Toaru Majutsu no Index:RailgunSS2 Chapter2 - Revision history

Darklor: it seems a 'you' was missing - Change it back if it was intentional

2013-10-16T18:32:12Z

it seems a 'you' was missing - Change it back if it was intentional

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	“I don’t know!! I just all of a sudden found myself telling the story!! I don’t even remember where exactly I heard about it!! But I must have heard it somewhere. You can check on your own where I found the information by checking my internet history or the digitally broadcasted television shows I watched!! But I don’t know!!”		“I don’t know!! I just all of a sudden found myself telling the story!! I don’t even remember where exactly I heard about it!! But I must have heard it somewhere. You can check on your own where I found the information by checking my internet history or the digitally broadcasted television shows I watched!! But I don’t know!!”

	“If Code EIC was used in this incident, then the higher ups in the shopping mall are the most suspicious. Do have any idea who it could be?”		“If Code EIC was used in this incident, then the higher ups in the shopping mall are the most suspicious. Do you have any idea who it could be?”

	“Of course not!! It’s true that we are a cooperative institution of Academy City that carries out economic experiments and research such as Code EIC, so we do have a few unofficial groups. But none of them are anything like a terrorist group that wants to harm people!! This isn’t a city with movie-like villains such as obviously evil organizations or fixers that control everything from the shadows!!”		“Of course not!! It’s true that we are a cooperative institution of Academy City that carries out economic experiments and research such as Code EIC, so we do have a few unofficial groups. But none of them are anything like a terrorist group that wants to harm people!! This isn’t a city with movie-like villains such as obviously evil organizations or fixers that control everything from the shadows!!”

Cthaeh: consistency and AE

2013-09-16T23:55:26Z

consistency and AE

Cthaeh: semicolon and typo

2013-07-24T01:14:03Z

semicolon and typo

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	(…I’m more used to arcades.)		(…I’m more used to arcades.)

	As Mikoto muttered both out loud and silently, she was not wearing her Tokiwadai uniform. Instead, she was wearing a mostly red dress. She had taken it from the back of a dress shop she had found along the way. It was labeled “Misaka Mikoto—Demonstration ~~Oufit”~~, so she did not think it would be a problem.		As Mikoto muttered both out loud and silently, she was not wearing her Tokiwadai uniform. Instead, she was wearing a mostly red dress. She had taken it from the back of a dress shop she had found along the way. It was labeled “Misaka Mikoto—Demonstration Outfit”, so she did not think it would be a problem.

	Mikoto was fired up, but when she actually entered the casino, it turned out not to have as formal and dignified an atmosphere as she had thought. There were a lot of gentlemen and ladies in formal dress at the roulette and baccarat tables that had dealers, but the area full of slot machines had plenty of Asians in T-shirts and jeans. That area looked just like the slot machines in a pachinko parlor.		Mikoto was fired up, but when she actually entered the casino, it turned out not to have as formal and dignified an atmosphere as she had thought. There were a lot of gentlemen and ladies in formal dress at the roulette and baccarat tables that had dealers, but the area full of slot machines had plenty of Asians in T-shirts and jeans. That area looked just like the slot machines in a pachinko parlor.
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	When rain is scarce and water is expected dry up, people try to stockpile water and when there is too much rain and it is expected to have a negative effect on crops, people try to stockpile vegetables.		When rain is scarce and water is expected dry up, people try to stockpile water and when there is too much rain and it is expected to have a negative effect on crops, people try to stockpile vegetables.

	When a warm winter is expected, people will wait to buy studless tires and when a cool spring is expected to severely lowers the amount of pollen, the amount of masks bought lowers.		When a warm winter is expected, people will wait to buy studless tires; and when a cool spring is expected to severely lowers the amount of pollen, the amount of masks bought lowers.

	And all of this happens even when the data saying these things are expected is based on nothing.		And all of this happens even when the data saying these things are expected is based on nothing.

Mr.Kyon: /* Part 3 */

2012-01-11T12:46:22Z

Part 3

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	(…I’m more used to arcades.)		(…I’m more used to arcades.)

