Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 4 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Entropy: Reverted edits by FallenSky (talk) to last revision by Entropy

2016-09-25T20:50:45Z

Reverted edits by FallenSky (talk) to last revision by Entropy

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	Although I had more memories to tell, I still got up from the bed.		Although I had more memories to tell, I still got up from the bed.
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	"...Okay, I've remembered all of it. Mononobe, don't worry."		"...Okay, I've remembered all of it. Mononobe, don't worry."
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	I engraved my vow deeply into my heart.		I engraved my vow deeply into my heart.
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	===Part 5===		===Part 5===

FallenSky: /* Part 4 */

2016-09-25T15:41:19Z

Part 4

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	Although I had more memories to tell, I still got up from the bed.		Although I had more memories to tell, I still got up from the bed.
			[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v04 233.jpg\|thumb]]

	"...Okay, I've remembered all of it. Mononobe, don't worry."		"...Okay, I've remembered all of it. Mononobe, don't worry."
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	I engraved my vow deeply into my heart.		I engraved my vow deeply into my heart.
	~~[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v04 233.jpg\|thumb]]~~

	===Part 5===		===Part 5===

Entropy: revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

2015-11-28T22:08:16Z

revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

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	"Well then—The second battle against Hraesvelgr will proceed, centered around Nii-san. Nii-san, please issue orders regarding the details of your plan."		"Well then—The second battle against Hraesvelgr will proceed, centered around Nii-san. Nii-san, please issue orders regarding the details of your plan."

	Compared to Iris who knew the whole story, Mitsuki was showing an inexplicably worried expression. However, she still spoke as the captain of the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad.		Compared to Iris who knew the whole story, Mitsuki was showing an inexplicably worried expression. However, she still spoke as the captain of the Dragon Subjugation Squad.

	Perhaps Mitsuki already felt some kind of premonition.		Perhaps Mitsuki already felt some kind of premonition.

Belatkuro: name fix

2015-04-10T09:51:07Z

name fix

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	Saying that, Mitsuki instantly issued orders to us.		Saying that, Mitsuki instantly issued orders to us.

	"Lisa-san and Ren-san, cooperate to fire a positron cannon of maximum firepower. I will borrow Iris-san's dark matter to fire an extra large antimatter missile. Nii-san, please attack with anti-dragon armaments with Tia-san's assistance! ~~Ariell~~-san, deploy barriers as necessary!"		"Lisa-san and Ren-san, cooperate to fire a positron cannon of maximum firepower. I will borrow Iris-san's dark matter to fire an extra large antimatter missile. Nii-san, please attack with anti-dragon armaments with Tia-san's assistance! Ariella-san, deploy barriers as necessary!"

	"Affirmative!"		"Affirmative!"

Entropy: /* Part 5 */

2015-04-06T14:18:54Z

Part 5

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	I answered concisely then turned to face Firil..		I answered concisely then turned to face Firil..

	"Because of that, Firill, will go on a date with me right now?"		"Because of that, Firill, will you go on a date with me right now?"

	"Huh...?"		"Huh...?"

Entropy: /* Part 5 */

2015-04-06T14:14:36Z

Part 5

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	"Huh...?"		"Huh...?"

	She was ~~dumbfounded~~ by this sudden invitation.		She was dumbstruck by this sudden invitation.

	On further thought, this was perhaps the first time in my life that I asked a girl out on a date.		On further thought, this was perhaps the first time in my life that I asked a girl out on a date.

Entropy at 14:13, 6 April 2015

2015-04-06T14:13:59Z

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	But just as it was about to touch Kili's fingertips, Hraesvelgr stopped moving.		But just as it was about to touch Kili's fingertips, Hraesvelgr stopped moving.

	Clad in a ~~robe~~ of inviolable light, the dragon quietly stared at Kili's shining dragon mark then left her as though losing interest.		Clad in a coating of inviolable light, the dragon quietly stared at Kili's shining dragon mark then left her as though losing interest.

	"Eh...?"		"Eh...?"

Entropy at 07:06, 6 April 2015

2015-04-06T07:06:27Z

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Entropy at 04:23, 6 April 2015

2015-04-06T04:23:22Z

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	"...Grandfather is still so distant."		"...Grandfather is still so distant."

	From the viewing ~~terrace~~, looking out at the coffin and portrait in the hall inside Erlia Castle, Firill murmured quietly to herself.		From the viewing balcony, looking out at the coffin and portrait in the hall inside Erlia Castle, Firill murmured quietly to herself.

	The distance between them still felt the same as back then.		The distance between them still felt the same as back then.
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	"Although I have things to say... I will put them aside for now."		"Although I have things to say... I will put them aside for now."

	Mitsuki remarked bitterly then turned her gaze to the viewing ~~terrace~~ on the second floor where we were taken to earlier.		Mitsuki remarked bitterly then turned her gaze to the viewing balcony on the second floor where we were taken to earlier.

	"Shinomiya-sensei, Level A alert! Type Yellow! We will intercept, Sensei, so please lead the ordinary people to evacuate!"		"Shinomiya-sensei, Level A alert! Type Yellow! We will intercept, Sensei, so please lead the ordinary people to evacuate!"
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	"—Understood."		"—Understood."

	From the ~~terrace~~, Shinomiya-sensei nodded. Next to her, Firill also leaned out.		From the balcony, Shinomiya-sensei nodded. Next to her, Firill also leaned out.

	"I will head over immediately!"		"I will head over immediately!"
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	"Mononobe-kun, come this way."		"Mononobe-kun, come this way."

	Ariella pulled my hand and took me to the window. Opening the window, one could reach the ~~terrace~~ outside and view the courtyard scenery.		Ariella pulled my hand and took me to the window. Opening the window, one could reach the balcony outside and view the courtyard scenery.

	"What the heck is going on?"		"What the heck is going on?"

Entropy: /* Part 3 */

2015-04-06T02:33:15Z

Part 3

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