Tasogare-iro no Uta Tsukai:Volume2 4th Play - Revision history

Arczyx at 02:43, 26 August 2013

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	Looking around the classroom restlessly, Serges tilted her head.		Looking around the classroom restlessly, Serges tilted her head.

	“Apparently she had something urgent to do this morning. She said, ~~“For~~ this morning, do the quiz from the section you learned yesterday,” and then left.”		“Apparently she had something urgent to do this morning. She said, ‘For this morning, do the quiz from the section you learned yesterday,’ and then left.”

	“Oh, I see. Well then, good luck, kid!”		“Oh, I see. Well then, good luck, kid!”
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	Feeling a presence behind her, Ada suddenly turned around.		Feeling a presence behind her, Ada suddenly turned around.

	“Eh, Ada?”		“Eh, Ada-san?”

	There stood a boy with young-looking features and deep night-colored hair.		There stood a boy with young-looking features and deep night-colored hair.
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	The light fairy’s radiance lit the path ahead of him.		The light fairy’s radiance lit the path ahead of him.

	They had heard the sound a few minutes ago. If a teacher from Tremia had come to this institution looking for them, then ~~the~~ teacher should have naturally stepped into the entrance hall.		They had heard the sound a few minutes ago. If a teacher from Tremia had come to this institution looking for them, then that teacher should have naturally stepped into the entrance hall.

	……But, it’s strange.		……But, it’s strange.

Arczyx at 09:20, 20 August 2013

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	She ran down the hallway. The sight of her carrying such a large object drew curious glances from students and teachers.		She ran down the hallway. The sight of her carrying such a large object drew curious glances from students and teachers.

	……Ahaha, how nostalgic. When she had entered Tremia and came out of the entrance ceremony holding her {{Furigana\|Exorcist Spear\|~~Gillshe~~}}, she had also been stared at like this.		……Ahaha, how nostalgic. When she had entered Tremia and came out of the entrance ceremony holding her {{Furigana\|Exorcist Spear\|Gil}}, she had also been stared at like this.

	Speaking of which, how had she made her very first friend?		Speaking of which, how had she made her very first friend?

Arczyx at 00:47, 1 August 2013

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	That horrible Recitation shouldn’t be used like that, for no matter what reason.		That horrible Recitation shouldn’t be used like that, for no matter what reason.

	“Hey, does that mean you can cure all of the researchers ~~also~~?”		“Hey, does that mean you can also cure all of the researchers?”

	……Although Enne wanted to do that, it would take too much time and effort.		……Although Enne wanted to do that, it would take too much time and effort.
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	Letting out a loud sigh, Ada stepped forward from behind the tree and onto the road.		Letting out a loud sigh, Ada stepped forward from behind the tree and onto the road.

	“Okay, I get it. We lose! Hey Chibi-kun, you come out ~~also~~!”		“Okay, I get it. We lose! Hey Chibi-kun, you come out too!”

	“A-Agh! ……Ada-san, it’s not nice to suddenly kick me!”		“A-Agh! ……Ada-san, it’s not nice to suddenly kick me!”

	“Neight-kun ~~also~~? Just what are you guys doing?”		“Neight-kun as well? Just what are you guys doing?”

	Their homeroom teacher gazed at them with a look filled with half amazement, half surprise.		Their homeroom teacher gazed at them with a look filled with half amazement, half surprise.
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	—But now, she was……		—But now, she was……

	She had left behind both Kate-sensei and that young boy, ~~and~~ ran away by herself.		She had left behind both Kate-sensei and that young boy, then ran away by herself.

	……Dad— I—		……Dad— I—
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	Standing at both sides of the school’s main gate were teachers who Ada recognized.		Standing at both sides of the school’s main gate were teachers who Ada recognized.

	“Ada, where did you go? You can’t just leave the school ~~when~~ you lik—”		“Ada, where did you go? You can’t just leave the school whenever you lik—”

	“Sorry, Sensei! We can talk about it later!”		“Sorry, Sensei! We can talk about it later!”
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	A gentle wind blew. It was a gentle breeze that cleared their hearts, different from the salty breeze that surrounded them.		A gentle wind blew. It was a gentle breeze that cleared their hearts, different from the salty breeze that surrounded them.

	The blazing feathers fluttered in the air ~~like~~ they were dancing. ~~Like~~ they were protecting the girl with scarlet hair.		The blazing feathers fluttered in the air as if they were dancing. As if they were protecting the girl with scarlet hair.

	After the red honorary ritual finished— A gigantic Recited creature with deep crimson wings stood silently behind Kluele as if it was snuggling up to her.		After the red honorary ritual finished— A gigantic Recited creature with deep crimson wings stood silently behind Kluele as if it was snuggling up to her.
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	“……No way.”		“……No way.”

	Ada took a step back ~~like~~ she had been pushed.		Ada took a step back as if she had been pushed.

	It was a creature from stories, from legends. This creature was known to be a legend by not only those who studied Recitations, but even to regular people around the world.		It was a creature from stories, from legends. This creature was known to be a legend by not only those who studied Recitations, but even to regular people around the world.
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	After a moment of silence……		After a moment of silence……

	~~Like~~ it was trying to match hers, a smile lit up in the divine bird’s eyes.		As if it was trying to match hers, a smile lit up in the divine bird’s eyes.

