Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 12 Chapter 1 - Revision history

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	Having changed, she was wearing her usual uniform instead of a yukata.		Having changed, she was wearing her usual uniform instead of a yukata.

	What on earth was happening? I looked ~~waround~~ then noticed Ariella sitting on the chair next to the bed.		What on earth was happening? I looked around then noticed Ariella sitting on the chair next to the bed.

	Having taken over Iris' seat, Ariella had been watching the sleeping Mitsuki the whole time.		Having taken over Iris' seat, Ariella had been watching the sleeping Mitsuki the whole time.

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	"—Thanks."		"—Thanks."

	I gripped Shion's hand in return then looked my silent little sister—Mitsuki.		I gripped Shion's hand in return then looked at my silent little sister—Mitsuki.

	"Mitsuki, umm..."		"Mitsuki, umm..."

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	It was the same when "Blue" Hekatonkheir approached our town.		It was the same when "Blue" Hekatonkheir approached our town.

	Mitsuki went alone to stand before the dragon. I followed only because I worried about her. To fight ~~Hekankheir—Had~~ Mitsuki not spelled it out, such a notion would never had occurred to me.		Mitsuki went alone to stand before the dragon. I followed only because I worried about her. To fight Hekatonkheir—Had Mitsuki not spelled it out, such a notion would never had occurred to me.

	Watching that delicate silhouette of hers from behind... Challenging a dragon hundreds, no, thousands of times bigger than herself, I could never forget that image.		Watching that delicate silhouette of hers from behind... Challenging a dragon hundreds, no, thousands of times bigger than herself, I could never forget that image.

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	However... Strangely, my body felt heavy.		However... Strangely, my body felt heavy.

	As for where this weight came from, I found ou as soon as I opened my eyes, greeted by the sight before me.		As for where this weight came from, I found out as soon as I opened my eyes, greeted by the sight before me.

	"Gu..."		"Gu..."

Belatkuro at 15:52, 13 September 2016

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	'Indeed... In any case, all of you need to look at this.'		'Indeed... In any case, all of you need to look at this.'

	After she said that, the screen changed. A towering black dome under a blue sky was shown on my terminal. Since there were no objects in view for reference, I could not estimate its ~~sisze~~, but I already knew that this was a gigantic object.		After she said that, the screen changed. A towering black dome under a blue sky was shown on my terminal. Since there were no objects in view for reference, I could not estimate its size, but I already knew that this was a gigantic object.

	This was because it was completely unreflective and lacked three dimensionality in appearance. It seemed like a hole floating amid the surrounding scenery, completely a deep abyss of darkness... This reminded me of the "darkness" attempting to devour Mitsuki and a chill ran through my body.		This was because it was completely unreflective and lacked three dimensionality in appearance. It seemed like a hole floating amid the surrounding scenery, completely a deep abyss of darkness... This reminded me of the "darkness" attempting to devour Mitsuki and a chill ran through my body.
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	'In order to protect the homelands for these maidens, the Ds, to return to, I have accepted NIFL's request as Midgard's top command. Considering the links between this and the ninth calamity reported earlier, as well as "Catastrophe," you are the only ones capable of taking on this mission. Although it pains my heart to send you to a dangerous battlefield again... I hope all of you will aid in this endeavor.'		'In order to protect the homelands for these maidens, the Ds, to return to, I have accepted NIFL's request as Midgard's top command. Considering the links between this and the ninth calamity reported earlier, as well as "Catastrophe," you are the only ones capable of taking on this mission. Although it pains my heart to send you to a dangerous battlefield again... I hope all of you will aid in this endeavor.'

	"Of ~~cours—Then~~ what exactly do we have to do?"		"Of course—Then what exactly do we have to do?"

	I replied instantly and asked Charlotte for our mission. In the same room as me, Ariella and Ren also nodded without hesitation.		I replied instantly and asked Charlotte for our mission. In the same room as me, Ariella and Ren also nodded without hesitation.

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2016-09-13T10:56:47Z

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Belatkuro at 14:55, 11 September 2016

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Entropy: /* Part 2 */

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	After I called her name, Iris took her eyes off Mitsuki, but asked while still keeping the same posture.		After I called her name, Iris took her eyes off Mitsuki, but asked while still keeping the same posture.

	"Mitsuki asked me. She wanted me to tell her the answer to the question as to who was the dearest to me. ~~Rather than a choiceshe~~ only hoped for me to make a ~~decision—That~~ was the idea."		"Mitsuki asked me. She wanted me to tell her the answer to the question as to who was the dearest to me. She only hoped for me to make a decision rather than a choice—That was the idea."

	Without touching upon explanations about the ninth dragon, I talked about "my personal issue."		Without touching upon explanations about the ninth dragon, I talked about "my personal issue."

Entropy at 00:51, 11 September 2016

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	Dressed in yukatas, Iris and Tia inquired with puzzled voices.		Dressed in yukatas, Iris and Tia inquired with puzzled voices.

	Midgard's principal, Charlotte, had organized a fireworks party. The staff had opened stalls for ~~everyoen~~ to enjoy, but something had just happened. It was only natural for the girls to be confused by the pained expression on my face.		Midgard's principal, Charlotte, had organized a fireworks party. The staff had opened stalls for everyone to enjoy, but something had just happened. It was only natural for the girls to be confused by the pained expression on my face.

	"Mononobe-kun, you clearly said you were going to meet up with us after talking to Mitsuki... But you never came."		"Mononobe-kun, you clearly said you were going to meet up with us after talking to Mitsuki... But you never came."
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	They were looking in surprise at Mitsuki who was sleeping on the bed and Vritra and me, who were standing on the side. Since I had suddenly called everyone over on my portable terminal, this was only to be expected. I still had not told them the situation.		They were looking in surprise at Mitsuki who was sleeping on the bed and Vritra and me, who were standing on the side. Since I had suddenly called everyone over on my portable terminal, this was only to be expected. I still had not told them the situation.

	Principal Charlotte was apparently occupied so ~~tshe~~ sent Mica-san to come on her behalf.		Principal Charlotte was apparently occupied so she sent Mica-san to come on her behalf.

	Currently, a heavy silence shrouded the room. There was no sound outside the dorm either.		Currently, a heavy silence shrouded the room. There was no sound outside the dorm either.
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	"Yuu..."		"Yuu..."

	Tia called my name uneasily, probably understanding the gravity of the situation. The others also waited ~~queitly~~ for me to continue.		Tia called my name uneasily, probably understanding the gravity of the situation. The others also waited quietly for me to continue.

	To reassure Tia, I nodded and began to speak.		To reassure Tia, I nodded and began to speak.
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	Thus, after Firill and the other girls left the room, Shinomiya-sensei and Mica-san also walked to the door.		Thus, after Firill and the other girls left the room, Shinomiya-sensei and Mica-san also walked to the door.

	"Mononobe Yuu, we shall go report the situation to the ~~principle~~. Mononobe Mitsuki is supposed to be sent underground for isolation and detailed examination... However, after analyzing what was said just now, we conclude that it is not the time to separate you two. For the purpose of isolation, this dormitory is already capable of serving the same function. Please do not go out until we contact you and watch over her well."		"Mononobe Yuu, we shall go report the situation to the principal. Mononobe Mitsuki is supposed to be sent underground for isolation and detailed examination... However, after analyzing what was said just now, we conclude that it is not the time to separate you two. For the purpose of isolation, this dormitory is already capable of serving the same function. Please do not go out until we contact you and watch over her well."

	Holding the doorknob, Shinomiya-sensei finished. Mica-san also spoke:		Holding the doorknob, Shinomiya-sensei finished. Mica-san also spoke: