Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 2 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Nikkivicious: /* Part 4 */

2020-05-17T04:58:29Z

Part 4

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	Her voice sounded full of sorrow.		Her voice sounded full of sorrow.

	"~~...~~..."		"..."

	I could only stay silent, unable to say a word. I did not understand what Mitsuki was talking about.		I could only stay silent, unable to say a word. I did not understand what Mitsuki was talking about.
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	"Tia, what's making you so afraid? You refuse to leave me because you're afraid I'll disappear, right?"		"Tia, what's making you so afraid? You refuse to leave me because you're afraid I'll disappear, right?"

	"~~...~~..."		"..."

	Tia looked up but kept her lips shut tightly, refusing to say a single word.		Tia looked up but kept her lips shut tightly, refusing to say a single word.

Nikkivicious: /* Part 3 */

2020-05-17T04:53:45Z

Part 3

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	"That is something humans decided on their own. Tia is a dragon, it has nothing to do with Tia."		"That is something humans decided on their own. Tia is a dragon, it has nothing to do with Tia."

	"~~...~~..."		"..."

	Confronted with Tia's dragon logic for who knew how many times, Mitsuki slumped her shoulders in dejection.		Confronted with Tia's dragon logic for who knew how many times, Mitsuki slumped her shoulders in dejection.
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	"Eh? No way? You allow it?"		"Eh? No way? You allow it?"

	I really could not believe that Mitsuki, the student council president, would permit a mixed gender bath. When the fact that Iris helped scrubbed my back came to light, I was punished to write a huge number of repentance essays.		I really could not believe that Mitsuki, the student council president, would permit a mixed-gender bath. When the fact that Iris helped scrubbed my back came to light, I was punished to write a huge number of repentance essays.

	"Yes, but on one condition. I basically predicted this, hence I came prepared. Please wait a moment, Nii-san."		"Yes, but on one condition. I basically predicted this, hence I came prepared. Please wait a moment, Nii-san."
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	Tia's face was always busy making all kinds of expressions. While spinning in circles because of her, I could hardly imagine such a description applying to her.		Tia's face was always busy making all kinds of expressions. While spinning in circles because of her, I could hardly imagine such a description applying to her.

	"Yes, like a completely different person compared to what we saw of her during the full-school assembly. In the beginning, I thought she was reticent and obedient child..."		"Yes, like a completely different person compared to what we saw of her during the full-school assembly. In the beginning, I thought she was a reticent and obedient child..."

	"In other words, your 'Ds are human' assertion was something Tia found intolerable, to the point of causing a drastic change in personality. Mitsuki, do you know what kind of environment Tia lived in previously?"		"In other words, your 'Ds are human' assertion was something Tia found intolerable, to the point of causing a drastic change in personality. Mitsuki, do you know what kind of environment Tia lived in previously?"
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	"Indeed... The impression I gather from Tia-san is that she was forced to convince herself to believe rather than sincerely believing she is a dragon."		"Indeed... The impression I gather from Tia-san is that she was forced to convince herself to believe rather than sincerely believing she is a dragon."

	—~~Convince~~ herself to believe... huh?		—Convinced herself to believe... huh?

	Indeed, throwing a tantrum in response to allegations was evidence of uncertainty in one's heart.		Indeed, throwing a tantrum in response to allegations was evidence of uncertainty in one's heart.

Nikkivicious: /* Part 2 */

2020-05-17T04:43:11Z

Part 2

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	Using the remainder of the lunch break, we took Tia around to get to know the campus. At the clock tower, I was just about to go to the washroom when Tia wanted to go with me, thus causing a dispute for a while.		Using the remainder of the lunch break, we took Tia around to get to know the campus. At the clock tower, I was just about to go to the washroom when Tia wanted to go with me, thus causing a dispute for a while.

	Persuaded by Mitsuki, Tia finally agreed to let go of my hand, but she kept ~~holler~~ "Yuu, are you there?" from outside, giving me no peace while I did my business.		Persuaded by Mitsuki, Tia finally agreed to let go of my hand, but she kept yelling "Yuu, are you there?" from outside, giving me no peace while I did my business.

	—As a side note, inside Midgard, there were only two washrooms I could use. As Midgard's core area, the clock tower would have occasional visitors from outside, hence male washrooms were available for visitors to use. The other one was the toilet in my own room at the dorm.		—As a side note, inside Midgard, there were only two washrooms I could use. As Midgard's core area, the clock tower would have occasional visitors from outside, hence male washrooms were available for visitors to use. The other one was the toilet in my own room at the dorm.
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	I should have minded my own business. I scratched my head.		I should have minded my own business. I scratched my head.

	"Nothing of that sort, I'm happy that you talked to me. Even just knowing that you are such a friendly person counts as a kind of ~~encourage~~ to me here on."		"Nothing of that sort, I'm happy that you talked to me. Even just knowing that you are such a friendly person counts as a kind of encouragement to me here on."

