Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 1 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Nikkivicious: /* Part 6 */

2020-05-17T01:28:30Z

Part 6

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	Shinomiya-sensei's voice echoed in the vast underground space.		Shinomiya-sensei's voice echoed in the vast underground space.

	After spending a whole day on special training, I slept especially well and the next day, the test, arrived in the blink of an eye.		After spending a whole day on special training, I slept especially well and the next day, the test arrived in the blink of an eye.

	Like last time, we were gathered in training site number three. Volunteers began the test first.		Like last time, we were gathered in training site number three. Volunteers began the test first.
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	Because the gun's body seemed quite small compared to its caliber, were it a real gun, one would worry whether such a design could withstand the recoil of a shot, but since this was purely dark matter whose shape had been altered, there was no need to worry about practicality.		Because the gun's body seemed quite small compared to its caliber, were it a real gun, one would worry whether such a design could withstand the recoil of a shot, but since this was purely dark matter whose shape had been altered, there was no need to worry about practicality.

	The gun glowed with faint phosphorescence. Although I was trying hard to keep it in the dark matter stage, due to sensing the image in my mind, the gun's body still caused some slight transmutation.		The gun glowed with faint phosphorescence. Although I was trying hard to keep it in the dark matter stage, due to sensing the image in my mind, the gun's body still caused some slight transmutation.

	That was the reason why dark matter, which was supposed to be black, had color after being turned into fictional armaments.		That was the reason why dark matter, which was supposed to be black, had color after being turned into fictional armaments.

Nikkivicious: /* Part 5 */

2020-05-17T01:12:56Z

Part 5

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	"I remember you are currently doing something like special training with Iris, right?"		"I remember you are currently doing something like special training with Iris, right?"

	"Not just ''something like'' special training, but special training for real. We started ~~since~~ this morning. I came here to buy lunch."		"Not just ''something like'' special training, but special training for real. We started this morning. I came here to buy lunch."

	I showed Ariella the bag filled with bread.		I showed Ariella the bag filled with bread.

Nikkivicious: /* Part 4 */

2020-05-17T01:06:03Z

Part 4

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	In the end, so that was the most important point.		In the end, so that was the most important point.

	Mitsuki liked acting cool since a long time ago. Simply stated, she was predisposed to eighth grader syndrome and ~~the~~ it looked like the precursor of that syndrome had been quietly growing for the past three years.		Mitsuki liked acting cool since a long time ago. Simply stated, she was predisposed to eighth grader syndrome and it looked like the precursor of that syndrome had been quietly growing for the past three years.

	"...Got it, anyway, so let's name it Siegfried."		"...Got it, anyway, so let's name it Siegfried."

Entropy: Undo revision 477987 by FallenSky (talk)

2016-01-22T22:52:15Z

Undo revision 477987 by FallenSky (talk)

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	Getting rid of the persistently harassing Lisa, I returned to my original spot, only to see Iris clapping to greet me.		Getting rid of the persistently harassing Lisa, I returned to my original spot, only to see Iris clapping to greet me.

	[Clap clap~~] "~~Mononobe, congratulations!"		"Clap clap, Mononobe, congratulations!"

	Seeing Iris smiling happily for me as though she had passed the test herself, I suddenly felt embarrassed.		Seeing Iris smiling happily for me as though she had passed the test herself, I suddenly felt embarrassed.

FallenSky: /* Part 6 */

2016-01-21T16:31:41Z

Part 6

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	Getting rid of the persistently harassing Lisa, I returned to my original spot, only to see Iris clapping to greet me.		Getting rid of the persistently harassing Lisa, I returned to my original spot, only to see Iris clapping to greet me.

	"Clap clap, Mononobe, congratulations!"		[Clap clap] "Mononobe, congratulations!"

	Seeing Iris smiling happily for me as though she had passed the test herself, I suddenly felt embarrassed.		Seeing Iris smiling happily for me as though she had passed the test herself, I suddenly felt embarrassed.

Entropy: revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

2015-11-28T21:59:56Z

revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

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	"Currently speaking, perhaps there's no way you can deny these kinds of criticisms."		"Currently speaking, perhaps there's no way you can deny these kinds of criticisms."

	"Really...? Then I guess it's impossible for me to join the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad..."		"Really...? Then I guess it's impossible for me to join the Dragon Subjugation Squad..."

	Iris sighed heavily.		Iris sighed heavily.

	"You want to join the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad, Iris? But that's the most dangerous job, putting yourself on the frontlines, you know?"		"You want to join the Dragon Subjugation Squad, Iris? But that's the most dangerous job, putting yourself on the frontlines, you know?"

	"Yes... Because that's my reason for coming to Midgard."		"Yes... Because that's my reason for coming to Midgard."
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	"Huh?"		"Huh?"

	"Although you just said that joining the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad is impossible, you don't intend to give up on the test, right?"		"Although you just said that joining the Dragon Subjugation Squad is impossible, you don't intend to give up on the test, right?"

	"T-That goes without saying! Even though I might still fail... I will try my hardest!"		"T-That goes without saying! Even though I might still fail... I will try my hardest!"
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	"Antimatter."		"Antimatter."

	"Indeed. This type of situation is where offense is stronger because if antimatter is used to attack, even mithril cannot withstand it. However, there is currently only one person in the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad who is capable of transmuting antimatter—"		"Indeed. This type of situation is where offense is stronger because if antimatter is used to attack, even mithril cannot withstand it. However, there is currently only one person in the Dragon Subjugation Squad who is capable of transmuting antimatter—"

	In consideration of my circumstances, Shinomiya-sensei was reviewing the basics while conducting her lesson to let me understand simple key points.		In consideration of my circumstances, Shinomiya-sensei was reviewing the basics while conducting her lesson to let me understand simple key points.
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	===Part 6===		===Part 6===

	"Well then, let the test begin to select the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad for the battle against Basilisk."		"Well then, let the test begin to select the Dragon Subjugation Squad for the battle against Basilisk."

	Shinomiya-sensei's voice echoed in the vast underground space.		Shinomiya-sensei's voice echoed in the vast underground space.
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	Even if I was asked to do it again, due to the difficulty in adjusting the timing and compression, I would probably fail.		Even if I was asked to do it again, due to the difficulty in adjusting the timing and compression, I would probably fail.

	"Hmm, that's quite a shame. Judging purely from this one attack, this would be very intricate and efficient transmutation... The probability of causing effective damage to Basilisk is very high. But if you can't do it at will, you have not reached the level required for the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad."		"Hmm, that's quite a shame. Judging purely from this one attack, this would be very intricate and efficient transmutation... The probability of causing effective damage to Basilisk is very high. But if you can't do it at will, you have not reached the level required for the Dragon Subjugation Squad."

	"Then I guess I failed, after all?"		"Then I guess I failed, after all?"

Entropy at 06:21, 27 September 2015

2015-09-27T06:21:18Z

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	I stood up to thank her.		I stood up to thank her.

	"This is not something worth thanking me for. As the student ~~body~~ president, it is only natural to assist students who are striving to improve."		"This is not something worth thanking me for. As the student council president, it is only natural to assist students who are striving to improve."

	"Even if that's the case, I'm still grateful to you."		"Even if that's the case, I'm still grateful to you."
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	"Good morning, everyone."		"Good morning, everyone."

	Mitsuki responded to them with a smile. Although I had already sensed it yesterday, Mitsuki really was quite a popular student ~~body~~ president.		Mitsuki responded to them with a smile. Although I had already sensed it yesterday, Mitsuki really was quite a popular student council president.

	The girls kept stealing glances at me while I walked with Mitsuki, but they hesitated and dared not talk to me. I guess it was difficult for them to relax and approach because of my male gender, but—		The girls kept stealing glances at me while I walked with Mitsuki, but they hesitated and dared not talk to me. I guess it was difficult for them to relax and approach because of my male gender, but—
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	Iris held Mitsuki's hands and thanked her with a radiant smile.		Iris held Mitsuki's hands and thanked her with a radiant smile.

	"—No, responding to the requests of students is part of the student ~~body~~ president's responsibilities."		"—No, responding to the requests of students is part of the student council president's responsibilities."

