Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 1 Chapter 4 - Revision history

Nikkivicious: /* Part 3 */

2020-05-17T02:53:18Z

Part 3

Nikkivicious: /* Part 2 */

2020-05-17T02:27:15Z

Part 2

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	According to the speculation of scientists, this dragon might be mutated from a blue whale.		According to the speculation of scientists, this dragon might be mutated from a blue whale.

	Indeed, with front flippers, tail fins and an air hole on ~~its~~ back, it shared the same characteristics as marine mammals. However, it definitely did not look like the same type of creature.		Indeed, with front flippers, tail fins and an air hole on it's back, it shared the same characteristics as marine mammals. However, it definitely did not look like the same type of creature.

	Covered all over by a white outer shell, it had a giant horn on its head and rows of sharp teeth like a carnivorous predator, not something one could still consider the same species as the blue whale.		Covered all over by a white outer shell, it had a giant horn on its head and rows of sharp teeth like a carnivorous predator, not something one could still consider the same species as the blue whale.

Entropy: Undo revision 502857 by FallenSky (talk)why are you adding pointless notes? anyone can figure this out with a simple web search

2016-09-24T23:04:56Z

Undo revision 502857 by FallenSky (talk)why are you adding pointless notes? anyone can figure this out with a simple web search

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	I wanted power, the power to make Mitsuki's wish come true, the power to eliminate all hardship, the power to pummel that thing which was making Mitsuki sad!		I wanted power, the power to make Mitsuki's wish come true, the power to eliminate all hardship, the power to pummel that thing which was making Mitsuki sad!

	—Neun~~<ref name="Neun">Neun is German for 'Nine'</ref>~~, demand, confirm—		—Neun, demand, confirm—

	At this moment, I heard an emotionless voice in my mind. Crack, I saw a tiny sapling, breaking through the asphalt surface of the road to emerge.		At this moment, I heard an emotionless voice in my mind. Crack, I saw a tiny sapling, breaking through the asphalt surface of the road to emerge.
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	Fragmented words poured into my mind directly. The originally intermittent voice gradually gained fluency.		Fragmented words poured into my mind directly. The originally intermittent voice gradually gained fluency.

	—I, am, Gaia's oldest, dragon species, Zwo<!--トゥーエ-->. Known as Kiskanu according to Acht~~<ref>Acht is German for 'Eight'</ref>~~<!--アハト-->, or ''Yggdrasil''—		—I, am, Gaia's oldest, dragon species, Zwo<!--トゥーエ-->. Known as Kiskanu according to Acht<!--アハト-->, or ''Yggdrasil''—

	"What..."		"What..."
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	What...? Aren't you on the same side? You're a dragon like them, right?		What...? Aren't you on the same side? You're a dragon like them, right?

	—No, we are different beings. They are guardians whose missions have ended, living on without purpose, existences causing harm, existences who have outlived their usefulness, what the planet seeks is ~~Neun<ref name="Neun" />—~~		—No, we are different beings. They are guardians whose missions have ended, living on without purpose, existences causing harm, existences who have outlived their usefulness, what the planet seeks is Neun—

	Guardians? Harm? Neun?		Guardians? Harm? Neun?

FallenSky: /* Part 1 */

2016-09-24T20:59:05Z

Part 1

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	I wanted power, the power to make Mitsuki's wish come true, the power to eliminate all hardship, the power to pummel that thing which was making Mitsuki sad!		I wanted power, the power to make Mitsuki's wish come true, the power to eliminate all hardship, the power to pummel that thing which was making Mitsuki sad!

	—Neun, demand, confirm—		—Neun<ref name="Neun">Neun is German for 'Nine'</ref>, demand, confirm—

	At this moment, I heard an emotionless voice in my mind. Crack, I saw a tiny sapling, breaking through the asphalt surface of the road to emerge.		At this moment, I heard an emotionless voice in my mind. Crack, I saw a tiny sapling, breaking through the asphalt surface of the road to emerge.
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	Fragmented words poured into my mind directly. The originally intermittent voice gradually gained fluency.		Fragmented words poured into my mind directly. The originally intermittent voice gradually gained fluency.

