Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 3 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Entropy: Reverted edits by FallenSky (talk) to last revision by Entropy

2016-01-30T23:56:07Z

Reverted edits by FallenSky (talk) to last revision by Entropy

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	Being "her" eyes and ears to gather information, acting as "her" limbs to carry out "her" will, this was Kili's job. Also—this was the purpose of her creation.		Being "her" eyes and ears to gather information, acting as "her" limbs to carry out "her" will, this was Kili's job. Also—this was the purpose of her creation.
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	"Eh... But I remember that it was Monobe Mitsuki who used antimatter projectile to slay the Kraken. If that's the case, it's weird... It doesn't make sense. ''She had to have defeated the Kraken first in order to create antimatter''... So what actually happened?"		"Eh... But I remember that it was Monobe Mitsuki who used antimatter projectile to slay the Kraken. If that's the case, it's weird... It doesn't make sense. ''She had to have defeated the Kraken first in order to create antimatter''... So what actually happened?"

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	Staring at him, Kili's eyes showed signs of hidden madness.		Staring at him, Kili's eyes showed signs of hidden madness.
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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

FallenSky: /* Part 1 */

2016-01-27T17:54:57Z

Part 1

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	Being "her" eyes and ears to gather information, acting as "her" limbs to carry out "her" will, this was Kili's job. Also—this was the purpose of her creation.		Being "her" eyes and ears to gather information, acting as "her" limbs to carry out "her" will, this was Kili's job. Also—this was the purpose of her creation.
			[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v03 076.jpg\|thumb]]
	"Eh... But I remember that it was Monobe Mitsuki who used antimatter projectile to slay the Kraken. If that's the case, it's weird... It doesn't make sense. ''She had to have defeated the Kraken first in order to create antimatter''... So what actually happened?"		"Eh... But I remember that it was Monobe Mitsuki who used antimatter projectile to slay the Kraken. If that's the case, it's weird... It doesn't make sense. ''She had to have defeated the Kraken first in order to create antimatter''... So what actually happened?"

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	Staring at him, Kili's eyes showed signs of hidden madness.		Staring at him, Kili's eyes showed signs of hidden madness.
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	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

Entropy: revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

2015-11-28T22:07:52Z

revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

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	"B-By important things, you mean..."		"B-By important things, you mean..."

	"Please, Mitsuki. I know you're very busy as the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad captain... But even if it's just one night, please let me have your time."		"Please, Mitsuki. I know you're very busy as the Dragon Subjugation Squad captain... But even if it's just one night, please let me have your time."

	"M-My time—!?"		"M-My time—!?"
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	Mitsuki spoke regretfully. Back then, no one knew that there was a link between the dragon mark's change in color and a D's dragonification. However, had they discovered the symptoms earlier, perhaps a different future would have resulted. That was probably what Mitsuki thought.		Mitsuki spoke regretfully. Back then, no one knew that there was a link between the dragon mark's change in color and a D's dragonification. However, had they discovered the symptoms earlier, perhaps a different future would have resulted. That was probably what Mitsuki thought.

	"There were already plans back then to use the Ds' powers as trump cards for vanquishing dragons. And so, the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad was established with Haruka-san as the captain. Miyako and I were part of it too, hence we head to the frontline... Falling into the Kraken's trap on our own."		"There were already plans back then to use the Ds' powers as trump cards for vanquishing dragons. And so, the Dragon Subjugation Squad was established with Haruka-san as the captain. Miyako and I were part of it too, hence we head to the frontline... Falling into the Kraken's trap on our own."

	Hearing what she said, I felt puzzled. Since the dragons' aims were unknown at the time, there should have been the option of escaping back then.		Hearing what she said, I felt puzzled. Since the dragons' aims were unknown at the time, there should have been the option of escaping back then.

Entropy at 06:31, 27 September 2015

2015-09-27T06:31:49Z

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	"No, Nii-san and I are..."		"No, Nii-san and I are..."

	Mitsuki's gaze wandered indecisively. Perhaps she was worried that this would count as breaking public morals as the student ~~body~~ president, even if we were siblings.		Mitsuki's gaze wandered indecisively. Perhaps she was worried that this would count as breaking public morals as the student council president, even if we were siblings.

	Then I should tell her that I had my own reasons too.		Then I should tell her that I had my own reasons too.
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	Mitsuki's tone of voice sounded a bit sad.		Mitsuki's tone of voice sounded a bit sad.

	"Well, the same applies to you to, Mitsuki. I never expected my introverted and shy little sister to become the student ~~body~~ president."		"Well, the same applies to you to, Mitsuki. I never expected my introverted and shy little sister to become the student council president."

	"Not at all... I am simply working my hardest at things within my power."		"Not at all... I am simply working my hardest at things within my power."
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	I could also vaguely sense the shadow of Shinomiya Miyako here.		I could also vaguely sense the shadow of Shinomiya Miyako here.

