Tenkyou no Alderamin:Volume 1 Chapter 2 - Revision history

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	==All Quiet on the Eastern Front==		==Chapter 2 - All Quiet on the Eastern Front==

	[[Image:Alderamin v01 071.png\|thumb\|Crackle, crackle--with the sound of sparks popping, the young girl opened her eyes.]] It felt like she was being swallowed by cold, black, bottomless darkness.		[[Image:Alderamin v01 071.png\|thumb\|Crackle, crackle--with the sound of sparks popping, the young girl opened her eyes.]] It felt like she was being swallowed by cold, black, bottomless darkness.

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	Likely, nowhere in the world did words exist that might have stopped him.		Likely, nowhere in the world did words exist that might have stopped him.

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	==Translator's Notes and References==		==Translator's Notes and References==
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	“...This is an uncomfortable conversation. When that happens, then I have to strangle you as well.”		“...This is an uncomfortable conversation. When that happens, then I have to strangle you as well.”

	While shielding the princess, who was in a state of shock, with her back, Yatori advised ~~her~~ in a low voice. Ikta, having calmed down, raised both hands and showed nonviolent intentions which contradicted his behavior.		While shielding the princess, who was in a state of shock, with her back, Yatori advised him in a low voice. Ikta, having calmed down, raised both hands and showed nonviolent intentions which contradicted his behavior.

	With that, their conversation was interrupted. When the princess's breathing, as she was being soothed by Yatori, all but returned to normal, the carriage, which had reached its destination, came to a stop. Ikta was the very first to open the door and come down from the guest cabin.		With that, their conversation was interrupted. When the princess's breathing, as she was being soothed by Yatori, all but returned to normal, the carriage, which had reached its destination, came to a stop. Ikta was the very first to open the door and come down from the guest cabin.

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	Ikta glared at the princess with a murderous expression he'd seldom ever shown. It didn't last long-- he released his scene partner when Yatori regained her stance. ...However, that was enough. The incident lasting barely a few seconds carved the fear of 'being hated by someone' into the immature, young girl.		Ikta glared at the princess with a murderous expression he'd seldom ever shown. It didn't last long-- he released his scene partner when Yatori regained her stance. ...However, that was enough. The incident lasting barely a few seconds carved the fear of 'being hated by someone' into the immature, young girl.

	“...~~Don't talk about~~ that~~. If you do~~, then ~~he'll really~~ have to strangle you.”		“...This is an uncomfortable conversation. When that happens, then I have to strangle you as well.”

	While shielding the princess, who was in a state of shock, with her back, Yatori advised her in a low voice. Ikta, having calmed down, raised both hands and showed nonviolent intentions which contradicted his behavior.		While shielding the princess, who was in a state of shock, with her back, Yatori advised her in a low voice. Ikta, having calmed down, raised both hands and showed nonviolent intentions which contradicted his behavior.

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	“But, you and Matthew both are people I look up to. Since, even when the ship we boarded sank, you carried those heavy things out with such great care.”		“But, you and Matthew both are people I look up to. Since, even when the ship we boarded sank, you carried those heavy things out with such great care.”

	What Ikta meant was the iron, gun-like thing inside Torway’s sack that conspicuously asserted its existence. The firing of leaden balls with the pressure from using a pump~~<ref>written as: 空気圧縮能力 (air compression ability); read as: ンプ (pump)</ref>~~ such as that installed onto the "wind tunnel" in abdomen of his partner, a wind spirit, was the main weapon of modern-day soldiers-- so to speak, it was an air shooter barrel~~<ref>written as:風銃の銃身 (wind gun’s gun barrel); read as: エアシューターのバレル (air shooter’s barrel)</ref>~~.		What Ikta meant was the iron, gun-like thing inside Torway’s sack that conspicuously asserted its existence. The firing of leaden balls with the pressure from using a pump such as that installed onto the "wind tunnel" in abdomen of his partner, a wind spirit, was the main weapon of modern-day soldiers-- so to speak, it was an air shooter barrel.

	“Haha. I considered it a little, but I thought that thinking about whether or not it’d be a burden and throwing it away could wait until after we boarded the lifeboat. Since, for me, an applicant to the Air Gunner Division, it’s the most important thing next to the lives and partners<ref>written as: 精霊 (spirit); read as: パートナー　(partner)</ref> of my allies.”		“Haha. I considered it a little, but I thought that thinking about whether or not it’d be a burden and throwing it away could wait until after we boarded the lifeboat. Since, for me, an applicant to the Air Gunner Division, it’s the most important thing next to the lives and partners<ref>written as: 精霊 (spirit); read as: パートナー　(partner)</ref> of my allies.”
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	“Right, that’s it. For someone like me, just saying that I had royalty for a scene partner is the best two-thirds of me. --Ah, by the way, if you have a knife, lend it to me?”		“Right, that’s it. For someone like me, just saying that I had royalty for a scene partner is the best two-thirds of me. --Ah, by the way, if you have a knife, lend it to me?”

