Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 1 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Nikkivicious: /* Part 5 */

2020-05-17T02:12:58Z

Part 5

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	Iris was asking with a displeased look.		Iris was asking with a displeased look.

	"It's not a matter of whether I want to see or not. What I mean is you shouldn't do something like that so lightly. Man are far dangerous creatures than you can imagine, Iris."		"It's not a matter of whether I want to see or not. What I mean is you shouldn't do something like that so lightly. Man are far more dangerous creatures than you can imagine, Iris."

	"...I am not doing this lightly. I had to gather a lot of courage to speak my mind."		"...I am not doing this lightly. I had to gather a lot of courage to speak my mind."
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	This was originally the first floor of the school building, but since it was now underground, all the windows were covered by metal shutters.		This was originally the first floor of the school building, but since it was now underground, all the windows were covered by metal shutters.

	Because I had nothing to do, I generated some dark matter and practiced altering ~~its~~ form to pass time.		Because I had nothing to do, I generated some dark matter and practiced altering it's form to pass time.

	"I knew it, I'm still not used to guns weighing this light..."		"I knew it, I'm still not used to guns weighing this light..."
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	"...You look very exhausted. Are you doing okay?"		"...You look very exhausted. Are you doing okay?"

	"Y-Yeah, I"m fine. It's just that the testing dragged on for too long, I'm hungry."		"Y-Yeah, I'm fine. It's just that the testing dragged on for too long, I'm hungry."

	Iris answered with a nervous expression. She was probably unused to being treated so gently.		Iris answered with a nervous expression. She was probably unused to being treated so gently.

Nikkivicious: /* Part 4 */

2020-05-17T01:47:45Z

Part 4

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	"...Your description makes yourself sound like the grim reaper, Nii-san."		"...Your description makes yourself sound like the grim reaper, Nii-san."

	"Yeah... But in a certain sense, that's precisely my ''original job''. Mitsuki, you're probably aware given your position, right? Although I was never deployed in an actual operation of that sort... The reason why Sleipnir, the team I used to be part of, was established, ~~its~~ real purpose was to target Ds who've been deemed as disasters, to assass—"		"Yeah... But in a certain sense, that's precisely my ''original job''. Mitsuki, you're probably aware given your position, right? Although I was never deployed in an actual operation of that sort... The reason why Sleipnir, the team I used to be part of, was established, it's real purpose was to target Ds who've been deemed as disasters, to assass—"

	"Enough!"		"Enough!"
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	Muttering sardonically to myself, I laid myself on the bed.		Muttering sardonically to myself, I laid myself on the bed.

	After the conversation with Mitsuki ended, i returned to my room to get ready for bed, but as though aiming for this opportunity, Major Loki called at this time.		After the conversation with Mitsuki ended, I returned to my room to get ready for bed, but as though aiming for this opportunity, Major Loki called at this time.

	Because I already decided there was a need to contact him again, this timing turned out just right, except it felt a little terrifying.		Because I already decided there was a need to contact him again, this timing turned out just right, except it felt a little terrifying.

Nikkivicious: /* Part 1 */

2020-05-17T01:31:10Z

Part 1

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	Named Sleipnir, my team galloped on numerous battlefields.		Named Sleipnir, my team galloped on numerous battlefields.

	According to ''him'', there was apparently an intended enemy we were meant to fight. Putting down guerilla groups was just practice before the real battle. Nevertheless, we were still risking our lives all the time.		According to ''him'', there was apparently an intended enemy we were meant to fight. Putting down guerilla groups was just practice before the real battle. Nevertheless, we were still risking our lives all the time.

	In a world where life and death were thinly divided, how much longer could I act obstinately out of spite?		In a world where life and death were thinly divided, how much longer could I act obstinately out of spite?