	[Very good, girl who should not be a Reciter. That was a very good decision.]		[Very good, girl who should not be a Reciter. That was a very good decision.]

80.223.220.209 at 18:27, 30 June 2013

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Angelanime: /* 4th Play: Please Teach Me the Path of the Guarding Spear */

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4th Play: Please Teach Me the Path of the Guarding Spear

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	“……What are these?”		“……What are these?”

	Lined up in the entrance lobby were about a dozen oddly-shaped stone statutes. Her face distorted with astonishment, Kate walked forward. Stone statues. And not just one or two. What all of the statues had in common was that they all wore some sort of ~~pendent~~ around their neck.		Lined up in the entrance lobby were about a dozen oddly-shaped stone statutes. Her face distorted with astonishment, Kate walked forward. Stone statues. And not just one or two. What all of the statues had in common was that they all wore some sort of pendant around their neck.

	No, that wasn’t it. Those were the nameplates worn by the staff of the research institute. Why were these statues wearing the staff’s equipment? It was like——No way.		No, that wasn’t it. Those were the nameplates worn by the staff of the research institute. Why were these statues wearing the staff’s equipment? It was like——No way.

Angelanime: /* 4th Play: Please Teach Me the Path of the Guarding Spear */

2013-06-30T10:37:21Z

4th Play: Please Teach Me the Path of the Guarding Spear

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	“……Hey Kluele, I was curious about it before, but you get along well with Chibi-kun, don’t you?”		“……Hey Kluele, I was curious about it before, but you get along well with Chibi-kun, don’t you?”

	“By Chibi-kun, do you mean Neight?”		“By Chibi-kun, do you mean Neight?” Raising the paper cup to her lips, she tilted her neck.

	Raising the paper cup to her lips, she tilted her neck.

	“Yeah, yeah. I heard from Chibi-kun that you two spent the entire summer practicing Recitations together?”		“Yeah, yeah. I heard from Chibi-kun that you two spent the entire summer practicing Recitations together?”

	“It wasn’t the entire summer, just when I had time.”		“It wasn’t the entire summer, just when I had time,” Kluele replied casually with a nonchalant expression.

	Kluele replied casually with a nonchalant expression.

	Just when I had time— Knowing Kluele, that meant the same as ‘during all of the free time I had’.		Just when I had time— Knowing Kluele, that meant the same as ‘during all of the free time I had’.
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	“Well, Chibi-kun’s also a handful, isn’t he?”		“Well, Chibi-kun’s also a handful, isn’t he?”

	“’Chibi-kun also’?”		“’Chibi-kun also’?” Her sharp-eared friend asked, repeating back a part of what she had just said.

	Her sharp-eared friend asked, repeating back a part of what she had just said.

	“……Um, you see……”		“……Um, you see……”
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	“Let’s say for example that there was a student in the class other than Chibi-kun who was alone. If that were so, what would you do, Kluele?”		“Let’s say for example that there was a student in the class other than Chibi-kun who was alone. If that were so, what would you do, Kluele?”

	“……For example, who?”		“……For example, who?” With her eyes reflecting the tense atmosphere, Kluele asked in a quiet voice.

	With her eyes reflecting the tense atmosphere, Kluele asked in a quiet voice.

	~~“For example, people like me.”~~

	~~But as soon as Ada finished saying those words……~~

	~~“Ah~~, ~~it’s fine. That’s not true~~.”		“For example, people like me.” But as soon as Ada finished saying those words……

	Kluele said lightheartedly, waving her hand.		“Ah, it’s fine. That’s not true,” Kluele said lightheartedly, waving her hand.

	“Eh? ‘It’s fine’, meaning?”		“Eh? ‘It’s fine’, meaning?”
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	It was a problem she couldn’t tell her parents or her teachers about. Telling her to consult someone about it was simple, but for the troubled person herself, she needed the utmost courage. If she could do something like consult with someone—		It was a problem she couldn’t tell her parents or her teachers about. Telling her to consult someone about it was simple, but for the troubled person herself, she needed the utmost courage. If she could do something like consult with someone—

	“’If I could do that, then I wouldn’t be so troubled.’ Ada, could it be that you were thinking something along those lines?”		“’If I could do that, then I wouldn’t be so troubled.’ Ada, could it be that you were thinking something along those lines?” Without any prior notice, the girl sitting across from Ada bluntly declared.

	Without any prior notice, the girl sitting across from Ada bluntly declared.

	Her voice sounded unusually strong, like she had absolute confidence in her words.		Her voice sounded unusually strong, like she had absolute confidence in her words.
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	“…….Why do you think so?”		“…….Why do you think so?”

	“Because I was like that just a little while ago.”		“Because I was like that just a little while ago.” Ada’s classmate solemnly informed her.

	Ada’s classmate solemnly informed her.

