Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 5 Chapter 2 - Revision history

Heaven23: /* Part 4 */

2025-01-25T12:57:35Z

Part 4

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	During homeroom that day, the Japanese teahouse's refreshments menu was decided to offer a set meal of grilled fish, rice, miso soup and tamagoyaki. As for drinks, apart from green tea, black tea ~~and~~ other choices were included.		During homeroom that day, the Japanese teahouse's refreshments menu was decided to offer a set meal of grilled fish, rice, miso soup and tamagoyaki. As for drinks, apart from green tea, and black tea other choices were included.

	Although uniforms were going to be kimonos, instead of ordering pre-made ones, we would make them ourselves.		Although uniforms were going to be kimonos, instead of ordering pre-made ones, we would make them ourselves.

172.68.234.37: /* Part 2 */

2018-02-13T05:24:07Z

Part 2

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	Brynhildr Class had eight students, just the right number for four people to a group.		Brynhildr Class had eight students, just the right number for four people to a group.

	"Yes, but Mitsuki-san will be busy with student council affairs. I don't expect her to be able to ~~say~~ with us the whole time. The executive committee members will have to assist on this front."		"Yes, but Mitsuki-san will be busy with student council affairs. I don't expect her to be able to stay with us the whole time. The executive committee members will have to assist on this front."

	"Understood. So it's best to divide groups after listening to everyone's opinions. They'll surely want to be free if their parents are coming on a certain day."		"Understood. So it's best to divide groups after listening to everyone's opinions. They'll surely want to be free if their parents are coming on a certain day."

Zzhk: You're still going at it? Illustrations should be placed where they were in the printed book, not subjectively where you think they belong.

2016-09-26T11:16:05Z

You're still going at it? Illustrations should be placed where they were in the printed book, not subjectively where you think they belong.

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	"Huh? Y-Yes, I come here every now and then for a change of pace..."		"Huh? Y-Yes, I come here every now and then for a change of pace..."

	"Then can you tell me what do you usually do for fun ~~when~~ you're here, Lisa? Couples pretty much share their joys, right?"		"Then can you tell me what do you usually do for fun while you're here, Lisa? Couples pretty much share their joys, right?"

	Hearing me say that, Lisa gasped as though feeling impressed for an instant, then she immediately regained her senses and pointed at me with her finger.		Hearing me say that, Lisa gasped as though feeling impressed for an instant, then she immediately regained her senses and pointed at me with her finger.
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	I called her name anxiously. A warm hand immediately rested gently on my forehead.		I called her name anxiously. A warm hand immediately rested gently on my forehead.
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	"Even at the cost of sacrificing precious things, you decided to protect us—I am truly grateful to you. Although it is impossible to call what you did correct... Without you, I might have lost precious family already."		"Even at the cost of sacrificing precious things, you decided to protect us—I am truly grateful to you. Although it is impossible to call what you did correct... Without you, I might have lost precious family already."
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	Thus, I slept peacefully on her lap. By the time I woke up, it was already dusk.		Thus, I slept peacefully on her lap. By the time I woke up, it was already dusk.
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	"—Sorry, I slept too soundly. Your legs must be numb and it was probably quite boring for you."		"—Sorry, I slept too soundly. Your legs must be numb and it was probably quite boring for you."

FallenSky: /* Part 6 */

2016-09-26T09:32:10Z

Part 6

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	I called her name anxiously. A warm hand immediately rested gently on my forehead.		I called her name anxiously. A warm hand immediately rested gently on my forehead.
			[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v05 131.jpg\|thumb]]

	"Even at the cost of sacrificing precious things, you decided to protect us—I am truly grateful to you. Although it is impossible to call what you did correct... Without you, I might have lost precious family already."		"Even at the cost of sacrificing precious things, you decided to protect us—I am truly grateful to you. Although it is impossible to call what you did correct... Without you, I might have lost precious family already."
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	Thus, I slept peacefully on her lap. By the time I woke up, it was already dusk.		Thus, I slept peacefully on her lap. By the time I woke up, it was already dusk.
	~~[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v05 131.jpg\|thumb]]~~

	"—Sorry, I slept too soundly. Your legs must be numb and it was probably quite boring for you."		"—Sorry, I slept too soundly. Your legs must be numb and it was probably quite boring for you."

FallenSky: /* Part 5 */

2016-09-26T05:32:37Z

Part 5

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	"Huh? Y-Yes, I come here every now and then for a change of pace..."		"Huh? Y-Yes, I come here every now and then for a change of pace..."

	"Then can you tell me what do you usually do for fun ~~where~~ you're here, Lisa? Couples pretty much share their joys, right?"		"Then can you tell me what do you usually do for fun when you're here, Lisa? Couples pretty much share their joys, right?"

	Hearing me say that, Lisa gasped as though feeling impressed for an instant, then she immediately regained her senses and pointed at me with her finger.		Hearing me say that, Lisa gasped as though feeling impressed for an instant, then she immediately regained her senses and pointed at me with her finger.

FallenSky: /* Part 5 */

2016-09-26T05:22:48Z

Part 5

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	Her black swimsuit was extremely skimpy. Her voluptuous breasts almost looked like they were going to pop out.		Her black swimsuit was extremely skimpy. Her voluptuous breasts almost looked like they were going to pop out.

	"That swimsuit looks really good on you. I can't ~~described~~ it very well—Anyway, it's very attractive."		"That swimsuit looks really good on you. I can't describe it very well—Anyway, it's very attractive."

	Before I got reminded this time, I hastily took initiative and stammered in praise of Lisa's swimsuit.		Before I got reminded this time, I hastily took initiative and stammered in praise of Lisa's swimsuit.

Zzhk at 14:07, 5 August 2015

2015-08-05T14:07:26Z

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	The first to finish eating my bread, I was looking up at the blue sky. Then I looked at Iris.		The first to finish eating my bread, I was looking up at the blue sky. Then I looked at Iris.

	"Yeah, because Lisa is in trouble, Mononobe, you must help her."		"Yeah, because Lisa-chan is in trouble, Mononobe, you must help her."

	"...Got it."		"...Got it."
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	Lisa spoke sharply then pulled my arm forcefully.		Lisa spoke sharply then pulled my arm forcefully.

	"G-Go this way, I shall take to my specially treasured location. It is a place where virtually no student in the Academy knows of."		"G-Go this way, I shall take you to my specially treasured location. It is a place where virtually no student in the Academy knows of."

	"A special secret place? I'm looking forward to it."		"A special secret place? I'm looking forward to it."

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2015-05-09T01:14:41Z

changed to a word which makes more sense

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	If Lisa believed that this was a necessary process in order to act more like a couple, I probably should not be too apprehensive.		If Lisa believed that this was a necessary process in order to act more like a couple, I probably should not be too apprehensive.

	"So, a lot of the story might be shocking to me... But please hear me out."		"So, a lot of the story might be shocking to you... But please hear me out."

	"Very well, leave it to me. I shall take on all of your troubles."		"Very well, leave it to me. I shall take on all of your troubles."

Entropy: /* Part 7 */

2015-04-11T02:43:26Z

Part 7

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Entropy: /* Part 6 */

2015-04-11T01:28:26Z

Part 6

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	Lisa gulped and observed my reaction.		Lisa gulped and observed my reaction.

	I had picked a tuna salad sandwich. The instant I took a bite, the fresh juices of vegetables and the savory ~~sweetness~~ of tuna expanded in my mouth.		I had picked a tuna salad sandwich. The instant I took a bite, the fresh juices of vegetables and the savory richness of tuna expanded in my mouth.

	"It's good."		"It's good."