Toaru Majutsu no Index:Railgun Chapter4 - Revision history

MarioLuigi0404: added images

2022-08-10T17:40:46Z

added images

← Older revision		Revision as of 17:40, 10 August 2022
Line 1:		Line 1:
	==Chapter 4: Misaka Mikoto and the Death of Class==		==Chapter 4: Misaka Mikoto and the Death of Class==
			[[Image:Railgun_BW8.png\|thumb]]

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===
Line 912:		Line 913:

	“Hee hee. You must be Hoatzin-san☆ I’m Canary-san’s friend.”		“Hee hee. You must be Hoatzin-san☆ I’m Canary-san’s friend.”

			[[Image:Railgun_BW9.png\|thumb]]


	Her heart leapt in her chest.		Her heart leapt in her chest.
Line 1,246:		Line 1,250:

	The agitator grinned and slammed the butt of the shaft against the roof.		The agitator grinned and slammed the butt of the shaft against the roof.

			[[Image:Railgun_BW10.png\|thumb]]


	She looked to be the same age as Mikoto or a year older.		She looked to be the same age as Mikoto or a year older.
Line 1,682:		Line 1,689:

	In the center of the square roof, a girl with gorgeous ringlets was crouched on one knee, presumably the pose she had landed in. Electricity crackled through her hair, but it was being ''used'' in a very different way from Mikoto’s.		In the center of the square roof, a girl with gorgeous ringlets was crouched on one knee, presumably the pose she had landed in. Electricity crackled through her hair, but it was being ''used'' in a very different way from Mikoto’s.

			[[Image:Railgun_BW11.png\|thumb]]


	She was the second in command of the Shokuhou Clique, the largest clique in Tokiwadai.		She was the second in command of the Shokuhou Clique, the largest clique in Tokiwadai.
Line 2,670:		Line 2,680:

	An explosive boom and a shockwave shook the entire School Garden as it floated 5000m above the ground.		An explosive boom and a shockwave shook the entire School Garden as it floated 5000m above the ground.

			[[Image:Railgun_BW12.png\|thumb]]

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>
	{{Toaru_Nav\|prev=Toaru_Majutsu_no_Index:Railgun_Chapter3\|next=Toaru_Majutsu_no_Index:Railgun_Epilogue}}		{{Toaru_Nav\|prev=Toaru_Majutsu_no_Index:Railgun_Chapter3\|next=Toaru_Majutsu_no_Index:Railgun_Epilogue}}
	</noinclude>		</noinclude>

MarioLuigi0404: /* Part 19 */ typo "mange" -> "manage", "all it an do" -> "all it can do"

2022-06-26T20:14:32Z

Part 19: typo "mange" -> "manage", "all it an do" -> "all it can do"

← Older revision		Revision as of 20:14, 26 June 2022
Line 2,309:		Line 2,309:
	She had the power to slice an elephant in two if she wanted.		She had the power to slice an elephant in two if she wanted.

	“To be honest, I never cared about any of this good or evil nonsense. But the freedom to ignore all the rules did appeal to me. I never did ~~mange~~ to track down one legend spoken of in this city.”		“To be honest, I never cared about any of this good or evil nonsense. But the freedom to ignore all the rules did appeal to me. I never did manage to track down one legend spoken of in this city.”

	“…?”		“…?”
Line 2,433:		Line 2,433:
	In fact, a girl was keeping up with her. The Tokiwadai student with the face of a super slow motion curse was moving at the same speed as her!?		In fact, a girl was keeping up with her. The Tokiwadai student with the face of a super slow motion curse was moving at the same speed as her!?

	“My power is Micro Dying. My, my. All it an do is kill mold, germs, bacteria, and any other microbe at a touch.”		“My power is Micro Dying. My, my. All it can do is kill mold, germs, bacteria, and any other microbe at a touch.”

	Renka didn’t see how that power would let her move at subsonic speed.		Renka didn’t see how that power would let her move at subsonic speed.