	Although Honoka thanked me, what she said made me a bit concerned. Thinking more carefully, taking her around to familiarize with the campus should be what her classmates would do first. Perhaps there was not anyone friendly in the class she was assigned to.		Although Honoka thanked me, what she said made me a bit concerned. Thinking more carefully, taking her around to familiarize with the campus should be what her classmates would do first. Perhaps there was not anyone friendly in the class she was assigned to.

	"...If you have any difficulties, you can find my any time. I'll tell you my email address."		"...If you have any difficulties, you can find me any time. I'll tell you my email address."

	"Oh... Thank you."		"Oh... Thank you."
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	"Yeah..."		"Yeah..."

	~~Becuase~~ the shock was too great, it was easy for the horns to steal the spotlight, but objectively speaking, Tia was a cute girl. In two or three years, she would surely become even more beautiful.		Because the shock was too great, it was easy for the horns to steal the spotlight, but objectively speaking, Tia was a cute girl. In two or three years, she would surely become even more beautiful.

	"Tia is—a cute girl, right?"		"Tia is—a cute girl, right?"
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	"No, but you have human parents, right?"		"No, but you have human parents, right?"

	I had seen her parents when saving her in a warzone. I thought that ~~afterwards~~, they should be living together as a family of three.		I had seen her parents when saving her in a warzone. I thought that afterward, they should be living together as a family of three.

	"......Tia has no human papa or mama."		"......Tia has no human papa or mama."
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	"Ah... It's really so salty!"		"Ah... It's really so salty!"

	Tia seemed quite moved and yelled excitedly. How should I say it? ~~looking~~ at her like that, I could not help but smile.		Tia seemed quite moved and yelled excitedly. How should I say it? Looking at her like that, I could not help but smile.

	—I can't force this child to make that kind of expression.		—I can't force this child to make that kind of expression.
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	When insisting she was a dragon, insisting she had no parents, Tia's face lost all emotion.		When insisting she was a dragon, insisting she had no parents, Tia's face lost all emotion.

	Tia's issues seemed to much bigger than imagined but I decided in my heart to help her resolve them bit by bit.		Tia's issues seemed so much bigger than imagined but I decided in my heart to help her resolve them bit by bit.

	This started as a mission forced upon me by someone else, but after knowing she was the D that I had met in a warzone, I could not stay uninvolved anymore because I had to take serious responsibility for her.		This started as a mission forced upon me by someone else, but after knowing she was the D that I had met in a warzone, I could not stay uninvolved anymore because I had to take serious responsibility for her.

Nikkivicious: /* Part 1 */

2020-05-17T04:32:35Z

Part 1

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	"So here is how it goes, Mononobe Yuu. You will be in charge of her education. Basic studies, common sense, rules for living in Midgard, you will teach all of that to her."		"So here is how it goes, Mononobe Yuu. You will be in charge of her education. Basic studies, common sense, rules for living in Midgard, you will teach all of that to her."

	"What...? I-I'm gonna teach her? I only arrived in Midgard a month myself, you know?"		"What...? I-I'm gonna teach her? I only arrived in Midgard a month ago myself, you know?"

	I argued anxiously but Shinomiya-sensei's tone of voice forbade me from refusing.		I argued anxiously but Shinomiya-sensei's tone of voice forbade me from refusing.
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	Just like when Leviathan attacked, they intended to kill Iris whose dragon mark had changed color.		Just like when Leviathan attacked, they intended to kill Iris whose dragon mark had changed color.

	"~~...~~...I got it. Although I'm not confident, I'll try my best."		"...I got it. Although I'm not confident, I'll try my best."

	For a newbie like me, the responsibilities of this mission were way too heavy.		For a newbie like me, the responsibilities of this mission were way too heavy.
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	"...?"		"...?"

	At Tia's urging, I sat down on my own seat.		At Tia's urging, I sat down in my own seat.

	"Fufu, then Tia will sit down too."		"Fufu, then Tia will sit down too."
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	"T-Tia, wait... This is very uncomfortable."		"T-Tia, wait... This is very uncomfortable."

	Previously, I always treated her as a child and acted generously, but with such intimate contact, I could not help but waver a bit. Feeling her delicate, petite and lightweight figure and her soft skin, I was forced to become aware that, even at this kind of age, she was already a girl. The fragrance drifting from Tia's beautiful hair was tickling my nasal cavity.		Previously, I always treated her as a child and acted generously, but with such intimate contact, I could not help but waver a bit. Feeling her delicate, petite, and lightweight figure and her soft skin, I was forced to become aware that, even at this kind of age, she was already a girl. The fragrance drifting from Tia's beautiful hair was tickling my nasal cavity.

	"—Tia-san, sitting in your own seat to attend class is a rule of this school's. Please follow it."		"—Tia-san, sitting in your own seat to attend class is a rule of this school's. Please follow it."
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	Tia showed a joyful expression while her legs swayed nonstop.		Tia showed a joyful expression while her legs swayed nonstop.

