Tate no Yuusha no Nariagari:Web Chapter 264 - Revision history

Jirgos at 07:41, 19 February 2015

2015-02-19T07:41:00Z

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	Childrens toy’s and bright things were scattered all over the place. It looked just like a little kid's room. Don’t birds usually make nest with straw? Was she making that kind of thing? Well, there was no proof of that.		Childrens toy’s and bright things were scattered all over the place. It looked just like a little kid's room. Don’t birds usually make nest with straw? Was she making that kind of thing? Well, there was no proof of that.

	“I don’t know anything about these eggs lying around” (~~Firo~~)		“I don’t know anything about these eggs lying around” (Naofumi)

	“Firo, do you even lay eggs?” (~~Naofumi~~)		“Firo, do you even lay eggs?” (Raftalia)

	“Ahh... could they be Motoyasu’s?... No, they could be Melty’s eggs, I dunno.” (~~Firo~~)		“Ahh... could they be Motoyasu’s?... No, they could be Melty’s eggs, I dunno.” (Naofumi)

	“Melty’s a human girl!” (Raftalia)		“Melty’s a human girl!” (Raftalia)
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	Though a different person might argue its my fault.		Though a different person might argue its my fault.

	“I don’t know, some might even be Naofumi-sama’s” (~~Firo~~)		“I don’t know, some might even be Naofumi-sama’s” (Raphtalia)

	“You really think it might?!”. (~~Raphtalia~~)		“You really think it might?!”. (Naofumi)

	God, Raftalia who would think that?		God, Raftalia who would think that?

	~~Firo’s~~ acting like she’s sleep-talking		Raftalia’s acting like she’s sleep-talking

	...From a little before, the number of parents seem to have multiplied.		...From a little before, the number of parents seem to have multiplied.

	In any case, is such a messy room, is it worth investigating, but…		In any case, it is such a messy room, is it worth investigating, but…

	Somehow, it seems high quality ore and decorations are casually lying around.		Somehow, it seems high quality ore and decorations are casually lying around.
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	“I think she’d get mad if we ever did that without permission too.” (Raftalia)		“I think she’d get mad if we ever did that without permission too.” (Raftalia)
	“That’s right” (~~firo~~)
			“That’s right” (?)

	...huh?		...huh?
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	“Chirp!”		“Chirp!”

	Philo-~~real~~ chicks started examining the the intside of my armor.		Philo-rial chicks started examining the the intside of my armor.

	“What is this?!” (Naofumi)		“What is this?!” (Naofumi)

Kookiedreamer: Undo revision 418302 by Kookiedreamer (talk)

2015-02-19T05:12:11Z

Undo revision 418302 by Kookiedreamer (talk)

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	{My stab at it, can’t let yoraikun and company have all the fun, and I’ve read over 200 chapters thanks to them, so I felt guilty and knocked one out. Note: This isn’t a machine translation, so if you find many grammatical mistakes...yeah, that’s just me...It's also 5:00 am}		{My stab at it, can’t let yoraikun and company have all the fun, and I’ve read over 200 chapters thanks to them, so I felt guilty and knocked one out. Note: This isn’t a machine translation, so if you find many grammatical mistakes...yeah, that’s just me...It's also 5:00 am}

	“Where to next?” ~~(Raphtalia)~~		“Where to next?”
	~~“That’s right… let’s go to to Firo’s room.” (Naofumi)~~

	~~I’ve given a room~~ to ~~Firo for the time being.~~		“That’s right… let’s go to to Firo’s room”
	~~It's a room in my house.~~

	I originally thought a ~~Philorial~~ barn ~~was fine as well~~, but since it's what Firo had wanted, it couldn’t be helped.		I’d once given a room to Firo.
	Kids seem to want ~~their own~~ room. ~~It's probably similar~~ to ~~that~~.		More specifically, my room.
	~~She's never stayed in~~ it ~~though~~.
			I’d originally thought a PhiloRial barn would be better, but since it's what Firo had wanted, it couldn’t be helped.

			Kids seem to want your room. That’s the same everywhere.

			That person hasn’t tried to get my room though.

			Where there was once just my key, it seems to have multiplied, now would probably be a good time to see what was going on.

	~~It's locked at the moment, but now would probably be a good time to check to see if anything happened.~~
	We went into our house, and I opened the door to Firo’s room.		We went into our house, and I opened the door to Firo’s room.

