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Ninetailz: pain in arsh when things doesn't comply -_-

2016-02-07T17:35:30Z

pain in arsh when things doesn't comply -_-

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	\| Forward to [[The New Gate:Volume 2 ~~Chapter 1~~\|Volume 2 ~~Chapter 1~~]]		\| Forward to [[The New Gate:Volume 2 Illustrations\|Volume 2 Illustrations]]
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Ninetailz at 17:33, 7 February 2016

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	\| Forward to [[The New Gate:Volume 2 ~~Illustrations~~\|Volume 2 ~~Illustrations~~]]		\| Forward to [[The New Gate:Volume 2 Chapter 1\|Volume 2 Chapter 1]]
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Ninetailz at 17:31, 7 February 2016

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	\| Forward to [[The New Gate:Volume 2 ~~Chapter 1~~\|Volume 2 ~~Chapter 1~~]]		\| Forward to [[The New Gate:Volume 2 Illustrations\|Volume 2 Illustrations]]
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Ninetailz at 02:25, 21 January 2016

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Ninetailz: Spacing Problem Fixed

2015-11-28T22:39:19Z

Spacing Problem Fixed

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	He decided to investigate as long as the time permitted, and opened the next book.		He decided to investigate as long as the time permitted, and opened the next book.

	~~<br />◆◆◆◆~~
	<br />		<br />
			◆◆◆◆◆◆

	While Shin was doing the investigation in the library, executives, such as Barlux and Els, were preparing for a meeting in a room of the adventurers’ guild.		<br />While Shin was doing the investigation in the library, executives, such as Barlux and Els, were preparing for a meeting in a room of the adventurers’ guild.

	Of course, the agenda was the Skull Face. Even though the situation called for waiting for the appraisal of the jewel, the members that had some free time were gathered for the time being. There was a possibility that the information was accurate, because the one who reported was said to hold a letter of introduction. Since the Skull Face had already been defeated, the sense of urgency was not high, but the Shin’s personality in the report of Barlux and Els was raised to some extent.		Of course, the agenda was the Skull Face. Even though the situation called for waiting for the appraisal of the jewel, the members that had some free time were gathered for the time being. There was a possibility that the information was accurate, because the one who reported was said to hold a letter of introduction. Since the Skull Face had already been defeated, the sense of urgency was not high, but the Shin’s personality in the report of Barlux and Els was raised to some extent.
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	Afterwards, everyone who was present was perplexed about the content that leaked out of Ardi’s mouth.		Afterwards, everyone who was present was perplexed about the content that leaked out of Ardi’s mouth.

	~~<br />◆◆◆◆~~
	<br />		<br />
			◆◆◆◆◆◆

	For several hours, he had been investigating things in the library. Somehow the library was closed when the sun was a little high in the evening. When Shin confirmed it with the menu screen, the time showed 4:50. Even though he didn’t know whether the time was accurate, Shin thought that every city hall and post office had their own way to keep track of the time. Rather, he was amazed to learn that they had about the same closing time.		<br />For several hours, he had been investigating things in the library. Somehow the library was closed when the sun was a little high in the evening. When Shin confirmed it with the menu screen, the time showed 4:50. Even though he didn’t know whether the time was accurate, Shin thought that every city hall and post office had their own way to keep track of the time. Rather, he was amazed to learn that they had about the same closing time.

	He thought about returning to the south district for the time being, but his stomach was grumbling while looking around the stalls. It was early, but he bought yakitori<ref>T/N: a bite-size marinated pieces of beef, seafood, or chicken on skewer</ref> for dinner which he saw was barbecued nicely in a stall he found by chance. It could be said that a similar yakitori wasn’t sold in Japan, as they were 30 cemels long skewers stuck into hearty chicken meat.		He thought about returning to the south district for the time being, but his stomach was grumbling while looking around the stalls. It was early, but he bought yakitori<ref>T/N: a bite-size marinated pieces of beef, seafood, or chicken on skewer</ref> for dinner which he saw was barbecued nicely in a stall he found by chance. It could be said that a similar yakitori wasn’t sold in Japan, as they were 30 cemels long skewers stuck into hearty chicken meat.
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	The yakitori had already been digested. Shin went downstairs to eat dinner.		The yakitori had already been digested. Shin went downstairs to eat dinner.

