year students go on their summer camp, we should go complain to the head of the branch facility, right?”

	“……Zessel.”		“……Zessel.”
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	Instead of sighing, Enne closed her eyes. If this wasn’t the headmaster’s office, she would have pinched the back of that idiot standing beside her.		Instead of sighing, Enne closed her eyes. If this wasn’t the headmaster’s office, she would have pinched the back of that idiot standing beside her.

	“Eh? ~~You’re~~ joking, ~~right?~~”~~<!--Is this line really alright (in terms of translation)? I mean, why would Zessel say that?-->~~		“Eh? Ah, I was joking, of course.”

	Her childhood friend smiled deceptively with a carefree expression. ……Why hadn’t this guy fixed his childish habits?		Her childhood friend smiled deceptively with a carefree expression. ……Why hadn’t this guy fixed his childish habits?

Arczyx at 00:19, 29 July 2013

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	Perhaps it was a special case due to being at the edge of the continent, but it was a high school which thousands of students who specialized in Recitation attended— Tremia Academy. The campus was several times larger than other Recitation schools, ~~and~~ the facilities and quality of the teaching staff couldn’t be described as inferior to other prestigious schools.		Perhaps it was a special case due to being at the edge of the continent, but it was a high school which thousands of students who specialized in Recitation attended— Tremia Academy. The campus was several times larger than other Recitation schools, with both the facilities and quality of the teaching staff couldn’t be described as inferior to other prestigious schools.

	Located in the center of the campus, was a building in the shape of a dome-shaped arch.		Located in the center of the campus was a building in the shape of a dome-shaped arch.

	‘Books Administration Building’ —Holding around one million two hundred thousand books, it was an establishment that stretched from five floors above ground to two floors underground. It wasn’t just a place for studying, but was also used for socializing and taking a break. Not just students, but teachers also frequently visited that building, qualifying it to be called a multipurpose hall.		‘Books Administration Building’ —Holding around one million two hundred thousand books, it was an establishment that stretched from five floors above ground to two floors underground. It wasn’t just a place for studying, but was also used for socializing and taking a break. Not just students, but teachers also frequently visited that building, qualifying it to be called a multipurpose hall.
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	Teasingly, the teacher pushed up the bridge of his glasses.		Teasingly, the teacher pushed up the bridge of his glasses.



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	“Isn’t that not related to Recitations at all?”		“Isn’t that not related to Recitations at all?”

	Her words sounded like that of a natural ~~tsukkomi~~.		Her words sounded like that of a natural comeback.

	“Her enthusiasm is amazing. These few days, she seems to be coming to the library at seven in the morning just to wait for it to open. She was even bragging about how she’s the earliest student to go.”		“Her enthusiasm is amazing. These few days, she seems to be coming to the library at seven in the morning just to wait for it to open. She was even bragging about how she’s the earliest student to arrive.”

	“……Hmm.”		“……Hmm.”
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	“……Got it.”		“……Got it.”

	~~“You, you~~ seem mature, but ~~when~~ you act rash when doing something unexpected.”		“You……You seem mature, but you act rash when doing something unexpected.”

	With a disappointed face, Kluele pouted. Seeing that, the black-haired girl’s amused expression softened.		With a disappointed face, Kluele pouted. Seeing that, the black-haired girl’s amused expression softened.
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	How should he explain? He contemplated for a few seconds.		How should he explain? He contemplated for a few seconds.

	“Just, checking whether or not someone will be on the roof.”		“Just checking whether or not someone will be on the roof.”

	Neight answered by saying what Serges had said to him.		Neight answered by saying what Serges had said to him.
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	“Who do you mean by ‘someone’?”		“Who do you mean by ‘someone’?”

	“Well……She didn’t tell ~~me”~~		“Well……She didn’t tell me.”

	Unsure of what expression he should make, Neight bit his cheek.		Unsure of what expression he should make, Neight bit his cheek.
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	Teasing him, the girl’s shoulders shook cheerfully.		Teasing him, the girl’s shoulders shook cheerfully.



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	The change was so subtle that it couldn’t be expressed in words. But something scary seemed to light up the girl’s eyes. Frightening. Or more accurately, it somehow stirred up fear inside him.		The change was so subtle that it couldn’t be expressed in words. But something scary seemed to light up the girl’s eyes. Frightening. Or more accurately, it somehow stirred up fear inside him.

	“No, no. Chibi-kun saw it ~~also~~, right? In the very end, I ended up dropping my spear. That wasn’t cool at all. I’m still making such basic mistakes after so many years—”		“No, no. Chibi-kun saw it too, right? In the very end, I ended up dropping my spear. That wasn’t cool at all. I’m still making such basic mistakes after so many years—”

	……So many years? That means...		……So many years? That means...
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	“Eh, there’s no way anyone would say that. We’re not similar, not similar at all!”		“Eh, there’s no way anyone would say that. We’re not similar, not similar at all!”

	As if she really hated that statement~~, she frowned openly~~.		She frowned openly as if she really hated that statement.