	“This ~~is…”~~ (Naofumi)		“This is….”

			Childrens toy’s and bright things were scattered all over the place. It looked just like a little kid's room. Don’t birds usually make nest with straw? Was she making that kind of thing? Well, there was no proof of that.

			“I don’t know anything about these eggs lying around” (Firo)

			“Firo, do you even lay eggs?” (Naofumi)

			“Ahh... could they be Motoyasu’s?... No, they could be Melty’s eggs, I dunno.” (Firo)

			“Melty’s a human girl!” (Raftalia)

			Raftalia made a keen observation.

			In any case, what Raftalia didn’t know, she didn’t know. Firo and Melty were just that close.

	~~Children’s toys and bright things were scattered all over the place. It looked just like a little kid's room.~~		The root cause is probably my fault somehow.
	~~Don’t birds usually make nest with straw?~~
	~~Did she try making that kind of thing? Well, there weren't many traces of that~~.

	~~“There might be some eggs lying around.” (Naofumi)~~		In the end, it all goes over my head.
	~~“Does Firo even lay eggs?” (Raphtalia)~~
	~~“Ahh... maybe with Motoyasu... no~~, ~~there could be eggs made with Melty~~.~~” (Naofumi)~~
	~~“Melty’s a girl!” (Raftalia) [T/N: But birds lay unfertilized eggs anyway, right?]~~

	~~Raftalia made~~ a ~~sharp retort. [T/N: The others can't do the straight man act as well as Raphtalia does XD]~~		Though a different person might argue its my fault.
	~~Raftalia might not know, but Firo and Melty did have that kind of relationship.~~
	~~I was the cause of that though.~~
	~~There's no match for that whole incident.~~
	~~Though the~~ person ~~herself~~ might ~~claim differently~~.

	“I don’t know, some might even be Naofumi-sama’s” (Firo)		“I don’t know, some might even be Naofumi-sama’s” (Firo)

Kookiedreamer at 04:17, 19 February 2015

2015-02-19T04:17:00Z

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	{My stab at it, can’t let yoraikun and company have all the fun, and I’ve read over 200 chapters thanks to them, so I felt guilty and knocked one out. Note: This isn’t a machine translation, so if you find many grammatical mistakes...yeah, that’s just me...It's also 5:00 am}		{My stab at it, can’t let yoraikun and company have all the fun, and I’ve read over 200 chapters thanks to them, so I felt guilty and knocked one out. Note: This isn’t a machine translation, so if you find many grammatical mistakes...yeah, that’s just me...It's also 5:00 am}

	“Where to next?”		“Where to next?” (Raphtalia)
			“That’s right… let’s go to to Firo’s room.” (Naofumi)

	~~“That’s right… let’s go~~ to ~~to Firo’s room”~~		I’ve given a room to Firo for the time being.
			It's a room in my house.

	~~I’d once given a room to Firo.~~		I originally thought a Philorial barn was fine as well, but since it's what Firo had wanted, it couldn’t be helped.
	~~More specifically, my room.~~		Kids seem to want their own room. It's probably similar to that.
			She's never stayed in it though.
	~~I’d~~ originally thought a ~~PhiloRial~~ barn ~~would be better~~, but since it's what Firo had wanted, it couldn’t be helped.

	Kids seem to want ~~your~~ room. ~~That’s the same everywhere.~~

	~~That person hasn’t tried~~ to ~~get my room though~~.

	~~Where there was once just my key,~~ it ~~seems to have multiplied, now would probably be a good time to see what was going on~~.

			It's locked at the moment, but now would probably be a good time to check to see if anything happened.
	We went into our house, and I opened the door to Firo’s room.		We went into our house, and I opened the door to Firo’s room.

	“This ~~is….”~~		“This is…” (Naofumi)

	Childrens toy’s and bright things were scattered all over the place. It looked just like a little kid's room. Don’t birds usually make nest with straw? Was she making that kind of thing? Well, there was no proof of that.

