Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 12 Chapter 4 - Revision history

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2019-06-06T08:07:42Z

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	Kili whispered poignantly too.		Kili whispered poignantly too.

	Indeed, Deus Dragon Marduk was the power of ~~the~~ the second dragon—"Ultimate Wisdom" Atlantis itself. In other words, it was a "true dragon" on the same level as Bahamut. Even in a direct confrontation, it would give its opponent a good run for its money.		Indeed, Deus Dragon Marduk was the power of the second dragon—"Ultimate Wisdom" Atlantis itself. In other words, it was a "true dragon" on the same level as Bahamut. Even in a direct confrontation, it would give its opponent a good run for its money.

	After the black light vanished, Bahamut began to fall towards the frozen sea surface, having lost one third of its body size.		After the black light vanished, Bahamut began to fall towards the frozen sea surface, having lost one third of its body size.

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2019-06-06T07:26:25Z

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	The missiles fired by the fleet at the second defense line were flying in front nearby.		The missiles fired by the fleet at the second defense line were flying in front nearby.

	The clouds flew back violently and the blue horizon was dyed white. Over ~~the~~ there, seawater was being frozen. And in the sky, a giant shadow was hovering.		The clouds flew back violently and the blue horizon was dyed white. Over there, seawater was being frozen. And in the sky, a giant shadow was hovering.

	'Target confirmed through optical imaging devices. ICBM right on target.'		'Target confirmed through optical imaging devices. ICBM right on target.'

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2017-06-23T20:22:38Z

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	Indeed, Marduk was currently flying over Firill's homeland, the Principality of Erlia. Looking down from the deck, the view of a country rich with natural beauty, ringed by mountains, entered my sight.		Indeed, Marduk was currently flying over Firill's homeland, the Principality of Erlia. Looking down from the deck, the view of a country rich with natural beauty, ringed by mountains, entered my sight.

	"...It's such a tiny nation when I look down from the sky like this. But to me, it is an extremely place that I don't want to lose. That's why I wanted to confirm. What I must protect at all costs."		"...It's such a tiny nation when I look down from the sky like this. But to me, it is an extremely important place that I don't want to lose. That's why I wanted to confirm. What I must protect at all costs."

	Firill looked out to her homeland while gripping the railing.		Firill looked out to her homeland while gripping the railing.

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	Mitsuki cried out anxiously.		Mitsuki cried out anxiously.

	'Time is running out, 2nd Lieutenant Mononobe. Due to the attack just now, Bahamut must have used up a great deal of its internal energy, slowing its rate of regeneration, but... Soon enough, ~~its~~ will finish its recovery and counterattack us.'		'Time is running out, 2nd Lieutenant Mononobe. Due to the attack just now, Bahamut must have used up a great deal of its internal energy, slowing its rate of regeneration, but... Soon enough, it will finish its recovery and counterattack us.'

	Major Loki urged me sharply to make a decision.		Major Loki urged me sharply to make a decision.
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	Gouged by holes of hyperspace all over its body, the giant dragon's size was dramatically reduced.		Gouged by holes of hyperspace all over its body, the giant dragon's size was dramatically reduced.

	"Now is the time—Another charge! Double deployment of ~~Edin~~ at the prow!"		"Now is the time—Another charge! Double deployment of Eden at the prow!"

	Almost all of the barrier-generating units were overloaded, leaving only six functional. Covering the entire ship was impossible, so I erected a double layer of triangular surfaces of light in front of the ship.		Almost all of the barrier-generating units were overloaded, leaving only six functional. Covering the entire ship was impossible, so I erected a double layer of triangular surfaces of light in front of the ship.
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	Nyarlathotep attacked at high speed almost simultaneously with Jeanne's warning. The instant the light barrier cracked, the units sustaining the first barrier overloaded and exploded.		Nyarlathotep attacked at high speed almost simultaneously with Jeanne's warning. The instant the light barrier cracked, the units sustaining the first barrier overloaded and exploded.

	Although the second barrier layer held, but the time we verified the situation, the tentacles were already retracted. Just now was probably a purely physical attack performed by that super durable metallic entity at hyper speed. But this single strike was already extraordinary in power.		Although the second barrier layer held, but by the time we verified the situation, the tentacles were already retracted. Just now was probably a purely physical attack performed by that super durable metallic entity at hyper speed. But this single strike was already extraordinary in power.

	"It's going to break through next time! We need to construct a physical barrier capable of blocking that thing's attacks!"		"It's going to break through next time! We need to construct a physical barrier capable of blocking that thing's attacks!"

