Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 6 Chapter 1 - Revision history

AeternisTaciti: /* Part 1 */

2018-01-13T05:30:21Z

Part 1

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	I sighed and used my mobile right hand to place my piece in front of the king.		I sighed and used my mobile right hand to place my piece in front of the king.

	"What!? I can't believe you used a captured piece. That's ~~why~~ too underhanded! You're under my dominance right now, so don't forget I can read your thoughts if I wanted to, okay? But I faced you fair and square without doing that!"		"What!? I can't believe you used a captured piece. That's way too underhanded! You're under my dominance right now, so don't forget I can read your thoughts if I wanted to, okay? But I faced you fair and square without doing that!"

	The principal frantically spoke and pointed at the piece I had moved.		The principal frantically spoke and pointed at the piece I had moved.

Entropy: revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

2015-11-28T22:14:06Z

revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

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	Shinomiya-sensei went back to the main topic and asked the principal.		Shinomiya-sensei went back to the main topic and asked the principal.

	"Yes, not just Mononobe Yuu. I intend to send all members of Brynhildr Class to head forth as the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad. Once it is known that the plan is feasible, you will go directly to strike Yggdrasil. Of course, I will send additional personnel when the time comes."		"Yes, not just Mononobe Yuu. I intend to send all members of Brynhildr Class to head forth as the Dragon Subjugation Squad. Once it is known that the plan is feasible, you will go directly to strike Yggdrasil. Of course, I will send additional personnel when the time comes."

	After the principal replied, Mica-san, who had been standing on the side, walked up instantly.		After the principal replied, Mica-san, who had been standing on the side, walked up instantly.
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	"Yes, I am. And you are?"		"Yes, I am. And you are?"

	"Forgive me for the late introduction. I am Mononobe Mitsuki, captain of the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad."		"Forgive me for the late introduction. I am Mononobe Mitsuki, captain of the Dragon Subjugation Squad."

	Mitsuki lowered her head and bowed, greeting him.		Mitsuki lowered her head and bowed, greeting him.

Entropy: note: Mica, as in the mineral, not Micah, the male Hebrew prophet

2015-09-27T07:31:30Z

note: Mica, as in the mineral, not Micah, the male Hebrew prophet

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	"Sorry for interrupting the lesson, but I have an extremely urgent announcement."		"Sorry for interrupting the lesson, but I have an extremely urgent announcement."

	Principal Charlotte and her secretary, ~~Maika~~ Stuart-san, showed up. Dressed in a maid uniform as usual, ~~Maika~~-san was holding a stack of paper.		Principal Charlotte and her secretary, Mica Stuart-san, showed up. Dressed in a maid uniform as usual, Mica-san was holding a stack of paper.

	"Principal, what exactly is the matter?"		"Principal, what exactly is the matter?"
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	"Yes, not just Mononobe Yuu. I intend to send all members of Brynhildr Class to head forth as the Counter-Dragon Squad. Once it is known that the plan is feasible, you will go directly to strike Yggdrasil. Of course, I will send additional personnel when the time comes."		"Yes, not just Mononobe Yuu. I intend to send all members of Brynhildr Class to head forth as the Counter-Dragon Squad. Once it is known that the plan is feasible, you will go directly to strike Yggdrasil. Of course, I will send additional personnel when the time comes."

	After the principal replied, ~~Maika~~-san, who had been standing on the side, walked up instantly.		After the principal replied, Mica-san, who had been standing on the side, walked up instantly.

	"These are letters of instructions issued to all of you. Please accompany them as the commanding officer, Haruka-san."		"These are letters of instructions issued to all of you. Please accompany them as the commanding officer, Haruka-san."

	~~Maika~~-san distributed the papers in her hand to us. Written on them were orders dispatching us to the Asgard laboratory in Japan, authorizing us to leave Midgard temporarily.		Mica-san distributed the papers in her hand to us. Written on them were orders dispatching us to the Asgard laboratory in Japan, authorizing us to leave Midgard temporarily.