	When Ikta skillfully turned around while crouching, Yatori, who was standing there, had unnoticedly armed herself with equipment without her clothing being disheveled in the slightest. She wore a saber on her right hip~~<ref>written as: 長刀 (long sword); read as: サーベル (saber)</ref>,~~ and on her left hip, a　[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Parrying_dagger#Main_gauche main gauche]~~<ref>written as: 短刀 (short sword); read as: マンゴーシュ (main gauche)</ref>~~.		When Ikta skillfully turned around while crouching, Yatori, who was standing there, had unnoticedly armed herself with equipment without her clothing being disheveled in the slightest. She wore a saber on her right hip and on her left hip, a　[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Parrying_dagger#Main_gauche main gauche].

	This was the two-handed swordsmanship stance that became the reason for the “Igsem of the Blade, Remeon of the Bullet” fame rivalry. As the air shooter was to Torway, this to her was the next precious thing to her life- the object of her pride.		This was the two-handed swordsmanship stance that became the reason for the “Igsem of the Blade, Remeon of the Bullet” fame rivalry. As the air shooter was to Torway, this to her was the next precious thing to her life- the object of her pride.
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	“...Whaa!?”		“...Whaa!?”

	Yatori’s voice, perfectly suppressed as to not echo outside, along with rousing Matthew, stirred vigilance in the already awoken actors. A moment later, a lamp that dimly radiated light burned inside the cave. A white light different from a flame-- It was a lantern~~<ref>written as:周照灯 (ambient illumination light)</ref>~~ from the light spirit Kusu, whom Ikta had been hugging as he slept.		Yatori’s voice, perfectly suppressed as to not echo outside, along with rousing Matthew, stirred vigilance in the already awoken actors. A moment later, a lamp that dimly radiated light burned inside the cave. A white light different from a flame-- It was a lantern from the light spirit Kusu, whom Ikta had been hugging as he slept.

	“...Wh-what? The Princess…?”		“...Wh-what? The Princess…?”
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	While kicking at Ikta, who seized the guns, as if tearing him off, the middle aged soldier who appeared to be the leader yelled in a loud voice. It was the correct judgment given the situation, but that was why it was possible for Ikta to predict it.		While kicking at Ikta, who seized the guns, as if tearing him off, the middle aged soldier who appeared to be the leader yelled in a loud voice. It was the correct judgment given the situation, but that was why it was possible for Ikta to predict it.

	“...Kusu, searchlight~~<ref>written as: 追跡光 (tracking light); read as: サーチライト (search light)</ref>~~...!”		“...Kusu, searchlight...!”

	Withstanding the pain of being kicked, despite stubbornly clinging to the barrels, Ikta also sent out instructions. Kusu, previously on standby in a tree with good perspective, received them and emitted a high beam from his torso. The wounded soldier who tried to extinguish the light and slip into the darkness was illuminated a second time in the middle of the darkness.		Withstanding the pain of being kicked, despite stubbornly clinging to the barrels, Ikta also sent out instructions. Kusu, previously on standby in a tree with good perspective, received them and emitted a high beam from his torso. The wounded soldier who tried to extinguish the light and slip into the darkness was illuminated a second time in the middle of the darkness.
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	Yatori's pupils dilated. --For when His Highness, the Emperor, greeted people, there were three buildings in the palace at Banhataal. They were the Yellow Sand Temple meant for meeting with guests from outside the country, the Deep Green Temple meant for hearing the reports of his retainers, and the Holy White Temple meant for praising those who rendered great service to the Imperial Household.		Yatori's pupils dilated. --For when His Highness, the Emperor, greeted people, there were three buildings in the palace at Banhataal. They were the Yellow Sand Temple meant for meeting with guests from outside the country, the Deep Green Temple meant for hearing the reports of his retainers, and the Holy White Temple meant for praising those who rendered great service to the Imperial Household.

	T he one situated closest to the Imperial Palace, in other words the mansion where the Imperial Family carried out their lives, was the Holy White Temple which Yatori and the others currently had before them. The only ones allowed to have an audience with His Highness, the Emperor, in this building were chief vassals who had done a truly great service to the Empire. The highest stair for soldiers, the promotion to ~~general of the army~~, was conducted here.		T he one situated closest to the Imperial Palace, in other words the mansion where the Imperial Family carried out their lives, was the Holy White Temple which Yatori and the others currently had before them. The only ones allowed to have an audience with His Highness, the Emperor, in this building were chief vassals who had done a truly great service to the Empire. The highest stair for soldiers, the promotion to field marshal, was conducted here.

	“Please follow.”		“Please follow.”

