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	==Ikta Solork's Science of Laziness==		==Chapter 4 - Ikta Solork's Science of Laziness==

	The first day of the practice, in which the seven platoons consisting of over 270 soldiers would participate, began amidst gales of wind and torrential rain.		The first day of the practice, in which the seven platoons consisting of over 270 soldiers would participate, began amidst gales of wind and torrential rain.

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	She couldn’t possibly- this epiphany came down onto Ikta. The princess affirmed it with an immediate reply.		She couldn’t possibly- this epiphany came down onto Ikta. The princess affirmed it with an immediate reply.
	~~Yes~~. It’s something that’s hidden from the citizens, but I’ve lived on Kioka soil for the months and years from when I was three to when I was 11 years old. To guarantee the cease-fire conditions between both countries, I was given to them as a political hostage.”		“Yes. It’s something that’s hidden from the citizens, but I’ve lived on Kioka soil for the months and years from when I was three to when I was 11 years old. To guarantee the cease-fire conditions between both countries, I was given to them as a political hostage.”

	“…! …That motif, it’s an amalgamation of Imperial and Kiokan styles?!”		“…! …That motif, it’s an amalgamation of Imperial and Kiokan styles?!”

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	“Mmm- aww, they didn’t let us destroy them…”		“Mmm- aww, they didn’t let us destroy them…”

	Watching the ~~enemy’s backs~~ disappear into the trees, Ikta lightly scratched the back of his head.		Watching the enemy disappear into the trees, Ikta lightly scratched the back of his head.

	“Knowing Yatori, I did think that she might break through, you see. First Lieutenant Sushuraf’s shot which created the opening- now that was a bit unfair, no? Well, we have Torway on our side, so let’s call it even, shall we?”		“Knowing Yatori, I did think that she might break through, you see. First Lieutenant Sushuraf’s shot which created the opening- now that was a bit unfair, no? Well, we have Torway on our side, so let’s call it even, shall we?”
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	What am I going to do if this fails?- entirely not worrying about that before he spoke was one of Ikta’s amazing points. And strangely, the jokes he told in extreme situations were able to calm people’s hearts.		What am I going to do if this fails?- entirely not worrying about that before he spoke was one of Ikta’s amazing points. And strangely, the jokes he told in extreme situations were able to calm people’s hearts.

	~~“…Haha…Th~~-the red, is fine, but… I can’t stand, reeking of metal from head to toe…”		“…Haha… Th-the red, is fine, but… I can’t stand, reeking of metal from head to toe…”

	“Reek of metal? No~, that has nothing to do with being red. That’s because you’re holding those hunks of metal in both your hands.”		“Reek of metal? No~, that has nothing to do with being red. That’s because you’re holding those hunks of metal in both your hands.”
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	Not caring that she was covered in blood as he held and supported her, the youth murmured as if he were disgusted.		Not caring that she was covered in blood as he held and supported her, the youth murmured as if he were disgusted.

	“You always work too hard, you know. I tell you to be more relaxed about things, but you really don’t listen, do you?”		“You always work too hard, you know. I tell you to be more relaxed about things, but you really don’t listen, do you?”

	Entrusting her to the soldiers, Ikta turned a second time to the center of sea of blood. The princess, hugging her knees, hoped he would talk to her, but his goal was elsewhere.		Entrusting her to the soldiers, Ikta turned a second time to the center of sea of blood. The princess, hugging her knees, hoped he would talk to her, but his goal was elsewhere.
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	“Keh…! Why you, Yatorishino…!”		“Keh…! Why you, Yatorishino…!”

	Sariha couldn’t retort with anything. Whether he had thought about losing before the fighting, or whether he couldn’t think that he was sure to win- whichever was true, this matter was already nothing more than an embarrassment for him.		Sariha couldn’t retort with anything. Whether he had thought about losing before the fighting, or whether he couldn’t think that he was sure to win- whichever was true, this matter was already nothing more than an embarrassment for him.

	“I-I’m not the only one at fault here! If you had come to support me earlier…!”		“I-I’m not the only one at fault here! If you had come to support me earlier…!”

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	Not allowing the princess to talk her way out, Ikta questioned her clearly.		Not allowing the princess to talk her way out, Ikta questioned her clearly.