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	From the sky earlier, I had spotted aircraft carriers in the back too. It was probably from there that recon planes had been launched across the sky.		From the sky earlier, I had spotted aircraft carriers in the back too. It was probably from there that recon planes had been launched across the sky.

	It would be no exaggeration to say that all of NIFL's remaining forces had gathered here. If the enemy broke past here, there would be no way to "protect humanity," hence this arrangement was only natural. My ~~currently~~ location was in fact the final defense line.		It would be no exaggeration to say that all of NIFL's remaining forces had gathered here. If the enemy broke past here, there would be no way to "protect humanity," hence this arrangement was only natural. My current location was in fact the final defense line.

	And right now, Marduk and the battleship ''Naglfar'' moored close by were in a discussion about the key points of this operation.		And right now, Marduk and the battleship ''Naglfar'' moored close by were in a discussion about the key points of this operation.
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	Stealing time from all creation, the shining light of destruction passed through the barrier in front of the ship and erased the incoming heat beam.		Stealing time from all creation, the shining light of destruction passed through the barrier in front of the ship and erased the incoming heat beam.

	The ~~instantly~~ I saw the Bahamut approaching the red light so extremely ~~closely~~, I was convinced of victory. However, the instant before Catastrophe reached its target, something blocked in front of Bahamut.		The instant I saw the Bahamut approaching the red light so extremely close, I was convinced of victory. However, the instant before Catastrophe reached its target, something blocked in front of Bahamut.

	"What—"		"What—"
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	'Tia knows! It's in the Akashic Record. The sixth dragon—'Anomalous Dawn' Nyarlathotep!'		'Tia knows! It's in the Akashic Record. The sixth dragon—'Anomalous Dawn' Nyarlathotep!'

	While continuing to fire shells of mental energy, I gasped because of Tia's revelation. Following the Bahamut the ~~fifty~~ dragon, the sixth dragon had appeared too, why on earth...?		While continuing to fire shells of mental energy, I gasped because of Tia's revelation. Following the Bahamut the fifth dragon, the sixth dragon had appeared too, why on earth...?

	At that moment, a low and sharp voice entered my ear.		At that moment, a low and sharp voice entered my ear.

Belatkuro at 15:43, 27 September 2016

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IcePhantom at 13:02, 27 September 2016

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	==Chapter 5 - Pitch-Black Disaster==		==Chapter 4 - Pitch-Black Disaster==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

Entropy at 12:10, 27 September 2016

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Entropy at 13:49, 26 September 2016

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	The operation that was about to start was very simple. Charge Bahamut head on and fire Catastrophe once we got close. Bahamut should have already deemed Iris and Marduk as high-priority enemies, so feints were pointless. Consequently, the approach with the highest chance of success was breaking through from the front with maximum force while conducting a saturation attack. The machine intellect Atla had also reached the same conclusion.		The operation that was about to start was very simple. Charge Bahamut head on and fire Catastrophe once we got close. Bahamut should have already deemed Iris and Marduk as high-priority enemies, so feints were pointless. Consequently, the approach with the highest chance of success was breaking through from the front with maximum force while conducting a saturation attack. The machine intellect Atla had also reached the same conclusion.

	"I am counting on your side. In the previous engagement, our gravity cannon Babel was effective against Bahamut. The special ICBM Cocytus—Gáe Bolg with its payload replaced by ~~cryogenic agents—has~~ also demonstrated effectiveness to some extent. We should be able to slow down Bahamut's movements."		"I am counting on your side. In the previous engagement, our gravity cannon Babel was effective against Bahamut. The special ICBM Cocytus—Gáe Bolg with its payload replaced by cryogens—has also demonstrated effectiveness to some extent. We should be able to slow down Bahamut's movements."

	Smiling confidently, Major Loki nodded and looked towards the prow—Bahamut was approaching from the northern sky.		Smiling confidently, Major Loki nodded and looked towards the prow—Bahamut was approaching from the northern sky.

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	Left alone, I grumbled with a sigh, but my voice was lost in the wind. Amid the noise of waves and airplanes, my words did not reach anyone.		Left alone, I grumbled with a sigh, but my voice was lost in the wind. Amid the noise of waves and airplanes, my words did not reach anyone.
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	Firill's breath and words were making my face heat up. Feeling the piercing stares from the rest of the girls, I answered quietly.		Firill's breath and words were making my face heat up. Feeling the piercing stares from the rest of the girls, I answered quietly.