	—I, am, Gaia's oldest, dragon species, Zwo<!--トゥーエ-->. Known as Kiskanu according to Acht<!--アハト-->, or ''Yggdrasil''—		—I, am, Gaia's oldest, dragon species, Zwo<!--トゥーエ-->. Known as Kiskanu according to Acht<ref>Acht is German for 'Eight'</ref><!--アハト-->, or ''Yggdrasil''—

	"What..."		"What..."
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	What...? Aren't you on the same side? You're a dragon like them, right?		What...? Aren't you on the same side? You're a dragon like them, right?

	—No, we are different beings. They are guardians whose missions have ended, living on without purpose, existences causing harm, existences who have outlived their usefulness, what the planet seeks is ~~Neun—~~		—No, we are different beings. They are guardians whose missions have ended, living on without purpose, existences causing harm, existences who have outlived their usefulness, what the planet seeks is Neun<ref name="Neun" />—

	Guardians? Harm? Neun?		Guardians? Harm? Neun?

FallenSky: /* Part 3 */

2016-09-23T16:00:10Z

Part 3

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	Mitsuki gasped.		Mitsuki gasped.

	"I heard ~~your~~ were best friends."		"I heard you were best friends."

	"..."		"..."

FallenSky: /* Part 3 */

2016-01-21T20:28:59Z

Part 3

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	The barrow, ten-odd meters long, a base with circuits and wires exposed. Even by borrowing Mitsuki's power, it was impossible to recreate completely, so only the minimum necessary components were constructed. Hence, it could only fire one shot. Because no cooling functionality was installed, the barrow would melt.		The barrow, ten-odd meters long, a base with circuits and wires exposed. Even by borrowing Mitsuki's power, it was impossible to recreate completely, so only the minimum necessary components were constructed. Hence, it could only fire one shot. Because no cooling functionality was installed, the barrow would melt.

	The fatigue caused transmutation was unprecedented. My entire body felt heavy. My vision blurred. If I could still transmute again, it would be at most ~~once more~~.		The fatigue caused by the transmutation was unprecedented. My entire body felt heavy. My vision blurred. If I could still transmute again, it would be once more at most.

	Connecting the the control system to my consciousness, I glared at Leviathan. The barrow shifted slightly on its own and adjusted its aim.		Connecting the the control system to my consciousness, I glared at Leviathan. The barrow shifted slightly on its own and adjusted its aim.

FallenSky: /* Part 3 */

2016-01-21T20:19:07Z

Part 3

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	"Lend me your power, Mitsuki. If I have to do the same thing I did three years ago, I need to borrow dark matter from another D."		"Lend me your power, Mitsuki. If I have to do the same thing I did three years ago, I need to borrow dark matter from another D."

	"I knew it was this requirement... Three years, you were able to perform such a massive transmutation only because I was at your side."		"I knew it was this requirement... Three years ago, you were able to perform such a massive transmutation only because I was at your side."

	While talking about this subject yesterday, Mitsuki had already guessed the requirement. She made a look as though it was all expected.		While talking about this subject yesterday, Mitsuki had already guessed the requirement. She made a look as though it was all expected.

FallenSky: /* Part 3 */

2016-01-21T19:02:55Z

Part 3

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	Saying that, Iris wiped her tears away.		Saying that, Iris wiped her tears away.

	"Mononobe, what's left is observe the battle against Leviathan, right? Then let's return to the shelter."		"Mononobe, what's left is to observe the battle against Leviathan, right? Then let's return to the shelter."

	"—No, returning is useless."		"—No, returning is useless."

Entropy: /* Part 3 */

2015-12-21T03:14:48Z

Part 3

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	"...Yes!"		"...Yes!"

	Mitsuki nodded in acknowledgement, creating her fictional armament in her hand		Mitsuki nodded in acknowledgement, creating her fictional armament in her hand.

	"Brionac!"		"Brionac!"
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	Then Mitsuki's arrow penetrated from the front.		Then Mitsuki's arrow penetrated from the front.

	Instantly, with blinding explosion of pure white, Leviathan's entire body bulged from within.		Instantly, with a blinding explosion of pure white, Leviathan's entire body bulged from within.

	"Just a bit more, Iris!!"		"Just a bit more, Iris!!"

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2015-11-28T22:00:25Z

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	Iris sighed with disappointment.		Iris sighed with disappointment.

