Toaru Majutsu no Index:Item Chapter1 - Revision history

MarioLuigi0404: /* Part 3 */ Added image

2023-09-23T00:53:23Z

Part 3: Added image

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	She fell right to the floor.		She fell right to the floor.

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	Hanano Choubi’s hips gave out, leaving her in a cute w-sitting position. Even she could tell she had tears in her eyes. She had to gather all her strength in her crotch to keep her bladder from giving way.		Hanano Choubi’s hips gave out, leaving her in a cute w-sitting position. Even she could tell she had tears in her eyes. She had to gather all her strength in her crotch to keep her bladder from giving way.

JDMP: Typo from Identify to Identity. Context- "....Official Identity...."

2023-03-30T11:04:38Z

Typo from Identify to Identity. Context- "....Official Identity...."

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	Kinuhata blushed red and trembled. Really, it was the athletic shop’s fault for not selling underwear. But without an official ~~identify~~, address, or student ID (or clothing), she would have nowhere to go if she left now. And she would probably be naked again. So in that sense, Frenda and the unlimited black card she was waving around were still the most reliable “umbrella” here.		Kinuhata blushed red and trembled. Really, it was the athletic shop’s fault for not selling underwear. But without an official identity, address, or student ID (or clothing), she would have nowhere to go if she left now. And she would probably be naked again. So in that sense, Frenda and the unlimited black card she was waving around were still the most reliable “umbrella” here.

	“Excuse me, she’ll be wearing this home, so we’d like to check out.”		“Excuse me, she’ll be wearing this home, so we’d like to check out.”

Js06 at 04:03, 12 March 2023

2023-03-12T04:03:25Z

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MarioLuigi0404: /* Part 5 */ Rephrased for readability

2023-03-05T06:07:47Z

Part 5: Rephrased for readability

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	Item was more than just the girls. Just like the bus and its driver from the night before, there was an entire support organization below them. There was a limit to how many people could receive that level of support. ~~Mugino’s sense was that~~ a single organization could only support three or four people at full specs. Any more and the costs would be too high and the support would become imbalanced.		Item was more than just the girls. Just like the bus and its driver from the night before, there was an entire support organization below them. There was a limit to how many people could receive that level of support. As Mugino saw it, a single organization could only support three or four people at full specs. Any more and the costs would be too high and the support would become imbalanced.

	Bullets were more destructive to biological matter when made from a soft metal with a high relative density, but everyone would choose a lead bullet over a gold one. Why was that? Because even the military and police preferred the much cheaper substance if the effect was similar.		Bullets were more destructive to biological matter when made from a soft metal with a high relative density, but everyone would choose a lead bullet over a gold one. Why was that? Because even the military and police preferred the much cheaper substance if the effect was similar.

MarioLuigi0404: /* Part 6 */ Grammar/readability

2023-03-05T06:05:26Z

Part 6: Grammar/readability

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	The black luxury car ended up in a multivehicle crash with its bumper caught below the rear of the taller truck in front of it, so its tires squealed in a futile attempt to move froward or back.		The black luxury car ended up in a multivehicle crash with its bumper caught below the rear of the taller truck in front of it, so its tires squealed in a futile attempt to move froward or back.

	As long as the trucks had proper bulletproofing and anti-shock construction, the soldiers inside would be injured but alive. The flames only affected the exterior~~. But~~ they were still out of the fight now that their doors were bent and burnt too badly to open. ~~And the~~ bulletproof trucks were made sturdy, so the soldiers the VIP had paid so much to hire were trapped inside. In Academy City, there was a saying(?): if you need to get rid of a bulletproof car, knock it into the water.		As long as the trucks had proper bulletproofing and anti-shock construction, the soldiers inside would be injured but alive. The flames only affected the exterior, but they were still out of the fight now that their doors were bent and burnt too badly to open. The bulletproof trucks were made sturdy, so the soldiers the VIP had paid so much to hire were trapped inside. In Academy City, there was a saying(?): if you need to get rid of a bulletproof car, knock it into the water.