MarioLuigi0404: typo corrections

2022-06-26T20:10:23Z

typo corrections

← Older revision		Revision as of 20:10, 26 June 2022
Line 1,433:		Line 1,433:
	The rules would change once Resanerié Sadis Dialine started fighting as an esper. Mikoto had no way of preventing it.		The rules would change once Resanerié Sadis Dialine started fighting as an esper. Mikoto had no way of preventing it.

	“Now, that should we be enough of a warmup.”		“Now, that should be enough of a warmup.”

	Resanerié licked her lips and squeezed her halberd tight.		Resanerié licked her lips and squeezed her halberd tight.
Line 2,263:		Line 2,263:
	“I-it is not!! There are plenty of other possibilities!”		“I-it is not!! There are plenty of other possibilities!”

	She must have wanted to keep her power a secret, but attempting camouflage after your opponent had already grown suspicious was a waste of time.		She must have wanted to keep her power a secret, but attempting to camouflage after your opponent had already grown suspicious was a waste of time.

	Shirai Kuroko didn’t quite understand since the identity of her power was plainly obvious whenever she used it, but there were people who preferred to keep the identity of their power a secret.		Shirai Kuroko didn’t quite understand since the identity of her power was plainly obvious whenever she used it, but there were people who preferred to keep the identity of their power a secret.

Js06 at 14:17, 20 June 2022

2022-06-20T14:17:12Z

Show changes

SandyBoi: Undo revision 576591 by Rxls (talk)

2022-06-20T08:51:34Z

Undo revision 576591 by Rxls (talk)

← Older revision		Revision as of 08:51, 20 June 2022
Line 380:		Line 380:
	2. Kanaria’s disappearance had everything to do with the suspicious circumstances. For example, she had tried to reveal some of the data theft common during entrance exam season and got herself into trouble.		2. Kanaria’s disappearance had everything to do with the suspicious circumstances. For example, she had tried to reveal some of the data theft common during entrance exam season and got herself into trouble.

	3. Yugure ~~Kanari~~ herself was stealing secret information.		3. Yugure Kanaria herself was stealing secret information.

	Mikoto sighed.		Mikoto sighed.
Line 660:		Line 660:
	Even without directly finding an assailant or victim, the evidence and situation they found told them a survivor had likely been sealed in by a third party. A 2m square of metal more than 3cm thick was too heavy for a 2nd year in middle school to lift, so closing that cover from outside was enough to charge the third party with at least abduction or confinement. In the worst case, their intent may have been to let her starve to death down there. It could be hard to tell without a single drop of blood to be found, but this was a legitimate(?) crime that could have taken a life.		Even without directly finding an assailant or victim, the evidence and situation they found told them a survivor had likely been sealed in by a third party. A 2m square of metal more than 3cm thick was too heavy for a 2nd year in middle school to lift, so closing that cover from outside was enough to charge the third party with at least abduction or confinement. In the worst case, their intent may have been to let her starve to death down there. It could be hard to tell without a single drop of blood to be found, but this was a legitimate(?) crime that could have taken a life.

	And when faced with something like that, the correct course of action was to call Anti-Skill and get the adults’ help. There was no reason to rush in and act like this was a single player game. If Mikoto’s group got wiped out without letting anyone know, then no one would be able to rescue Yugure ~~Kanari~~ from that underground space.		And when faced with something like that, the correct course of action was to call Anti-Skill and get the adults’ help. There was no reason to rush in and act like this was a single player game. If Mikoto’s group got wiped out without letting anyone know, then no one would be able to rescue Yugure Kanaria from that underground space.

	Saten complained, but then something occurred to her.		Saten complained, but then something occurred to her.
Line 818:		Line 818:
	It was possible Mikoto had misheard.		It was possible Mikoto had misheard.

	But it had sounded an awful lot like Yugure ~~Kanari~~ had said something about a factory?		But it had sounded an awful lot like Yugure Kanaria had said something about a factory?