	~~<br />◆◆◆◆~~
	<br />		<br />
			◆◆◆◆◆◆

	Dawn of the next day.		<br />Dawn of the next day.

	Shin departed from Bear Point Pavilion and passed through the main street where there were crowded stalls towards the south gate. When he exited from the gate, there were people lining up to enter the country, in contrast to Shin who was leaving.		Shin departed from Bear Point Pavilion and passed through the main street where there were crowded stalls towards the south gate. When he exited from the gate, there were people lining up to enter the country, in contrast to Shin who was leaving.
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	I could use the message card to send it right away! Tiera realized, shortly after Shin left.		I could use the message card to send it right away! Tiera realized, shortly after Shin left.

	~~<br />◆◆◆◆~~
	<br />		<br />
			◆◆◆◆◆◆

	After leaving Tsuki no Hokora, Shin went straight to the northern forest. Since encountering the guild’s staff that came to investigate the Skull Face would be troublesome, he advanced while confirming that there was no one in the surrounding area.		<br />After leaving Tsuki no Hokora, Shin went straight to the northern forest. Since encountering the guild’s staff that came to investigate the Skull Face would be troublesome, he advanced while confirming that there was no one in the surrounding area.

	He didn’t have the direction, so he depended mostly on his instinct. But he aimed at the depths of the forest first, because the depths of the forest felt somehow suspicious. Still, because he thought that the encounter with the investigators could not be avoided when he went to the place where the Skull Face appeared, he advanced toward the opposite direction of where the Skull Face was. It was the direction he did not walk when he came here before.		He didn’t have the direction, so he depended mostly on his instinct. But he aimed at the depths of the forest first, because the depths of the forest felt somehow suspicious. Still, because he thought that the encounter with the investigators could not be avoided when he went to the place where the Skull Face appeared, he advanced toward the opposite direction of where the Skull Face was. It was the direction he did not walk when he came here before.
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	The place was so completely monopolized by Shin, that not even a single Skull Face could survive.		The place was so completely monopolized by Shin, that not even a single Skull Face could survive.

	~~<br />◆◆◆◆~~
	<br />		<br />
			◆◆◆◆◆◆

	Since Shin started the battle, the group of Skull Faces was completely wiped out in less than ten minutes. The remains of the Skull Faces were scattered in the area around the barrier and the ground couldn’t be seen. Because he didn’t have any intentions to clean up the remains, he ignored them and pretended he did not see them as he returned to the main shrine.		<br />Since Shin started the battle, the group of Skull Faces was completely wiped out in less than ten minutes. The remains of the Skull Faces were scattered in the area around the barrier and the ground couldn’t be seen. Because he didn’t have any intentions to clean up the remains, he ignored them and pretended he did not see them as he returned to the main shrine.

	When he opened the main shrine door and entered inside, a young fox jumped at him as it was waiting for Shin.		When he opened the main shrine door and entered inside, a young fox jumped at him as it was waiting for Shin.

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2015-11-28T19:25:02Z

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	\| Return to [[The New Gate\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[The New Gate\|Main Page]]
	\| Volume 1 END		\| Volume 1 END - Forward to [[The New Gate:Volume 2 Chapter 1\|Volume 2 Chapter 1]]
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Ninetailz at 19:20, 28 November 2015

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	He decided to investigate as long as the time permitted, and opened the next book.		He decided to investigate as long as the time permitted, and opened the next book.

			<br />◆◆◆◆
	<br />		<br />
	~~◆◆◆◆◆◆~~

	~~<br />~~While Shin was doing the investigation in the library, executives, such as Barlux and Els, were preparing for a meeting in a room of the adventurers’ guild.		While Shin was doing the investigation in the library, executives, such as Barlux and Els, were preparing for a meeting in a room of the adventurers’ guild.