	[[Image:Alderamin v01 ~~pg323~~.png\|thumb\| Ikta’s black eyes glared at his companion as if gauging her. The princess gulped loudly, and opened her heavy mouth.]] “Hey, Your Highness, why didn’t you invite Yatori here, too? If you’re saying that you have no reason to hide anything anymore because your life was saved, then no matter how I think about it, she should have been invited too. In other words, the one among us who most demonstrated her loyalty to you, is beyond doubt Yatori. Don’t tell me that you’ve forgotten that image.”		[[Image:Alderamin v01 323.png\|thumb\| Ikta’s black eyes glared at his companion as if gauging her. The princess gulped loudly, and opened her heavy mouth.]] “Hey, Your Highness, why didn’t you invite Yatori here, too? If you’re saying that you have no reason to hide anything anymore because your life was saved, then no matter how I think about it, she should have been invited too. In other words, the one among us who most demonstrated her loyalty to you, is beyond doubt Yatori. Don’t tell me that you’ve forgotten that image.”

	Remembering the image of Yatori as she stood motionless in a sea of blood with two blades in hand, Her Highness the Princess bit her lip looking ashamed.		Remembering the image of Yatori as she stood motionless in a sea of blood with two blades in hand, Her Highness the Princess bit her lip looking ashamed.

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	“Alright—are you listening? ‘’We’re coordinating with Platoon Ikta when we launch the attack.’’”		“Alright—are you listening? ‘’We’re coordinating with Platoon Ikta when we launch the attack.’’”

	[[Image:Alderamin ~~v1 pg255~~.~~jpg~~\|thumb\| Among them was Ikta Solork himself.]] Matthew’s mouth named a platoon that shouldn’t have been in the area. Seeming to have been transmitted to the opposite shore as well, the deployed soldiers sharpened their vigilance. –And the next moment, that incident came crashing down on them like a surging wave.		[[Image:Alderamin v01 255.png\|thumb\| Among them was Ikta Solork himself.]] Matthew’s mouth named a platoon that shouldn’t have been in the area. Seeming to have been transmitted to the opposite shore as well, the deployed soldiers sharpened their vigilance. –And the next moment, that incident came crashing down on them like a surging wave.

	First, having earlier pretended to head upstream but turning back midway, then concealing in the forest by the riverside until now, Platoon Ikta came running out with weapons in hand. Among them was Ikta Solork himself.		First, having earlier pretended to head upstream but turning back midway, then concealing in the forest by the riverside until now, Platoon Ikta came running out with weapons in hand. Among them was Ikta Solork himself.
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	Not allowing the princess to talk her way out, Ikta questioned her clearly.		Not allowing the princess to talk her way out, Ikta questioned her clearly.

	[[Image:Alderamin v1 pg323.~~jpg~~\|thumb\| Ikta’s black eyes glared at his companion as if gauging her. The princess gulped loudly, and opened her heavy mouth.]] “Hey, Your Highness, why didn’t you invite Yatori here, too? If you’re saying that you have no reason to hide anything anymore because your life was saved, then no matter how I think about it, she should have been invited too. In other words, the one among us who most demonstrated her loyalty to you, is beyond doubt Yatori. Don’t tell me that you’ve forgotten that image.”		[[Image:Alderamin v01 pg323.png\|thumb\| Ikta’s black eyes glared at his companion as if gauging her. The princess gulped loudly, and opened her heavy mouth.]] “Hey, Your Highness, why didn’t you invite Yatori here, too? If you’re saying that you have no reason to hide anything anymore because your life was saved, then no matter how I think about it, she should have been invited too. In other words, the one among us who most demonstrated her loyalty to you, is beyond doubt Yatori. Don’t tell me that you’ve forgotten that image.”

	Remembering the image of Yatori as she stood motionless in a sea of blood with two blades in hand, Her Highness the Princess bit her lip looking ashamed.		Remembering the image of Yatori as she stood motionless in a sea of blood with two blades in hand, Her Highness the Princess bit her lip looking ashamed.

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	Thus, the story began in the true sense of the word. “The skilled manager of the invincible status quo” Ikta Solork, and “the last princess of the Katjvarna Empire” Chamille Kitra Katjvanmaninik. These two lined up together and ran at full speed toward the next battle of their promised defeat.		Thus, the story began in the true sense of the word. “The skilled manager of the invincible status quo” Ikta Solork, and “the last princess of the Katjvarna Empire” Chamille Kitra Katjvanmaninik. These two lined up together and ran at full speed toward the next battle of their promised defeat.

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