Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 6 Chapter 4 - Revision history

AeternisTaciti: /* Part 5 */

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Part 5

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	Tia murmured.		Tia murmured.

	Yggdrasil was afraid. Afraid of its consciousness disappearing, afraid of losing its existence, afraid of death—Extremely extremely frightened.d		Yggdrasil was afraid. Afraid of its consciousness disappearing, afraid of losing its existence, afraid of death—Extremely extremely frightened.

	'Neun—needed, must have—uncertain, ninth authority, one and only—most suitable, survival strategy—'		'Neun—needed, must have—uncertain, ninth authority, one and only—most suitable, survival strategy—'

AeternisTaciti: /* Part 5 */

2018-01-13T18:25:52Z

Part 5

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	Tia murmured.		Tia murmured.

	Yggdrasil was afraid. Afraid of its consciousness disappearing, afraid of losing its existence, afraid of ~~eath—Extremely~~ extremely frightened.		Yggdrasil was afraid. Afraid of its consciousness disappearing, afraid of losing its existence, afraid of death—Extremely extremely frightened.d

	'Neun—needed, must have—uncertain, ninth authority, one and only—most suitable, survival strategy—'		'Neun—needed, must have—uncertain, ninth authority, one and only—most suitable, survival strategy—'

AeternisTaciti: /* Part 2 */

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Part 2

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	As though having come to a realization, Mitsuki showed a refreshing smile while glaring at Yggdrasil's branches extending from the western sky.		As though having come to a realization, Mitsuki showed a refreshing smile while glaring at Yggdrasil's branches extending from the western sky.

	"Hold on, what do ~~think~~ think can still be done in this situation? If there's a solution, I wouldn't call for a retreat."		"Hold on, what do you think can still be done in this situation? If there's a solution, I wouldn't call for a retreat."

	The way I saw it, Mitsuki was going to attack recklessly without a plan. I made haste to stop her.		The way I saw it, Mitsuki was going to attack recklessly without a plan. I made haste to stop her.

Entropy: revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

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revised to avoid confusion with counterdragons

Entropy: focusing in order TO do something is not the same as focusing ON doing something;

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focusing in order TO do something is not the same as focusing ON doing something;

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	"Yggdrasil's voice... disappeared?"		"Yggdrasil's voice... disappeared?"

	I muttered blankly. Yggdrasil's voice was originally loud enough to feel noisy, but now, no matter how I focused ~~on listening~~, I could not sense the voice anymore. The sense of dissonance in my left arm also disappeared.		I muttered blankly. Yggdrasil's voice was originally loud enough to feel noisy, but now, no matter how I much I focused my mind in order to listen, I could not sense the voice anymore. The sense of dissonance in my left arm also disappeared.

	"Looks like it succeeded."		"Looks like it succeeded."
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	My heart began to warm up. Everyone's thoughts were making me happy. My mind gradually felt satisfied.		My heart began to warm up. Everyone's thoughts were making me happy. My mind gradually felt satisfied.

	Was this mental energy flowing ~~into it~~? Or simply the effect of receiving encouragement? I did not know actually.		Was this mental energy flowing in? Or simply the effect of receiving encouragement? I did not know actually.

	But my originally sapped strength surged again, this was the truth.		But my originally sapped strength surged again, this was the truth.
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	"Your pair of horns is not simply for defending against Yggdrasil's interference. It is a weapon existing for the sake of devouring Yggdrasil, a power to enable you to become a dragon."		"Your pair of horns is not simply for defending against Yggdrasil's interference. It is a weapon existing for the sake of devouring Yggdrasil, a power to enable you to become a dragon."

	"The ~~Horns~~ are a weapon... Become a dragon—"		"The horns are a weapon... Become a dragon—"

	Tia touched the horns on her head, apparently thinking of something.		Tia touched the horns on her head, apparently thinking of something.

Deanimation at 08:17, 31 July 2015

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Belatkuro at 14:13, 29 April 2015

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ID not in use: /* Part 4 */ spelling

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Part 4: spelling

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Entropy: /* Part 2 */

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Part 2

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	I instantly yelled in objection.		I instantly yelled in objection.