	Of course, the agenda was the Skull Face. Even though the situation called for waiting for the appraisal of the jewel, the members that had some free time were gathered for the time being. There was a possibility that the information was accurate, because the one who reported was said to hold a letter of introduction. Since the Skull Face had already been defeated, the sense of urgency was not high, but the Shin’s personality in the report of Barlux and Els was raised to some extent.		Of course, the agenda was the Skull Face. Even though the situation called for waiting for the appraisal of the jewel, the members that had some free time were gathered for the time being. There was a possibility that the information was accurate, because the one who reported was said to hold a letter of introduction. Since the Skull Face had already been defeated, the sense of urgency was not high, but the Shin’s personality in the report of Barlux and Els was raised to some extent.
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	Afterwards, everyone who was present was perplexed about the content that leaked out of Ardi’s mouth.		Afterwards, everyone who was present was perplexed about the content that leaked out of Ardi’s mouth.

			<br />◆◆◆◆
	<br />		<br />
	~~◆◆◆◆◆◆~~

	~~<br />~~For several hours, he had been investigating things in the library. Somehow the library was closed when the sun was a little high in the evening. When Shin confirmed it with the menu screen, the time showed 4:50. Even though he didn’t know whether the time was accurate, Shin thought that every city hall and post office had their own way to keep track of the time. Rather, he was amazed to learn that they had about the same closing time.		For several hours, he had been investigating things in the library. Somehow the library was closed when the sun was a little high in the evening. When Shin confirmed it with the menu screen, the time showed 4:50. Even though he didn’t know whether the time was accurate, Shin thought that every city hall and post office had their own way to keep track of the time. Rather, he was amazed to learn that they had about the same closing time.

	He thought about returning to the south district for the time being, but his stomach was grumbling while looking around the stalls. It was early, but he bought yakitori<ref>T/N: a bite-size marinated pieces of beef, seafood, or chicken on skewer</ref> for dinner which he saw was barbecued nicely in a stall he found by chance. It could be said that a similar yakitori wasn’t sold in Japan, as they were 30 cemels long skewers stuck into hearty chicken meat.		He thought about returning to the south district for the time being, but his stomach was grumbling while looking around the stalls. It was early, but he bought yakitori<ref>T/N: a bite-size marinated pieces of beef, seafood, or chicken on skewer</ref> for dinner which he saw was barbecued nicely in a stall he found by chance. It could be said that a similar yakitori wasn’t sold in Japan, as they were 30 cemels long skewers stuck into hearty chicken meat.
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	The yakitori had already been digested. Shin went downstairs to eat dinner.		The yakitori had already been digested. Shin went downstairs to eat dinner.

			<br />◆◆◆◆
	<br />		<br />
	~~◆◆◆◆◆◆~~

	~~<br />~~Dawn of the next day.		Dawn of the next day.

	Shin departed from Bear Point Pavilion and passed through the main street where there were crowded stalls towards the south gate. When he exited from the gate, there were people lining up to enter the country, in contrast to Shin who was leaving.		Shin departed from Bear Point Pavilion and passed through the main street where there were crowded stalls towards the south gate. When he exited from the gate, there were people lining up to enter the country, in contrast to Shin who was leaving.
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	I could use the message card to send it right away! Tiera realized, shortly after Shin left.		I could use the message card to send it right away! Tiera realized, shortly after Shin left.

			<br />◆◆◆◆
	<br />		<br />
	~~◆◆◆◆◆◆~~

	~~<br />~~After leaving Tsuki no Hokora, Shin went straight to the northern forest. Since encountering the guild’s staff that came to investigate the Skull Face would be troublesome, he advanced while confirming that there was no one in the surrounding area.		After leaving Tsuki no Hokora, Shin went straight to the northern forest. Since encountering the guild’s staff that came to investigate the Skull Face would be troublesome, he advanced while confirming that there was no one in the surrounding area.

	He didn’t have the direction, so he depended mostly on his instinct. But he aimed at the depths of the forest first, because the depths of the forest felt somehow suspicious. Still, because he thought that the encounter with the investigators could not be avoided when he went to the place where the Skull Face appeared, he advanced toward the opposite direction of where the Skull Face was. It was the direction he did not walk when he came here before.		He didn’t have the direction, so he depended mostly on his instinct. But he aimed at the depths of the forest first, because the depths of the forest felt somehow suspicious. Still, because he thought that the encounter with the investigators could not be avoided when he went to the place where the Skull Face appeared, he advanced toward the opposite direction of where the Skull Face was. It was the direction he did not walk when he came here before.
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	The place was so completely monopolized by Shin, that not even a single Skull Face could survive.		The place was so completely monopolized by Shin, that not even a single Skull Face could survive.