	As Mikoto muttered both out loud and silently, she was not wearing her Tokiwadai uniform. Instead, she was wearing a mostly red dress. She had taken it from the back of a dress shop she had found along the way. It was labeled “Misaka ~~Mikoto – Demonstration~~ Oufit”, so she did not think it would be a problem.		As Mikoto muttered both out loud and silently, she was not wearing her Tokiwadai uniform. Instead, she was wearing a mostly red dress. She had taken it from the back of a dress shop she had found along the way. It was labeled “Misaka Mikoto—Demonstration Oufit”, so she did not think it would be a problem.

	Mikoto was fired up, but when she actually entered the casino, it turned out not to have as formal and dignified an atmosphere as she had thought. There were a lot of gentlemen and ladies in formal dress at the roulette and baccarat tables that had dealers, but the area full of slot machines had plenty of Asians in T-shirts and jeans. That area looked just like the slot machines in a pachinko parlor.		Mikoto was fired up, but when she actually entered the casino, it turned out not to have as formal and dignified an atmosphere as she had thought. There were a lot of gentlemen and ladies in formal dress at the roulette and baccarat tables that had dealers, but the area full of slot machines had plenty of Asians in T-shirts and jeans. That area looked just like the slot machines in a pachinko parlor.

Mr.Kyon: /* Chapter 2 */

2012-01-11T12:43:45Z

Chapter 2

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	“I’m not sure what it is that has you so troubled, though. Did your allowance run out?”		“I’m not sure what it is that has you so troubled, though. Did your allowance run out?”

	“Wait a second. You said something about an orange to me, right? I need you to tell me what you ~~were-…”~~		“Wait a second. You said something about an orange to me, right? I need you to tell me what you were—”

	As Mikoto tried to speak, Lessar stretched out her index finger.		As Mikoto tried to speak, Lessar stretched out her index finger.
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	The security guard men became a bit flustered.		The security guard men became a bit flustered.

	“Eh…ah…wait! Where do you think you’re ~~g-…”~~		“Eh…ah…wait! Where do you think you’re g—”

	“Then I’ll leave these.”		“Then I’ll leave these.”
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	“We’ll stand out if we’re together, so let’s split up and rendezvous back there.”		“We’ll stand out if we’re together, so let’s split up and rendezvous back there.”

	“Hey! You need to answer my ~~ques-…~~!!”		“Hey! You need to answer my ques—!!”

	Leaving the door to the casino open, Lessar quickly mixed in with the crowds outside.		Leaving the door to the casino open, Lessar quickly mixed in with the crowds outside.
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	She headed further into the apartment dragging Setali along with her. She found the bathroom, opened the door, and threw Setali inside.		She headed further into the apartment dragging Setali along with her. She found the bathroom, opened the door, and threw Setali inside.

	“What are ~~you-…~~?”		“What are you—?”

	Setali’s words trailed off and her face stiffened.		Setali’s words trailed off and her face stiffened.

89.72.147.28: /* Part 4 */

2011-10-30T12:48:30Z

Part 4

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	That was just what she was doing in her spare time.		That was just what she was doing in her spare time.

	Her brain was mainly focused on manipulating minute electronic currents in order hack the large server.		Her brain was mainly focused on manipulating minute electronic currents in order to hack the large server.

	“But is this really okay?”		“But is this really okay?”

89.72.147.28: /* Part 3 */

2011-10-30T12:41:42Z

Part 3

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	There were plenty of human eyes she could not fool with her power like she could with the cameras and sensors. However, no one pointed her out as a wanted criminal and the security guards did not come charging over.		There were plenty of human eyes she could not fool with her power like she could with the cameras and sensors. However, no one pointed her out as a wanted criminal and the security guards did not come charging over.

	Perhaps her atmosphere had changed due to the dress, perhaps the security guards had hidden the information on her ~~form~~ the general public, or perhaps the people were simply too used to the Semipublic AR so they were unable to focus on her as long as a “danger” icon did not appear above her head.		Perhaps her atmosphere had changed due to the dress, perhaps the security guards had hidden the information on her from the general public, or perhaps the people were simply too used to the Semipublic AR so they were unable to focus on her as long as a “danger” icon did not appear above her head.