	~~“I don’t know anything about these eggs lying around” (Firo)~~

	~~“Firo, do you even lay eggs?”~~ (Naofumi)

	~~“Ahh... could they be Motoyasu’s?... No, they could be Melty’s eggs, I dunno.” (Firo)~~

	~~“Melty’s a human girl!” (Raftalia)~~

	~~Raftalia made a keen observation.~~

	~~In any case, what Raftalia didn’t know, she didn’t know. Firo and Melty were just that close.~~

	~~The root cause is probably my fault somehow~~.		Children’s toys and bright things were scattered all over the place. It looked just like a little kid's room.
			Don’t birds usually make nest with straw?
			Did she try making that kind of thing? Well, there weren't many traces of that.

	~~In the end~~, ~~it all goes over my head~~.		“There might be some eggs lying around.” (Naofumi)
			“Does Firo even lay eggs?” (Raphtalia)
			“Ahh... maybe with Motoyasu... no, there could be eggs made with Melty.” (Naofumi)
			“Melty’s a girl!” (Raftalia) [T/N: But birds lay unfertilized eggs anyway, right?]

	Though ~~a different~~ person might ~~argue its my fault~~.		Raftalia made a sharp retort. [T/N: The others can't do the straight man act as well as Raphtalia does XD]
			Raftalia might not know, but Firo and Melty did have that kind of relationship.
			I was the cause of that though.
			There's no match for that whole incident.
			Though the person herself might claim differently.

	“I don’t know, some might even be Naofumi-sama’s” (Firo)		“I don’t know, some might even be Naofumi-sama’s” (Firo)

黒曜石ペガサス: Which character said what edit.

2015-02-18T06:51:04Z

Which character said what edit.

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	(TL: As in, why didn’t she just tell me?)		(TL: As in, why didn’t she just tell me?)

	“So, um, Those kids were passed to Husband from Fitoria…."		“So, um, Those kids were passed to Husband from Fitoria… They’re made of magic and always there to protect Husband”

	They’re made of magic and always there to protect Husband”

	“Ahh, so that’s why they suddenly appeared”		“Ahh, so that’s why they suddenly appeared”
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	“They’re not parasites inside me?”		“They’re not parasites inside me?”

	“Yeah, um ….huh? I can’t hear ~~the~~ voice anymore!?”		“Yeah, um ….huh? I can’t hear her voice anymore!?” (TL: Fitoria's voice)

	Firo’s ahoge stopped answering.		Firo’s ahoge stopped answering.
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	“Heh-” (Naofumi)		“Heh-” (Naofumi)

	“It seems this magic of Husband’s can be transferred and granted to Firo, so where are they?”		“It seems this magic of Husband’s can be transferred and granted to Firo, so where are they now?”

	“Ah, is that’s right”		“Ah, is that’s right” (Naofumi)

	“Before, they were in Firo’s room?”		“Before, they were in Firo’s room?”
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	“Wow-”		“Wow-”

	“Lately, haven’t Mel-chan and husband made this into a kind of baby raising/making house?"		“Lately, haven’t Mel-chan and husband made this into a kind of baby raising/making house?" (Firo)

	~~Melty, I don't know as to whether or not the things in here are parasitic.~~

	Melty, your ~~unremarkable~~ life’s struggle.		Melty, I don't know as to whether or not the things in here are parasitic but, ...Melty, your insignificant life’s struggle...

	Some people might say it’s my fault.		Some people might say it’s my fault.
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	For the time being, lets try power.		For the time being, lets try power.

	“Ah, I feel like some kind of power is surging out of me” (~~Naofumi~~)		“Ah, I feel like some kind of power is surging out of me” (Firo)

	“Hmmmm...”		“Hmmmm...”
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	“What are you talking about” (TL: Sorry Raphtalia, dense mofo)		“What are you talking about” (TL: Sorry Raphtalia, dense mofo)

	“Does Husband want to go inspect the other kids rooms?”		“Does Husband want to go inspect the other kids rooms?” (Firo)

	“Ah.”		“Ah.”

Seennotheard: Corrected names, grammar, etc.

2015-01-30T03:34:29Z

Corrected names, grammar, etc.

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Seennotheard: Changed Atlas to Atla

2015-01-30T03:19:49Z

Changed Atlas to Atla

Seennotheard: Grammar and formatting fixes

2015-01-27T18:59:33Z

Grammar and formatting fixes

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	These FiloRial chicks ARE parasites inside of me!		These FiloRial chicks ARE parasites inside of me!

	”Not if they're attatched to Firo"		”Not if they're attatched to Firo" (Firo)

	“Heh-”		“Heh-”
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	“In your nest we found a cherry pink stone.”		“In your nest we found a cherry pink stone.”

