Tsukumodo:Volume 2 Make-Up - Revision history

Idiffer at 20:08, 30 October 2014

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	I immediately shut the door.		I immediately shut the door.

	Tokiya didn't recognize just because of some make-up, some new clothes and a different haircut.		Tokiya didn't recognize me just because of some make-up, some new clothes and a different haircut.

	Koumoto-san had indeed said he would turn me into a different person, and I'd welcomed that because I didn't want anyone to recognize me in the advertisement.		Koumoto-san had indeed said he would turn me into a different person, and I'd welcomed that because I didn't want anyone to recognize me in the advertisement.

EusthEnoptEron at 18:53, 29 October 2014

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Idiffer at 19:06, 27 October 2014

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	While looking at Saki's photos, I noticed that she was ~~wore~~ a shining pendant.		While looking at Saki's photos, I noticed that she was wearing a shining pendant.

	It was the very pendant I had once presented her with. That's why I became dead-sure that it was Saki... although I do admit that it's pathetic to recognize her by a pendant.		It was the very pendant I had once presented her with. That's why I became dead-sure that it was Saki... although I do admit that it's pathetic to recognize her by a pendant.

EusthEnoptEron at 10:09, 2 March 2013

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	I-I'm not talking about being praised of course, but the idea of having a concrete goal, since I've already started to get fed up with cosmetics. It's not like Tokiya were my boyfriend or that-certain-boy or anything, and I don't particularly want to be praised by him.</i>		I-I'm not talking about being praised of course, but the idea of having a concrete goal, since I've already started to get fed up with cosmetics. It's not like Tokiya were my boyfriend or that-certain-boy or anything, and I don't particularly want to be praised by him.</i>

	...But if I was honest, I was also a tiny little bit interested praise.		...But if I was honest, I was also a tiny little bit interested in praise.

	Even a girl like me is familiar with the desire that any girl conceives.		Even a girl like me is familiar with the desire that any girl conceives.

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	It was the very pendant I had once presented her with. That's why I became dead-sure that it was Saki... although I do admit that it's pathetic to recognize her by a pendant.		It was the very pendant I had once presented her with. That's why I became dead-sure that it was Saki... although I do admit that it's pathetic to recognize her by a pendant.

	At while after that incident, when it had settled down a bit, I asked her:		A while after that incident, when it had settled down a bit, I asked her:

	"By the way, why did you even start doing make-up?"		"By the way, why did you even start doing make-up?"

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	"D-Did you like it?"		"D-Did you like it?"

	"Why, yes. It ''loved'' it."		"Why, yes. I ''loved'' it."

	It seemed like this wasn't about simple "interest"; her face was expressionless as always, but her eyes weren't.		It seemed like this wasn't about simple "interest"; her face was expressionless as always, but her eyes weren't.

EusthEnoptEron at 10:13, 9 December 2012

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	That aside, Tokiya hasn't commented on my latest behavior.		That aside, Tokiya hasn't commented on my latest behavior.

	Sure, I'm only slightly using make-up right now, but there's no way he wouldn't notice. He must be feigning ignorance. He's quite the gentleman for not touching on the effort I'm making.		Sure, I'm only slightly using make-up right now, but there's no way he wouldn't notice. He must be feigning ignorance. He's quite the gentleman for not touching on the effort I'm making.<!-- No idea how to put it, but from what I understand, she means that "not bringing up a girl's hidden efforts (or whatever we call it)" is a virtue. -EEE -->

	Anyway, time to study while it's still my break!</i>		Anyway, time to study while it's still my break!</i>

EusthEnoptEron at 16:52, 8 December 2012

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	<i>...Let's take a look.		<i>...Let's take a look.

	N-Not that it bothered me that Tokiya hasn't said anything about my looks. It's purely out of academic interest<!-- wrong use? -->.<i>		N-Not that it bothered me that Tokiya hasn't said anything about my looks. It's purely out of academic interest<!-- wrong use? -->.</i>

	"Hey, Saki."		"Hey, Saki."

EusthEnoptEron at 16:50, 8 December 2012

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	No, don't rush things, girl.		No, don't rush things, girl.

	Besides, I would instantly give up should there ~~were~~ none.</i>		Besides, I would instantly give up should there be none.</i>

	I put the camera down again.		I put the camera down again.

EusthEnoptEron at 16:48, 8 December 2012

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	"Of the future..."		"Of the future..."

	"Aah, but there's a catch...," Tokiya said as he took a piece of the castella cake, and took a bite of it. "The picture only shows you how it ''would'' look after a certain period of time without taking account that it might get eaten like now."		"Aah, but there's a catch...," Tokiya said as he took a piece of the castella cake, and took a bite of it. "The picture only shows you how it ''would'' look after a certain period of time without taking into account that it might get eaten like now."

	"How much time would that be?"		"How much time would that be?"

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	It was about ten in the evening, and I was holding my head in font of the mirror and a bunch of cosmetic products while still in a slip dress I had put on after taking a bath.		It was about ten in the evening, and I was holding my head in font of the mirror and a bunch of cosmetic products while still in a slip dress I had put on after taking a bath.

	Supposedly, it is necessary do something about dry skin after bathing, but I didn't even know why my skin would be dry when I had just taken a bath. ~~In addition~~, toner and such ~~could supposedly~~ not only be put on, but ~~had~~ to be massaged in.		Supposedly, it is necessary do something about dry skin after bathing, but I didn't even know why my skin would be dry when I had just taken a bath. And supposedly, toner and such must not only be put on, but actually has to be massaged in.

	''Anyway, there's no use in sitting on my hands.''		''Anyway, there's no use in sitting on my hands.''
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	Discomposed I put the camera down.		Discomposed I put the camera down.

	...~~Someone else might not~~ have ~~noticed~~, but I was indeed discomposed; because I feared that the camera might be a Relic.		...No one would have been able to tell, but I was indeed discomposed; because I feared that the camera might be a Relic.

	Because of their special powers, it's impossible to predict what effect an unfamiliar Relict might have. Towako-san had the bad habit of just leaving Relics lying about from time to time.		Because of their special powers, it's impossible to predict what effect an unfamiliar Relict might have. Towako-san had the bad habit of just leaving Relics lying about from time to time.
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	The article contained an in-depth introduction to make-up as well as a number of handy tips, and came with a comic showing a man with heart-eyes praising a woman to the skies.		The article contained an in-depth introduction to make-up as well as a number of handy tips, and came with a comic showing a man with heart-eyes praising a woman to the skies.

	Inspired by that, I tried imagining Tokiya calling me pretty.		Inspired by that comic, I tried imagining Tokiya calling me pretty.

	......		......
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	"N-No, never mind."		"N-No, never mind."

	While something still seemed to be on her tongue, Saki went to the kitchen to adjust the stove~~-plate~~ without saying anything.		While something still seemed to be on her tongue, Saki went to the kitchen to adjust the heat of the stove without saying anything.

	"She sure is acting strange today."		"She sure is acting strange today."
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	While applying make-up, I made up my mind.		While applying make-up, I made up my mind.

	''It's time for my secret weapon! Even though I may have sealed it ~~away~~ because of its difficulty level...''		''It's time for my secret weapon! Even though I may have sealed it because of its difficulty level...''

	I put away the magazine I had been reading so far, and took a different book out of the depths of my book shelf.		I put away the magazine I had been reading so far, and took a different book out of the depths of my book shelf.