	“……You were?”		“……You were?”
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	She didn’t act like that at all in the classroom, but was instead always a bright and helpful girl. Other than that cheerful image, Ada couldn’t imagine Kluele any other way. ……But surely she wasn’t lying. If she was, there was no way that she could have read Ada’s feelings.		She didn’t act like that at all in the classroom, but was instead always a bright and helpful girl. Other than that cheerful image, Ada couldn’t imagine Kluele any other way. ……But surely she wasn’t lying. If she was, there was no way that she could have read Ada’s feelings.

	“But because of that, I think I can empathize with others who feel the same way.”		“But because of that, I think I can empathize with others who feel the same way.” Kluele calmly placed her hand on her chest.

	Kluele calmly placed her hand on her chest.

	“That’s why it’s fine for you to come and tell me if something happens. It doesn’t need to be a formal consultation. We can even discuss it casually in the dorms. If you’re fine with telling me, I’ll be there for you anytime. After all, we’re friends, right?”

	Resting her chin in her hands, Kluele smiled.		“That’s why it’s fine for you to come and tell me if something happens. It doesn’t need to be a formal consultation. We can even discuss it casually in the dorms. If you’re fine with telling me, I’ll be there for you anytime. After all, we’re friends, right?” Resting her chin in her hands, Kluele smiled.

	“……”		“……”
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	Right now, she had her hands empty. But once afternoon came, there wouldn’t be a teacher who could go support the two who they had lost contact with. In the beginning, they should have organized an emergency support team.		Right now, she had her hands empty. But once afternoon came, there wouldn’t be a teacher who could go support the two who they had lost contact with. In the beginning, they should have organized an emergency support team.

	“……Even without your saying, their disappearance suspicious.”		“……Even without your saying, their disappearance is suspicious.”

	The quiet voice coming from the wireless radio agreed. It was natural to think that something had happened in Kelberk Research Institute.		The quiet voice coming from the wireless radio agreed. It was natural to think that something had happened in Kelberk Research Institute.
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	“You can’t!”		“You can’t!”

	I’ll go look around. But before Kate could finish speaking, she was cut off.		''I’ll go look around.'' But before Kate could finish speaking, she was cut off.

	“Those two should have been cautious when going inside. Even though they were completely prepared, they ended up getting involved in some unknown situation. It’s too dangerous for you to go alone. You should go in a team of at least two, no three people.”		“Those two should have been cautious when going inside. Even though they were completely prepared, they ended up getting involved in some unknown situation. It’s too dangerous for you to go alone. You should go in a team of at least two, no three people.”

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	He had taught a lecture like usual yesterday. It had been the same with Enne. And if Ada remembered correctly— there was something in common about the two of them yesterday.		He had taught a lecture like usual yesterday. It had been the same with Enne. And if Ada remembered correctly— there was something in common about the two of them yesterday.

	“After class yesterday, when I walked past Zessel-sensei, I remember he ~~had been~~ wearing formal clothing. But on the first day, he wore a casual T-shirt on the train.”		“After class yesterday, when I walked past Zessel-sensei, I remember he was wearing formal clothing. But on the first day, he wore a casual T-shirt on the train.”

	“Now that you mention it, that’s true. Other students have also been saying how unusual it is.”		“Now that you mention it, that’s true. Other students have also been saying how unusual it is.”
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	“They are out right now on a special task for the headmaster, which means I can’t personally give you instructions on what to do…… How are the students doing?”		“They are out right now on a special task for the headmaster, which means I can’t personally give you instructions on what to do…… How are the students doing?”

	“We’re treating it as cancelled lectures. All of the lectures have been cancelled, so the students are probably also be feeling suspicious, but all of the other lectures are going as planned.”		“We’re treating it as cancelled lectures. All of the lectures have been cancelled, so the students are probably also feeling suspicious, but all of the other lectures are going as planned.”

	For a few seconds, there was silence from the other side of the connection.		For a few seconds, there was silence from the other side of the connection.
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	“Well, it doesn’t feel painful or uncomfortable. It’s just that no matter how much I try, I can’t move anything below my shoulder.”		“Well, it doesn’t feel painful or uncomfortable. It’s just that no matter how much I try, I can’t move anything below my shoulder.”

	The grey snakes and lizards were hiding in the entrance hall. Also, the majority of the researchers who had been turned to stone were ~~also~~ around there. They had definitely been attacked by the snakes and lizards.		The grey snakes and lizards were hiding in the entrance hall. Also, the majority of the researchers who had been turned to stone were around there. They had definitely been attacked by the snakes and lizards.

	“It probably wasn’t just a single person who called out all of those Recited creatures.”		“It probably wasn’t just a single person who called out all of those Recited creatures.”
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	“Wha…… Wait, Ada!”		“Wha…… Wait, Ada!”

	Ada forcefully shook of the hand that had grabbed her shoulder. With that momentum, she ran inside the school building.		Ada forcefully shook off the hand that had grabbed her shoulder. With that momentum, she ran inside the school building.

	—Although Kate-sensei had wanted her to report the situation, she couldn’t just do that.		—Although Kate-sensei had wanted her to report the situation, she couldn’t just do that.