			<br />◆◆◆◆
	<br />		<br />
	~~◆◆◆◆◆◆~~

	~~<br />~~Since Shin started the battle, the group of Skull Faces was completely wiped out in less than ten minutes. The remains of the Skull Faces were scattered in the area around the barrier and the ground couldn’t be seen. Because he didn’t have any intentions to clean up the remains, he ignored them and pretended he did not see them as he returned to the main shrine.		Since Shin started the battle, the group of Skull Faces was completely wiped out in less than ten minutes. The remains of the Skull Faces were scattered in the area around the barrier and the ground couldn’t be seen. Because he didn’t have any intentions to clean up the remains, he ignored them and pretended he did not see them as he returned to the main shrine.

	When he opened the main shrine door and entered inside, a young fox jumped at him as it was waiting for Shin.		When he opened the main shrine door and entered inside, a young fox jumped at him as it was waiting for Shin.
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	\| Back to [[The New Gate:Volume 1 Chapter 3\|Chapter 3]]		\| Back to [[The New Gate:Volume 1 Chapter 3\|Chapter 3]]
	\| Return to [[The New Gate\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[The New Gate\|Main Page]]
	\| ~~Forward to [[The New Gate:~~Volume ~~2 Chapter~~ 1~~\|Chapter 1]]~~		\| Volume 1 END
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	\|}		\|}
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Ninetailz: Spacing

2015-11-28T19:19:50Z

Spacing

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	He decided to investigate as long as the time permitted, and opened the next book.		He decided to investigate as long as the time permitted, and opened the next book.

	~~<br />◆◆◆◆~~
	<br />		<br />
			◆◆◆◆◆◆

	While Shin was doing the investigation in the library, executives, such as Barlux and Els, were preparing for a meeting in a room of the adventurers’ guild.		<br />While Shin was doing the investigation in the library, executives, such as Barlux and Els, were preparing for a meeting in a room of the adventurers’ guild.

	Of course, the agenda was the Skull Face. Even though the situation called for waiting for the appraisal of the jewel, the members that had some free time were gathered for the time being. There was a possibility that the information was accurate, because the one who reported was said to hold a letter of introduction. Since the Skull Face had already been defeated, the sense of urgency was not high, but the Shin’s personality in the report of Barlux and Els was raised to some extent.		Of course, the agenda was the Skull Face. Even though the situation called for waiting for the appraisal of the jewel, the members that had some free time were gathered for the time being. There was a possibility that the information was accurate, because the one who reported was said to hold a letter of introduction. Since the Skull Face had already been defeated, the sense of urgency was not high, but the Shin’s personality in the report of Barlux and Els was raised to some extent.
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	Afterwards, everyone who was present was perplexed about the content that leaked out of Ardi’s mouth.		Afterwards, everyone who was present was perplexed about the content that leaked out of Ardi’s mouth.

	~~<br />◆◆◆◆~~
	<br />		<br />
			◆◆◆◆◆◆

	For several hours, he had been investigating things in the library. Somehow the library was closed when the sun was a little high in the evening. When Shin confirmed it with the menu screen, the time showed 4:50. Even though he didn’t know whether the time was accurate, Shin thought that every city hall and post office had their own way to keep track of the time. Rather, he was amazed to learn that they had about the same closing time.		<br />For several hours, he had been investigating things in the library. Somehow the library was closed when the sun was a little high in the evening. When Shin confirmed it with the menu screen, the time showed 4:50. Even though he didn’t know whether the time was accurate, Shin thought that every city hall and post office had their own way to keep track of the time. Rather, he was amazed to learn that they had about the same closing time.

