Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 5 Chapter 3 - Revision history

Rxls at 15:44, 7 November 2016

2016-11-07T15:44:39Z

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	Just as I was feeling baffled, not understanding what was happening, my left hand ~~moved~~ the metal shard's sharp edge towards Major Loki—		Just as I was feeling baffled, not understanding what was happening, my left hand move the metal shard's sharp edge towards Major Loki—

	"Hey! What are you doing over there!?"		"Hey! What are you doing over there!?"
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	Just now... What was that? I attempted to kill Major Loki?"		Just now... What was that? I attempted to kill Major Loki?"

	It was almost like my left arm moved on its own, but that should be impossible. ~~More~~ likely, I instinctively sensed ~~danger~~ and my subconscious awakened "Fafnir."		It was almost like my left arm moved on its own, but that should be impossible. Most likely, I instinctively sensed dangerous and my subconscious awakened "Fafnir."

	However, even if I wanted to make myself accept this explanation, my heart still felt that something was not right. Because my actions had contradicted my will to such a degree, this had never happened before.		However, even if I wanted to make myself accept this explanation, my heart still felt that something was not right. Because my actions had contradicted my will to such a degree, this had never happened before.
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	Lisa stared at me passionately and drew her face closer.		Lisa stared at me passionately and drew her face closer.
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	At this moment, I finally understood her intent.		At this moment, I finally understood her intent.
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	"—What does it matter? After all, you and I will never have a future. No matter what you do... Ultimately, it will be as if nothing ever happened."		"—What does it matter? After all, you and I will never have a future. No matter what you do... Ultimately, it will be as if nothing ever happened."
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	Lisa smiled sadly then tiptoed slightly.		Lisa smiled sadly then tiptoed slightly.
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	"No, not at all..."		"No, not at all..."

	He extended his hand cordially. Despite feeling surprised and confused, I still shook hands with him.		I extended his hand cordially. Despite feeling surprised and confused, I still shook hands with him.

	He was the CEO of a huge corporate group with intimate ties to NIFL as well, originally a VIP whom I would not get to converse with, but I could sense from him an open-mindedness that lowered my guard.		He was the CEO of a huge corporate group with intimate ties to NIFL as well, originally a VIP whom I would not get to converse with, but I could sense from him an open-mindedness that lowered my guard.

FallenSky: /* Part 6 */

2016-11-07T14:19:57Z

Part 6

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	"No, not at all..."		"No, not at all..."

	I extended his hand cordially. Despite feeling surprised and confused, I still shook hands with him.		He extended his hand cordially. Despite feeling surprised and confused, I still shook hands with him.

	He was the CEO of a huge corporate group with intimate ties to NIFL as well, originally a VIP whom I would not get to converse with, but I could sense from him an open-mindedness that lowered my guard.		He was the CEO of a huge corporate group with intimate ties to NIFL as well, originally a VIP whom I would not get to converse with, but I could sense from him an open-mindedness that lowered my guard.

FallenSky: /* Part 6 */

2016-11-07T14:16:37Z

Part 6

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	Lisa stared at me passionately and drew her face closer.		Lisa stared at me passionately and drew her face closer.
			[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v05 223.jpg\|thumb]]

	At this moment, I finally understood her intent.		At this moment, I finally understood her intent.
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	"—What does it matter? After all, you and I will never have a future. No matter what you do... Ultimately, it will be as if nothing ever happened."		"—What does it matter? After all, you and I will never have a future. No matter what you do... Ultimately, it will be as if nothing ever happened."
	~~[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v05 223.jpg\|thumb]]~~

	Lisa smiled sadly then tiptoed slightly.		Lisa smiled sadly then tiptoed slightly.

FallenSky: /* Part 5 */

2016-11-07T13:23:33Z

Part 5

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	Just now... What was that? I attempted to kill Major Loki?"		Just now... What was that? I attempted to kill Major Loki?"