Entropy: Undo revision 502707 by FallenSky (talk) images are placed where they occurred in the book, not where you subjectively think they belong

2016-09-23T13:51:40Z

Undo revision 502707 by FallenSky (talk) images are placed where they occurred in the book, not where you subjectively think they belong

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	"Wow, it's chocolate!"		"Wow, it's chocolate!"
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	"...This is the chocolate I bought overseas through the internet, not too long ago."		"...This is the chocolate I bought overseas through the internet, not too long ago."
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	"...Yeah."		"...Yeah."
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	"Mononobe, the bathwater is ready! Let's take a bath together!"		"Mononobe, the bathwater is ready! Let's take a bath together!"
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	"No way..."		"No way..."
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	I had a bad feeling. Looking up, I saw a white figure behind the frosted glass.		I had a bad feeling. Looking up, I saw a white figure behind the frosted glass.
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	"Don't go barging in without permission then scream! You've reversed our positions!"		"Don't go barging in without permission then scream! You've reversed our positions!"
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	I hastily covered up my crotch with a towel while grumbling at her.		I hastily covered up my crotch with a towel while grumbling at her.

FallenSky: /* Part 5 */

2016-09-23T13:41:12Z

Part 5

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	"Wow, it's chocolate!"		"Wow, it's chocolate!"
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	"...This is the chocolate I bought overseas through the internet, not too long ago."		"...This is the chocolate I bought overseas through the internet, not too long ago."
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	"...Yeah."		"...Yeah."
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	"Mononobe, the bathwater is ready! Let's take a bath together!"		"Mononobe, the bathwater is ready! Let's take a bath together!"
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	"No way..."		"No way..."
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	I had a bad feeling. Looking up, I saw a white figure behind the frosted glass.		I had a bad feeling. Looking up, I saw a white figure behind the frosted glass.
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	"Don't go barging in without permission then scream! You've reversed our positions!"		"Don't go barging in without permission then scream! You've reversed our positions!"
	~~[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v01 199.jpg\|thumb]]~~

	I hastily covered up my crotch with a towel while grumbling at her.		I hastily covered up my crotch with a towel while grumbling at her.

Entropy at 22:55, 22 January 2016

2016-01-22T22:55:41Z

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	"Why? Mitsuki said she absolutely won't abandon anyone. She'll put her life on the line to protect you!"		"Why? Mitsuki said she absolutely won't abandon anyone. She'll put her life on the line to protect you!"

	"That's why I didn't confess. 'White' Leviathan is one of the dragons for which ~~we have~~ no effective countermeasures ~~for~~, but if for my sake... if everyone has to fight for the sake of protecting someone like me, is it really okay...?"		"That's why I didn't confess. 'White' Leviathan is one of the dragons for which there are no effective countermeasures, but if for my sake... if everyone has to fight for the sake of protecting someone like me, is it really okay...?"

	Iris gazed out into the distance on the other side of the railing.		Iris gazed out into the distance on the other side of the railing.
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	"...Yeah."		"...Yeah."
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	"Mononobe, the bathwater is ready! Let's take a bath together!"		"Mononobe, the bathwater is ready! Let's take a bath together!"

FallenSky: /* Part 5 */

2016-01-21T17:32:31Z

Part 5

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	"...Yeah."		"...Yeah."
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	"Mononobe, the bathwater is ready! Let's take a bath together!"		"Mononobe, the bathwater is ready! Let's take a bath together!"

FallenSky: /* Part 3 */

2016-01-21T17:07:34Z

Part 3

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	"Why? Mitsuki said she absolutely won't abandon anyone. She'll put her life on the line to protect you!"		"Why? Mitsuki said she absolutely won't abandon anyone. She'll put her life on the line to protect you!"

	"That's why I didn't confess. 'White' Leviathan is one of the dragons which have no effective countermeasures for, but if for my sake... if everyone has to fight for the sake of protecting someone like me, is it really okay...?"		"That's why I didn't confess. 'White' Leviathan is one of the dragons for which we have no effective countermeasures for, but if for my sake... if everyone has to fight for the sake of protecting someone like me, is it really okay...?"

	Iris gazed out into the distance on the other side of the railing.		Iris gazed out into the distance on the other side of the railing.

Entropy: revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

2015-11-28T22:00:08Z

revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

Entropy at 06:22, 27 September 2015

2015-09-27T06:22:02Z

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	Right—Iris had lost her family due to a dragon disaster caused by Leviathan.		Right—Iris had lost her family due to a dragon disaster caused by Leviathan.

