Toaru Majutsu no Index:Item Chapter4 - Revision history

JDMP: Missing "Of" , Context - "both of them..."

2023-03-19T12:29:31Z

Missing "Of" , Context - "both of them..."

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	Mugino Shizuri and Ibotanokikouji Kaede both launched something from their palm.		Mugino Shizuri and Ibotanokikouji Kaede both launched something from their palm.

	They didn’t bother waiting to confirm the rules. Both them had lost at least one of their teammates. Talking couldn’t change the amount of spilled blood.		They didn’t bother waiting to confirm the rules. Both of them had lost at least one of their teammates. Talking couldn’t change the amount of spilled blood.

	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

JDMP: Typo: I - If . Corrected context- " If you lost your treasured..."

2023-03-19T11:56:35Z

Typo: I - If . Corrected context- " If you lost your treasured..."

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	Replaced with an even greater collection which would create an even more comfortable place for herself.		Replaced with an even greater collection which would create an even more comfortable place for herself.

	I you lost your treasured possessions in a fire or other disaster, you would not just give up. When you loved something, you would naturally seek out new ones as long as you lived.		If you lost your treasured possessions in a fire or other disaster, you would not just give up. When you loved something, you would naturally seek out new ones as long as you lived.

	Hers was the love of someone looking down at her loved ones from above.		Hers was the love of someone looking down at her loved ones from above.

JDMP: Typo : To nice -Tonight. Corrected Context- - "...If only I could fly tonight,..."

2023-03-19T11:55:14Z

Typo : To nice -Tonight. Corrected Context- - "...If only I could fly tonight,..."

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	(I would have preferred to go to District 23 and escape overseas by air, but they should be monitoring all of the international flights.)		(I would have preferred to go to District 23 and escape overseas by air, but they should be monitoring all of the international flights.)

	“Ugh, if only I could fly ~~to Nice~~. Just give me freedom. But that can wait until I escape Kantou and take a domestic flight to another international airport.”		“Ugh, if only I could fly tonight. Just give me freedom. But that can wait until I escape Kantou and take a domestic flight to another international airport.”

	The transportation facility was crowded even at night. There were other middle schoolers like her and even younger elementary schoolers wandering around with large suitcases. Public transportation usually shut down after the city curfew, but today was special.		The transportation facility was crowded even at night. There were other middle schoolers like her and even younger elementary schoolers wandering around with large suitcases. Public transportation usually shut down after the city curfew, but today was special.

Js06: Created page with "==Chapter 4: Roar of the Level 5== ===Part 1=== July 21, 8 PM. “Phew.” A girl in a summer uniform and a large mask arrived in District 3. She was fortunate her usual m..."

2023-03-18T23:29:44Z

Created page with "==Chapter 4: Roar of the Level 5== ===Part 1=== July 21, 8 PM. “Phew.” A girl in a summer uniform and a large mask arrived in District 3. She was fortunate her usual m..."

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