	"No, the plan is apparently to let it pass. The ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad is already waiting at the second defensive line."		"No, the plan is apparently to let it pass. The Dragon Subjugation Squad is already waiting at the second defensive line."

	I pointed to another screen.		I pointed to another screen.
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	However, the target was far too massive. Perhaps it was not even enough to inflict pain. Although Leviathan was injured to some extent, it still continued to advance unfazed.		However, the target was far too massive. Perhaps it was not even enough to inflict pain. Although Leviathan was injured to some extent, it still continued to advance unfazed.

	Then with Lisa in the lead, the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad attacked.		Then with Lisa in the lead, the Dragon Subjugation Squad attacked.

	The defense offered by spatial distortion had reached a limit. Leviathan could no longer handle all attacks. A thick beam of light released by Lisa pierced Leviathan's left flipper.		The defense offered by spatial distortion had reached a limit. Leviathan could no longer handle all attacks. A thick beam of light released by Lisa pierced Leviathan's left flipper.
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	Everything along Leviathan's route of advance was sent flying away. Giant laser units broke and scattered, falling into the surrounding sea.		Everything along Leviathan's route of advance was sent flying away. Giant laser units broke and scattered, falling into the surrounding sea.

	Originally in formation, the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad was also scattered in disarray.		Originally in formation, the Dragon Subjugation Squad was also scattered in disarray.

	BOOM—A low vibration also reached the shelter where we were.		BOOM—A low vibration also reached the shelter where we were.
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	The attack just now clearly showed the gap in power between humans and dragons.		The attack just now clearly showed the gap in power between humans and dragons.

	The ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad gathered and attacked again. Leviathan was still quite far from Midgard.		The Dragon Subjugation Squad gathered and attacked again. Leviathan was still quite far from Midgard.

	Lisa's face was seen for an instant on the screen, showing no signs of giving up.		Lisa's face was seen for an instant on the screen, showing no signs of giving up.
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	Bringing Iris who had suddenly become obedient, I arrived at the clock tower. Since it was currently underground, the clock was not visible but the building had other functions.		Bringing Iris who had suddenly become obedient, I arrived at the clock tower. Since it was currently underground, the clock was not visible but the building had other functions.

	The clock tower was currently used as the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad's command center.		The clock tower was currently used as the Dragon Subjugation Squad's command center.

	I placed my student ID on the panel sensor in front of the command center. Probably because I was not authorized for entry, the door did not open automatically, but instead, Shinomiya-sensei's voice spoke.		I placed my student ID on the panel sensor in front of the command center. Probably because I was not authorized for entry, the door did not open automatically, but instead, Shinomiya-sensei's voice spoke.
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	"What... It was your order? Why—"		"What... It was your order? Why—"

	"Because I was the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad's captain at the time and only Mononobe Mitsuki's antimatter projectile could defeat the Kraken."		"Because I was the Dragon Subjugation Squad's captain at the time and only Mononobe Mitsuki's antimatter projectile could defeat the Kraken."

	Shinomiya-sensei spoke without changing expression. I could not read the emotions in the dark depths of her eyes.		Shinomiya-sensei spoke without changing expression. I could not read the emotions in the dark depths of her eyes.
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	I asked in a hoarse voice.		I asked in a hoarse voice.

	"Nothing comes to my mind—No. Defeating it through constant accumulation of small wounds is the only way, I think. We are currently attacking using the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad's full force... But chances of making it in time are very low, hence I... returned to prevent the worst-case scenario."		"Nothing comes to my mind—No. Defeating it through constant accumulation of small wounds is the only way, I think. We are currently attacking using the Dragon Subjugation Squad's full force... But chances of making it in time are very low, hence I... returned to prevent the worst-case scenario."

	Mitsuki spoke in a depressing tone.		Mitsuki spoke in a depressing tone.
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	Perhaps it was advancing quite quickly. The figure grew huge in the blink of an eye.		Perhaps it was advancing quite quickly. The figure grew huge in the blink of an eye.

	Because it was too massive, it was hard to judge the distance. Its outer shell of pure white was dotted with red, probably bleeding from the wounds caused by Midgardsormr and the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad.		Because it was too massive, it was hard to judge the distance. Its outer shell of pure white was dotted with red, probably bleeding from the wounds caused by Midgardsormr and the Dragon Subjugation Squad.