	'The ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad, students selected by the Midgard Defense Department, please man your stations. Prepare to standby for combat operations. All other students and staff, please return to your quarters or the nearest evacuation shelter, especially those currently at shore areas, please evacuate as quickly as possible.'		'The Dragon Subjugation Squad, students selected by the Midgard Defense Department, please man your stations. Prepare to standby for combat operations. All other students and staff, please return to your quarters or the nearest evacuation shelter, especially those currently at shore areas, please evacuate as quickly as possible.'

	"Hey, the announcer is telling us to evacuate!"		"Hey, the announcer is telling us to evacuate!"
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	Uniformed girls holding weapons were passing overhead, flying towards the sea.		Uniformed girls holding weapons were passing overhead, flying towards the sea.

	This was probably the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad selected by Midgard Defense Department. By generating wind, they were flying in the sky at high speed.		This was probably the Dragon Subjugation Squad selected by Midgard Defense Department. By generating wind, they were flying in the sky at high speed.

	"That's true, we'll only get in their way if we stay here."		"That's true, we'll only get in their way if we stay here."
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	"Mitsuki, are you here?"		"Mitsuki, are you here?"

	I called out from the entrance hall, but no one answered. Mitsuki was apparently the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad's captain, so she had probably mobilized already.		I called out from the entrance hall, but no one answered. Mitsuki was apparently the Dragon Subjugation Squad's captain, so she had probably mobilized already.

	Although I was curious about the situation outside, I could not ask her through email because it would obstruct her work. Hence, I decided to wait quietly and returned to my room.		Although I was curious about the situation outside, I could not ask her through email because it would obstruct her work. Hence, I decided to wait quietly and returned to my room.
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	Mitsuki leaned forward and slowly swept her gaze over all the students of the school.		Mitsuki leaned forward and slowly swept her gaze over all the students of the school.

	"Even if one of you were to attract Leviathan, causing it to attack, the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad will still fight fearlessly. We will not abandon you no matter what. Consequently, if any of you feel that your dragon mark has changed, please do not hesitate. Step forward and let us know. I will put my life on the line to protect you."		"Even if one of you were to attract Leviathan, causing it to attack, the Dragon Subjugation Squad will still fight fearlessly. We will not abandon you no matter what. Consequently, if any of you feel that your dragon mark has changed, please do not hesitate. Step forward and let us know. I will put my life on the line to protect you."

	Mitsuki declared clearly. Strong conviction could be felt from her words. It was not simply a sense of obligation.		Mitsuki declared clearly. Strong conviction could be felt from her words. It was not simply a sense of obligation.
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	"Mitsuki, what should I do?"		"Mitsuki, what should I do?"

	"Nii-san... because you only passed as a reserve member in the Basilisk drill, you will not be summoned for the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad. Presumably, you will be asked to stay on standby in shelter like ordinary students."		"Nii-san... because you only passed as a reserve member in the Basilisk drill, you will not be summoned for the Dragon Subjugation Squad. Presumably, you will be asked to stay on standby in shelter like ordinary students."

	Nothing to do, in other words? In that case, perfect.		Nothing to do, in other words? In that case, perfect.
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	Mitsuki frowned in surprise.		Mitsuki frowned in surprise.

	"The ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad is fighting to protect Iris-san. Your participation is not needed, Nii-san."		"The Dragon Subjugation Squad is fighting to protect Iris-san. Your participation is not needed, Nii-san."

	"That's against dragons as opponents, right? By bodyguard, I mean protecting Iris from threats other than dragons."		"That's against dragons as opponents, right? By bodyguard, I mean protecting Iris from threats other than dragons."
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	One view seemed to be taken by a satellite from above. It showed Midgardsormr surrounding the island in four layers. Many ships could be seen outside of the first defensive line. Those were probably NIFL's battleships and carriers.		One view seemed to be taken by a satellite from above. It showed Midgardsormr surrounding the island in four layers. Many ships could be seen outside of the first defensive line. Those were probably NIFL's battleships and carriers.