	It was almost like my left arm moved on its own, but that should be impossible. ~~Most~~ likely, I instinctively sensed ~~dangerous~~ and my subconscious awakened "Fafnir."		It was almost like my left arm moved on its own, but that should be impossible. More likely, I instinctively sensed danger and my subconscious awakened "Fafnir."

	However, even if I wanted to make myself accept this explanation, my heart still felt that something was not right. Because my actions had contradicted my will to such a degree, this had never happened before.		However, even if I wanted to make myself accept this explanation, my heart still felt that something was not right. Because my actions had contradicted my will to such a degree, this had never happened before.

FallenSky: /* Part 5 */

2016-11-07T13:17:55Z

Part 5

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	"Eh...?"		"Eh...?"

	Just as I was feeling baffled, not understanding what was happening, my left hand ~~move~~ the metal shard's sharp edge towards Major Loki—		Just as I was feeling baffled, not understanding what was happening, my left hand moved the metal shard's sharp edge towards Major Loki—

	"Hey! What are you doing over there!?"		"Hey! What are you doing over there!?"

Zzhk: Undo revision 503038 by FallenSky (talk)

2016-09-26T11:17:19Z

Undo revision 503038 by FallenSky (talk)

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	"Fu, fufu... N-Nii-san... You are so adorable."		"Fu, fufu... N-Nii-san... You are so adorable."
	~~[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v5 175.jpg\|thumb]]~~

	Seeing me look like a completely different person, Mitsuki clutched her sides with laughter. It was rare to see Mitsuki laugh so unreservedly. I seemed to have stimulated endless laughter in her.		Seeing me look like a completely different person, Mitsuki clutched her sides with laughter. It was rare to see Mitsuki laugh so unreservedly. I seemed to have stimulated endless laughter in her.
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	Having mustered my resolve, I had put on the female uniform. To check the look, I visited Mitsuki at her room. It seemed like there was nothing amiss.		Having mustered my resolve, I had put on the female uniform. To check the look, I visited Mitsuki at her room. It seemed like there was nothing amiss.
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	Even so, I still did not feel entirely reassured, but with this, I could take part in the school festival at least.		Even so, I still did not feel entirely reassured, but with this, I could take part in the school festival at least.
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	Not because of fear but surprise.		Not because of fear but surprise.
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	Seeing him, who was not supposed to appear here, my body froze on reflex.		Seeing him, who was not supposed to appear here, my body froze on reflex.
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	Checking out my crossdressing look, the man in the NIFL military uniform—Major Loki Jotunheim—spoke.		Checking out my crossdressing look, the man in the NIFL military uniform—Major Loki Jotunheim—spoke.
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	"Major Loki... Why are you here—"		"Major Loki... Why are you here—"

FallenSky: /* Part 4 */

2016-09-26T10:27:19Z

Part 4

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	"Fu, fufu... N-Nii-san... You are so adorable."		"Fu, fufu... N-Nii-san... You are so adorable."
			[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v5 175.jpg\|thumb]]

	Seeing me look like a completely different person, Mitsuki clutched her sides with laughter. It was rare to see Mitsuki laugh so unreservedly. I seemed to have stimulated endless laughter in her.		Seeing me look like a completely different person, Mitsuki clutched her sides with laughter. It was rare to see Mitsuki laugh so unreservedly. I seemed to have stimulated endless laughter in her.
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	Having mustered my resolve, I had put on the female uniform. To check the look, I visited Mitsuki at her room. It seemed like there was nothing amiss.		Having mustered my resolve, I had put on the female uniform. To check the look, I visited Mitsuki at her room. It seemed like there was nothing amiss.
	~~[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v5 175.jpg\|thumb]]~~

	Even so, I still did not feel entirely reassured, but with this, I could take part in the school festival at least.		Even so, I still did not feel entirely reassured, but with this, I could take part in the school festival at least.
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	Not because of fear but surprise.		Not because of fear but surprise.
			[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v05 195.jpg\|thumb]]