	"—I know, which is why I intend to go alone. I will find a way to reach a spot where I can aim at Yggdrasil directly, to destroy the ~~root~~ of the branches. That way, I should be able to buy quite a lot of time before it grows again. Nii-san, you and the others will use that window to attack."		"—I know, which is why I intend to go alone. I will find a way to reach a spot where I can aim at Yggdrasil directly, to destroy the base of the branches. That way, I should be able to buy quite a lot of time before it grows again. Nii-san, you and the others will use that window to attack."

	Mitsuki's expression showed that she was completely prepared already.		Mitsuki's expression showed that she was completely prepared already.

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	I was admittedly happy that Tia said she would protect me, but right now, we should retreat and request reinforcements from Midgard. With a larger force, it might be possible to handle the branches' rate of growth.		I was admittedly happy that Tia said she would protect me, but right now, we should retreat and request reinforcements from Midgard. With a larger force, it might be possible to handle the branches' rate of growth.

	"I understand. Indeed, as the captain of the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad, there is no alternative as a decision. Well then—"		"I understand. Indeed, as the captain of the Dragon Subjugation Squad, there is no alternative as a decision. Well then—"

	Mitsuki paused halfway then turned to face Shinomiya-sensei.		Mitsuki paused halfway then turned to face Shinomiya-sensei.

	"Shinomiya-sensei, forgive my willfulness, but I, Mononobe Mitsuki, hereby relinquish my duties as captain of the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad."		"Shinomiya-sensei, forgive my willfulness, but I, Mononobe Mitsuki, hereby relinquish my duties as captain of the Dragon Subjugation Squad."

	"What are you suddenly..."		"What are you suddenly..."
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	Holding the wrecked laptop in her hand, Shinomiya-sensei was looking a bit lost. Then at this time, she smiled wryly and acknowledged.		Holding the wrecked laptop in her hand, Shinomiya-sensei was looking a bit lost. Then at this time, she smiled wryly and acknowledged.

	"Okay... Looks like I can't provide support anymore, so I'm leaving the rest to you. Captain of the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad—Mononobe Mitsuki."		"Okay... Looks like I can't provide support anymore, so I'm leaving the rest to you. Captain of the Dragon Subjugation Squad—Mononobe Mitsuki."

	Shinomiya-sensei intentionally added the title when addressing Mitsuki.		Shinomiya-sensei intentionally added the title when addressing Mitsuki.
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	Having just declared she would relinquish her duties, Mitsuki made a slightly embarrassed look before saluting with upright posture.		Having just declared she would relinquish her duties, Mitsuki made a slightly embarrassed look before saluting with upright posture.

	"Affirmative. I will fulfill my duties as the captain of the ~~Counter-~~Dragon Squad."		"Affirmative. I will fulfill my duties as the captain of the Dragon Subjugation Squad."

	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

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	"...Nii-san, you need not apologize. I am crying because I am too useless... This fills me with chagrin... So do not worry about me."		"...Nii-san, you need not apologize. I am crying because I am too useless... This fills me with chagrin... So do not worry about me."

	~~Mituski~~ spoke hoarsely and brusquely wiped her tears away with her hand.		Mitsuki spoke hoarsely and brusquely wiped her tears away with her hand.

	"Putting that aside, please allow me to confirm one fact. Is what you said just now everything?"		"Putting that aside, please allow me to confirm one fact. Is what you said just now everything?"
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	"Yggdrasil's voice... disappeared?"		"Yggdrasil's voice... disappeared?"

	I muttered blankly. Yggdrasil's voice was originally loud enough to feel noisy, but now, no matter how I focused ~~to listen~~, I could not sense the voice anymore. The sense of dissonance in my left arm also disappeared.		I muttered blankly. Yggdrasil's voice was originally loud enough to feel noisy, but now, no matter how I focused on listening, I could not sense the voice anymore. The sense of dissonance in my left arm also disappeared.

	"Looks like it succeeded."		"Looks like it succeeded."
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	But Tia steadied her shaking body with her legs and spread the pair of red wings that was her fictional armament.		But Tia steadied her shaking body with her legs and spread the pair of red wings that was her fictional armament.