	“It was a factory, Osprey-chan<ref>Kanaria refers to Mikoto as Osprey because Misaka is sort of similar to Misago, the Japanese word for the osprey.</ref>. This place was a factory.”		“It was a factory, Osprey-chan<ref>Kanaria refers to Mikoto as Osprey because Misaka is sort of similar to Misago, the Japanese word for the osprey.</ref>. This place was a factory.”

Rxls: Undo revision 576590 by SandyBoi (talk)

2022-06-20T01:11:20Z

Undo revision 576590 by SandyBoi (talk)

← Older revision		Revision as of 01:11, 20 June 2022
Line 380:		Line 380:
	2. Kanaria’s disappearance had everything to do with the suspicious circumstances. For example, she had tried to reveal some of the data theft common during entrance exam season and got herself into trouble.		2. Kanaria’s disappearance had everything to do with the suspicious circumstances. For example, she had tried to reveal some of the data theft common during entrance exam season and got herself into trouble.

	3. Yugure ~~Kanaria~~ herself was stealing secret information.		3. Yugure Kanari herself was stealing secret information.

	Mikoto sighed.		Mikoto sighed.
Line 660:		Line 660:
	Even without directly finding an assailant or victim, the evidence and situation they found told them a survivor had likely been sealed in by a third party. A 2m square of metal more than 3cm thick was too heavy for a 2nd year in middle school to lift, so closing that cover from outside was enough to charge the third party with at least abduction or confinement. In the worst case, their intent may have been to let her starve to death down there. It could be hard to tell without a single drop of blood to be found, but this was a legitimate(?) crime that could have taken a life.		Even without directly finding an assailant or victim, the evidence and situation they found told them a survivor had likely been sealed in by a third party. A 2m square of metal more than 3cm thick was too heavy for a 2nd year in middle school to lift, so closing that cover from outside was enough to charge the third party with at least abduction or confinement. In the worst case, their intent may have been to let her starve to death down there. It could be hard to tell without a single drop of blood to be found, but this was a legitimate(?) crime that could have taken a life.

	And when faced with something like that, the correct course of action was to call Anti-Skill and get the adults’ help. There was no reason to rush in and act like this was a single player game. If Mikoto’s group got wiped out without letting anyone know, then no one would be able to rescue Yugure ~~Kanaria~~ from that underground space.		And when faced with something like that, the correct course of action was to call Anti-Skill and get the adults’ help. There was no reason to rush in and act like this was a single player game. If Mikoto’s group got wiped out without letting anyone know, then no one would be able to rescue Yugure Kanari from that underground space.

	Saten complained, but then something occurred to her.		Saten complained, but then something occurred to her.
Line 818:		Line 818:
	It was possible Mikoto had misheard.		It was possible Mikoto had misheard.

	But it had sounded an awful lot like Yugure ~~Kanaria~~ had said something about a factory?		But it had sounded an awful lot like Yugure Kanari had said something about a factory?

	“It was a factory, Osprey-chan<ref>Kanaria refers to Mikoto as Osprey because Misaka is sort of similar to Misago, the Japanese word for the osprey.</ref>. This place was a factory.”		“It was a factory, Osprey-chan<ref>Kanaria refers to Mikoto as Osprey because Misaka is sort of similar to Misago, the Japanese word for the osprey.</ref>. This place was a factory.”

SandyBoi: Undo revision 576589 by Rxls (talk)

2022-06-19T23:45:48Z

Undo revision 576589 by Rxls (talk)

← Older revision		Revision as of 23:45, 19 June 2022
Line 380:		Line 380:
	2. Kanaria’s disappearance had everything to do with the suspicious circumstances. For example, she had tried to reveal some of the data theft common during entrance exam season and got herself into trouble.		2. Kanaria’s disappearance had everything to do with the suspicious circumstances. For example, she had tried to reveal some of the data theft common during entrance exam season and got herself into trouble.

	3. Yugure ~~Kanari~~ herself was stealing secret information.		3. Yugure Kanaria herself was stealing secret information.