	“Ah, that’s right. I should go soon.”		“Ah, that’s right. I should go soon.”
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	“Trip? Are you going somewhere?”		“Trip? Are you going somewhere?”

	“Isn’t Chibi-kun going ~~also~~?”		“Isn’t Chibi-kun also going?”

	Carefully wrapping her spear in a piece of cloth, Ada tilted her head.		Carefully wrapping her spear in a piece of cloth, Ada tilted her head.
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	Telling an obvious lie, Neight also headed down the emergency stairs.		Telling an obvious lie, Neight also headed down the emergency stairs.


	===Part 4===		===Part 4===
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	He was a male teacher who was Enne’s colleague as well as her childhood friend. Regardless of whether he was at school or not, he had probably heard those words hundreds of times to him by now.		He was a male teacher who was Enne’s colleague as well as her childhood friend. Regardless of whether he was at school or not, he had probably heard those words hundreds of times to him by now.

	“The headmaster said we can do as we like. I do dress neat in front of students, but it’s summer vacation~~, plus~~, there’s no way any ~~students~~ could be here at this time—”		“The headmaster said we can do as we like. I do dress neat in front of students, but it’s summer vacation. Plus, there’s no way any student could be here at this time—”

	“There is. There’s a child waiting for the library to open. Although if I recall correctly, she’s probably a first-year student.”		“There is. There’s a child waiting for the library to open. Although if I recall correctly, she’s probably a first-year student.”
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	“In order for us to repair the school, the usual supplementary lessons which students stay overnight at this school for have been cancelled. Instead, we will use the school buildings of Tremia Academy’s branch school in Fidellia. It will be a special field trip.”		“In order for us to repair the school, the usual supplementary lessons which students stay overnight at this school for have been cancelled. Instead, we will use the school buildings of Tremia Academy’s branch school in Fidellia. It will be a special field trip.”

	~~The~~ only person whose expression didn’t change, the headmaster standing in the center continued speaking.		Being the only person whose expression didn’t change, the headmaster standing in the center continued speaking.

	Branch school. Rather than calling it a school, it was a facility opened to serve as a local gathering hall. Enne hadn’t visited it before herself. If she recalled correctly, Fidellia was a place near the ocean.		Branch school. Rather than calling it a school, it was a facility opened to serve as a local gathering hall. Enne hadn’t visited it before herself. If she recalled correctly, Fidellia was a place near the ocean.
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	Instead of sighing, Enne closed her eyes. If this wasn’t the headmaster’s office, she would have pinched the back of that idiot standing beside her.		Instead of sighing, Enne closed her eyes. If this wasn’t the headmaster’s office, she would have pinched the back of that idiot standing beside her.

	“Eh? You’re joking, right?”		“Eh? You’re joking, right?”<!--Is this line really alright (in terms of translation)? I mean, why would Zessel say that?-->

	Her childhood friend smiled deceptively with a carefree expression. ……Why hadn’t this guy fixed his childish habits?		Her childhood friend smiled deceptively with a carefree expression. ……Why hadn’t this guy fixed his childish habits?

Mystrael at 00:18, 21 June 2013

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	The girl before him finally raised her face. Their eyes met.		The girl before him finally raised her face. Their eyes met.

	“Hey, if it isn’t ~~chibi~~-kun. ‘Morning! You’re here early, aren’t you?”		“Hey, if it isn’t Chibi-kun. ‘Morning! You’re here early, aren’t you?”

	Her breathtaking expression from before was like a lie. With an indifferent expression, she raised one hand.		Her breathtaking expression from before was like a lie. With an indifferent expression, she raised one hand.
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	It was still earlier than seven in the morning. Even though it was only this time, from the smiling girl’s forehead, no, from her whole body, large drops of sweat flowed.		It was still earlier than seven in the morning. Even though it was only this time, from the smiling girl’s forehead, no, from her whole body, large drops of sweat flowed.

	“Hey, ~~chibi~~-kun. I have a favor to ask.”		“Hey, Chibi-kun. I have a favor to ask.”

	...…Chibi-kun?		...…Chibi-kun?
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	“H-Hey. Even Neighty is slightly better…”		“H-Hey. Even Neighty is slightly better…”

	“Eeh. But doesn’t the nickname ~~chibi~~-kun sound cute? It has more charm to it!”		“Eeh. But doesn’t the nickname Chibi-kun sound cute? It has more charm to it!”

	“Really?”		“Really?”
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	Even as he indirectly expressed his dissatisfaction, the girl had an indifferent expression. It seemed that to her, that nickname was already fixed.		Even as he indirectly expressed his dissatisfaction, the girl had an indifferent expression. It seemed that to her, that nickname was already fixed.

	“Yeah, yeah. By the way, ~~chibi~~-kun, can you face the other way for a bit?”		“Yeah, yeah. By the way, Chibi-kun, can you face the other way for a bit?”

	“The other way?”		“The other way?”
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	The girl curled her lips into a grin.		The girl curled her lips into a grin.

	“Sure enough, ~~chibi~~-kun is ~~chibi~~-kun.”		“Sure enough, Chibi-kun is Chibi-kun.”