	"Yuu—Everyone follow Tia. Tia will take everyone to ~~Yggrasil~~."		"Yuu—Everyone follow Tia. Tia will take everyone to Yggdrasil."

	Tia spoke with unshakable determination.		Tia spoke with unshakable determination.
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	Will you be okay? I could only swallow these words.		Will you be okay? I could only swallow these words.

	Because I quickly understood that it was a meaningless question. Asking it would be waste of time.		Because I quickly understood that it was a meaningless question. Asking it would be a waste of time.

	I could see that she was not okay at all. She was clearly forcing herself.		I could see that she was not okay at all. She was clearly forcing herself.
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	Feeling someone pull my right hand, I turned my gaze to see Ren looking up at me.		Feeling someone pull my right hand, I turned my gaze to see Ren looking up at me.

	Ren's cooperation with me was the key to next part of the plan, so it was probably better that I traveled with her.		Ren's cooperation with me was the key to the next part of the plan, so it was probably better that I traveled with her.

	"Okay, I'm counting on you."		"Okay, I'm counting on you."
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	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

	Gathered around Lisa who was carrying Tia in her arms, we flew through the night sky.		Gathered around Lisa, who was carrying Tia in her arms, we flew through the night sky.

	Yggdrasil's branches were growing at a frightening rate in front of us.		Yggdrasil's branches were growing at a frightening rate in front of us.
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	Iris nodded in response to Mitsuki.		Iris nodded in response to Mitsuki.

	"Once we pass Mount Fuji, Lisa-san, Iris-san and I shall attack the main body in full force while trying to get even closer. Firill-san and Ariella-san, continue to deploy shields. Nii-san and Ren-san will ~~prepared~~ to scatter Ether Wind after the main body is destroyed!"		"Once we pass Mount Fuji, Lisa-san, Iris-san and I shall attack the main body in full force while trying to get even closer. Firill-san and Ariella-san, continue to deploy shields. Nii-san and Ren-san will prepare to scatter Ether Wind after the main body is destroyed!"

	"Yes!"		"Yes!"
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	I could see a glowing ball shot out from the branches protruding from Yggdrasil's trunk.		I could see a glowing ball shot out from the branches protruding from Yggdrasil's trunk.

	Just as I was thinking that, blinding light flashed past our left.		Just as I was thinking that, a blinding light flashed past our left.

	As Lisa said, it would be impossible to dodge visually.		As Lisa said, it would be impossible to dodge visually.
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	The longer the duration of exposure, the more time was stolen. Slicing through Yggdrasil's gigantic tree trunk, Iris' beam pierced straight through.		The longer the duration of exposure, the more time was stolen. Slicing through Yggdrasil's gigantic tree trunk, Iris' beam pierced straight through.

	The original location of the discharge port was turned into giant hole.		The original location of the discharge port was turned into a giant hole.

	"Pierce, flare!"		"Pierce, flare!"
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	"This time, I will strike the target."		"This time, I will strike the target."

	Aiming at the crack in ~~Yggrasil~~ caused by Kili's attack, Mitsuki released another antimatter arrow.		Aiming at the crack in Yggdrasil caused by Kili's attack, Mitsuki released another antimatter arrow.

	The pure white light of annihilation erupted from the inside of the trunk. The internally detonated explosion caused Yggdrasil's body to expand greatly. Losing balance, the body gradually collapsed under its own weight.		The pure white light of annihilation erupted from the inside of the trunk. The internally detonated explosion caused Yggdrasil's body to expand greatly. Losing balance, the body gradually collapsed under its own weight.
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	Was dark matter really the only thing Ren was giving me?		Was dark matter really the only thing Ren was giving me?

	Those ~~hand~~, tightly held together, supporting my heart, perhaps that kind of power would—		Those hands, tightly held together, supporting my heart, perhaps that kind of power would—

	"Everyone, can I ask you for a favor?"		"Everyone, can I ask you for a favor?"
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	My heart began to warm up. Everyone's thoughts were making me happy. My mind gradually felt satisfied.		My heart began to warm up. Everyone's thoughts were making me happy. My mind gradually felt satisfied.

	Was this mental energy flowing it? Or simply the effect of receiving encouragement? I did not know actually.		Was this mental energy flowing into it? Or simply the effect of receiving encouragement? I did not know actually.

