Toaru Majutsu no Index:Toaru Jihanki no Fanfare - Revision history

OH&S at 06:02, 30 March 2014

2014-03-30T06:02:03Z

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2013-09-16T23:57:10Z

consistency and AE

2013-08-10T02:07:32Z

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2012-01-10T03:53:13Z

Epilogue

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	''There's a rumour that her ability far exceeds a human's, even those of those Skill-Outs Kurozuma and Komaba!''		''There's a rumour that her ability far exceeds a human's, even those of those Skill-Outs Kurozuma and Komaba!''

	''There's also a rumour that even though she's able to knock down two stars at one dog, she's unexpectedly naive when it comes to love. Today, let's talk about this naive yet cold-blooded killing ~~machine-~~'' BEEP ''Hm? Wh... wron...? The bro... ast... state...''		''There's also a rumour that even though she's able to knock down two stars at one dog, she's unexpectedly naive when it comes to love. Today, let's talk about this naive yet cold-blooded killing machine—'' BEEP ''Hm? Wh... wron...? The bro... ast... state...''

	Suddenly, what sounded like a sandstorm echoed throughout the network. Hamazura Shiage muttered in front of the computer.		Suddenly, what sounded like a sandstorm echoed throughout the network. Hamazura Shiage muttered in front of the computer.

2012-01-10T03:52:04Z

Main Story: Toaru Jihanki no Sonzai Shoumei by Narita Ryohgo

2012-01-10T03:38:30Z

Prologue

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	That pirated broadcast was directly aired through all sorts of channels in all sorts of places like a cat-and-mouse game, and even in Academy City, it can be considered a form of entertainment.		That pirated broadcast was directly aired through all sorts of channels in all sorts of places like a cat-and-mouse game, and even in Academy City, it can be considered a form of entertainment.

	The Skill-Outs were divided into many groups, and though Hamazura's a member of a larger group, he didn't even have a bit of power at all. Though he had the indecent talent of stealing cars, in Academy City, he—rather, ~~they were~~ just treated completely as Level 0s.		The Skill-Outs were divided into many groups, and though Hamazura's a member of a larger group, he didn't even have a bit of power at all. Though he had the indecent talent of stealing cars, in Academy City, he—rather, they—were just treated completely as Level 0s.

	Hamazura cut off the broadcast link as he praised his leader's name. As he said that, the surrounding Level 0s all nodded their heads and laughed as they agreed with Hamazura.		Hamazura cut off the broadcast link as he praised his leader's name. As he said that, the surrounding Level 0s all nodded their heads and laughed as they agreed with Hamazura.

2012-01-10T03:36:17Z

Prologue

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	That pirated broadcast was directly aired through all sorts of channels in all sorts of places like a cat-and-mouse game, and even in Academy City, it can be considered a form of entertainment.		That pirated broadcast was directly aired through all sorts of channels in all sorts of places like a cat-and-mouse game, and even in Academy City, it can be considered a form of entertainment.

	The Skill-Outs were divided into many groups, and though Hamazura's a member of a larger group, he didn't even have a bit of power at all. Though he had the indecent talent of stealing cars, in Academy City, ~~he- rather~~, they were just treated completely as Level 0s.		The Skill-Outs were divided into many groups, and though Hamazura's a member of a larger group, he didn't even have a bit of power at all. Though he had the indecent talent of stealing cars, in Academy City, he—rather, they were just treated completely as Level 0s.

	Hamazura cut off the broadcast link as he praised his leader's name. As he said that, the surrounding Level 0s all nodded their heads and laughed as they agreed with Hamazura.		Hamazura cut off the broadcast link as he praised his leader's name. As he said that, the surrounding Level 0s all nodded their heads and laughed as they agreed with Hamazura.

2012-01-10T03:35:18Z

Prologue

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	Rewind to ten seconds back... In a certain dorm, a girl was listening to that same pirated broadcast, and clicked her tongue in disgust.		Rewind to ten seconds back... In a certain dorm, a girl was listening to that same pirated broadcast, and clicked her tongue in disgust.

	''What's there to talk about a bunch of pitiful people who've had drugs and electric signals injected into their bodies and still can't even bend a spoon? They're ~~just-~~''<!--Tact: Same line as earlier, but cut short.-->		''What's there to talk about a bunch of pitiful people who've had drugs and electric signals injected into their bodies and still can't even bend a spoon? They're just—''<!--Tact: Same line as earlier, but cut short.-->

	The girl cut the broadcast here, and inside the dark dormitory room, one can only hear the sound of the computer being used.		The girl cut the broadcast here, and inside the dark dormitory room, one can only hear the sound of the computer being used.

2012-01-10T03:34:05Z

Main Story: Toaru Jihanki no Sonzai Shoumei by Narita Ryohgo

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	"WHO ARE THE LEVEL 5S!?"		"WHO ARE THE LEVEL 5S!?"

	"Seems like the ~~3rd~~ and the ~~7th~~."		"Seems like the Third and the Seventh."

	"MISAKA AND SOGIITA!?"		"MISAKA AND SOGIITA!?"
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	"So Nayuta-chan's AIM diffusion field-defense prosthetics are 47% damaged?"		"So Nayuta-chan's AIM diffusion field-defense prosthetics are 47% damaged?"

	"It seems like she took the ~~3rd~~'s electric attacks."		"It seems like she took the Third's electric attacks."

	"Strengthening and adjustments will likely take ten days."		"Strengthening and adjustments will likely take ten days."
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	"It actually can work even after such an electric shock."		"It actually can work even after such an electric shock."

	The levelled trees, the volcanic ~~crater–like~~ stone floor that was ripped off... Despite facing such a devastating situation, the vending machine continued to work. Sogiita Gunha smiled and said,		The levelled trees, the volcanic crater-like stone floor that was ripped off... Despite facing such a devastating situation, the vending machine continued to work. Sogiita Gunha smiled and said,

	"You're rather gutsy."		"You're rather gutsy."