This title is too long!:Volume1 Chapter2 - Revision history

Rxls at 05:53, 16 June 2017

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Sir Trollface: /* Part 2 */ Grammar, correction, added missing dash, removed double wording and added a missing period

2016-12-21T14:27:49Z

Part 2: Grammar, correction, added missing dash, removed double wording and added a missing period

Thekingofhobos: /* Part 2 */

2016-11-24T12:45:53Z

Part 2

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	Even so, since Nitadori provided me with a gift, I'll just accept it without thinking too much.		Even so, since Nitadori provided me with a gift, I'll just accept it without thinking too much.

	With this, I guess the excuse of answering lots of questions because I accepted sweets is ~~estanlished~~.		With this, I guess the excuse of answering lots of questions because I accepted sweets is established.

	I held the ends to open the bag of potato chips,		I held the ends to open the bag of potato chips, "I really like salted Seaweed.”

	“I really like salted Seaweed.”

	And expressed my honest thoughts.		And expressed my honest thoughts.

Thekingofhobos: /* Part 2 */

2016-11-24T12:29:50Z

Part 2

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	She's a 'homonculus' created by an alchemist; in other words, an artificial human.		She's a 'homonculus' created by an alchemist; in other words, an artificial human.

	Since it is a fictitious story, the characters are typically very pretty, and the homonculus in particular ~~are~~ designed to have 'extraordinary ~~pretty~~'.		Since it is a fictitious story, the characters are typically very pretty, and the homonculus in particular is designed to have 'extraordinary bueaty'.

	And so, the unique characteristic the homonculus have is heterochromia; in other words, they have different colored eyes.		And so, the unique characteristic the homonculus have is heterochromia; in other words, they have different colored eyes.

Thekingofhobos: /* Part 2 */

2016-11-24T12:24:42Z

Part 2

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	On this week, from Monday till Thursday, Nitadori,		On this week, from Monday till Thursday, Nitadori, didn't speak to me at school, just as we promised.

	~~Didn~~'t speak to me at school, just as we promised.

	It was me who always entered the classroom earlier, and Nitadori would proceed to the seat behind me unwittingly while I was reading or in my delusions.		It was me who always entered the classroom earlier, and Nitadori would proceed to the seat behind me unwittingly while I was reading or in my delusions.

Teh Ping at 17:23, 9 August 2015

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	Shin acted as Sin's decoy, and deliberately led himself to be caught.		Shin acted as Sin's decoy, and deliberately led himself to be caught.

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	The former was easily revealed to be an impostor, and was killed. As according to plan, he revived, escaped, caused chaos on the battlefield, and at the very end, Shin took on Pluto himself.		The former was easily revealed to be an impostor, and was killed. As according to plan, he revived, escaped, caused chaos on the battlefield, and at the very end, Shin took on Pluto himself.
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	And while waiting for Nitadori to recover, I continued to guzzle down potato chips and tea.		And while waiting for Nitadori to recover, I continued to guzzle down potato chips and tea.

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Chocolatkey: /* Part 2 */

2015-07-07T22:17:54Z

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	The library had mangas which the school library didn't have.		The library had mangas which the school library didn't have.

	Of course, they were those famous works, and it really was an opportunity for me, who had no chance to read them. With the chance t obtain these classic works, I understood the joy of reading manga.		Of course, they were those famous works, and it really was an opportunity for me, who had no chance to read them. With the chance to obtain these classic works, I understood the joy of reading manga.

	There were also many of the so called light novels in the library, and I had the chance to be introduced to them.		There were also many of the so called light novels in the library, and I had the chance to be introduced to them.
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	I became adept at creating all sorts of scenarios to fit the characters.		I became adept at creating all sorts of scenarios to fit the characters.

	For example, when a pursued protagonist' finds a motorbike in front of him and a subway station, if it's me, I'll check to see if I have enough spare change to buy a ticket as I head down.		For example, when a pursued protagonist finds a motorbike in front of him and a subway station, if it's me, I'll check to see if I have enough spare change to buy a ticket as I head down.

	As the protagonist will be riding on a bike however (as it was written), he'll leap onto a bike gallantly, and start the engines. As for why the key's on the bike, I have no idea.		As the protagonist will be riding on a bike however (as it was written), he'll leap onto a bike gallantly, and start the engines. As for why the key's on the bike, I have no idea.
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	My eyes really got tired (and my hands too) before I got used to using the computer.		My eyes really got tired (and my hands too) before I got used to using the computer.