	But my originally sapped strength surged again, this was the truth.		But my originally sapped strength surged again, this was the truth.
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	"Your pair of horns is not simply for defending against Yggdrasil's interference. It is a weapon existing for the sake of devouring Yggdrasil, a power to enable you to become a dragon."		"Your pair of horns is not simply for defending against Yggdrasil's interference. It is a weapon existing for the sake of devouring Yggdrasil, a power to enable you to become a dragon."

	"Horns is a weapon... Become a dragon—"		"The Horns are a weapon... Become a dragon—"

	Tia touched the horns on her head, apparently thinking of something.		Tia touched the horns on her head, apparently thinking of something.
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	Kili replied so nonchalantly, but after seeing the Ether Wind fade away, she smiled.		Kili replied so nonchalantly, but after seeing the Ether Wind fade away, she smiled.

	"From the start, I raised Tia intending to have her devour Yggdrasil. But back then, I had no idea that Yggdrasil was such a terrifying monster. If we had challenged it normally, I think we would've failed already. It's all ~~thank~~ to you inflicting damage to the core, Yuu, that we succeeded on this occasion."		"From the start, I raised Tia intending to have her devour Yggdrasil. But back then, I had no idea that Yggdrasil was such a terrifying monster. If we had challenged it normally, I think we would've failed already. It's all thanks to you inflicting damage to the core, Yuu, that we succeeded on this occasion."

	The golden particles scattered amidst the sky's morning glow.		The golden particles scattered amidst the sky's morning glow.

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	Smart as she was, Mitsuki seemed to recall that immediately.		Smart as she was, Mitsuki seemed to recall that immediately.

	"Yeah, the fight against Hekatonkheir three ~~year~~ ago was the first time."		"Yeah, the fight against Hekatonkheir three years ago was the first time."

	I nodded in response to Mitsuki, despite knowing that Mitsuki would feel heavily guilty as soon as I confirmed it.		I nodded in response to Mitsuki, despite knowing that Mitsuki would feel heavily guilty as soon as I confirmed it.
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	So that was what they talked about in the Castle of Mirrors that time—		So that was what they talked about in the Castle of Mirrors that time—

	"...Tia has been brooding the whole time after returning from the amusement park, like she was in a dilemma... afraid of something. IS that final treatment something ''frightening'' to Tia?"		"...Tia has been brooding the whole time after returning from the amusement park, like she was in a dilemma... afraid of something. Is that final treatment something ''frightening'' to Tia?"

	I stared at Kili and questioned her in a fierce tone of voice.		I stared at Kili and questioned her in a fierce tone of voice.
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	Aiming at the crack in Yggrasil caused by Kili's attack, Mitsuki released another antimatter arrow.		Aiming at the crack in Yggrasil caused by Kili's attack, Mitsuki released another antimatter arrow.

	~~THe~~ pure white light of annihilation erupted from the inside of the trunk. The internally detonated explosion caused Yggdrasil's body to expand greatly. Losing balance, the body gradually collapsed under its own weight.		The pure white light of annihilation erupted from the inside of the trunk. The internally detonated explosion caused Yggdrasil's body to expand greatly. Losing balance, the body gradually collapsed under its own weight.

	"It is almost time. Descend to the ground, scatter Ether Wind and attack Yggdrasil's mind using the anti-dragon armament."		"It is almost time. Descend to the ground, scatter Ether Wind and attack Yggdrasil's mind using the anti-dragon armament."
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	As a weapon that amplified and shot out the gunner's thoughts, Noah was effective against spirit bodies which did not interact with ordinary matter. This was already proven during the battle against Hraesvelgr.		As a weapon that amplified and shot out the gunner's thoughts, Noah was effective against spirit bodies which did not interact with ordinary matter. This was already proven during the battle against Hraesvelgr.

	—I will defeat you. I won't become your possession!"		—I will defeat you. I won't become your possession!

	"Fire!"		"Fire!"
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	Tia's consciousness spread as an electromagnetic field, expanding inside of Yggdrasil.		Tia's consciousness spread as an electromagnetic field, expanding inside of Yggdrasil.