	If she did not take action while she could, she would be cornered before long.		If she did not take action while she could, she would be cornered before long.

Kokonice at 14:42, 10 September 2011

2011-09-10T14:42:33Z

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	“…Lessar seems like more of an adult than you, though.”		“…Lessar seems like more of an adult than you, though.”

	“Where are you looking and what is your basis for that ~~judgment~~, you damn brat!! I can’t lose to a child like that!!”		“Where are you looking and what is your basis for that judgement, you damn brat!! I can’t lose to a child like that!!”

	“Nnn, despite how she looks, Lessar broke the record at her school by starting to wear a bra in fourth grade.”		“Nnn, despite how she looks, Lessar broke the record at her school by starting to wear a bra in fourth grade.”
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	Whether we are making a positive or negative change, we add in all sorts of information based on an already existing product and make suggestions that compel people in one way or the other but leaves them with a certain degree of freedom.		Whether we are making a positive or negative change, we add in all sorts of information based on an already existing product and make suggestions that compel people in one way or the other but leaves them with a certain degree of freedom.

	They will make a personal ~~judgment~~ on the value of the product as it is and a prediction of the value of the product in the future. Based on that information, they will decide whether to purchase it or not.		They will make a personal judgement on the value of the product as it is and a prediction of the value of the product in the future. Based on that information, they will decide whether to purchase it or not.

	When rain is scarce and water is expected dry up, people try to stockpile water and when there is too much rain and it is expected to have a negative effect on crops, people try to stockpile vegetables.		When rain is scarce and water is expected dry up, people try to stockpile water and when there is too much rain and it is expected to have a negative effect on crops, people try to stockpile vegetables.
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	On the other hand, if something people have heard rumors of locally is picked up by television stations and other mass media, they will feel trust and assurance from that.		On the other hand, if something people have heard rumors of locally is picked up by television stations and other mass media, they will feel trust and assurance from that.

	We can use the thought patterns the customers themselves have built up on how to make ~~judgments~~ on the information they hear by giving out information in stages from multiple media sources in order to give the sense of what is “popular” that we wish. In doing so, we can raise or lower what products sell and what stores customers go to.		We can use the thought patterns the customers themselves have built up on how to make judgements on the information they hear by giving out information in stages from multiple media sources in order to give the sense of what is “popular” that we wish. In doing so, we can raise or lower what products sell and what stores customers go to.

	If you think of it like a pyramid, our final objective is to push from the base in order to shake the peak with finely-tuned vibrations.		If you think of it like a pyramid, our final objective is to push from the base in order to shake the peak with finely-tuned vibrations.

Saganatsu at 03:47, 23 August 2011

2011-08-23T03:47:32Z

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Dagger: Typo, rephrase

2011-07-29T22:40:16Z

Typo, rephrase

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	For an instant, Mikoto thought of smacking the girl to wake her up and get Lessar’s cell phone number, but she decided that wasn’t the best idea. If Lessar was seriously intending to flee, she would not stay on the phone long enough to allow Mikoto to trace her using it.		For an instant, Mikoto thought of smacking the girl to wake her up and get Lessar’s cell phone number, but she decided that wasn’t the best idea. If Lessar was seriously intending to flee, she would not stay on the phone long enough to allow Mikoto to trace her using it.

	(Anyway, it seems she didn’t immediately report me. I wonder how far ~~its spread~~ that I was involved with that orange incident and am fleeing from the security guards.)		(Anyway, it seems she didn’t immediately report me. I wonder how far the fact that I was involved with that orange incident and am fleeing from the security guards has spread.)

	That kind of convenience store could have an alarm button under the register counter, so she could not let her guard down, but she wouldn’t worry too much until security guards actually showed up.		That kind of convenience store could have an alarm button under the register counter, so she could not let her guard down, but she wouldn’t worry too much until security guards actually showed up.
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	“If Code EIC was used in this incident, then the higher ups in the shopping mall are the most suspicious. Do have any idea who it could be?”		“If Code EIC was used in this incident, then the higher ups in the shopping mall are the most suspicious. Do have any idea who it could be?”