	Perhaps Mitsuki viewed working as the student ~~body~~ president as a kind of atonement.		Perhaps Mitsuki viewed working as the student council president as a kind of atonement.

	"Mitsuki—What were things like for you in the three years after coming to Midgard?"		"Mitsuki—What were things like for you in the three years after coming to Midgard?"
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	Asking Lisa what it would take to forgive her—I checked with Mitsuki to confirm that she had not forgotten.		Asking Lisa what it would take to forgive her—I checked with Mitsuki to confirm that she had not forgotten.

	"Of course. How could I be the student ~~body~~ president if I were that forgetful?"		"Of course. How could I be the student council president if I were that forgetful?"

	Mitsuki answered with displeasure and rapidly walked to the cabin's exit. But when she stopped when she gripped the door handle. Quietly, she said:		Mitsuki answered with displeasure and rapidly walked to the cabin's exit. But when she stopped when she gripped the door handle. Quietly, she said:

Mhaj58 at 20:44, 23 September 2015

2015-09-23T20:44:26Z

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	While worrying whether my face was going red, I replied.		While worrying whether my face was going red, I replied.

	"Of course it is! Seriously, I am going back to the main subject! Simply stated, Miyako was very similar to ~~Haruaki~~-san, a very amazing girl."		"Of course it is! Seriously, I am going back to the main subject! Simply stated, Miyako was very similar to Haruka-san, a very amazing girl."

	Mitsuki spoke in embarrassment, but even if she claimed that Miyako was more amazing than her, I found it impossible to imagine.		Mitsuki spoke in embarrassment, but even if she claimed that Miyako was more amazing than her, I found it impossible to imagine.

Entropy: /* Part 2 */

2015-04-01T08:51:18Z

Part 2

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	"Do you need to ask? If you suddenly do this, of course I'll..."		"Do you need to ask? If you suddenly do this, of course I'll..."


	Firill's body warmth, felt through my palm, was making me unable to hide the my shaken emotions.		Firill's body warmth, felt through my palm, was making me unable to hide the my shaken emotions.
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	"...You deceived me? How malicious."		"...You deceived me? How malicious."


	Firill pouted and glared at me. She was very close to me, almost to the point where we could feel each other's breath.		Firill pouted and glared at me. She was very close to me, almost to the point where we could feel each other's breath.
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	"...Given this rare chance, I'll have a look at a boy's body."		"...Given this rare chance, I'll have a look at a boy's body."


	Firill started to touch my upper body. Feeling someone else's fingertips moving along my skin, I could not help but squirm.		Firill started to touch my upper body. Feeling someone else's fingertips moving along my skin, I could not help but squirm.
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	"Eh!? You were friends to begin with?"		"Eh!? You were friends to begin with?"


	Thinking what a great coincidence, I asked her to confirm.		Thinking what a great coincidence, I asked her to confirm.

Entropy: /* Part 5 */

2015-03-25T22:26:51Z

Part 5

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Entropy at 06:46, 25 March 2015

2015-03-25T06:46:24Z

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	I ridiculed in my heart.		I ridiculed in my heart.

	I checked the copyright page to find that Shinomiya-sensei was apparently the one who put the ~~booklet~~ together. In accordance with her reputation of flawless perfection, she apparently had talent in drawing too. However, my image of her was shattered. She turned out to be an unexpectedly humorous person.		I checked the copyright page to find that Shinomiya-sensei was apparently the one who put the handbook together. In accordance with her reputation of flawless perfection, she apparently had talent in drawing too. However, my image of her was shattered. She turned out to be an unexpectedly humorous person.

	There were various places on the map marked with skulls. Warnings were placed near these locations to restrict entry because of poisonous volcanic gases.		There were various places on the map marked with skulls. Warnings were placed near these locations to restrict entry because of poisonous volcanic gases.

Entropy: /* Part 4 */

2015-03-25T06:31:04Z

Part 4

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	Mitsuki answered with displeasure and rapidly walked to the cabin's exit. But when she stopped when she gripped the door handle. Quietly, she said:		Mitsuki answered with displeasure and rapidly walked to the cabin's exit. But when she stopped when she gripped the door handle. Quietly, she said:


	"...But I think that Lisa-san will definitely not forgive me."		"...But I think that Lisa-san will definitely not forgive me."
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	"Uh, because you don't actually hate Mitsuki, right?"		"Uh, because you don't actually hate Mitsuki, right?"


	I revealed the truth I had heard from Firill.		I revealed the truth I had heard from Firill.
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	"Then that means I'm right, doesn't it? Lisa, you've been pretending all the way until now that you haven't forgiven Mitsuki, because she craves punishment herself."		"Then that means I'm right, doesn't it? Lisa, you've been pretending all the way until now that you haven't forgiven Mitsuki, because she craves punishment herself."


	"Ooh..."		"Ooh..."


	Lisa was unable to retort. I concluded that my guess was correct.		Lisa was unable to retort. I concluded that my guess was correct.

Entropy: /* Part 4 */

2015-03-24T23:21:16Z

Part 4

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