	Uooooooooooooooooooooooooo!		Uooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
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	Pointing the staff's tip at Leviathan, Iris concentrated while chanting her usual incantation.		Pointing the staff's tip at Leviathan, Iris concentrated while chanting her usual incantation.

	"Mitsuki, just to be safe, could you contact the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad nearby and tell them to keep their distance?"		"Mitsuki, just to be safe, could you contact the Dragon Subjugation Squad nearby and tell them to keep their distance?"

	I could only see small dots from here but numerous Ds were flying in Leviathan's surroundings. As soon as Iris attacked, they might get caught in the blast by accident.		I could only see small dots from here but numerous Ds were flying in Leviathan's surroundings. As soon as Iris attacked, they might get caught in the blast by accident.
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	"—This is B3. All units retreat to Hypothetical Level A blast proximity and continue attacking from a distance."		"—This is B3. All units retreat to Hypothetical Level A blast proximity and continue attacking from a distance."

	Mitsuki issued the command. The ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad in the distance instantly changed their movements and left Leviathan.		Mitsuki issued the command. The Dragon Subjugation Squad in the distance instantly changed their movements and left Leviathan.

	"Okay, Iris, do it!"		"Okay, Iris, do it!"
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	"—Nii-san, please wait! To prevent it from rebounding the attack, I will bait Leviathan into distorting space first!"		"—Nii-san, please wait! To prevent it from rebounding the attack, I will bait Leviathan into distorting space first!"

	Mitsuki was stunned just now too, but she suddenly came to her senses and called to the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad through her communicator.		Mitsuki was stunned just now too, but she suddenly came to her senses and called to the Dragon Subjugation Squad through her communicator.

	"All units, pull back from the target again! B5, B6, dump matter downwards from the air with maximum generating capacity! Apply pressure to the target's handling capacity!"		"All units, pull back from the target again! B5, B6, dump matter downwards from the air with maximum generating capacity! Apply pressure to the target's handling capacity!"
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	Simply staring at reality, she silently gave up resistance.		Simply staring at reality, she silently gave up resistance.

	If standing from the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad's perspective, it was necessary to recognize the current situation correctly, but the expression on Mitsuki's face filled me with sorrow.		If standing from the Dragon Subjugation Squad's perspective, it was necessary to recognize the current situation correctly, but the expression on Mitsuki's face filled me with sorrow.

	I hoped Mitsuki could say it.		I hoped Mitsuki could say it.
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	"All units—Attack!!"		"All units—Attack!!"

	The ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad fired dozens of attacks, piercing Leviathan from the sides.		The Dragon Subjugation Squad fired dozens of attacks, piercing Leviathan from the sides.

	Then Mitsuki's arrow penetrated from the front.		Then Mitsuki's arrow penetrated from the front.

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	"Is it really okay... for me to come along?"		"Is it really okay... for me to come along?"

	"That's actually the safest way. As long as you stay at my side, Iris, I won't let you die—until the moment I ~~decided~~ to kill you."		"That's actually the safest way. As long as you stay at my side, Iris, I won't let you die—until the moment I decide to kill you."

	"Ooh... You're not allowed to say something like that!"		"Ooh... You're not allowed to say something like that!"
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	On further thought, they were too weak, after all.		On further thought, they were too weak, after all.

	I took another look. Their equipment was different too. Members of Sleipnir were supposed to be equipped with MP Nergal, but I ~~coudl~~ not see that kind of gun among these guys' equipment.		I took another look. Their equipment was different too. Members of Sleipnir were supposed to be equipped with MP Nergal, but I could not see that kind of gun among these guys' equipment.

	It looked like they were not the people sent by Major Loki.		It looked like they were not the people sent by Major Loki.
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	Mitsuki gazed down at me and explained the situation calmly.		Mitsuki gazed down at me and explained the situation calmly.

	"Whether poison that would spread from a single hit or a chain of attacks, Leviathan would slice off parts of ~~its~~ body to neutralize them. It is most likely using multiple repulsive fields to create spatial discontinuities to gouge it own body. Since its body is so humongous, it only results in trivial scratches."		"Whether poison that would spread from a single hit or a chain of attacks, Leviathan would slice off parts of it's body to neutralize them. It is most likely using multiple repulsive fields to create spatial discontinuities to gouge it own body. Since its body is so humongous, it only results in trivial scratches."

