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	It was a large, unbelievably large thing.		It was a large, unbelievably large thing.

	One of the supernatural creatures called ''~~Dragons~~''.		One of the supernatural creatures called ''dragons''.

	In particular, the blue dragon — Hekatonkheir.		In particular, the blue dragon—Hekatonkheir.

	Though it was named after the ~~legendary giants~~, probably the only similarity it shared with ~~them~~ was that it walked on two feet.		Though it was named after the giant humanoids of legend, probably the only similarity it shared with humans was that it walked on two feet.

	Its whole body was covered with blue scales and when it moved, a part of the scales lit up, forming a strange pattern. Furthermore, the head that occasionally peeked out from the gaps in the clouds had neither eyes nor a nose nor a mouth, instead there existed just a single horn-like bulge.		Its whole body was covered with blue scales, and when it moved a part of the scales lit up, forming a strange pattern. Furthermore the head that occasionally peeked out from the gaps in the clouds had neither eyes nor a nose nor a mouth, instead there existed just a single horn-like bulge.

	There was no way to label such a being under the existing biological classification framework. That was why it was a ''~~Dragon~~''.		There was no way to label such a being under the existing biological classification framework. That was why it was a ''dragon''.

	The blue dragon that wandered the world on its whim — the headless giant.		The blue dragon that wandered the world on its whim—the headless giant.

	Unfortunate towns that end up in its path can do nothing but wait to be destroyed. Those who lived there could only run away before they were crushed.		Unfortunate towns that end up in its path can do nothing but wait to be destroyed. Those who lived there could only run away before they were crushed.

	However, the girl was the only one who did not turn away from the giant. She was the only one that headed towards the ~~Overlook~~ in order to face the monster.		However, the girl was the only one who did not turn away from the giant. She was the only one that headed towards the overlook in order to face the monster.

	The boy had come to bring the girl back, but what he ~~had~~ witnessed was the ''~~Battle~~'' between the girl and the giant.		The boy had come to bring the girl back, but what he witnessed there was the ''battle'' between the girl and the giant.

	"Gooo Awaaaaaaaaay——!!"		"Gooo Awaaaaaaaaay——!!"
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	As she did so, a black sphere appeared in front of the girl's eyes, and shot towards the giant.		As she did so, a black sphere appeared in front of the girl's eyes, and shot towards the giant.

	A few seconds later, a bright flash filled the world and the air shook. When ~~colour~~ returned to the surroundings, a part of the giant's left arm and flank had disappeared, ~~almost~~ as if ~~it were~~ gouged out.		A few seconds later, a bright flash filled the world and the air shook. When color returned to the surroundings, a part of the giant's left arm and flank had disappeared, as if gouged out.

	However, that lasted but a brief moment.		However, that lasted but a brief moment.

	As the girl took another breath, the left arm and flank ~~had~~ returned to normal.		As the girl took another breath, the left arm and flank returned to normal.

	"...!"		"...!"
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	"There's no way I can... give up."		"There's no way I can... give up."

	~~Hoarsely, the~~ girl replied.		The girl replied hoarsely.

	"But why? Our parents have already evacuated. Everyone else have probably long since escaped too. There's nothing that you need to protect like—"		"But why? Our parents have already evacuated. Everyone else have probably long since escaped too. There's nothing that you need to protect like—"
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	"There is! Our house is still there! That town is where our family belongs!!"		"There is! Our house is still there! That town is where our family belongs!!"

	~~Drowning out~~ the boy's voice, the girl yelled.		Overpowering the boy's voice, the girl yelled.

	The giant seemed to be getting ready to take yet another step. In front of it was the town that the boy and the girl had lived in for thirteen years.		The giant seemed to be getting ready to take yet another step. In front of it was the town that the boy and the girl had lived in for thirteen years.

	Six years as ~~neighbours~~, ~~and~~ seven years as family, the two had lived together.		Six years as neighbors, then seven years as family, the two had lived together.

	"...I see."		"...I see."

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	But there was no way that the voice from such a tiny human would reach.		But there was no way that the voice from such a tiny human would reach.

	The giant foot that easily flattened a whole town. The long arm that lightly swept away mountains. The head, hidden within ~~the~~ clouds, invisible.		The giant foot that easily flattened a whole town. The long arm that lightly swept away mountains. The head, hidden within clouds, invisible.

	It was a large, unbelievably large thing.		It was a large, unbelievably large thing.
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	The giant seemed to be getting ready to take yet another step. In front of it was the town that the boy and the girl had lived in for thirteen years.		The giant seemed to be getting ready to take yet another step. In front of it was the town that the boy and the girl had lived in for thirteen years.

	Six years as neighbours, and seven years as a family, the two had lived together.		Six years as neighbours, and seven years as family, the two had lived together.

	"... I see."		"...I see."

	With a small sigh, the boy patted the girl on the head.		With a small sigh, the boy patted the girl on the head.

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	But there was no way that the voice from such a tiny human would reach.		But there was no way that the voice from such a tiny human would reach.