	"Instant departure...? Isn't this too rushed?"		"Instant departure...? Isn't this too rushed?"

Zzhk: /* Part 4 */

2015-08-05T14:39:39Z

Part 4

Entropy: "pulling all-nighters": the gerund "pulling" is serving as the subject, hence agreement is singular; dialogue is being used in the uncountable sense

2015-08-02T01:06:58Z

"pulling all-nighters": the gerund "pulling" is serving as the subject, hence agreement is singular; dialogue is being used in the uncountable sense

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	The principal furrowed her elegant brow, pursing her pink lips, concentrating on her thoughts. Meanwhile, her gaze was focused on the game of Japanese chess on the board between us.		The principal furrowed her elegant brow, pursing her pink lips, concentrating on her thoughts. Meanwhile, her gaze was focused on the game of Japanese chess on the board between us.

	"I'm basically a hospitalized patient, right? I don't think pulling all-nighters ~~are~~ good for my health."		"I'm basically a hospitalized patient, right? I don't think pulling all-nighters is good for my health."

	"I've already healed your wound. Since your body is back in full health, keep me company for a while longer. Okay, try this move!"		"I've already healed your wound. Since your body is back in full health, keep me company for a while longer. Okay, try this move!"
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	But that was how she always behaved. Ren always answered briefly with an "mm," typed on a terminal, or responded with silence.		But that was how she always behaved. Ren always answered briefly with an "mm," typed on a terminal, or responded with silence.

	I had never had a normal ''dialogue'' with Ren so far.		I had never had normal ''dialogue'' with Ren so far.

	But somehow, I had already grown accustomed to interacting with her without the use of words and language. We were naturally able to achieve communication.		But somehow, I had already grown accustomed to interacting with her without the use of words and language. We were naturally able to achieve communication.
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	However, only Miyazawa Kenya seemed unfazed. On his own, he continued to explain the interior of the facility.		However, only Miyazawa Kenya seemed unfazed. On his own, he continued to explain the interior of the facility.

	"This is an ID card for guests, which also serves as a room keycard, so please take the card that corresponds to your own room. This ID card gives access to the eighteenth floor where the guest rooms are, the tenth floor where this dining hall is located, as well as the ground floor's entrance lobby. You can come and go as you like. I basically won't interfere ~~with~~ your movements, because I wouldn't have granted access to anywhere I don't want you to go in the first place."		"This is an ID card for guests, which also serves as a room keycard, so please take the card that corresponds to your own room. This ID card gives access to the eighteenth floor where the guest rooms are, the tenth floor where this dining hall is located, as well as the ground floor's entrance lobby. You can come and go as you like. I basically won't interfere in your movements, because I wouldn't have granted access to anywhere I don't want you to go in the first place."

	After saying that, he placed numbered ID cards on the table. The cards were otherwise unadorned.		After saying that, he placed numbered ID cards on the table. The cards were otherwise unadorned.

Deanimation: minor edit

2015-07-31T07:50:34Z

minor edit

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	The principal furrowed her elegant brow, pursing her pink lips, concentrating on her thoughts. Meanwhile, her gaze was focused on the game of Japanese chess on the board between us.		The principal furrowed her elegant brow, pursing her pink lips, concentrating on her thoughts. Meanwhile, her gaze was focused on the game of Japanese chess on the board between us.

	"I'm basically a hospitalized patient, right? I don't think pulling all-nighters is good for my health."		"I'm basically a hospitalized patient, right? I don't think pulling all-nighters are good for my health."

	"I've already healed your wound. Since your body is back in full health, keep me company for a while longer. Okay, try this move!"		"I've already healed your wound. Since your body is back in full health, keep me company for a while longer. Okay, try this move!"
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	While I was immersed in reminiscence, I noticed that just like me, Ren was staring out at the school festival scrap.		While I was immersed in reminiscence, I noticed that just like me, Ren was staring out at the school festival scrap.