	“Don’t let your guard down yet, newcomer.”		“Don’t let your guard down yet, newcomer.”

MarioLuigi0404: /* Part 5 */ Missing word

2023-03-05T05:54:44Z

Part 5: Missing word

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	Item was more than just the girls. Just like the bus and its driver from the night before, there was an entire support organization below them. There was a limit to how many people could receive that level of support. Mugino’s sense was a single organization could only support three or four people at full specs. Any more and the costs would be too high and the support would become imbalanced.		Item was more than just the girls. Just like the bus and its driver from the night before, there was an entire support organization below them. There was a limit to how many people could receive that level of support. Mugino’s sense was that a single organization could only support three or four people at full specs. Any more and the costs would be too high and the support would become imbalanced.

	Bullets were more destructive to biological matter when made from a soft metal with a high relative density, but everyone would choose a lead bullet over a gold one. Why was that? Because even the military and police preferred the much cheaper substance if the effect was similar.		Bullets were more destructive to biological matter when made from a soft metal with a high relative density, but everyone would choose a lead bullet over a gold one. Why was that? Because even the military and police preferred the much cheaper substance if the effect was similar.

Massify: /* Part 1 */ fixed it from a million to a hundred thousand (seems to be a translation issue)

2023-03-05T04:37:01Z

Part 1: fixed it from a million to a hundred thousand (seems to be a translation issue)

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	“''Now, now.''” The butler spoke like he was chiding a small child. “Violence is merely another form of negotiation, no different from conversation and money. But a Mugino must use violence as a tool, not be controlled by it. The honorable Mugino family is in fact one of the 5 wealthiest in the world and runs the grain production company which fills the bellies of 1.4 billion people worldwide.”		“''Now, now.''” The butler spoke like he was chiding a small child. “Violence is merely another form of negotiation, no different from conversation and money. But a Mugino must use violence as a tool, not be controlled by it. The honorable Mugino family is in fact one of the 5 wealthiest in the world and runs the grain production company which fills the bellies of 1.4 billion people worldwide.”

	That put the Mugino family in a different position from the Japanese-style yakuza. They never did anything too noticeable and none of their criminal bases or criminal members every came to light. They did not wear obvious sunglasses and gold necklaces. On the surface, they were a global grain production company and, even there, the Mugino name was never found in the company name or the personnel list. But after the vast fortune earned there was laundered through specific banks and casinos, it was used to raise an army of ~~millions~~ around the world. More than handguns of dubious origin, they even possessed tanks and attack helicopters. And the investment fund run by the group would buy up any company that gave them an opening – whether it was an old, established one or a new startup – to spread the corporation across the world like an amoeba.		That put the Mugino family in a different position from the Japanese-style yakuza. They never did anything too noticeable and none of their criminal bases or criminal members every came to light. They did not wear obvious sunglasses and gold necklaces. On the surface, they were a global grain production company and, even there, the Mugino name was never found in the company name or the personnel list. But after the vast fortune earned there was laundered through specific banks and casinos, it was used to raise an army of a hundred thousand around the world. More than handguns of dubious origin, they even possessed tanks and attack helicopters. And the investment fund run by the group would buy up any company that gave them an opening – whether it was an old, established one or a new startup – to spread the corporation across the world like an amoeba.

	It became an inextricable gear of society, all while hiding its presence.		It became an inextricable gear of society, all while hiding its presence.

Js06: Created page with "==Chapter 1: The Fifth Girl== ===Part 1=== July 1, 10 AM. Fifteen Bells, the largest complex in District 15. As the largest shopping district in Academy City, District 15..."

2023-03-05T00:45:58Z

Created page with "==Chapter 1: The Fifth Girl== ===Part 1=== July 1, 10 AM. Fifteen Bells, the largest complex in District 15. As the largest shopping district in Academy City, District 15..."

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