Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 2 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Nikkivicious: /* Chapter 1 - Tia the Dragon Girl */

2020-05-17T04:27:07Z

Chapter 1 - Tia the Dragon Girl

Entropy: Reverted edits by FallenSky (talk) to last revision by Entropy

2016-09-23T23:28:33Z

Reverted edits by FallenSky (talk) to last revision by Entropy

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	Mitsuki grabbed nearby underwear to cover up her petite yet beautifully shaped breasts and glared at me. But due to the pair of s striped panties on her head, she did not look intimidating at all.		Mitsuki grabbed nearby underwear to cover up her petite yet beautifully shaped breasts and glared at me. But due to the pair of s striped panties on her head, she did not look intimidating at all.
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	I crossed my arms and reconfirmed the situation in the room.		I crossed my arms and reconfirmed the situation in the room.
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	"N-Nothing at all!"		"N-Nothing at all!"
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	Sulking, Mitsuki turned her head away.		Sulking, Mitsuki turned her head away.
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	"I-I'm called Mononobe Yuu..."		"I-I'm called Mononobe Yuu..."
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	"Mononobe, Yuu... Yuu... Great name. Umm... Yuu, Tia has something to tell you."		"Mononobe, Yuu... Yuu... Great name. Umm... Yuu, Tia has something to tell you."
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	And because everything happened too suddenly, I could not keep up with the situation. As for the young girl hugging me tightly around the waist, I could only stare blankly at her slender shoulders and those tiny horns—		And because everything happened too suddenly, I could not keep up with the situation. As for the young girl hugging me tightly around the waist, I could only stare blankly at her slender shoulders and those tiny horns—
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FallenSky: /* Part 5 */

2016-09-23T21:09:39Z

Part 5

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	"I-I'm called Mononobe Yuu..."		"I-I'm called Mononobe Yuu..."
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	"Mononobe, Yuu... Yuu... Great name. Umm... Yuu, Tia has something to tell you."		"Mononobe, Yuu... Yuu... Great name. Umm... Yuu, Tia has something to tell you."
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	And because everything happened too suddenly, I could not keep up with the situation. As for the young girl hugging me tightly around the waist, I could only stare blankly at her slender shoulders and those tiny horns—		And because everything happened too suddenly, I could not keep up with the situation. As for the young girl hugging me tightly around the waist, I could only stare blankly at her slender shoulders and those tiny horns—
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FallenSky: /* Part 1 */

2016-09-23T18:04:57Z

Part 1

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	Mitsuki grabbed nearby underwear to cover up her petite yet beautifully shaped breasts and glared at me. But due to the pair of s striped panties on her head, she did not look intimidating at all.		Mitsuki grabbed nearby underwear to cover up her petite yet beautifully shaped breasts and glared at me. But due to the pair of s striped panties on her head, she did not look intimidating at all.
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	I crossed my arms and reconfirmed the situation in the room.		I crossed my arms and reconfirmed the situation in the room.
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	"N-Nothing at all!"		"N-Nothing at all!"
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	Sulking, Mitsuki turned her head away.		Sulking, Mitsuki turned her head away.

Entropy: revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

2015-11-28T22:02:37Z

revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

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	This modified island was an interception stronghold designed for fighting dragons.		This modified island was an interception stronghold designed for fighting dragons.

	Lessons taught about how to use powers for fighting dragons. Outstanding students were selected to join the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad.		Lessons taught about how to use powers for fighting dragons. Outstanding students were selected to join the Dragon Subjugation Squad.

	The reason why they were combat ready to such an extent was because it was already certain that dragons would attack Midgard eventually.		The reason why they were combat ready to such an extent was because it was already certain that dragons would attack Midgard eventually.

Entropy: note: Mica, as in the mineral, not Micah, the male Hebrew prophet

2015-09-27T06:26:19Z

note: Mica, as in the mineral, not Micah, the male Hebrew prophet

Serafall at 10:27, 26 April 2015

2015-04-26T10:27:01Z

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	Immediately, Mitsuki went red in the face.		Immediately, Mitsuki went red in the face.

	"P-Please do not reminisce about that! I-If you were to repeat the same words in school, ~~Nii0san~~, I shall have to punish you for sexual harassment! You will be punished to write ten repentance essays!"		"P-Please do not reminisce about that! I-If you were to repeat the same words in school, Nii-san, I shall have to punish you for sexual harassment! You will be punished to write ten repentance essays!"

	"Man... I don't ever want to write another repentance essay again. Give me a break."		"Man... I don't ever want to write another repentance essay again. Give me a break."

Entropy at 19:49, 19 March 2015

2015-03-19T19:49:50Z

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	Immediately, Mitsuki went red in the face.		Immediately, Mitsuki went red in the face.

	"P-Please do not reminisce about that! I-If you were to repeat the same words in school, Nii0san, I shall have to punish you for sexual harassment! You will be punished to write ten ~~reflection~~ essays!"		"P-Please do not reminisce about that! I-If you were to repeat the same words in school, Nii0san, I shall have to punish you for sexual harassment! You will be punished to write ten repentance essays!"