	"B-But that's within the Principality, and didn't you say keep it a secret from everyone?"		"B-But that's within the Principality, and didn't you say to keep it a secret from everyone?"

	"Yes, that's right. But the newlywed aura between us is unstoppable. For me right now, this is the natural distance. So do your best, Mononobe-kun, and keep them in the dark."		"Yes, that's right. But the newlywed aura between us is unstoppable. For me right now, this is the natural distance. So do your best, Mononobe-kun, and keep them in the dark."
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	"Mm, Mjolnir."		"Mm, Mjolnir."

	After summoning her grimoire fictional armament, ~~Firll~~ smiled at me.		After summoning her grimoire fictional armament, Firill smiled at me.

	"...Necronomicon. Mononobe-kun, I absolutely refuse to lose anything."		"...Necronomicon. Mononobe-kun, I absolutely refuse to lose anything."
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	I had seen this once before. It was the "organ" for producing maximum firepower that Iris had used when she became infinitesimally close to being a dragon during the showdown against the rampaging Kraken Zwei.		I had seen this once before. It was the "organ" for producing maximum firepower that Iris had used when she became infinitesimally close to being a dragon during the showdown against the rampaging Kraken Zwei.

	"—Third Eye of Catastrophe!"		"—Third Eye of Catastrophe!"

	As Iris called out, the red sphere split open to reveal a giant eyeball. Like Iris' own eyes, the eyeball was glowing with crimson light too.		As Iris called out, the red sphere split open to reveal a giant eyeball. Like Iris' own eyes, the eyeball was glowing with crimson light too.

	This was the third eye that Iris had created. In order to maximize Catastrophe's beam, this was the trump card for eliminating Bahamut.		This was the third eye that Iris had created. In order to maximize Catastrophe's beam, this was the trump card for eliminating Bahamut.
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	Lisa asserted strongly and raised her spear fictional armament. Once everyone was ready, Shinomiya-sensei spoke through the communicator.		Lisa asserted strongly and raised her spear fictional armament. Once everyone was ready, Shinomiya-sensei spoke through the communicator.

	'—As discussed during the strategy meeting, we have now confirmed two of Bahamut's attack methods. There is the heat beam discharged from the mouth as well as the firing of missile-like projectiles. Since the ''Naglfar'' managed to neutralize the heat beam by using Babel, our ship should be able to do ~~thte~~ same. However, it is possible for Bahamut to have other aces up its sleeve. Do not be careless under any circumstances.'		'—As discussed during the strategy meeting, we have now confirmed two of Bahamut's attack methods. There is the heat beam discharged from the mouth as well as the firing of missile-like projectiles. Since the ''Naglfar'' managed to neutralize the heat beam by using Babel, our ship should be able to do the same. However, it is possible for Bahamut to have other aces up its sleeve. Do not be careless under any circumstances.'

	"Yes ma'am."		"Yes ma'am."
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	The missiles fired by the fleet at the second defense line were flying in front nearby.		The missiles fired by the fleet at the second defense line were flying in front nearby.

	The clouds flew back violently and the blue horizon was dyed white. Over the there, seawater was being frozen. And in the sky, a giant shadow was ~~hovreing~~.		The clouds flew back violently and the blue horizon was dyed white. Over the there, seawater was being frozen. And in the sky, a giant shadow was hovering.

	'Target confirmed through optical imaging devices. ICBM right on target.'		'Target confirmed through optical imaging devices. ICBM right on target.'
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	After she whispered, Bahamut shot out numerous projectiles.		After she whispered, Bahamut shot out numerous projectiles.

	'Fired projectiles confirmed! Quantity... Twenty or so! In addition to our ship, the ''Naglfar'' and the NILF forces behind us are also targeted. Also confirmed, Bahamut's oral ~~cavaty~~ and the turrets are rising in temperature! The heat beam and artillery are coming!'		'Fired projectiles confirmed! Quantity... Twenty or so! In addition to our ship, the ''Naglfar'' and the NILF forces behind us are also targeted. Also confirmed, Bahamut's oral cavity and the turrets are rising in temperature! The heat beam and artillery are coming!'

	"What do we do!? There's no way to shoot them all down, right?"		"What do we do!? There's no way to shoot them all down, right?"
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	'Incoming heat beam and the artillery shells!'		'Incoming heat beam and the artillery shells!'

	Bahamut released flaming orbs from all over its ~~obdy~~ while discharging a massive heat beam from its mouth. The line-of-sight attack arrived faster than the parabolic trajectory of the projectile, striking Marduk.		Bahamut released flaming orbs from all over its body while discharging a massive heat beam from its mouth. The line-of-sight attack arrived faster than the parabolic trajectory of the projectile, striking Marduk.