	“Of course not!!It’s true that we are a cooperative institution of Academy City that carries out economic experiments and research such as Code EIC, so we do have a few unofficial groups. But none of them are anything like a terrorist group that wants to harm people!! This isn’t a city with movie-like villains such as obviously evil organizations or fixers that control everything from the shadows!!”		“Of course not!! It’s true that we are a cooperative institution of Academy City that carries out economic experiments and research such as Code EIC, so we do have a few unofficial groups. But none of them are anything like a terrorist group that wants to harm people!! This isn’t a city with movie-like villains such as obviously evil organizations or fixers that control everything from the shadows!!”

	“…”		“…”

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	“…Lessar seems like more of an adult than you, though.”		“…Lessar seems like more of an adult than you, though.”

	“Where are you looking and what is your basis for that ~~judgement~~, you damn brat!! I can’t lose to a child like that!!”		“Where are you looking and what is your basis for that judgment, you damn brat!! I can’t lose to a child like that!!”

	“Nnn, despite how she looks, Lessar broke the record at her school by starting to wear a bra in fourth grade.”		“Nnn, despite how she looks, Lessar broke the record at her school by starting to wear a bra in fourth grade.”
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	Whether we are making a positive or negative change, we add in all sorts of information based on an already existing product and make suggestions that compel people in one way or the other but leaves them with a certain degree of freedom.		Whether we are making a positive or negative change, we add in all sorts of information based on an already existing product and make suggestions that compel people in one way or the other but leaves them with a certain degree of freedom.

	They will make a personal ~~judgement~~ on the value of the product as it is and a prediction of the value of the product in the future. Based on that information, they will decide whether to purchase it or not.		They will make a personal judgment on the value of the product as it is and a prediction of the value of the product in the future. Based on that information, they will decide whether to purchase it or not.

	When rain is scarce and water is expected dry up, people try to stockpile water and when there is too much rain and it is expected to have a negative effect on crops, people try to stockpile vegetables.		When rain is scarce and water is expected dry up, people try to stockpile water and when there is too much rain and it is expected to have a negative effect on crops, people try to stockpile vegetables.
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	On the other hand, if something people have heard rumors of locally is picked up by television stations and other mass media, they will feel trust and assurance from that.		On the other hand, if something people have heard rumors of locally is picked up by television stations and other mass media, they will feel trust and assurance from that.

	We can use the thought patterns the customers themselves have built up on how to make ~~judgements~~ on the information they hear by giving out information in stages from multiple media sources in order to give the sense of what is “popular” that we wish. In doing so, we can raise or lower what products sell and what stores customers go to.		We can use the thought patterns the customers themselves have built up on how to make judgments on the information they hear by giving out information in stages from multiple media sources in order to give the sense of what is “popular” that we wish. In doing so, we can raise or lower what products sell and what stores customers go to.

	If you think of it like a pyramid, our final objective is to push from the base in order to shake the peak with finely-tuned vibrations.		If you think of it like a pyramid, our final objective is to push from the base in order to shake the peak with finely-tuned vibrations.
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	As she asked her question, Mikoto manipulated the Semipublic AR on the floor, hacked through the security, and fairly accurately calculated out where a certain person must live given security camera records and the deposits of electronic money.		As she asked her question, Mikoto manipulated the Semipublic AR on the floor, hacked through the security, and fairly accurately calculated out where a certain person must live given security camera records and the deposits of electronic money.

	The person was Setali S Skinikia.		The person was Setali S. Skinikia.

	She had been Mikoto’s guide to the city and had been the one to tell her the story of the very valuable orange.		She had been Mikoto’s guide to the city and had been the one to tell her the story of the very valuable orange.
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	A high voltage current was coming dangerously close to shooting from Mikoto’s fingertips, but she desperately restrained herself.		A high voltage current was coming dangerously close to shooting from Mikoto’s fingertips, but she desperately restrained herself.

	“But there’s someone else who it could have been. After all, I had not heard the story of the very valuable orange until yesterday when I came to this city. That was when I first heard it from someone named Setali S Skinikia.”		“But there’s someone else who it could have been. After all, I had not heard the story of the very valuable orange until yesterday when I came to this city. That was when I first heard it from someone named Setali S. Skinikia.”

	“…!?”		“…!?”