	Seeing him, who was not supposed to appear here, my body froze on reflex.		Seeing him, who was not supposed to appear here, my body froze on reflex.
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	Checking out my crossdressing look, the man in the NIFL military uniform—Major Loki Jotunheim—spoke.		Checking out my crossdressing look, the man in the NIFL military uniform—Major Loki Jotunheim—spoke.
	~~[[image:UnlimitedFafnir v05 195.jpg\|thumb]]~~

	"Major Loki... Why are you here—"		"Major Loki... Why are you here—"

FallenSky: /* Part 1 */

2016-09-26T09:55:11Z

Part 1

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	Jeanne Hortensia was murmuring in a daze next to Kili. Together with Kili, she was looking down from a slight hill, staring at the crater in the distance.		Jeanne Hortensia was murmuring in a daze next to Kili. Together with Kili, she was looking down from a slight hill, staring at the crater in the distance.

	"Who knows. Without ~~witness~~ the moment, all we can know is that this resulted from Hekatonkheir making contact with Yggdrasil."		"Who knows. Without witnessing the moment, all we can know is that this resulted from Hekatonkheir making contact with Yggdrasil."

	Looking at this scene which seemed as though part of the world had been dug out, Kili replied.		Looking at this scene which seemed as though part of the world had been dug out, Kili replied.

	"NIFL should have recorded what happened. If we infiltrate a base again, perhaps we might be ~~about~~ to get details—Are we doing it?"		"NIFL should have recorded what happened. If we infiltrate a base again, perhaps we might be able to get details—Are we doing it?"

	"Oh my, Jeanne-chan, that's so proactive of you, how rare. But there's no need, because what's important is the outcome, not the process."		"Oh my, Jeanne-chan, that's so proactive of you, how rare. But there's no need, because what's important is the outcome, not the process."

Entropy: revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

2015-11-28T22:13:58Z

revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

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	"Nii-san, I will go out for a short while too."		"Nii-san, I will go out for a short while too."

	Mitsuki left as though chasing after Shinomiya-sensei. As the captain of the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad, she probably wanted to get more details on the situation.		Mitsuki left as though chasing after Shinomiya-sensei. As the captain of the Dragon Subjugation Squad, she probably wanted to get more details on the situation.

	"Sure... I got it."		"Sure... I got it."
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	"When dropping the bomb on Basilisk, we worked hard together!"		"When dropping the bomb on Basilisk, we worked hard together!"

	Speaking of which, back then, Tia had joined the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad to support Mistilteinn. This girl was probably part of that group. Reminded by Tia, I felt like I had seen her before.		Speaking of which, back then, Tia had joined the Dragon Subjugation Squad to support Mistilteinn. This girl was probably part of that group. Reminded by Tia, I felt like I had seen her before.

	"Eh... Is this person beside Tia-chan actually Yuu-sama!?"		"Eh... Is this person beside Tia-chan actually Yuu-sama!?"
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	Mica-san showed up. Seeing our unusual look, she stared with widened eyes.		Mica-san showed up. Seeing our unusual look, she stared with widened eyes.

	"This is an emergency, Mica. Find an arbitrary reason to evacuate the visitors out of the island. Also, inform all student terminals of a Type A alert. Issue orders for Haruka to lead the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad to search for 'a mobile vine.' Although they will definitely have questions, I will explain reasons later."		"This is an emergency, Mica. Find an arbitrary reason to evacuate the visitors out of the island. Also, inform all student terminals of a Type A alert. Issue orders for Haruka to lead the Dragon Subjugation Squad to search for 'a mobile vine.' Although they will definitely have questions, I will explain reasons later."

	The principal turned her gaze to Mica-san and issued orders concisely.		The principal turned her gaze to Mica-san and issued orders concisely.

Entropy: note: Mica, as in the mineral, not Micah, the male Hebrew prophet

2015-09-27T07:30:18Z

note: Mica, as in the mineral, not Micah, the male Hebrew prophet

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