	"No other methods... are effective?"		"No other methods... are effective?"
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	"Nii-san, you will get hurt if you continue to resist. First arrow—Forked Wind!"		"Nii-san, you will get hurt if you continue to resist. First arrow—Forked Wind!"

	Probably deciding it was impossible to capture me without causing injury, Mitsuki's gaze changed. She looked like she intended to use her ~~prided~~ technique.		Probably deciding it was impossible to capture me without causing injury, Mitsuki's gaze changed. She looked like she intended to use her prized technique.

	While Mitsuki shot the arrow, the atmosphere's flow changed. The air gradually contracted. I tried to judge their number through wind currents, but the number of contraction points were too many for me to grasp completely.		While Mitsuki shot the arrow, the atmosphere's flow changed. The air gradually contracted. I tried to judge their number through wind currents, but the number of contraction points were too many for me to grasp completely.
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	Perhaps it was advancing quite quickly. The figure grew huge in the blink of an eye.		Perhaps it was advancing quite quickly. The figure grew huge in the blink of an eye.

	Because it was too massive, it was hard to judge the distance. ~~Its~~ outer shell of pure white was dotted with red, probably bleeding from the wounds caused by Midgardsormr and the Dragon Subjugation Squad.		Because it was too massive, it was hard to judge the distance. It's outer shell of pure white was dotted with red, probably bleeding from the wounds caused by Midgardsormr and the Dragon Subjugation Squad.

	Uooooooooooooooooooooooooo!		Uooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
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	BOOM!!		BOOM!!

	The atmosphere was distorted by the heavy cannon's rumbling. A bullet of blue-white light was fired. It was a weapon of annihilation that caused everything caught in ~~its~~ blast to disintegrate on the atomic level.		The atmosphere was distorted by the heavy cannon's rumbling. A bullet of blue-white light was fired. It was a weapon of annihilation that caused everything caught in it's blast to disintegrate on the atomic level.

	In the past, Hekatonkheir had instantly turned into dust after being struck by this bullet.		In the past, Hekatonkheir had instantly turned into dust after being struck by this bullet.
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	Due to Hekatonkheir's trait of immortality, even though it revived several hundred kilometers away afterwards, this weapon's firepower was guaranteed.		Due to Hekatonkheir's trait of immortality, even though it revived several hundred kilometers away afterwards, this weapon's firepower was guaranteed.

	The blue bullet flew towards Leviathan in a straight line, but the instant before ~~striking—Its~~ path was altered from spatial distortion, deviating to the lower left.		The blue bullet flew towards Leviathan in a straight line, but the instant before striking—It's path was altered from spatial distortion, deviating to the lower left.

	In that very instant, blinding blue light erupted. This was because I had adjusted the energy compression ratio while firing. Even if it failed to strike, it would still explode next to Leviathan.		In that very instant, blinding blue light erupted. This was because I had adjusted the energy compression ratio while firing. Even if it failed to strike, it would still explode next to Leviathan.
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	Angry roar was heard from the light, making me realize I had failed just when victory was in sight again.		Angry roar was heard from the light, making me realize I had failed just when victory was in sight again.

	The white monster emerged, breaking through the blue light and the cloud of water vapor. The left side of ~~its~~ outer shell was almost completely blown away, exposing muscle. Even so, ~~its~~ movements did not seem impeded. Swaying its body, Leviathan swam in the air, approaching the final defensive line.		The white monster emerged, breaking through the blue light and the cloud of water vapor. The left side of it's outer shell was almost completely blown away, exposing muscle. Even so, it's movements did not seem impeded. Swaying its body, Leviathan swam in the air, approaching the final defensive line.

	No longer concerned with the intercepting lasers, it headed straight for here, where Iris was.		No longer concerned with the intercepting lasers, it headed straight for here, where Iris was.
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	Uooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!		Uooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!

	Even ~~its~~ roaring deathcry was dragged into the spatial discontinuity, ~~its~~ voice growing progressively weaker.		Even it's roaring deathcry was dragged into the spatial discontinuity, it's voice growing progressively weaker.

	After devouring the giant dragon and the antimatter explosions, the space closed up.		After devouring the giant dragon and the antimatter explosions, the space closed up.