	“You found things like that???....Firo had no idea that was in there”		“You found things like that???....Firo had no idea that was in there” (Firo)

	“Didn’t know huh?”		“Didn’t know huh?”
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	“Ah, some kind of power feels like its surging out of me”		“Ah, some kind of power feels like its surging out of me”
	“Hmmmm..”
			“Hmmmm...”

	Ah, so I can tamper with FIro’s settings with this?		Ah, so I can tamper with FIro’s settings with this?
	Lets put it back to default. Setting off some ~~wierd~~ rampage would be a pain.
			Lets put it back to default. Setting off some weird rampage would be a pain.

	“Pii”		“Pii”
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	Oh bother, these extra FiloRial things that are stuck attatched on me.		Oh bother, these extra FiloRial things that are stuck attatched on me.

	Hey wait a sec, didn’t ~~FIro~~ get some weird power up when she classed up from that weird guy? (Fitoria)		Hey wait a sec, didn’t Firo get some weird power up when she classed up from that weird guy? (TL: Fitoria)

	What the hell?		What the hell?
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	I think I’ll give her multiple unreasonable instructions as spite!		I think I’ll give her multiple unreasonable instructions as spite!

	“Firo, your room is surprisingly dirty, I want it cleaned regularly!”		“Firo, your room is surprisingly dirty, I want it cleaned regularly!” (Naofumi)

	“YEAH!”		“YEAH!” (Firo)

	Somehow happy, Firo started cleaning her room as per my instructions.		Somehow happy, Firo started cleaning her room as per my instructions.
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	The high quality ores and the like we don’t need, so we’ll take to the warehouse; hearing her happily clean felt a little good.		The high quality ores and the like we don’t need, so we’ll take to the warehouse; hearing her happily clean felt a little good.

	“You know what? I think I’ve come to understand ~~husband~~ a little more!”		“You know what? I think I’ve come to understand Husband a little more!”

	“Is that so”		“Is that so”

	~~“ I~~ won’t lose to Onee-chan”		“I won’t lose to Onee-chan”

	“What are you talking about” (TL: Sorry Raftalia, dense mofo)		“What are you talking about” (TL: Sorry Raftalia, dense mofo)

	“Does ~~husband~~ want to go inspect the other kids rooms?”		“Does Husband want to go inspect the other kids rooms?”

	“Ah.”		“Ah.”
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	I had thought about looking through the village once.		I had thought about looking through the village once.

	As long as ~~its~~ not my stuff ~~were~~ all going to see, its all right.		As long as it's not my stuff we're all going to see, its all right.

	So after that, we took FIro around the the village to inspect things in everyone elses rooms.		So after that, we took FIro around the the village to inspect things in everyone elses rooms.
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	This Fundoshi loving dog… Is this some kind of Kennel in here?!		This Fundoshi loving dog… Is this some kind of Kennel in here?!

	Next was valley girl (Taniko).		Next was valley girl. (TL: Taniko)

	The demon tree hugger had a very organized room.		The demon tree hugger had a very organized room.
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	“Now that you mention it, that’s true. Her and Sadina sleep together”.		“Now that you mention it, that’s true. Her and Sadina sleep together”.

	~~“My~~ bed I sleep in is going to smell like Atlas and ~~Sanina~~-nee tonight…….?		“The bed I sleep in is going to smell like Atlas and Sadina-nee tonight……?"

	Raftalia’s ~~eybrows~~ rose a little frustratedly.		Raftalia’s eyebrows rose a little frustratedly.

	Come on now, don’t be like that.		Come on now, don’t be like that.

黒曜石ペガサス: which character said what fix

2015-01-26T06:24:40Z

which character said what fix

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	Childrens toy’s and bright things were scattered all over the place. It looked just like a little kid's room. Don’t birds usually make nest with straw? Was she making that kind of thing? Well, there was no proof of that.		Childrens toy’s and bright things were scattered all over the place. It looked just like a little kid's room. Don’t birds usually make nest with straw? Was she making that kind of thing? Well, there was no proof of that.