	"Man... I don't ever want to write another ~~reflection~~ essay again. Give me a break."		"Man... I don't ever want to write another repentance essay again. Give me a break."

	Due to insubordination in the previous battle, I was punished to write almost a hundred ~~reflection~~ essays. To be honest, it made me suffer even more than NIFL's training.		Due to insubordination in the previous battle, I was punished to write almost a hundred repentance essays. To be honest, it made me suffer even more than NIFL's training.

	"Then please think very carefully before you speak."		"Then please think very carefully before you speak."

Entropy: /* Part 5 */

2015-03-18T09:55:41Z

Part 5

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	Creating a new part connected to the body—This sounded simple.		Creating a new part connected to the body—This sounded simple.

	Since dark matter could be transmuted into any substance, in theory, it was possible to perform ~~live body~~ transmutations.		Since dark matter could be transmuted into any substance, in theory, it was possible to perform biogenic transmutations.

	However, doing it in practice was another matter.		However, doing it in practice was another matter.

Entropy at 03:51, 15 March 2015

2015-03-15T03:51:03Z

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	Mitsuki kept switching hands to carry her schoolbag as though she could not settle down, then she looked up at me.		Mitsuki kept switching hands to carry her schoolbag as though she could not settle down, then she looked up at me.

	"How should I put this...? Recently, Nii-san, ~~your many insufficiently cautious acts~~, such as entering my room without knocking, approaching me nonchalantly while I was naked... I believe you are acting a bit too unreserved."		"How should I put this...? Recently, Nii-san, you have been acting without delicacy, such as entering my room without knocking, approaching me nonchalantly while I was naked... I believe you are acting a bit too unreserved."

	"...? Siblings aren't supposed to act reserved to each other, right? Are you asking me to act more distant towards you, Mitsuki?"		"...? Siblings aren't supposed to act reserved to each other, right? Are you asking me to act more distant towards you, Mitsuki?"

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	"W-What are you calmly analyzing the situation for!? The second time happened because just as I was putting the drawer back, Nii-san, you suddenly appeared! No, I should ask you leave now!!"		"W-What are you calmly analyzing the situation for!? The second time happened because just as I was putting the drawer back, Nii-san, you suddenly appeared! No, I should ask you leave now!!"

	Mitsuki, the student ~~body~~ president, harshly commanded me to leave, but I did not follow her orders. Instead, I approached her while she was buried in the pile of underwear.		Mitsuki, the student council president, harshly commanded me to leave, but I did not follow her orders. Instead, I approached her while she was buried in the pile of underwear.

	"Sorry, Mitsuki, before I leave, let me have a look first."		"Sorry, Mitsuki, before I leave, let me have a look first."
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	"Then please think very carefully before you speak."		"Then please think very carefully before you speak."

	"...Affirmative, student ~~body~~ president. But what happened this morning really doesn't seem like a blunder you'd make, Mitsuki. Shouldn't daily necessities like underwear be kept somewhere easier to reach?"		"...Affirmative, student council president. But what happened this morning really doesn't seem like a blunder you'd make, Mitsuki. Shouldn't daily necessities like underwear be kept somewhere easier to reach?"

	The drawer Mitsuki had dropped on the ground was the top drawer—It was at a height that she could barely reach on tiptoe. Hence it came as no surprise that she overturned it.		The drawer Mitsuki had dropped on the ground was the top drawer—It was at a height that she could barely reach on tiptoe. Hence it came as no surprise that she overturned it.
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	Hearing me ask with curiosity, Mitsuki answered with a slightly solemn expression.		Hearing me ask with curiosity, Mitsuki answered with a slightly solemn expression.

	"Although ordinary students have not been informed yet, an impromptu health examination will actually be held today. In order to maintain the integrity of the student ~~body~~ president's dignity after undressing, I must exercise extra caution on the matter of underwear."		"Although ordinary students have not been informed yet, an impromptu health examination will actually be held today. In order to maintain the integrity of the student council president's dignity after undressing, I must exercise extra caution on the matter of underwear."

	Finding out about Mitsuki's secret efforts, I sighed.		Finding out about Mitsuki's secret efforts, I sighed.

	"...Life must be tough being the student ~~body~~ president. But these random sampling health examinations... Are they frequent in Midgard?"		"...Life must be tough being the student council president. But these random sampling health examinations... Are they frequent in Midgard?"

	I still had yet to get a grasp on Midgard's common knowledge, so I asked Mitsuki this question.		I still had yet to get a grasp on Midgard's common knowledge, so I asked Mitsuki this question.
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	"—Indeed there is a reason, but I cannot reveal it yet."		"—Indeed there is a reason, but I cannot reveal it yet."

	Seeing her put on her student ~~body~~ president's face, refusing firmly to reveal the truth, it was very hard for me to pry further.		Seeing her put on her student council president's face, refusing firmly to reveal the truth, it was very hard for me to pry further.