	Other images showed the girls of the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad, patrolling the island's airspace. Firill, Ren and Ariella could be seen among them.		Other images showed the girls of the Dragon Subjugation Squad, patrolling the island's airspace. Firill, Ren and Ariella could be seen among them.

	"Oh!"		"Oh!"
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	Mitsuki continued with a leader-like expression.		Mitsuki continued with a leader-like expression.

	"As captain of the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad, I must maintain a grasp on all currently available combat potential. If incorrectly used or managed, strong powers have the potential to hurt oneself instead. I am very afraid, unsure of what you might do next, Nii-san, so—"		"As captain of the Dragon Subjugation Squad, I must maintain a grasp on all currently available combat potential. If incorrectly used or managed, strong powers have the potential to hurt oneself instead. I am very afraid, unsure of what you might do next, Nii-san, so—"

	"I understand... I'll answer you honestly."		"I understand... I'll answer you honestly."

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	Mitsuki looked away and said with her face red.		Mitsuki looked away and said with her face red.

	"Sheesh... I thought you'd grown braver after becoming the student ~~body~~ president, but you're still so timid on weird issues."		"Sheesh... I thought you'd grown braver after becoming the student council president, but you're still so timid on weird issues."

	Laughing wryly, I scooped a spoonful of the dessert and tasted it. The gentle and sweet flavor immediately started spreading from the tip of my tongue.		Laughing wryly, I scooped a spoonful of the dessert and tasted it. The gentle and sweet flavor immediately started spreading from the tip of my tongue.
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	Mitsuki asserted with a serious expression.		Mitsuki asserted with a serious expression.

	"...I think I'm starting to understand why you're able to become the student ~~body~~ president."		"...I think I'm starting to understand why you're able to become the student council president."

	Exhaling in exclamation, I finished all of the dessert.		Exhaling in exclamation, I finished all of the dessert.
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	"Huh?"		"Huh?"

	"Being so considerate of me, working hard with me seriously, Mononobe, you're the first person to do that. Everyone else in the class hold themselves and others to strict standards, so I can't rely on them... Although Mitsuki-chan looks after me frequently, I think that's because she's the student ~~body~~ president."		"Being so considerate of me, working hard with me seriously, Mononobe, you're the first person to do that. Everyone else in the class hold themselves and others to strict standards, so I can't rely on them... Although Mitsuki-chan looks after me frequently, I think that's because she's the student council president."

	Iris approached me even closer, almost to the point of touching me.		Iris approached me even closer, almost to the point of touching me.
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	"I believe that everyone should know already that at 7:41pm last night, there was a Level C alert situation. The approaching dragon is 'White' Leviathan that circles the Pacific Ocean along a fixed route. But this time, it has deviated from that route to trespass Midgard's warning zone."		"I believe that everyone should know already that at 7:41pm last night, there was a Level C alert situation. The approaching dragon is 'White' Leviathan that circles the Pacific Ocean along a fixed route. But this time, it has deviated from that route to trespass Midgard's warning zone."

	Standing on the podium, Mitsuki explained the situation. This was probably part of the student ~~body~~ president's job.		Standing on the podium, Mitsuki explained the situation. This was probably part of the student council president's job.

	"Leviathan stayed roughly three hours in the warning zone but returned to its original route without reaching the first defensive line. These irregular exceptions seem to occur once in a while. A year ago, a passenger ship was sunk due to this reason."		"Leviathan stayed roughly three hours in the warning zone but returned to its original route without reaching the first defensive line. These irregular exceptions seem to occur once in a while. A year ago, a passenger ship was sunk due to this reason."
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	"You already knew about what we mentioned just now?"		"You already knew about what we mentioned just now?"

	"I've only heard others talk about it, because I only came to Midgard a year ago... By then, Mitsuki-chan was already the student ~~body~~ president."		"I've only heard others talk about it, because I only came to Midgard a year ago... By then, Mitsuki-chan was already the student council president."

	"I see now... But let's put that aside. If you just got out of bed, get changed first. Otherwise, I won't know where to look."		"I see now... But let's put that aside. If you just got out of bed, get changed first. Otherwise, I won't know where to look."