The New Gate:Volume 1 Chapter 3 - Revision history

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	Shin was surprised and had an indescribable feeling that no one knew.		Shin was surprised and had an indescribable feeling that no one knew.

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	After checking the room, Shin locked it with the key and proceeded to go downstairs for the purpose of eating and gathering information. He had not eaten since he had at the guild. Also, it would be a waste if he didn’t go eat the meal, as dinner was included in the room charge.		<br />After checking the room, Shin locked it with the key and proceeded to go downstairs for the purpose of eating and gathering information. He had not eaten since he had at the guild. Also, it would be a waste if he didn’t go eat the meal, as dinner was included in the room charge.

	On the first floor, the adventurers were still making noises. From 【Analyze • Ⅹ】, the average adventurer level was 120.		On the first floor, the adventurers were still making noises. From 【Analyze • Ⅹ】, the average adventurer level was 120.
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	Afterwards, 30 minutes already passed after killing some time and gathering information, Shin left the Bear Point Pavillion.		Afterwards, 30 minutes already passed after killing some time and gathering information, Shin left the Bear Point Pavillion.

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	While walking on the road to the guild, he observed the town’s appearance. There was not much pedestrian traffic compared to yesterday.		<br />While walking on the road to the guild, he observed the town’s appearance. There was not much pedestrian traffic compared to yesterday.

	Various stalls started to open at the edge of the road, crowding with people having breakfast and buying lunch. Also, there were a lot of stalls that seemed useful to adventurers – selling armor, magic items, and various tools.		Various stalls started to open at the edge of the road, crowding with people having breakfast and buying lunch. Also, there were a lot of stalls that seemed useful to adventurers – selling armor, magic items, and various tools.
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	Shin walked toward the east gate, while wondering whether or not he should buy a map .		Shin walked toward the east gate, while wondering whether or not he should buy a map .

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	――In the guild’s lounge room.		<br />――In the guild’s lounge room.

	Els and Celica had just finished tidying up some documents and were talking about Shin while drinking tea.		Els and Celica had just finished tidying up some documents and were talking about Shin while drinking tea.
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	Since he heard that the Hillock Herb could be harvested easily, he thought that he could finish quickly.		Since he heard that the Hillock Herb could be harvested easily, he thought that he could finish quickly.

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	“…This isn’t it.”		<br />“…This isn’t it.”

	He had entered the forest 3 hours ago.		He had entered the forest 3 hours ago.
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	He understood Beid’s worry, too. And there was no need to hurry as there was no time limit. Yet, there was this psychology of person who wanted to find something when it was not found before. When it came to this, Shin had begun to make a plan regarding his trip to the northern forest tomorrow.		He understood Beid’s worry, too. And there was no need to hurry as there was no time limit. Yet, there was this psychology of person who wanted to find something when it was not found before. When it came to this, Shin had begun to make a plan regarding his trip to the northern forest tomorrow.

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	The next day.		<br />The next day.

	Shin awoke at dawn and immediately started to mobilize.		Shin awoke at dawn and immediately started to mobilize.
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	It wouldn’t always go the way he wanted in life.		It wouldn’t always go the way he wanted in life.

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	Shin set aside his worry and headed toward the guild. Though the rumor about the Skull Face was true, they hadn’t heard about it. In addition, the Jack • Skull Face basically has several Pawn class subordinates, so he couldn’t assert that it became safe just because the Jack class was subjugated.		<br />Shin set aside his worry and headed toward the guild. Though the rumor about the Skull Face was true, they hadn’t heard about it. In addition, the Jack • Skull Face basically has several Pawn class subordinates, so he couldn’t assert that it became safe just because the Jack class was subjugated.