	Hence, I gave up asking the reason and turned my gaze forward.		Hence, I gave up asking the reason and turned my gaze forward.
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	The girl's gaze checked me out from head to foot without reservation. Then she said:		The girl's gaze checked me out from head to foot without reservation. Then she said:

	"Just as you say, I am Midgard's chief, Charlotte B. Lord. And over here is ~~Maika~~ Stuart, my personal secretary."		"Just as you say, I am Midgard's chief, Charlotte B. Lord. And over here is Mica Stuart, my personal secretary."

	Introduced by the girl—Principal Charlotte—the maid lowered her head and bowed to me.		Introduced by the girl—Principal Charlotte—the maid lowered her head and bowed to me.

	"I am ~~Maika~~ Stuart, pleased to make your acquaintance."		"I am Mica Stuart, pleased to make your acquaintance."

	"I am Mononobe Yuu, nice to meet you too..."		"I am Mononobe Yuu, nice to meet you too..."

	After introducing myself to the principal and ~~Maika~~-san, I then asked:		After introducing myself to the principal and Mica-san, I then asked:

	"...So why are you taking the trouble to examine me, Principal?"		"...So why are you taking the trouble to examine me, Principal?"
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	Standing up from her chair, the principal walked towards me.		Standing up from her chair, the principal walked towards me.

	"Uh, but Principal, you and ~~Maika~~-san are ladies too..."		"Uh, but Principal, you and Mica-san are ladies too..."

	"Hmph, don't compare ~~Maika~~ and I with those innocent maidens. Besides, I have no interest in men at all."		"Hmph, don't compare Mica and I with those innocent maidens. Besides, I have no interest in men at all."

	Revealing the shocking truth nonchalantly, the principal looked up at me from up close. Although she only reached my chest in height and had tender and delicate snow-white skin, judging from what she said just now, she should be older than the students.		Revealing the shocking truth nonchalantly, the principal looked up at me from up close. Although she only reached my chest in height and had tender and delicate snow-white skin, judging from what she said just now, she should be older than the students.
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	Just as the principal showed excitement in her eyes, she suddenly vanished from view.		Just as the principal showed excitement in her eyes, she suddenly vanished from view.

	I looked up to see the secretary, ~~Maika~~-san, lifting the principal up by her head, suspending her in midair.		I looked up to see the secretary, Mica-san, lifting the principal up by her head, suspending her in midair.

	"Charlotte-Same, do you understand your position? Please do not lead students astray."		"Charlotte-Same, do you understand your position? Please do not lead students astray."

	Now that I am looking from a closer position, I discovered that ~~Maika~~-san was very intimidating in various ways. Her bust was so huge that it was almost bursting out of her clothing. Her height was similar to mine, quite tall for a woman.		Now that I am looking from a closer position, I discovered that Mica-san was very intimidating in various ways. Her bust was so huge that it was almost bursting out of her clothing. Her height was similar to mine, quite tall for a woman.

	"L-Let me go, ~~Maika~~! I-I must go on an adventure with my friend!"		"L-Let me go, Mica! I-I must go on an adventure with my friend!"

	Mika-san ignored the struggling principal. Smiling at me, she said:		Mika-san ignored the struggling principal. Smiling at me, she said:
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	"O-Okay, got it."		"O-Okay, got it."

	Despite her gentle expression, I felt overwhelming pressure. Also, she had approached me just now without my sensing her presence. Through observing her centre of gravity, I concluded she was most likely trained in martial arts. ~~Maika~~-san was clearly no ordinary secretary.		Despite her gentle expression, I felt overwhelming pressure. Also, she had approached me just now without my sensing her presence. Through observing her centre of gravity, I concluded she was most likely trained in martial arts. Mica-san was clearly no ordinary secretary.

	Hence, I swiftly spun right and walked to the door.		Hence, I swiftly spun right and walked to the door.
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	But just as I was about to exit, the principal called to me.		But just as I was about to exit, the principal called to me.

	I looked back to see her speaking while still suspended in the air by ~~Maika~~-san.		I looked back to see her speaking while still suspended in the air by Mica-san.

	"Your wound—It is a medal that will never disappear. Be proud of it."		"Your wound—It is a medal that will never disappear. Be proud of it."
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	The venue was the cafeteria on the first floor of the catering building. With Brynhildr Class' entire roster gathered on this table, we were clearly the center of people's attention.		The venue was the cafeteria on the first floor of the catering building. With Brynhildr Class' entire roster gathered on this table, we were clearly the center of people's attention.

	With Mitsuki being the student ~~body~~ president while I was a boy, it could not be helped that we attracted attention. However, many people were gazing fervently at Lisa and the others too.		With Mitsuki being the student council president while I was a boy, it could not be helped that we attracted attention. However, many people were gazing fervently at Lisa and the others too.

	Perhaps used to such an atmosphere, Mitsuki and Lisa were not bothered, looking relaxed and composed.		Perhaps used to such an atmosphere, Mitsuki and Lisa were not bothered, looking relaxed and composed.