	I learned how to adjust the screen brightness and the font size according to my own preferences, and the situation improved somewhat; however, I did make sure not to stay ~~ijn~~ front of the computer for that long.		I learned how to adjust the screen brightness and the font size according to my own preferences, and the situation improved somewhat; however, I did make sure not to stay in front of the computer for that long.

	The scenery outside the house window's wonderful, and when I'm finally able to rest, I'll look out of the windows, coming up with all sorts of delusional settings.		The scenery outside the house window's wonderful, and when I'm finally able to rest, I'll look out of the windows, coming up with all sorts of delusional settings.
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	"I see. Thanks…"		"I see. Thanks…"

	"Since you did manage to complete a story of that level, I guess you definitely have talent! ~~Yuou~~'ll definitely be an author in the future."		"Since you did manage to complete a story of that level, I guess you definitely have talent! You'll definitely be an author in the future."

	"Well...I'm already one."		"Well...I'm already one."

Teh Ping at 22:15, 1 July 2015

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	The next day, I bought a second notebook, and wrote in hiragana, 'my world, 2nd volume',		The next day, I bought a second notebook, and wrote in hiragana, 'my world, 2nd volume',



	Nitadori was laughing so hard she was breathless,		Nitadori was laughing so hard she was breathless,
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	The Limited Express continued to stop at a few stations.		The Limited Express continued to stop at a few stations.

Teh Ping: /* Part 2 */

2015-07-01T22:13:09Z

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Teh Ping: /* Part 2 */

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	Sin was particularly interested in Shin, and thought of using the latter.		Sin was particularly interested in Shin, and thought of using the latter.

	Shin had no intention of getting ~~involve~~ in such fights and getting himself killed, but upon realizing that there were no other ways to live on or return to his world, he colluded with Sin.		Shin had no intention of getting involved in such fights and getting himself killed, but upon realizing that there were no other ways to live on or return to his world, he colluded with Sin.

	Sin's little sister was a pretty girl called Ema with a similar face to the duo, and Shin, working together with their gathering of beautiful maids cum bodyguards and macho looking warrior subordinates, spent his days dying over and over again in these turbulent times.		Sin's little sister was a pretty girl called Ema with a similar face to the duo, and Shin, working together with their gathering of beautiful maids cum bodyguards and macho looking warrior subordinates, spent his days dying over and over again in these turbulent times.
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	I just hope that all the readers would buy my books ever since I became an author however. I never expressed this thought to Nitadori, especially since even I thought it was selfish.		I just hope that all the readers would buy my books ever since I became an author however. I never expressed this thought to Nitadori, especially since even I thought it was selfish.

	“Your mother's really amazing! You've been reading non stop ever since then, right, sensei...?”		“Your mother's really amazing! You've been reading non-stop ever since then, right, sensei...?”

	“I was reading, playing.”		“I was reading, playing.”
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	The passengers increased in the number, but the tour group passengers were having a commotion, so we could continue with our conversation as normal.		The passengers increased in the number, but the tour group passengers were having a commotion, so we could continue with our conversation as normal.

	“So sensei, it's because you had such a childhood that you were ~~able~~ able to have all sorts of imaginations.”		“So sensei, it's because you had such a childhood that you were able to have all sorts of imaginations.”

	After learning of my past, Nitadori asked me about a question, 'the major decision I made in my life'.		After learning of my past, Nitadori asked me about a question, 'the major decision I made in my life'.
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	He, living a plain, normal life, sprang to action the moment he heard gunshots, and unleashed the hidden power—this setting will make for a great convenience.		He, living a plain, normal life, sprang to action the moment he heard gunshots, and unleashed the hidden power—this setting will make for a great convenience.

	I decided to use 'the him who's able to jump up to the second floor' and replace 'the me who can't even jump onto a box. No matter how much the terrorists will change their plans or even take hostages, they'll definitely be wiped out		I decided to use 'the him who's able to jump up to the second floor' and replace 'the me who can't even jump onto a box. No matter how much the terrorists will change their plans or even take hostages, they'll definitely be wiped out.