	The barrier instantly turned pure white. However, the heat was completely blocked and I did not feel any rise in temperature.		The barrier instantly turned pure white. However, the heat was completely blocked and I did not feel any rise in temperature.
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	Possibly hearing this, Tia spoke through the communicator.		Possibly hearing this, Tia spoke through the communicator.

	"The Kraken was the counterdragon that evolved to defeat Nyarlathotep. It was probably during that process that it developed a similar appearance."		'The Kraken was the counterdragon that evolved to defeat Nyarlathotep. It was probably during that process that it developed a similar appearance.'

	"Wait—Then the Kraken's authority... We should be able to defeat Nyarlathotep with antimatter, right?"		"Wait—Then the Kraken's authority... We should be able to defeat Nyarlathotep with antimatter, right?"
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	"Main cannon, Babel—Psionic multi-barreled cannons, Noah—Hyperspace reversion rocket-assisted artillery, Abyss—"		"Main cannon, Babel—Psionic multi-barreled cannons, Noah—Hyperspace reversion rocket-assisted artillery, Abyss—"

	I linked my mind to these three sets of armaments and locked onto the targets. The main cannon rumbled while the lenses in the middle of the barrel glowed. The other weapons also		I linked my mind to these three sets of armaments and locked onto the targets. The main cannon rumbled while the lenses in the middle of the barrel glowed. The other weapons also produced deep noises of operation while waiting for the moment to unleash their power.
	produced deep noises of operation while waiting for the moment to unleash their power.

	This was the decisive strike. There was no need to hold back.		This was the decisive strike. There was no need to hold back.
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	A black torrent shot out from the main cannon at the prow while the eight multi-barreled cannons fired shells of light. All remaining missiles were launched simultaneously from the pods at the back of Marduk, leaving white trails in the sky.		A black torrent shot out from the main cannon at the prow while the eight multi-barreled cannons fired shells of light. All remaining missiles were launched simultaneously from the pods at the back of Marduk, leaving white trails in the sky.

	The silver discus—Nyarlathotep&~~mdah~~;immediately reacted, blocking the main cannon head on. Caught in the gravitational discontinuity, the discus' outline became twisted. But unbelievably, its silver body returned to its original round shape afterwards.		The silver discus—Nyarlathotep—immediately reacted, blocking the main cannon head on. Caught in the gravitational discontinuity, the discus' outline became twisted. But unbelievably, its silver body returned to its original round shape afterwards.

	Impenetrable even by the main cannon... What outrageous resilience.		Impenetrable even by the main cannon... What outrageous resilience.
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	Immediately, the discus-like entity began to expand from within. A crack formed, leaking out light, then instantly—A violent explosion engulfed the discus.		Immediately, the discus-like entity began to expand from within. A crack formed, leaking out light, then instantly—A violent explosion engulfed the discus.

	It was disappearing. Thrashing its tentacles, the sixth ~~calmity~~ which had ~~threatend~~ the world in the past was gradually devoured by the purple light.		It was disappearing. Thrashing its tentacles, the sixth calamity which had threatened the world in the past was gradually devoured by the purple light.

	The massive explosion at point-blank range caused Bahamut to roar in pain. The light of annihilation was also approaching us.		The massive explosion at point-blank range caused Bahamut to roar in pain. The light of annihilation was also approaching us.
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	However, the light was fading away. The excess abundance of darkness was about to overwhelm the authority's light.		However, the light was fading away. The excess abundance of darkness was about to overwhelm the authority's light.

	Yesterday and during the car accident that killed Mitsuki's parents—I had confronted the darkness on two ~~occassions~~ and succeeded in suppressing it. But the volume was completely different this time.		Yesterday and during the car accident that killed Mitsuki's parents—I had confronted the darkness on two occasions and succeeded in suppressing it. But the volume was completely different this time.

	The darkness was overwhelming and our light was too weak.		The darkness was overwhelming and our light was too weak.
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	The instant I heard these confident words, a blinding light appeared amid the darkness.		The instant I heard these confident words, a blinding light appeared amid the darkness.

	It was a vivid blue light—The same as our glowing ~~dragn~~ marks. However, this light was strong enough to overpower the thick darkness.		It was a vivid blue light—The same as our glowing dragon marks. However, this light was strong enough to overpower the thick darkness.

	Surrounded by light, Mitsuki was showing a dreamy smile.		Surrounded by light, Mitsuki was showing a dreamy smile.