	Attacked and damaged by Noah, ~~Yggdrasi~~'s core system had encountered a bug, allowing Tia's consciousness to invade.		Attacked and damaged by Noah, Yggdrasil's core system had encountered a bug, allowing Tia's consciousness to invade.

	Hacking into Yggdrasil, this was precisely the true function of the pair of horns given to Tia.		Hacking into Yggdrasil, this was precisely the true function of the pair of horns given to Tia.

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	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

	Gathered around Lisa who was carrying Tia in her arms, we ~~fly~~ through the night sky.		Gathered around Lisa who was carrying Tia in her arms, we flew through the night sky.

	Yggdrasil's branches were growing at a frightening rate in front of us.		Yggdrasil's branches were growing at a frightening rate in front of us.
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	Flying in the lead while carrying Iris in her arms was Mitsuki. Holding the rear was Ren, transporting me, with Kili flying by our side.		Flying in the lead while carrying Iris in her arms was Mitsuki. Holding the rear was Ren, transporting me, with Kili flying by our side.

	"How ~~expected~~. I can't believe you came along, Kili."		"How unexpected. I can't believe you came along, Kili."

	Flying in the sky with Ren holding my hand, I spoke to Kili beside me.		Flying in the sky with Ren holding my hand, I spoke to Kili beside me.
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	Just as Kili reminded me to pay attention, Mitsuki yelled from the front:		Just as Kili reminded me to pay attention, Mitsuki yelled from the front:

	"Heads up, Yggdrasil's branches are showing ~~change~~! Be careful, everyone!"		"Heads up, Yggdrasil's branches are showing changes! Be careful, everyone!"

	I hastily looked up to ~~noticed~~ that we were already under a canopy made from Yggdrasil's branches.		I hastily looked up to notice that we were already under a canopy made from Yggdrasil's branches.

	These capillary-like branches blotted the sky, writhing in a sinister and spooky manner. Numerous branches, as sharp as spears, were attacking our position.		These capillary-like branches blotted the sky, writhing in a sinister and spooky manner. Numerous branches, as sharp as spears, were attacking our position.

	"All units deploy shields! We will ~~breath~~ through by force!"		"All units deploy shields! We will break through by force!"

	Mitsuki commanded in a sharp voice.		Mitsuki commanded in a sharp voice.
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	"It's not like that, Kili-chan, let's do our best together!"		"It's not like that, Kili-chan, let's do our best together!"

	"...Y-You're really good at getting ~~other~~ caught in your pace. Fine, whatever. Having created this chance for Tia, even without being told, I seriously intend to go on a rampage."		"...Y-You're really good at getting others caught in your pace. Fine, whatever. Having created this chance for Tia, even without being told, I seriously intend to go on a rampage."

	Kili spoke with violence in her eyes.		Kili spoke with violence in her eyes.
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	Ren's eyes blazed with fighting spirit. She gripped my right hand firmly.		Ren's eyes blazed with fighting spirit. She gripped my right hand firmly.

	"Anti-dragon armament Marduk—Psionic multi-barreled cannon, ~~Noal~~!"		"Anti-dragon armament Marduk—Psionic multi-barreled cannon, Noah!"

	I transmuted the dark matter flowing from Ren into a pre-civilization weapon.		I transmuted the dark matter flowing from Ren into a pre-civilization weapon.
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	But the more I repeated, the more I realized that my attacks were equivalent to a toy gun against Yggdrasil's spirit body whose size was extraordinary.		But the more I repeated, the more I realized that my attacks were equivalent to a toy gun against Yggdrasil's spirit body whose size was extraordinary.

	Even I were to shoot dozens, thousands of times, I did not think I would succeed in destroying it.		Even if I were to shoot dozens, thousands of times, I did not think I would succeed in destroying it.

	My consciousness gradually grew hazy because the more I shot, the more mental energy was consumed. Even if I increased the number of turrets like during the battle against Hraesvelgr, it was pointless because my mind's energy was limited as the source.		My consciousness gradually grew hazy because the more I shot, the more mental energy was consumed. Even if I increased the number of turrets like during the battle against Hraesvelgr, it was pointless because my mind's energy was limited as the source.