	Mitsuki struggled free uncomfortably and separated from Iris.		Mitsuki struggled free uncomfortably and separated from Iris.

Entropy at 14:20, 10 August 2015

2015-08-10T14:20:44Z

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	The teacher was talking about systematized dark matter transmutation techniques and ways to use our powers in hypothetical battles against dragons. This knowledge felt very refreshing and new to me.		The teacher was talking about systematized dark matter transmutation techniques and ways to use our powers in hypothetical battles against dragons. This knowledge felt very refreshing and new to me.

	"—Furthermore, there are many substances that can only be created through the transmutation of dark matter, of which mithril and antimatter are particularly useful in battle. Mithril is theoretically the ~~toughest~~ alloy while antimatter can be used to destroy any type of matter in an annihilation reaction. Very well, Ariella Lu, between these two substances, ultimate offense and the ultimate defense, which is stronger?"		"—Furthermore, there are many substances that can only be created through the transmutation of dark matter, of which mithril and antimatter are particularly useful in battle. Mithril is theoretically the hardest alloy while antimatter can be used to destroy any type of matter in an annihilation reaction. Very well, Ariella Lu, between these two substances, ultimate offense and the ultimate defense, which is stronger?"

	Called upon, Ariella answered concisely:		Called upon, Ariella answered concisely:

Entropy: if you need clarification on meaning, ask first

2015-05-22T00:20:23Z

if you need clarification on meaning, ask first

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	"I remember you are currently doing something like special training with Iris, right?"		"I remember you are currently doing something like special training with Iris, right?"

	"Not something like special training, ~~we are just~~ training. We started since this morning. I came here to buy lunch."		"Not just ''something like'' special training, but special training for real. We started since this morning. I came here to buy lunch."

	I showed Ariella the bag filled with bread.		I showed Ariella the bag filled with bread.
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	Hearing me, Lisa and the others frowned. All of them showed skepticism on their faces.		Hearing me, Lisa and the others frowned. All of them showed skepticism on their faces.

	Amidst all this, Ariella ~~laughed~~ with delight.		Amidst all this, Ariella was the only one laughing with delight.

	"How confident you are, but I still don't believe you, so I can't believe what you just said. Tomorrow, if I find out you're not lying, I'll revise my opinion of you."		"How confident you are, but I still don't believe you, so I can't believe what you just said. Tomorrow, if I find out you're not lying, I'll revise my opinion of you."
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	Feeling their gazes against my back, I walked out of the catering building to get back to Iris and Mitsuki.		Feeling their gazes against my back, I walked out of the catering building to get back to Iris and Mitsuki.

	After lunch, we resumed the special training.		After lunch, we resumed the special training...

	===Part 6===		===Part 6===

Edwinclement08: /* Chapter 2 - Witch of Silver Explosions */

2015-05-21T19:35:18Z

Chapter 2 - Witch of Silver Explosions

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	"I remember you are currently doing something like special training with Iris, right?"		"I remember you are currently doing something like special training with Iris, right?"

	"Not something like special training, we are ~~doing special~~ training. We started since this morning. I came here to buy lunch."		"Not something like special training, we are just training. We started since this morning. I came here to buy lunch."

	I showed Ariella the bag filled with bread.		I showed Ariella the bag filled with bread.
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	Hearing me, Lisa and the others frowned. All of them showed skepticism on their faces.		Hearing me, Lisa and the others frowned. All of them showed skepticism on their faces.

	Amidst all this, ~~only~~ Ariella laughed with delight.		Amidst all this, Ariella laughed with delight.

	"How confident you are, but I still don't believe you, so I can't believe what you just said. Tomorrow, if I find out you're not lying, I'll revise my opinion of you."		"How confident you are, but I still don't believe you, so I can't believe what you just said. Tomorrow, if I find out you're not lying, I'll revise my opinion of you."
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	Feeling their gazes against my back, I walked out of the catering building to get back to Iris and Mitsuki.		Feeling their gazes against my back, I walked out of the catering building to get back to Iris and Mitsuki.

	After lunch, we resumed the special ~~training—~~		After lunch, we resumed the special training.

	===Part 6===		===Part 6===