Tsukumodo:Volume 1 Coincidence - Revision history

EusthEnoptEron: Setsusu -> Settsu (Why didn't anybody notice, goddammit?)

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Setsusu -> Settsu (Why didn't anybody notice, goddammit?)

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	Incidentally, the Tsukumodo Antique Shop apparently had a sister shop. The "FAKE" was probably appended to distinguish them.		Incidentally, the Tsukumodo Antique Shop apparently had a sister shop. The "FAKE" was probably appended to distinguish them.

	"By the way, where's Towako-san?" I asked because I didn't see the owner, Towako ~~Setsutsu~~, anywhere.		"By the way, where's Towako-san?" I asked because I didn't see the owner, Towako Settsu, anywhere.

	"Making purchases. She said she won't be back for a week."		"Making purchases. She said she won't be back for a week."

EusthEnoptEron at 21:25, 22 July 2014

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	"That's only because she stopped by chance..."		"That's only because she stopped by chance..."

	"There's still more. Atobe's reactions to the accidents differed between hers and those that happened by chance. You always reacted the same. You weren't surprised by the pillow attack, nor by the concrete chunk. ~~But~~ you ''were'' startled by a lousy plastic bag."		"There's still more. Atobe's reactions to the accidents differed between hers and those that happened by chance. You always reacted the same. You weren't surprised by the pillow attack, nor by the concrete chunk. Even though you ''were'' startled by a lousy plastic bag."

	"I was ~~simply <u>too</u> surprised, you know~~..."		"That's because I was completely taken by surprise and couldn't even react..."

	"~~You~~ were quite surprised by the explosion, right?"		"But you were quite surprised by the truck explosion, right?"

	"Well, ~~figures~~..."		"Well, of course..."

	"~~And~~ an explosion ~~doesn't~~ surprise ~~you <u>too</u> much, as you put it~~?"		"So an explosion does not completely take you by surprise?"

	"..."		"..."

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2012-12-04T22:40:45Z

(_) -> ''_''

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Grrarr at 00:35, 22 August 2012

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EusthEnoptEron at 15:29, 19 August 2012

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	I hurriedly used my outstretched leg to leap back. The crumbling chunk of concrete brushed my hair before crashing into the ground.		I hurriedly used my outstretched leg to leap back. The crumbling chunk of concrete brushed my hair before crashing into the ground.

	(That was close! That wouldn't have caused just ~~a minor~~ injury if it had hit my head!)		(That was close! That wouldn't have caused just an injury if it had hit my head!)

	I unconsciously looked at Atobe, thinking that she would bring up the cursed stone again, but she wasn't about to add some comments at all. Quite the contrary—she was gazing at me aghast with a pale face. Most likely it was her who had screamed up just now.		I unconsciously looked at Atobe, thinking that she would bring up the cursed stone again, but she wasn't about to add some comments at all. Quite the contrary—she was gazing at me aghast with a pale face. Most likely it was her who had screamed up just now.

Idiffer at 11:55, 19 August 2012

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	I hurriedly used my outstretched leg to leap back. The crumbling chunk of concrete brushed my hair before crashing into the ground.		I hurriedly used my outstretched leg to leap back. The crumbling chunk of concrete brushed my hair before crashing into the ground.

	(That was close! That wouldn't have caused just a ~~serious~~ injury if it had hit my head!)		(That was close! That wouldn't have caused just a minor injury if it had hit my head!)

	I unconsciously looked at Atobe, thinking that she would bring up the cursed stone again, but she wasn't about to add some comments at all. Quite the contrary—she was gazing at me aghast with a pale face. Most likely it was her who had screamed up just now.		I unconsciously looked at Atobe, thinking that she would bring up the cursed stone again, but she wasn't about to add some comments at all. Quite the contrary—she was gazing at me aghast with a pale face. Most likely it was her who had screamed up just now.