	She looked especially forlorn from the side of her face. ~~Hesitatntly~~, I tried to ask her:		She looked especially forlorn from the side of her face. Hesitantly, I tried to ask her:

	"Ren, what's wrong?"		"Ren, what's wrong?"
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	But that was how she always behaved. Ren always answered briefly with an "mm," typed on a terminal, or responded with silence.		But that was how she always behaved. Ren always answered briefly with an "mm," typed on a terminal, or responded with silence.

	I had never had normal ''dialogue'' with Ren so far.		I had never had a normal ''dialogue'' with Ren so far.

	But somehow, I had already grown accustomed to interacting with her without the use of words and language. We were naturally able to achieve communication.		But somehow, I had already grown accustomed to interacting with her without the use of words and language. We were naturally able to achieve communication.
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	However, only Miyazawa Kenya seemed unfazed. On his own, he continued to explain the interior of the facility.		However, only Miyazawa Kenya seemed unfazed. On his own, he continued to explain the interior of the facility.

	"This is an ID card for guests, which also serves as a room keycard, so please take the card that corresponds to your own room. This ID card gives access to the eighteenth floor where the guest rooms are, the tenth floor where this dining hall is located, as well as the ground floor's entrance lobby. You can come and go as you like. I basically won't interfere in your movements, because I wouldn't have granted access to anywhere I don't want you to go in the first place."		"This is an ID card for guests, which also serves as a room keycard, so please take the card that corresponds to your own room. This ID card gives access to the eighteenth floor where the guest rooms are, the tenth floor where this dining hall is located, as well as the ground floor's entrance lobby. You can come and go as you like. I basically won't interfere with your movements, because I wouldn't have granted access to anywhere I don't want you to go in the first place."

	After saying that, he placed numbered ID cards on the table. The cards were otherwise unadorned.		After saying that, he placed numbered ID cards on the table. The cards were otherwise unadorned.

Belatkuro at 04:15, 13 May 2015

2015-05-13T04:15:52Z

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	"There is something you have not been informed yet... After defeating Hraesvelgr, Mononobe Yuu gained the ability to replicate Ether Wind using dark matter. When fighting Yggdrasil, that Ether Wind might come in handy."		"There is something you have not been informed yet... After defeating Hraesvelgr, Mononobe Yuu gained the ability to replicate Ether Wind using dark matter. When fighting Yggdrasil, that Ether Wind might come in handy."

	"What!?" When exactly—"		"What!? When exactly—"

	Mitsuki glared at me. Her face seemed to be saying: Why did you not tell me?		Mitsuki glared at me. Her face seemed to be saying: Why did you not tell me?
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	I looked over to meet gazes with the pouting Iris.		I looked over to meet gazes with the pouting Iris.

	"What are you and Lisa talking about?"		"What are you and Lisa-chan talking about?"

	"U-Umm... Nothing important."		"U-Umm... Nothing important."
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	Next, something suddenly flew out of the dense smoke		Next, something suddenly flew out of the dense smoke

	It was shadow rising towards the sky with a tail of red flame—		It was a shadow rising towards the sky with a tail of red flame—

	"Just now... What was that?"		"Just now... What was that?"
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	Perhaps feeling the same as me, Iris smiled mischievously and whispered softly.		Perhaps feeling the same as me, Iris smiled mischievously and whispered softly.

	Seeing her like that, I suddenly thought—Speaking of which, if Iris were to be examined as she was now, ~~would~~ that be bad?		Seeing her like that, I suddenly thought—Speaking of which, if Iris were to be examined as she was now, wouldn't that be bad?

	"Iris, after the battle against Yggdrasil, did you ever try using Catastrophe?"		"Iris, after the battle against Yggdrasil, did you ever try using Catastrophe?"

Entropy: /* Part 6 */

2015-04-24T21:30:46Z

Part 6

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	But when using my own imagination as the base to perform transmutation, there would be ambiguous portions no matter what. If interference from the dark matter lender was added to the mix, the transmutation process would fail.		But when using my own imagination as the base to perform transmutation, there would be ambiguous portions no matter what. If interference from the dark matter lender was added to the mix, the transmutation process would fail.