	Shin had been searching for enemies in the surrounding area when he left the battle location, but there were no signs of other monsters in the surroundings. Did it act alone? Or were its subordinates swallowed up by the dance and sliced into pieces? It was very likely the latter if one looked at the Skull Face’s actions. It was not a movement that could distinguish between friend or foe.		Shin had been searching for enemies in the surrounding area when he left the battle location, but there were no signs of other monsters in the surroundings. Did it act alone? Or were its subordinates swallowed up by the dance and sliced into pieces? It was very likely the latter if one looked at the Skull Face’s actions. It was not a movement that could distinguish between friend or foe.
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	The problem wasn’t solved from worrying meaninglessly. He decided to have lunch as a change of mood. Inside the guild was so crowded that hardly any seats left, so he decided to go outside the guild, to eat lunch.		The problem wasn’t solved from worrying meaninglessly. He decided to have lunch as a change of mood. Inside the guild was so crowded that hardly any seats left, so he decided to go outside the guild, to eat lunch.

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	Since Els stayed in the guild, Shin walked on the main street alone. He headed for the restaurant which Els and Celica, who returned from the interior of the reception desk, recommended together.		<br />Since Els stayed in the guild, Shin walked on the main street alone. He headed for the restaurant which Els and Celica, who returned from the interior of the reception desk, recommended together.

	After walking for a little while, the restaurant that hung out the signboard where a sword and fork were drawn, came into view. It was said that every chef were a former adventurer, and seemed to be offering exotic dishes such as dishes with rare ingredients and so on.		After walking for a little while, the restaurant that hung out the signboard where a sword and fork were drawn, came into view. It was said that every chef were a former adventurer, and seemed to be offering exotic dishes such as dishes with rare ingredients and so on.

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	Shin walked for 25 minutes after leaving the guild.		Shin walked for 25 minutes after leaving the guild.

	~~Before his eyes, there~~ was a signboard with a bear’s paw painted on it. According to Celica, this should be Bear Point Pavilion.		In front of him was a signboard with a bear’s paw painted on it. According to Celica, this should be the Bear Point Pavilion.

	“There’s no doubt about it, it’s here.”		“There’s no doubt about it, it’s here.”

	He confirmed it again and placed his hand on the door. ~~Laughter could be heard which became~~ louder as he slowly opened the door.		He confirmed it again and placed his hand on the door. The laughter from inside grew louder as he slowly opened the door.

	Inside the Bear Point Pavilion~~, there~~ was ~~a counter with seats and a~~ large number of people ~~sitting at~~ seven tables. Five of the tables were filled with adventurers making loud noises while drinking beer.		Inside the Bear Point Pavilion was large number of people seated around a counter, and seven tables. Five of the tables were filled with adventurers making loud noises while drinking beer.

	As Shin surveyed the scene, a shadow appeared in front of him. Something ~~seemed to block~~ the light, and he felt a presence behind his back, so he turned around.		As Shin surveyed the scene, a shadow appeared in front of him. Something was blocking the light, and he felt a presence behind his back, so he turned around.

	“Hmm?”		“Hmm?”

	An arm ~~which~~ took pride in its thickness, around thrice that of Shin’s, and an apron with embroidered flowers ~~came into sight~~.		He saw an arm that took pride in its thickness, around thrice that of Shin’s, and an apron with embroidered flowers.

	“Welcome, please come in! Is it just one person?”		“Welcome, please come in! Is it just one person?”

	Hearing the voice from above, Shin lifted his head and saw a person with a rock-like~~, stern,~~ face smiling viciously.		Hearing the voice from above, Shin lifted his head and saw a person with a stern, rock-like face smiling viciously.

	“Deke…”		“Deke…”

	He burst ~~out a strange word in reply~~. ~~Although Shin’s height~~ was 180 cemels, the ~~person~~ in front of him was probably 230 cemels or more. It was a giant.		The sound just burst from Shin's lips. Shin was 180 cemels tall, but the man in front of him was probably 230 cemels or more. He was a giant.

	“What’s wrong, sonny? Are you feeling sick?”		“What’s wrong, sonny? Are you feeling sick?”

	“I’m feeling ~~well~~! Um, you are?”		“I’m feeling fine! Um, you are?”

	The words ~~of the man made him return~~ to his senses. Although the man didn’t answer ~~the way~~ he expected.		The man's words brought Shin back to his senses. Although the man didn’t give Shin the answer he'd expected.

	“Me? I am the popular boss and shopkeeper of Bear Point Pavilion. I’m Douma Bear.”		“Me? I am the popular boss and shopkeeper of Bear Point Pavilion. I’m Douma Bear.”