EusthEnoptEron at 16:49, 3 August 2012

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	On the cover was a woman, all tarted up as they are around Shibuya, who gave a V-sign, showing the back of her hand, while smiling at the camera. ...I must agree that it's important to improve ourselves. It's bound to come to good use.		On the cover was a woman, all tarted up as they are around Shibuya, who gave a V-sign, showing the back of her hand, while smiling at the camera. ...I must agree that it's important to improve ourselves. It's bound to come to good use.

	And so, I ~~watched~~ her ~~fondly and said nothing~~<!-- it's ~~kinda a gaze like a mother watches over her child~~. -->~~. Not so fondly, though, that~~ I~~'d bother~~ to ~~tell~~ her ~~she's doing it wrong!~~<!-- I'm still not sold on this - please recheck translation. -ss --><!-- He's too lazy to tell her that she's reading the wrong book (it's obviously non-serious). In my understanding "feelings" would suggest that his romantic feelings (or something along these lines) would keep him back -EEE -->		And so, I silently wished her luck in her efforts<!-- mustn't sound too encouraging. Like "let's watch that little thing's (futile) efforts". --> and said nothing—''by no means'' was I just too lazy to make a caustic remark on her choice of book.<!-- I'm still not sold on this - please recheck translation. -ss --><!-- He's too lazy to tell her that she's reading the wrong book (it's obviously non-serious). In my understanding "feelings" would suggest that his romantic feelings (or something along these lines) would keep him back -EEE --><!-- Changed it again, because the meaning got kinda lost. I now tried to reproduce the meaning of the original as good as possible. -EEE -->

	"There's just too little to do..."		"There's just too little to do..."

Senile seinen at 02:50, 3 August 2012

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	On the cover was a woman, all tarted up as they are around Shibuya, who gave a V-sign, showing the back of her hand, while smiling at the camera. ...I must agree that it's important to improve ourselves. It's bound to come to good use.		On the cover was a woman, all tarted up as they are around Shibuya, who gave a V-sign, showing the back of her hand, while smiling at the camera. ...I must agree that it's important to improve ourselves. It's bound to come to good use.

	~~Hence~~, I ~~said nothing and~~ watched her fondly<!-- it's kinda a gaze like a mother watches over her child. -->. Not that I ~~couldn~~'t bother ~~telling~~ her ~~that~~ she's doing it wrong!<!-- I'm still not sold on this - please recheck translation. -ss --><!-- He's too lazy to tell her that she's reading the wrong book (it's obviously non-serious). In my understanding "feelings" would suggest that his romantic feelings (or something along these lines) would keep him back -EEE -->		And so, I watched her fondly and said nothing<!-- it's kinda a gaze like a mother watches over her child. -->. Not so fondly, though, that I'd bother to tell her she's doing it wrong!<!-- I'm still not sold on this - please recheck translation. -ss --><!-- He's too lazy to tell her that she's reading the wrong book (it's obviously non-serious). In my understanding "feelings" would suggest that his romantic feelings (or something along these lines) would keep him back -EEE -->

	"There's just too little to do..."		"There's just too little to do..."

EusthEnoptEron at 07:26, 2 August 2012

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	A door at the rear wall of the room connected the shop to a dwelling, whose ground floor consisted of a living room, a kitchen and a restroom. One floor higher, there were Saki and Towako-san's rooms, and a storage room.		A door at the rear wall of the room connected the shop to a dwelling, whose ground floor consisted of a living room, a kitchen and a restroom. One floor higher, there were Saki and Towako-san's rooms, and a storage room.