	“Eh?”		“Eh?”

	“I need to change, change clothes. I want to take off my tank top. If ~~chibi~~-kun doesn’t turn around, won’t it be too provoking?”		“I need to change, change clothes. I want to take off my tank top. If Chibi-kun doesn’t turn around, won’t it be too provoking?”

	“……If that’s what you meant, then say it earlier.”		“……If that’s what you meant, then say it earlier.”
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	Puffing up his cheeks, Neight turned away. Really, if she had said earlier that she wanted to change, then he would have turned around right away.		Puffing up his cheeks, Neight turned away. Really, if she had said earlier that she wanted to change, then he would have turned around right away.

	“That’s why you’re ~~chibi~~-kun.”		“That’s why you’re Chibi-kun.”

	Teasing him, the girl’s shoulders shook cheerfully.		Teasing him, the girl’s shoulders shook cheerfully.
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	What the girl was telling him was something that he had heard about before.		What the girl was telling him was something that he had heard about before.

	“Yeah. I’m in a ~~spearmanship~~ club. I was practicing just now.”		“Yeah. I’m in a spear-wielding club. I was practicing just now.”

	“Practicing, at this early in the morning?”		“Practicing, at this early in the morning?”
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	Memory isn’t very good?		Memory isn’t very good?

	“Eh, but Ada-san. You joined the ~~spearmanship~~ club this April, right? It hasn’t even been half a year, yet you’re already this good. How could your memory be bad?”		“Eh, but Ada-san. You joined the spear-wielding club this April, right? It hasn’t even been half a year, yet you’re already this good. How could your memory be bad?”

	Suddenly, the girl’s facial expression changed.		Suddenly, the girl’s facial expression changed.
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	“Was that why you were angry?!”		“Was that why you were angry?!”

	“Hm? What’s wrong, ~~chibi~~-kun? You don’t seem very energetic?”		“Hm? What’s wrong, Chibi-kun? You don’t seem very energetic?”

	……Take back what I said before. Angry people should just be angry.		……Take back what I said before. Angry people should just be angry.
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	“Trip? Are you going somewhere?”		“Trip? Are you going somewhere?”

	“Isn’t ~~chibi~~-kun going also?”		“Isn’t Chibi-kun going also?”

	Carefully wrapping her spear in a piece of cloth, Ada tilted her head.		Carefully wrapping her spear in a piece of cloth, Ada tilted her head.

Angelanime: /* 1st Play – Wanting to Become a Copper-Colored Song User */

2013-06-13T13:30:14Z

1st Play – Wanting to Become a Copper-Colored Song User

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	“That is something I want you guys to investigate. Mirror has already begun looking into this.”		“That is something I want you guys to investigate. Mirror has already begun looking into this.”

	I see. From the time she had entered the room, she had been curious about the contents of the documents that ~~Miller~~ had tucked under his arm.		I see. From the time she had entered the room, she had been curious about the contents of the documents that Mirror had tucked under his arm.

	“Although using that sort of place as the location of the first-year students’ training camp isn’t something to be proud of…… Even we have only recently learned of the situation about the Kelberk Research Institute branch facility. It would be slightly difficult to change the chosen location in only these few days. Well, our branch school and the research institute aren’t directly beside each other. Teachers in charge of first-year students, please make sure that students don’t leave the branch school’s campus.”		“Although using that sort of place as the location of the first-year students’ training camp isn’t something to be proud of…… Even we have only recently learned of the situation about the Kelberk Research Institute branch facility. It would be slightly difficult to change the chosen location in only these few days. Well, our branch school and the research institute aren’t directly beside each other. Teachers in charge of first-year students, please make sure that students don’t leave the branch school’s campus.”

Angelanime: /* Part 3 */

2013-06-13T13:11:54Z

Part 3

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	At first glance, the performance seemed like a beautiful war dance. However, she seemed to have a vigor that couldn’t be emitted when acting. It couldn’t be described with just the word ‘reality’. That was what the expression on the spear-wielder’s face said.		At first glance, the performance seemed like a beautiful war dance. However, she seemed to have a vigor that couldn’t be emitted when acting. It couldn’t be described with just the word ‘reality’. That was what the expression on the spear-wielder’s face said.

	The girl’s movements didn’t stop. On the roof so wide at you could run a race, her feet moved so fast that his eyes couldn’t keep up. Even the splash of sweat glittering in the sunlight was beautiful. Different from any sport, it couldn’t be classified as something in this dimension.		The girl’s movements didn’t stop. On the roof so wide that you could run a race, her feet moved so fast that his eyes couldn’t keep up. Even the splash of sweat glittering in the sunlight was beautiful. Different from any sport, it couldn’t be classified as something in this dimension.

	Returning from the edge of the rooftop to the center, the girl spun the spear with one hand.		Returning from the edge of the rooftop to the center, the girl spun the spear with one hand.
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	Telling an obvious lie, Neight also headed down the emergency stairs.		Telling an obvious lie, Neight also headed down the emergency stairs.


	===Part 4===		===Part 4===