Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 4 Chapter 4 - Revision history

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	"Mm~!"		"Mm~!"
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	John shook his head with all his strength to refuse.		John shook his head with all his strength to refuse.
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	Kili chuckled and bent down to use her finger to stroke the cheek of the scowling maiden—		Kili chuckled and bent down to use her finger to stroke the cheek of the scowling maiden—
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	John shook his head with all his strength to refuse.		John shook his head with all his strength to refuse.
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	Kili chuckled and bent down to use her finger to stroke the cheek of the scowling maiden—		Kili chuckled and bent down to use her finger to stroke the cheek of the scowling maiden—
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	With just that, I felt I could face any trial, no matter what, but—		With just that, I felt I could face any trial, no matter what, but—

	Iris had ~~yield~~ the spot by my side to Mitsuki. Feeling curious about her true thoughts, I looked at Iris.		Iris had yielded the spot by my side to Mitsuki. Feeling curious about her true thoughts, I looked at Iris.

	Meeting my gaze, Iris showed a melancholic smile and nodded slightly at me.		Meeting my gaze, Iris showed a melancholic smile and nodded slightly at me.

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	I could not hear the giant bird's calls or the flapping of its wings. The only noise was the sound of the waterfall.		I could not hear the giant bird's calls or the flapping of its wings. The only noise was the sound of the waterfall.

	"...We ~~defeate~~ it?"		"...We defeated it?"

	Gripping my right hand tightly, Iris asked.		Gripping my right hand tightly, Iris asked.
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	I encouraged Firill and she nodded.		I encouraged Firill and she nodded.

	"~~yeah~~, if Grandfather really is present... I must convey this to him."		"Yeah, if Grandfather really is present... I must convey this to him."

	She turned her gaze towards the spot where she could vaguely see her grandfather.		She turned her gaze towards the spot where she could vaguely see her grandfather.

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	"Ooh, ooh!"		"Ooh, ooh!"

	Unable to speak, John moaned while squirming ~~pointlessly~~.		Unable to speak, John moaned while squirming in vain.

	"Listen here, let me make this clear... I saved you, got that? Had you sniped her, then right now, you'd ~~have been killed~~ by ~~him~~."		"Listen here, let me make this clear... I saved you, got that? Had you sniped her, then right now, you'd be dead by his hand."

	Kili glanced at the sniper's rifle fallen on the ground next to the roof, then sighed deeply.		Kili glanced at the sniper's rifle fallen on the ground next to the roof, then sighed deeply.

	Ignoring Mononobe Yuu's warning, John still attempted to snipe Firill from ~~here~~, probably as a precaution in case Hraesvelgr could not be defeated.		Ignoring Mononobe Yuu's warning, John still attempted to snipe Firill from this location, probably as a precaution in case Hraesvelgr could not be defeated.

	Nevertheless, Yuu had easily defeated Hreidmar. Given the way he was right now, he would have sensed John's presence as soon as he entered sniping posture, then eliminated the enemy mercilessly.		Nevertheless, Yuu had easily defeated Hreidmar. Given the way he was right now, he would have sensed John's presence as soon as he entered sniping posture, then eliminated the enemy mercilessly.
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	John's silence was equivalent to answering yes.		John's silence was equivalent to answering yes.

	"Your commanding officer is the one who gives orders to it, right? What kind of person is ~~that guy~~? What does he intend to do to my Yuu?"		"Your commanding officer is the one who gives orders to it, right? What kind of person is he? What does he intend to do to my Yuu?"

	John frowned and shook his head once.		John frowned and shook his head once.
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	John went red to his ears while his bound body kept struggling.		John went red to his ears while his bound body kept struggling.

	"Fufu, what a cute reaction. Let me give you some honest advice since I like you a bit. If you know nothing about Hreidmar, it means that ~~it is something~~ your ~~position is~~ not ~~allowed to know~~, yet.. through that pair of eyes, too excellent for your own good, you saw."		"Fufu, what a cute reaction. Let me give you some honest advice since I like you a bit. If you know nothing about Hreidmar, it means that your rank does not provide sufficient clearance, yet.. through that pair of eyes, too excellent for your own good, you saw."

	John made a stiff expression. Kili looked at him with eyes of pity.		John made a stiff expression. Kili looked at him with eyes of pity.
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	John looked away and remained silent.		John looked away and remained silent.

	"Oh my oh my, look at ~~your~~ lost ~~expression~~. The way I see it~~, apart from NIFL~~, you have no place to go. No helping it—Then I shall kidnap you."		"Oh my oh my, look at how lost you look. The way I see it, you have no place to go if NIFL is ruled out. No helping it—Then I shall kidnap you."

	John widened his eyes and showed a look of surprise.		John widened his eyes and showed a look of surprise.

	"Because it's been so lively these recent days... I'd feel a bit lonely if I go back to being alone. Since we're both people without a place to belong to, aren't we perfect travel companions?"		"Because it's been so lively these recent days... I'd feel a bit lonely if I went back to being alone. Since we're both people without a place to belong to, aren't we perfect travel companions?"

	"Mm~!"		"Mm~!"