	Beyond the open door I spotted Saki in the living room, absorbed in a book, which, incidentally, was titled, "Be a Charming<!-- trendy?--> Shopgirl in Ten Easy Steps!"<!-- yes, very liberal, but I needed something that read like a self-help title in English. I almost went with 'the idiot's guide to becoming...' but that might get a BT a C&D, so I went with a title format that is old enough that it's not likely copyrighted. For the record: 'shopgirl' is exclusively EN-UK (and not especially complementary), but is transparent and concise, unlike 'retail specialist' or some other silliness. -ss -->		Beyond the open door I spotted Saki in the living room, absorbed in a book, which, incidentally, was titled, "Be a Charming<!-- trendy?--> Shopgirl in Ten Easy Steps!"<!-- yes, very liberal, but I needed something that read like a self-help title in English. I almost went with 'the idiot's guide to becoming...' but that might get a BT a C&D, so I went with a title format that is old enough that it's not likely copyrighted. For the record: 'shopgirl' is exclusively EN-UK (and not especially complementary), but is transparent and concise, unlike 'retail specialist' or some other silliness. -ss --><!-- That's _exactly_ what I was looking for. As for the shop girl: I see. If you find something that would be correct in EN-US as well, feel free to change it. The title just has to sound a bit loose / targeting the young folks -- as the picture suggests. -->

	On the cover was a woman, all tarted up as they are around Shibuya, who gave a V-sign, showing the back of her hand, while smiling at the camera. ...I must agree that it's important to improve ourselves. It's bound to come to good use.		On the cover was a woman, all tarted up as they are around Shibuya, who gave a V-sign, showing the back of her hand, while smiling at the camera. ...I must agree that it's important to improve ourselves. It's bound to come to good use.

	Hence, I said nothing and watched her fondly. Not that ~~my feelings would keep me from~~ telling her that she's doing it wrong!<!-- I'm still not sold on this - please recheck translation. -ss -->		Hence, I said nothing and watched her fondly<!-- it's kinda a gaze like a mother watches over her child. -->. Not that I couldn't bother telling her that she's doing it wrong!<!-- I'm still not sold on this - please recheck translation. -ss --><!-- He's too lazy to tell her that she's reading the wrong book (it's obviously non-serious). In my understanding "feelings" would suggest that his romantic feelings (or something along these lines) would keep him back -EEE -->

	"There's just too little to do..."		"There's just too little to do..."

Senile seinen at 02:14, 2 August 2012

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	Beyond the open door I spotted Saki in the living room, absorbed in a book, which, incidentally, was titled, "Be a Charming<!-- trendy?--> Shopgirl in Ten Easy Steps!"<!-- yes, very liberal, but I needed something that read like a self-help title in English. I almost went with 'the idiot's guide to becoming...' but that might get a BT a C&D, so I went with a title format that is old enough that it's not likely copyrighted. For the record: 'shopgirl' is exclusively EN-UK (and not especially complementary), but is transparent and concise, unlike 'retail specialist' or some other silliness. -ss -->		Beyond the open door I spotted Saki in the living room, absorbed in a book, which, incidentally, was titled, "Be a Charming<!-- trendy?--> Shopgirl in Ten Easy Steps!"<!-- yes, very liberal, but I needed something that read like a self-help title in English. I almost went with 'the idiot's guide to becoming...' but that might get a BT a C&D, so I went with a title format that is old enough that it's not likely copyrighted. For the record: 'shopgirl' is exclusively EN-UK (and not especially complementary), but is transparent and concise, unlike 'retail specialist' or some other silliness. -ss -->

	On the cover was a woman, all tarted up as they are around Shibuya, who gave a V-sign, showing the back of her hand, while smiling at the camera. ...It's important to improve ourselves. It's bound to come to good use.		On the cover was a woman, all tarted up as they are around Shibuya, who gave a V-sign, showing the back of her hand, while smiling at the camera. ...I must agree that it's important to improve ourselves. It's bound to come to good use.

	Hence, I said nothing and watched her fondly. Not that my feelings would keep me from telling her that she's doing it wrong!<!-- I'm still not sold on this - please recheck translation. -ss -->		Hence, I said nothing and watched her fondly. Not that my feelings would keep me from telling her that she's doing it wrong!<!-- I'm still not sold on this - please recheck translation. -ss -->