	I looked down at Tia, my self-proclaimed wife. This was a mission harder than imagined, totally putting me at a loss what to do.		I looked down at Tia, my self-proclaimed wife. This was a mission harder than imagined, totally putting me at a loss of what to do.

	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

Entropy: Undo revision 502855 by FallenSky (talk)

2016-09-24T23:02:21Z

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	I praised Tia and stroked her head.		I praised Tia and stroked her head.
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	"Ehehe..."		"Ehehe..."
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	Tia looked alternately between Firill's face and the manga, then accepted the book timidly.		Tia looked alternately between Firill's face and the manga, then accepted the book timidly.
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	"...Later."		"...Later."

FallenSky: /* Part 5 */

2016-09-24T19:27:42Z

Part 5

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	I praised Tia and stroked her head.		I praised Tia and stroked her head.
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	"Ehehe..."		"Ehehe..."
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	Tia looked alternately between Firill's face and the manga, then accepted the book timidly.		Tia looked alternately between Firill's face and the manga, then accepted the book timidly.
	~~[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v02 131.jpg\|thumb]]~~

	"...Later."		"...Later."

FallenSky: /* Part 3 */

2016-01-21T22:41:29Z

Part 3

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	Tia's face was always busy making all kinds of expressions. While spinning in circles because of her, I could hardly imagine such a description applying to her.		Tia's face was always busy making all kinds of expressions. While spinning in circles because of her, I could hardly imagine such a description applying to her.

	"Yes, like a completely person compared to what we saw of her during the full-school assembly. In the beginning, I thought she was reticent and obedient child..."		"Yes, like a completely different person compared to what we saw of her during the full-school assembly. In the beginning, I thought she was reticent and obedient child..."

	"In other words, your 'Ds are human' assertion was something Tia found intolerable, to the point of causing a drastic change in personality. Mitsuki, do you know what kind of environment Tia lived in previously?"		"In other words, your 'Ds are human' assertion was something Tia found intolerable, to the point of causing a drastic change in personality. Mitsuki, do you know what kind of environment Tia lived in previously?"

Entropy at 06:27, 27 September 2015

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	I motioned with my eyes, to introduce her to Tia, but for some reason, Tia hugged my waist tightly and glared at her silently.		I motioned with my eyes, to introduce her to Tia, but for some reason, Tia hugged my waist tightly and glared at her silently.

	"Right, although I saw her for the first time at the full-school assembly, I still have not greeted her... But I did hear the student ~~body~~ president's introduction."		"Right, although I saw her for the first time at the full-school assembly, I still have not greeted her... But I did hear the student council president's introduction."

	Saying that, she lowered her head and bowed to us.		Saying that, she lowered her head and bowed to us.
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	Hearing my answer, Mitsuki sighed.		Hearing my answer, Mitsuki sighed.

	"I understand. Then I shall take over education regarding rules, because I am the student ~~body~~ president, I cannot allow Tia-san to do as she pleases."		"I understand. Then I shall take over education regarding rules, because I am the student council president, I cannot allow Tia-san to do as she pleases."

	Thus, after dinner, Mitsuki started to educate Tia in my room.		Thus, after dinner, Mitsuki started to educate Tia in my room.
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	"Eh? No way? You allow it?"		"Eh? No way? You allow it?"

	I really could not believe that Mitsuki, the student ~~body~~ president, would permit a mixed gender bath. When the fact that Iris helped scrubbed my back came to light, I was punished to write a huge number of repentance essays.		I really could not believe that Mitsuki, the student council president, would permit a mixed gender bath. When the fact that Iris helped scrubbed my back came to light, I was punished to write a huge number of repentance essays.

	"Yes, but on one condition. I basically predicted this, hence I came prepared. Please wait a moment, Nii-san."		"Yes, but on one condition. I basically predicted this, hence I came prepared. Please wait a moment, Nii-san."

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	Saying that, Mitsuki got up from her seat, but froze after hearing Tia's next comment.		Saying that, Mitsuki got up from her seat, but froze after hearing Tia's next comment.

	"~~The~~ Tia will have a bath with Yuu!"		"Then Tia will have a bath with Yuu!"

	"This came after all..."		"This came after all..."

Entropy at 19:50, 19 March 2015

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	"Eh? No way? You allow it?"		"Eh? No way? You allow it?"

	I really could not believe that Mitsuki, the student body president, would permit a mixed gender bath. When the fact that Iris helped scrubbed my back came to light, I was punished to write a huge number of ~~reflection~~ essays.		I really could not believe that Mitsuki, the student body president, would permit a mixed gender bath. When the fact that Iris helped scrubbed my back came to light, I was punished to write a huge number of repentance essays.

	"Yes, but on one condition. I basically predicted this, hence I came prepared. Please wait a moment, Nii-san."		"Yes, but on one condition. I basically predicted this, hence I came prepared. Please wait a moment, Nii-san."