	Mikoto sighed.		Mikoto sighed.
Line 660:		Line 660:
	Even without directly finding an assailant or victim, the evidence and situation they found told them a survivor had likely been sealed in by a third party. A 2m square of metal more than 3cm thick was too heavy for a 2nd year in middle school to lift, so closing that cover from outside was enough to charge the third party with at least abduction or confinement. In the worst case, their intent may have been to let her starve to death down there. It could be hard to tell without a single drop of blood to be found, but this was a legitimate(?) crime that could have taken a life.		Even without directly finding an assailant or victim, the evidence and situation they found told them a survivor had likely been sealed in by a third party. A 2m square of metal more than 3cm thick was too heavy for a 2nd year in middle school to lift, so closing that cover from outside was enough to charge the third party with at least abduction or confinement. In the worst case, their intent may have been to let her starve to death down there. It could be hard to tell without a single drop of blood to be found, but this was a legitimate(?) crime that could have taken a life.

	And when faced with something like that, the correct course of action was to call Anti-Skill and get the adults’ help. There was no reason to rush in and act like this was a single player game. If Mikoto’s group got wiped out without letting anyone know, then no one would be able to rescue Yugure ~~Kanari~~ from that underground space.		And when faced with something like that, the correct course of action was to call Anti-Skill and get the adults’ help. There was no reason to rush in and act like this was a single player game. If Mikoto’s group got wiped out without letting anyone know, then no one would be able to rescue Yugure Kanaria from that underground space.

	Saten complained, but then something occurred to her.		Saten complained, but then something occurred to her.
Line 818:		Line 818:
	It was possible Mikoto had misheard.		It was possible Mikoto had misheard.

	But it had sounded an awful lot like Yugure ~~Kanari~~ had said something about a factory?		But it had sounded an awful lot like Yugure Kanaria had said something about a factory?

	“It was a factory, Osprey-chan<ref>Kanaria refers to Mikoto as Osprey because Misaka is sort of similar to Misago, the Japanese word for the osprey.</ref>. This place was a factory.”		“It was a factory, Osprey-chan<ref>Kanaria refers to Mikoto as Osprey because Misaka is sort of similar to Misago, the Japanese word for the osprey.</ref>. This place was a factory.”

Rxls: Undo revision 576586 by MarioLuigi0404 (talk)

2022-06-19T12:10:34Z

Undo revision 576586 by MarioLuigi0404 (talk)

← Older revision		Revision as of 12:10, 19 June 2022
Line 380:		Line 380:
	2. Kanaria’s disappearance had everything to do with the suspicious circumstances. For example, she had tried to reveal some of the data theft common during entrance exam season and got herself into trouble.		2. Kanaria’s disappearance had everything to do with the suspicious circumstances. For example, she had tried to reveal some of the data theft common during entrance exam season and got herself into trouble.

	3. Yugure ~~Kanaria~~ herself was stealing secret information.		3. Yugure Kanari herself was stealing secret information.

	Mikoto sighed.		Mikoto sighed.
Line 660:		Line 660:
	Even without directly finding an assailant or victim, the evidence and situation they found told them a survivor had likely been sealed in by a third party. A 2m square of metal more than 3cm thick was too heavy for a 2nd year in middle school to lift, so closing that cover from outside was enough to charge the third party with at least abduction or confinement. In the worst case, their intent may have been to let her starve to death down there. It could be hard to tell without a single drop of blood to be found, but this was a legitimate(?) crime that could have taken a life.		Even without directly finding an assailant or victim, the evidence and situation they found told them a survivor had likely been sealed in by a third party. A 2m square of metal more than 3cm thick was too heavy for a 2nd year in middle school to lift, so closing that cover from outside was enough to charge the third party with at least abduction or confinement. In the worst case, their intent may have been to let her starve to death down there. It could be hard to tell without a single drop of blood to be found, but this was a legitimate(?) crime that could have taken a life.

	And when faced with something like that, the correct course of action was to call Anti-Skill and get the adults’ help. There was no reason to rush in and act like this was a single player game. If Mikoto’s group got wiped out without letting anyone know, then no one would be able to rescue Yugure ~~Kanaria~~ from that underground space.		And when faced with something like that, the correct course of action was to call Anti-Skill and get the adults’ help. There was no reason to rush in and act like this was a single player game. If Mikoto’s group got wiped out without letting anyone know, then no one would be able to rescue Yugure Kanari from that underground space.