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	Light returned to Yatori's eyes. Now, a new wind was beginning to blow, whisking away the blimp that was staggering with no place to go.		Light returned to Yatori's eyes. Now, a new wind was beginning to blow, whisking away the blimp that was staggering with no place to go.

	“Subjects, please shed thy tears at the privilege of an audience. --His Highness, the Emperor, Arshankrut ~~Kitora~~ Katjvanmaninik awaits you at the palace.”		“Subjects, please shed thy tears at the privilege of an audience. --His Highness, the Emperor, Arshankrut Kitra Katjvanmaninik awaits you at the palace.”

	Inside a horse-drawn carriage advancing toward the garden of the magnificent evergreen, each of the five's musings were their own.		Inside a horse-drawn carriage advancing toward the garden of the magnificent evergreen, each of the five's musings were their own.

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	[[Image:Alderamin ~~v1 pg71~~.~~jpg~~\|thumb\|Crackle, crackle--with the sound of sparks popping, the young girl opened her eyes.]] It felt like she was being swallowed by cold, black, bottomless darkness.		[[Image:Alderamin v01 071.png\|thumb\|Crackle, crackle--with the sound of sparks popping, the young girl opened her eyes.]] It felt like she was being swallowed by cold, black, bottomless darkness.

	There was no way to resist it. Being tossed about by the raging current with no sense of up or down, her eardrums screeching and shrieking with the pressure of the water- but more than that, the pressure of despair crushed her heart. Staring down the terror of death before your eyes for the first time since birth is not something you could possibly face with the power of reason.		There was no way to resist it. Being tossed about by the raging current with no sense of up or down, her eardrums screeching and shrieking with the pressure of the water- but more than that, the pressure of despair crushed her heart. Staring down the terror of death before your eyes for the first time since birth is not something you could possibly face with the power of reason.
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	"It's something called a navy purveyor, that is to say, a hammock<ref>written as: 吊るし式寝具 (hanging-style bedding); read as: ハンモック (hammock)</ref>. When you get used to it, it's quite comfortable."		"It's something called a navy purveyor, that is to say, a hammock<ref>written as: 吊るし式寝具 (hanging-style bedding); read as: ハンモック (hammock)</ref>. When you get used to it, it's quite comfortable."

	[[Image:Alderamin ~~v1 pg101~~.~~jpg~~\|thumb\|Ikta clapped his hands for the princess who somehow succeeded in lying down.]] He spoke while skillfully climbing off using movements reversed from when he got on. Ikta recommended the,-as he put it- "essential item necessary to a human lifestyle" to Her Highness, the Princess, a second time. The princess was a princess, and- drifting toward the idea that she wanted to take back at least the cost of her help- timidly placed her hips on the hammock.		[[Image:Alderamin v01 101.png\|thumb\|Ikta clapped his hands for the princess who somehow succeeded in lying down.]] He spoke while skillfully climbing off using movements reversed from when he got on. Ikta recommended the,-as he put it- "essential item necessary to a human lifestyle" to Her Highness, the Princess, a second time. The princess was a princess, and- drifting toward the idea that she wanted to take back at least the cost of her help- timidly placed her hips on the hammock.

	"Right, right, now as if straightening your body with your hips as an axis-- Oh, wow, you were able to get on without a problem, weren't you?"		"Right, right, now as if straightening your body with your hips as an axis-- Oh, wow, you were able to get on without a problem, weren't you?"
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	[[Image:Alderamin ~~v1 pg149~~.~~jpg~~\|thumb\|When Yatori, making a sarcastic remark, finally reached the bedroom and drew the curtains, Ikta was lying half naked on the bed with freshly wrinkled sheets.]] For the Katjvanmaninik Dynasty, ever since the administration attained unity, the sunlight beating down on the country did not face a decline. Its inhabitants with light clothing and travelers with turbans wrapped around their faces, each resisting the fury of the sun.		[[Image:Alderamin v01 149.png\|thumb\|When Yatori, making a sarcastic remark, finally reached the bedroom and drew the curtains, Ikta was lying half naked on the bed with freshly wrinkled sheets.]] For the Katjvanmaninik Dynasty, ever since the administration attained unity, the sunlight beating down on the country did not face a decline. Its inhabitants with light clothing and travelers with turbans wrapped around their faces, each resisting the fury of the sun.

	However, people weren't constantly being overwhelmed by heatstroke. The marketplace was lively under the lord of fire, and food and clothing, ornaments with precious stones and metals, and furthermore foreign goods which no one had seen before had the store fronts on the street overflowing with activity.		However, people weren't constantly being overwhelmed by heatstroke. The marketplace was lively under the lord of fire, and food and clothing, ornaments with precious stones and metals, and furthermore foreign goods which no one had seen before had the store fronts on the street overflowing with activity.

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