	“I don’t know anything about these eggs lying around”		“I don’t know anything about these eggs lying around” (Firo)

	“Firo, do you lay eggs?”		“Firo, do you even lay eggs?” (Naofumi)

	“Ahh... could it be Motoyasu’s?... No, it could be Melty’s ~~egg~~, I dunno.” (~~Naofumi~~)		“Ahh... could they be Motoyasu’s?... No, they could be Melty’s eggs, I dunno.” (Firo)

	“Melty’s a human girl!” (Raftalia)		“Melty’s a human girl!” (Raftalia)
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	Though a different person might argue its my fault.		Though a different person might argue its my fault.

	“I don’t know, some might even be Naofumi-sama’s”		“I don’t know, some might even be Naofumi-sama’s” (Firo)

	“You really think it might?!”.		“You really think it might?!”. (Raphtalia)

	God, Raftalia who would think that?		God, Raftalia who would think that?
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	What’s going on with this Filo-rial chick!		What’s going on with this Filo-rial chick!

	“Naofumi-sama, could it be... parasitic?”		“Naofumi-sama, could it be... parasitic?” (Raphtalia)

	“What did you say?”		“What did you say?” (Naofumi)

	Those two chicks, could they possibly be inside me?”		Those two chicks, could they possibly be inside me?”

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	“Firo, do you lay eggs?”		“Firo, do you lay eggs?”

	“Ahh... could it be Motoyasu’s?... No, it could be Melty’s egg, I dunno.”		“Ahh... could it be Motoyasu’s?... No, it could be Melty’s egg, I dunno.” (Naofumi)

	“Melty’s a human girl!”		“Melty’s a human girl!” (Raftalia)

	Raftalia made a keen observation.		Raftalia made a keen observation.

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2015-01-24T01:01:54Z

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	Next up is Atas and Fohl’s house.		Next up is Atas and Fohl’s house.

	Looking around the house ~~Atlas~~ had been sleeping in until recently... it looked really well taken care of.		Looking around the house Atla had been sleeping in until recently... it looked really well taken care of.

	~~Atlas~~ had been invading my place after all.		Atla had been invading my place after all.

	Fohl’d been pretty useless with that…		Fohl’d been pretty useless with that…
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	That’s probably because I didn’t tell anyone we were coming by today.		That’s probably because I didn’t tell anyone we were coming by today.
	Inside ~~Atlas~~ room it somehow imperceptibly became full of stuffed animals.		Inside Atla's room it somehow imperceptibly became full of stuffed animals.

	There doesn’t seem to be any one special animal that stands out either.		There doesn’t seem to be any one special animal that stands out either.
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	Really?		Really?

	Rather than ~~Atlas~~ room...now this is Fohl’s room?		Rather than Atla's room...now this is Fohl’s room?

	I’d seen it before and it gave off a fancy feeling. Pink wallpaper hung on the walls. There’s not much evidence you use the bed.		I’d seen it before and it gave off a fancy feeling. Pink wallpaper hung on the walls. There’s not much evidence you use the bed.
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	Like a girl vibe for instance…		Like a girl vibe for instance…

	“That’s a lovely room. Is this the room ~~Atlas~~-chan sleeps in?”		“That’s a lovely room. Is this the room Atla-chan sleeps in?”

	“No? It’s probably more likely the room won’t be used until Fohl gets back”. (TL: poor Fohl)		“No? It’s probably more likely the room won’t be used until Fohl gets back”. (TL: poor Fohl)

	“True, ~~Atlas~~ is usually always sleeping in the bed next to Husband”		“True, Atla is usually always sleeping in the bed next to Husband”

	“.....In my bed, you said?” (Naofumi)		“.....In my bed, you said?” (Naofumi)
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	“Now that you mention it, that’s true. Her and Sadina sleep together”.		“Now that you mention it, that’s true. Her and Sadina sleep together”.

	“The bed I sleep in is going to smell like ~~Atlas~~ and Sadina-nee tonight……?"		“The bed I sleep in is going to smell like Atla and Sadina-nee tonight……?"

	Raftalia’s eyebrows rose a little frustratedly.		Raftalia’s eyebrows rose a little frustratedly.
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	Come on now, don’t be like that.		Come on now, don’t be like that.

	What ~~Atlas~~ actually wanted was to sleep in my bed, but pointing that out didn’t seem necessary.		What Atla actually wanted was to sleep in my bed, but pointing that out didn’t seem necessary.

	Lets let things in Fohl’s dream room be.		Lets let things in Fohl’s dream room be.