The Zashiki Warashi of Intellectual Village:Bonus4 - Revision history

Hp2 at 00:14, 17 July 2016

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	“Yeah, I saw Ama. She’s right next to Enbi!!”		“Yeah, I saw Ama. She’s right next to Enbi!!”

	“No! That isn’t Yume…holding ~~you~~ hand. It’s Kuji!! Watch out!!”		“No! That isn’t Yume…holding your hand. It’s Kuji!! Watch out!!”

	…''Eh?		…''Eh?

Hp2 at 23:49, 16 July 2016

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	I spat out the contents of my mouth and Ama seemed to enjoy my reaction.		I spat out the contents of my mouth and Ama seemed to enjoy my reaction.

	“Are you familiar with the Youkai known as a Mermaid? How they’re depicted in Japanese legends changed quite a bit as time passed. At first, they were a lot like a giant salamander, but they eventually became a fish with a human head. And by the end of the Edo period, they had become the familiar image of a beautiful girl with a fish tail for a lower body. She incorporated that change into her surgery. Of course, if it can turn a giant salamander into a beautiful girl, it can do just about anything. …And if it was ~~original~~ a giant salamander, there had to be less noticeable changes to the lower body in addition to the obvious ones on the upper body.”		“Are you familiar with the Youkai known as a Mermaid? How they’re depicted in Japanese legends changed quite a bit as time passed. At first, they were a lot like a giant salamander, but they eventually became a fish with a human head. And by the end of the Edo period, they had become the familiar image of a beautiful girl with a fish tail for a lower body. She incorporated that change into her surgery. Of course, if it can turn a giant salamander into a beautiful girl, it can do just about anything. …And if it was originally a giant salamander, there had to be less noticeable changes to the lower body in addition to the obvious ones on the upper body.”

	Meanwhile, Hishigami Kuji started blushing.		Meanwhile, Hishigami Kuji started blushing.

Hp2: Alternatively replace 'tell' with 'say' and remove the object. I presumed the object was missing.

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Alternatively replace 'tell' with 'say' and remove the object. I presumed the object was missing.

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	“She’s violent, wicked, perfect, and hopeless, but so were the other Hishigami Women I’ve seen. And I’ve learned that the people most in need of saving are so cornered they’ve forgotten that they even want to be saved. And I can’t put this off any longer. So I want your help with this. I want to find that Hishigami Woman with the rusty blades in her eyes and face her once more.”		“She’s violent, wicked, perfect, and hopeless, but so were the other Hishigami Women I’ve seen. And I’ve learned that the people most in need of saving are so cornered they’ve forgotten that they even want to be saved. And I can’t put this off any longer. So I want your help with this. I want to find that Hishigami Woman with the rusty blades in her eyes and face her once more.”

	“Uheh,” groaned the Mystery Freak. “That’s fine,” she added. “But if you do pull off your dream of having the complete set, please don’t tell you’re going to go for the Hishigami Men next. If you’re that indiscriminate, Enbi-chan is going to have to punch you.”		“Uheh,” groaned the Mystery Freak. “That’s fine,” she added. “But if you do pull off your dream of having the complete set, please don’t tell me you’re going to go for the Hishigami Men next. If you’re that indiscriminate, Enbi-chan is going to have to punch you.”

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

Hp2 at 20:43, 16 July 2016

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	“Oh, dear. It looks like they beat me to it. And as a destroyer of trust, I was really interested in luring a police detective to my side.”		“Oh, dear. It looks like they beat me to it. And as a destroyer of trust, I was really interested in luring a police detective to my side.”

	“I just have to pull he entire chair to bring him closer to me. If you think taking up your position provides you with a stable sanctuary or safe zone, then you’re already in range for me.”		“I just have to pull the entire chair to bring him closer to me. If you think taking up your position provides you with a stable sanctuary or safe zone, then you’re already in range for me.”

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Hp2 at 20:19, 16 July 2016

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	And there was more than one.		And there was more than one.

	~~Sine~~ this was not a human opponent, I pulled out my handgun without thinking, but then I froze up.		Since this was not a human opponent, I pulled out my handgun without thinking, but then I froze up.

	More than ten of the UAVs gathered around from various directions.		More than ten of the UAVs gathered around from various directions.

Hp2 at 19:48, 16 July 2016

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	“Of course I was. Why would I hold back? But this is Ama we’re talking about. It’s hard to aim for her with the way she staggers around!”		“Of course I was. Why would I hold back? But this is Ama we’re talking about. It’s hard to aim for her with the way she staggers around!”

	“What about the Nopperabou included in the sniping unit? If you use its power enchant your opponent, can’t you make any opponent stand stock still for two seconds?”		“What about the Nopperabou included in the sniping unit? If you use its power to enchant your opponent, can’t you make any opponent stand stock still for two seconds?”

	“No, no. Didn’t I just say this is Ama? She’d use it against me.”		“No, no. Didn’t I just say this is Ama? She’d use it against me.”

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Js06 at 18:37, 9 July 2016

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