Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 1 Chapter 1 - Revision history

127.0.0.1: /* Part 4 */

2016-09-26T15:50:21Z

Part 4

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	As Asgard's army, NIFL captured Ds from all over the world under the banner of protection, isolating them on a remote island named Midgard.		As Asgard's army, NIFL captured Ds from all over the world under the banner of protection, isolating them on a remote island named Midgard.

	However, those Ds, originally children, grew up as time passed. They began to petition for their rights ~~and~~ humans, hence continuing to rule over them became difficult.		However, those Ds, originally children, grew up as time passed. They began to petition for their rights as humans, hence continuing to rule over them became difficult.

	After that, a D was also born among the daughters of a wealthy and ancient royal family, hence this served as the trigger for Midgard to acquire the right to autonomy all at once.		After that, a D was also born among the daughters of a wealthy and ancient royal family, hence this served as the trigger for Midgard to acquire the right to autonomy all at once.

127.0.0.1: /* Part 1 */

2016-09-26T15:46:09Z

Part 1

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	This kind of scenery could not possibly be reality. I must be quite exhausted.		This kind of scenery could not possibly be reality. I must be quite exhausted.

	Then at least before I ~~woke~~ up, allow me to enjoy this paradise. Because once the dream ended, the usual dark and gloomy world must be waiting for me again.		Then at least before I wake up, allow me to enjoy this paradise. Because once the dream ended, the usual dark and gloomy world must be waiting for me again.

	After thinking that, I stared at the naked girl.		After thinking that, I stared at the naked girl.

Entropy at 04:10, 26 September 2016

2016-09-26T04:10:11Z

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	This kind of scenery could not possibly be reality. I must be quite exhausted.		This kind of scenery could not possibly be reality. I must be quite exhausted.

	Then at least before I ~~fall asleep~~, allow me to enjoy this paradise. Because once the dream ended, the usual dark and gloomy world must be waiting for me again.		Then at least before I woke up, allow me to enjoy this paradise. Because once the dream ended, the usual dark and gloomy world must be waiting for me again.

	After thinking that, I stared at the naked girl.		After thinking that, I stared at the naked girl.

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2016-09-26T03:55:20Z

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	This kind of scenery could not possibly be reality. I must be quite exhausted.		This kind of scenery could not possibly be reality. I must be quite exhausted.

	Then at least before I fall asleep*, allow me to enjoy this paradise. Because once the dream ended, the usual dark and gloomy world must be waiting for me again.		Then at least before I fall asleep, allow me to enjoy this paradise. Because once the dream ended, the usual dark and gloomy world must be waiting for me again.

	After thinking that, I stared at the naked girl.		After thinking that, I stared at the naked girl.
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	"I have been waiting for you the whole time. It has been three years—Nii-san."		"I have been waiting for you the whole time. It has been three years—Nii-san."

	*As I don't have the raws, I'm not one hundred percent sure but I think it was meant that before he wakes up, not fall asleep. Just going by context.

	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

127.0.0.1: /* Part 1 */

2016-09-26T01:39:33Z

Part 1

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	This kind of scenery could not possibly be reality. I must be quite exhausted.		This kind of scenery could not possibly be reality. I must be quite exhausted.

	Then at least before I fall asleep, allow me to enjoy this paradise. Because once the dream ended, the usual dark and gloomy world must be waiting for me again.		Then at least before I fall asleep*, allow me to enjoy this paradise. Because once the dream ended, the usual dark and gloomy world must be waiting for me again.

	After thinking that, I stared at the naked girl.		After thinking that, I stared at the naked girl.
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	"I have been waiting for you the whole time. It has been three years—Nii-san."		"I have been waiting for you the whole time. It has been three years—Nii-san."

			*As I don't have the raws, I'm not one hundred percent sure but I think it was meant that before he wakes up, not fall asleep. Just going by context.

	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

Entropy at 14:43, 2 May 2016

2016-05-02T14:43:32Z

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	Whether in facial appearance or voice, this girl greatly resembled a certain person I knew.		Whether in facial appearance or voice, this girl greatly resembled a certain person I knew.

	But she could not possibly in a place like this. ~~Only she~~ could not possibly be here.		But she could not possibly be at a place like this. She was the one person who could not possibly be here.

	Because that was why I had—		Because that was why I had—

Entropy at 22:51, 22 January 2016

2016-01-22T22:51:48Z

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	"...Huh?"		"...Huh?"

	"I ~~have~~ already ~~given~~ you my name. I'd appreciate it if you could introduce yourself too."		"I already gave you my name. I'd appreciate it if you could introduce yourself too."

	After I urged her, the girl finally spoke despite her hesitation.		After I urged her, the girl finally spoke despite her hesitation.
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	"Mitsuki... You've been searching for me the whole time?"		"Mitsuki... You've been searching for me the whole time?"

	"Yes, I was so surprised ~~not~~ to ~~see~~ you ~~here~~ when I first arrived at Midgard. It felt very odd that you were not here despite being taken away before me, so thereafter, I have been searching for you."		"Yes, I was so surprised to find you absent when I first arrived at Midgard. It felt very odd that you were not here despite being taken away before me, so thereafter, I have been searching for you."

	Despite Mitsuki's explanation, I still felt a bit worried.		Despite Mitsuki's explanation, I still felt a bit worried.

FallenSky: /* Part 2 */

2016-01-22T08:32:11Z

Part 2

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	"Mitsuki... You've been searching for me the whole time?"		"Mitsuki... You've been searching for me the whole time?"

	"Yes, I was so surprised not to see when I first arrived at Midgard. It felt very odd that you were not here despite being taken away before me, so thereafter, I have been searching for you."		"Yes, I was so surprised not to see you here when I first arrived at Midgard. It felt very odd that you were not here despite being taken away before me, so thereafter, I have been searching for you."

	Despite Mitsuki's explanation, I still felt a bit worried.		Despite Mitsuki's explanation, I still felt a bit worried.

FallenSky: /* Chapter 1 - Dragon Garden Midgard */

2016-01-21T13:17:42Z

Chapter 1 - Dragon Garden Midgard

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	"...Huh?"		"...Huh?"

	"I already given you my name. I'd appreciate it if you could introduce yourself too."		"I have already given you my name. I'd appreciate it if you could introduce yourself too."

	After I urged her, the girl finally spoke despite her hesitation.		After I urged her, the girl finally spoke despite her hesitation.

FallenSky: /* Part 3 */

2016-01-21T12:59:59Z

Part 3

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	Perhaps my answer sounded half-hearted, hence Mitsuki looked up at me with eyes of suspicion, then she advised me:		Perhaps my answer sounded half-hearted, hence Mitsuki looked up at me with eyes of suspicion, then she advised me:

	"Let me inform you in advance, Nii-san, ~~the~~ your assigned homeroom consists of problem children entirely. I am not confident that they will listen to me so you will need to work hard on your own if you want them to accept you. Please bear this in mind."		"Let me inform you in advance, Nii-san, that your assigned homeroom consists of problem children entirely. I am not confident that they will listen to me so you will need to work hard on your own if you want them to accept you. Please bear this in mind."

	Actually, I had already guessed for the most part—I was assigned to Brynhildr Class, the same as Mitsuki's.		Actually, I had already guessed for the most part—I was assigned to Brynhildr Class, the same as Mitsuki's.