	Saten complained, but then something occurred to her.		Saten complained, but then something occurred to her.
Line 818:		Line 818:
	It was possible Mikoto had misheard.		It was possible Mikoto had misheard.

	But it had sounded an awful lot like Yugure ~~Kanaria~~ had said something about a factory?		But it had sounded an awful lot like Yugure Kanari had said something about a factory?

	“It was a factory, Osprey-chan<ref>Kanaria refers to Mikoto as Osprey because Misaka is sort of similar to Misago, the Japanese word for the osprey.</ref>. This place was a factory.”		“It was a factory, Osprey-chan<ref>Kanaria refers to Mikoto as Osprey because Misaka is sort of similar to Misago, the Japanese word for the osprey.</ref>. This place was a factory.”

MarioLuigi0404: Fixed misspellings of name "Kanaria"

2022-06-19T09:10:53Z

Fixed misspellings of name "Kanaria"

← Older revision		Revision as of 09:10, 19 June 2022
Line 380:		Line 380:
	2. Kanaria’s disappearance had everything to do with the suspicious circumstances. For example, she had tried to reveal some of the data theft common during entrance exam season and got herself into trouble.		2. Kanaria’s disappearance had everything to do with the suspicious circumstances. For example, she had tried to reveal some of the data theft common during entrance exam season and got herself into trouble.

	3. Yugure ~~Kanari~~ herself was stealing secret information.		3. Yugure Kanaria herself was stealing secret information.

	Mikoto sighed.		Mikoto sighed.
Line 660:		Line 660:
	Even without directly finding an assailant or victim, the evidence and situation they found told them a survivor had likely been sealed in by a third party. A 2m square of metal more than 3cm thick was too heavy for a 2nd year in middle school to lift, so closing that cover from outside was enough to charge the third party with at least abduction or confinement. In the worst case, their intent may have been to let her starve to death down there. It could be hard to tell without a single drop of blood to be found, but this was a legitimate(?) crime that could have taken a life.		Even without directly finding an assailant or victim, the evidence and situation they found told them a survivor had likely been sealed in by a third party. A 2m square of metal more than 3cm thick was too heavy for a 2nd year in middle school to lift, so closing that cover from outside was enough to charge the third party with at least abduction or confinement. In the worst case, their intent may have been to let her starve to death down there. It could be hard to tell without a single drop of blood to be found, but this was a legitimate(?) crime that could have taken a life.

	And when faced with something like that, the correct course of action was to call Anti-Skill and get the adults’ help. There was no reason to rush in and act like this was a single player game. If Mikoto’s group got wiped out without letting anyone know, then no one would be able to rescue Yugure ~~Kanari~~ from that underground space.		And when faced with something like that, the correct course of action was to call Anti-Skill and get the adults’ help. There was no reason to rush in and act like this was a single player game. If Mikoto’s group got wiped out without letting anyone know, then no one would be able to rescue Yugure Kanaria from that underground space.

	Saten complained, but then something occurred to her.		Saten complained, but then something occurred to her.
Line 818:		Line 818:
	It was possible Mikoto had misheard.		It was possible Mikoto had misheard.

	But it had sounded an awful lot like Yugure ~~Kanari~~ had said something about a factory?		But it had sounded an awful lot like Yugure Kanaria had said something about a factory?

	“It was a factory, Osprey-chan<ref>Kanaria refers to Mikoto as Osprey because Misaka is sort of similar to Misago, the Japanese word for the osprey.</ref>. This place was a factory.”		“It was a factory, Osprey-chan<ref>Kanaria refers to Mikoto as Osprey because Misaka is sort of similar to Misago, the Japanese word for the osprey.</ref>. This place was a factory.”

Js06 at 01:39, 19 June 2022

2022-06-19T01:39:08Z

Show changes