	Lisa had trained in borrowing Ren's dark matter prior to the Basilisk battle, but it was still quite an arduous struggle. This was despite the fact that they had already accumulated vast amounts of training even before my transfer to the Academy—		Lisa had trained in borrowing Ren's dark matter prior to the Basilisk battle, but it was still quite an arduous struggle. This was despite the fact that they had already accumulated vast amounts of dark matter training even before my transfer to the Academy—

	"Hmm... But it's not impossible, right? Then all I can do is ask you to do your best. Regarding the prior stage of destroying Yggdrasil's main body, it should be achievable just by using antimatter or Catastrophe, so please do your best for the rest."		"Hmm... But it's not impossible, right? Then all I can do is ask you to do your best. Regarding the prior stage of destroying Yggdrasil's main body, it should be achievable just by using antimatter or Catastrophe, so please do your best for the rest."

Entropy: /* Part 7 */

2015-04-24T21:30:07Z

Part 7

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Entropy: /* Part 6 */

2015-04-24T12:07:43Z

Part 6

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	Without large windows inside the cabin to offer a view of the outside scenery, there was a strong sense of isolation. The frequent vibrations caused our arms to shake, making it impossible to kill time through reading.		Without large windows inside the cabin to offer a view of the outside scenery, there was a strong sense of isolation. The frequent vibrations caused our arms to shake, making it impossible to kill time through reading.

	Even so, Firill still tried to read a book in the beginning, but since ~~what~~ would definitely result in airsickness, I confiscated her book for ~~now~~. My decision was probably correct since she had quickly gotten seasick on a ship.		Even so, Firill still tried to read a book in the beginning, but since that would definitely result in airsickness, I confiscated her book for the time being. My decision was probably correct since she had quickly gotten seasick on a ship.

	"~~The~~ helicopter ride ~~last time~~ was clearly much more comfortable..."		"Last time's helicopter ride was clearly much more comfortable..."

	Sitting on my left, Iris said in boredom.		Sitting on my left, Iris said in boredom.

	"Because this is a military transport ~~that~~ NIFL ~~uses~~ as well. Unlike civilian transports, comfort is not a consideration, but we'll probably get there soon. Iris, Lisa, just hang in there a bit longer."		"Because this is a military transport used by NIFL as well. Unlike civilian transports, comfort is not a consideration, but we'll probably get there soon. Iris, Lisa, just hang in there a bit longer."

	Checking the time on my portable terminal, I encouraged the two girls.		Checking the time on my portable terminal, I encouraged the two girls.

	We should be almost there. I was part of NIFL not too long ago, so I was already used to this kind of uncomfortable transport. However, it must be quite a harsh experience for Iris and the other girls.		We should be almost there. I was still part of NIFL not too long ago, so I was already used to this kind of uncomfortable transport. However, it must be quite a harsh experience for Iris and the other girls.

	Most likely, the principal prioritized ''speed'' above all else despite knowing this. Time might be more pressing than I imagined.		Most likely, the principal prioritized ''speed'' above all else despite knowing this. Time might be more pressing than I imagined.

	~~Looking~~ at my left arm in the cast~~, I sighed~~.		I sighed at the sight of my left arm in the cast.

	I must not repeat that mistake ever again.		I must not repeat that mistake ever again.
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	The helicopter landed on a helipad on the roof of a high-rise building somewhere.		The helicopter landed on a helipad on the roof of a high-rise building somewhere.

	Ending the long journey, we dragged our weary footsteps and got off the helicopter. It was currently 10pm at night. Since the longitude here was similar to Midgard's, there was ~~almost~~ no time difference.		Ending the long journey, we dragged our weary footsteps and got off the helicopter. It was currently 10pm at night. Since the longitude here was similar to Midgard's, there was virtually no time difference.

	This was probably the Asgard laboratory located in the Tokyo Bay area. Rows of undecorated pure white buildings surrounded this building, reminiscent of a hospital.		This was probably the Asgard laboratory located in the Tokyo Bay area. Rows of undecorated pure white buildings surrounded this building, reminiscent of a hospital.