	He thought about returning to the south district for the time being, but his stomach was grumbling while looking around the stalls. It was early, but he bought yakitori<ref>T/N: a bite-size marinated pieces of beef, seafood, or chicken on skewer</ref> for dinner which he saw was barbecued nicely in a stall he found by chance. It could be said that a similar yakitori wasn’t sold in Japan, as they were 30 cemels long skewers stuck into hearty chicken meat.		He thought about returning to the south district for the time being, but his stomach was grumbling while looking around the stalls. It was early, but he bought yakitori<ref>T/N: a bite-size marinated pieces of beef, seafood, or chicken on skewer</ref> for dinner which he saw was barbecued nicely in a stall he found by chance. It could be said that a similar yakitori wasn’t sold in Japan, as they were 30 cemels long skewers stuck into hearty chicken meat.
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	The yakitori had already been digested. Shin went downstairs to eat dinner.		The yakitori had already been digested. Shin went downstairs to eat dinner.

	~~<br />◆◆◆◆~~
	<br />		<br />
			◆◆◆◆◆◆

	Dawn of the next day.		<br />Dawn of the next day.

	Shin departed from Bear Point Pavilion and passed through the main street where there were crowded stalls towards the south gate. When he exited from the gate, there were people lining up to enter the country, in contrast to Shin who was leaving.		Shin departed from Bear Point Pavilion and passed through the main street where there were crowded stalls towards the south gate. When he exited from the gate, there were people lining up to enter the country, in contrast to Shin who was leaving.
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	I could use the message card to send it right away! Tiera realized, shortly after Shin left.		I could use the message card to send it right away! Tiera realized, shortly after Shin left.

	~~<br />◆◆◆◆~~
	<br />		<br />
			◆◆◆◆◆◆

	After leaving Tsuki no Hokora, Shin went straight to the northern forest. Since encountering the guild’s staff that came to investigate the Skull Face would be troublesome, he advanced while confirming that there was no one in the surrounding area.		<br />After leaving Tsuki no Hokora, Shin went straight to the northern forest. Since encountering the guild’s staff that came to investigate the Skull Face would be troublesome, he advanced while confirming that there was no one in the surrounding area.

	He didn’t have the direction, so he depended mostly on his instinct. But he aimed at the depths of the forest first, because the depths of the forest felt somehow suspicious. Still, because he thought that the encounter with the investigators could not be avoided when he went to the place where the Skull Face appeared, he advanced toward the opposite direction of where the Skull Face was. It was the direction he did not walk when he came here before.		He didn’t have the direction, so he depended mostly on his instinct. But he aimed at the depths of the forest first, because the depths of the forest felt somehow suspicious. Still, because he thought that the encounter with the investigators could not be avoided when he went to the place where the Skull Face appeared, he advanced toward the opposite direction of where the Skull Face was. It was the direction he did not walk when he came here before.
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	The place was so completely monopolized by Shin, that not even a single Skull Face could survive.		The place was so completely monopolized by Shin, that not even a single Skull Face could survive.

	~~<br />◆◆◆◆~~
	<br />		<br />
			◆◆◆◆◆◆

	Since Shin started the battle, the group of Skull Faces was completely wiped out in less than ten minutes. The remains of the Skull Faces were scattered in the area around the barrier and the ground couldn’t be seen. Because he didn’t have any intentions to clean up the remains, he ignored them and pretended he did not see them as he returned to the main shrine.		<br />Since Shin started the battle, the group of Skull Faces was completely wiped out in less than ten minutes. The remains of the Skull Faces were scattered in the area around the barrier and the ground couldn’t be seen. Because he didn’t have any intentions to clean up the remains, he ignored them and pretended he did not see them as he returned to the main shrine.

	When he opened the main shrine door and entered inside, a young fox jumped at him as it was waiting for Shin.		When he opened the main shrine door and entered inside, a young fox jumped at him as it was waiting for Shin.

Ninetailz: First Draft

2015-11-26T01:52:55Z

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	\| Back to [[The New Gate:Volume 1 Chapter 2\|Chapter 2]]		\| Back to [[The New Gate:Volume 1 Chapter 3\|Chapter 3]]
	\| Return to [[The New Gate\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[The New Gate\|Main Page]]
	\| Forward to [[The New Gate:Volume 1 ~~Chapter 4~~\|Chapter 4]]		\| Forward to [[The New Gate:Volume 2 Chapter 1\|Chapter 1]]
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Ninetailz: First Draft

2015-11-26T01:50:11Z

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