	The giant foot that easily flattened a whole town. The long arm that lightly swept away mountains. The head, hidden within clouds, invisible.		The giant foot that easily flattened a whole town. The long arm that lightly swept away mountains. The head, hidden within the clouds, invisible.

	It was a large, unbelievably large thing.		It was a large, unbelievably large thing.
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	The giant seemed to be getting ready to take yet another step. In front of it was the town that the boy and the girl had lived in for thirteen years.		The giant seemed to be getting ready to take yet another step. In front of it was the town that the boy and the girl had lived in for thirteen years.

	Six years as neighbours, and seven years as family, the two had lived together.		Six years as neighbours, and seven years as a family, the two had lived together.

	"...I see."		"... I see."

	With a small sigh, the boy patted the girl on the head.		With a small sigh, the boy patted the girl on the head.

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	The girl looked up towards the boy with a confused face.		The girl looked up towards the boy with a confused face.

	"~~Onii~~-san?"		"Nii-san?"

	"Leave ''everything'' to me."		"Leave ''everything'' to me."

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	\| Forward to [[Unlimited_Fafnir:~~Volume_1_Chapter1~~\|Chapter 1]]		\| Forward to [[Unlimited_Fafnir:Volume_1_Chapter_1\|Chapter 1]]
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	It was a large, unbelievably large thing.		It was a large, unbelievably large thing.

	One of the supernatural creatures called ''~~dragons~~''.		One of the supernatural creatures called ''Dragons''.

	In particular, the blue dragon—Hekatonkheir.		In particular, the blue dragon — Hekatonkheir.

	Though it was named after the legendary giants, probably the only similarity it shared with ~~humans~~ was that it walked on two feet.		Though it was named after the legendary giants, probably the only similarity it shared with them was that it walked on two feet.

	Its whole body was covered with blue scales, and when it moved a part of the scales lit up, forming a strange pattern. Furthermore the head that occasionally peeked out from the gaps in the clouds had neither eyes nor a nose nor a mouth, instead there existed just a single horn-like bulge.		Its whole body was covered with blue scales and when it moved, a part of the scales lit up, forming a strange pattern. Furthermore, the head that occasionally peeked out from the gaps in the clouds had neither eyes nor a nose nor a mouth, instead there existed just a single horn-like bulge.

	There was no way to label such a being under the existing biological classification framework. That was why it was a ''~~dragon~~''.		There was no way to label such a being under the existing biological classification framework. That was why it was a ''Dragon''.

	The blue dragon that wandered the world on its whim—the headless giant.		The blue dragon that wandered the world on its whim — the headless giant.

	Unfortunate towns that end up in its path can do nothing but wait to be destroyed. Those who lived there could only run away before they were crushed.		Unfortunate towns that end up in its path can do nothing but wait to be destroyed. Those who lived there could only run away before they were crushed.

	However, the girl was the only one who did not turn away from the giant. She was the only one that headed towards the ~~overlook~~ in order to face the monster.		However, the girl was the only one who did not turn away from the giant. She was the only one that headed towards the Overlook in order to face the monster.

	The boy had come to bring the girl back, but what he had witnessed ~~there~~ was the ''~~battle~~'' between the girl and the giant.		The boy had come to bring the girl back, but what he had witnessed was the ''Battle'' between the girl and the giant.

	"Gooo Awaaaaaaaaay——!!"		"Gooo Awaaaaaaaaay——!!"
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	As she did so, a black sphere appeared in front of the girl's eyes, and shot towards the giant.		As she did so, a black sphere appeared in front of the girl's eyes, and shot towards the giant.

	A few seconds later, a bright flash filled the world and the air shook. When colour returned to the surroundings, a part of the giant's left arm and flank had disappeared, as if ~~gauged~~ out.		A few seconds later, a bright flash filled the world and the air shook. When colour returned to the surroundings, a part of the giant's left arm and flank had disappeared, almost as if it were gouged out.

	However, that lasted but a brief moment.		However, that lasted but a brief moment.
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	"...!"		"...!"

	Even then the girl continued to glare at the giant, biting down on her teeth.		Even then, the girl continued to glare at the giant, biting down on her teeth.

	"Mitsuki—why don't you give up?"		"Mitsuki—why don't you give up?"
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	"There's no way I can... give up."		"There's no way I can... give up."

	Hoarsely the girl replied.		Hoarsely, the girl replied.

	"But why? Our parents have already evacuated. Everyone else have probably long since escaped too. There's nothing that you need to protect like—"		"But why? Our parents have already evacuated. Everyone else have probably long since escaped too. There's nothing that you need to protect like—"
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	"There is! Our house is still there! That town is where our family belongs!!"		"There is! Our house is still there! That town is where our family belongs!!"

	~~Covering~~ the boy's voice, the girl yelled.		Drowning out the boy's voice, the girl yelled.

	The giant seemed to be getting ready to take yet another step. In front of it was the town that the boy and the girl had lived in for thirteen years.		The giant seemed to be getting ready to take yet another step. In front of it was the town that the boy and the girl had lived in for thirteen years.