User:Uguu - Revision history

Ushoran at 02:58, 10 December 2014

2014-12-10T02:58:45Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 02:58, 10 December 2014
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	you used:		you used:
	'' "I didn't do it!"

			"I didn't do it!"

	Pompf...		Pompf...
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	"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." ''		"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." ''



	While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:		While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:



	"I didn't do it!"		"I didn't do it!"
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	"...Eh?!"		"...Eh?!"

	"...Or could it be that you cannot trust anyone but a slave who can never disobey nor betray you? In that case please put a new curse on me. ~~Shall~~ we go to this place where we first met? "		"...Or could it be that you cannot trust anyone but a slave who can never disobey nor betray you? In that case please put a new curse on me. Should we go to this place where we first met? "

	"Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!"		"Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!"
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	So if you are fine with it I would like to make the changes, especially since it is one of the most important scenes in Tate no Yushaa, I think it would be good to respect the original web novel as much as possible.		So if you are fine with it I would like to make the changes, especially since it is one of the most important scenes in Tate no Yushaa, I think it would be good to respect the original web novel as much as possible.

			[[User:Ushoran\|Ushoran]] ([[User talk:Ushoran\|talk]]) 20:58, 9 December 2014 (CST)
	[[User:Ushoran\|Ushoran]] ([[User talk:Ushoran\|talk]]) 20:57, 9 December 2014 (CST)

Ushoran at 02:57, 10 December 2014

2014-12-10T02:57:28Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 02:57, 10 December 2014
Line 4:		Line 4:
	Chapter 22:		Chapter 22:
	you used:		you used:
			'' "I didn't do it!"

	"I didn't do it!"

	Pompf...		Pompf...
Line 20:		Line 18:

	"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." ''		"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." ''



	While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:		While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:




	"I didn't do it!"		"I didn't do it!"
Line 38:		Line 31:
	"...Eh?!"		"...Eh?!"

	"...Or could it be that you cannot trust anyone but a slave who can never disobey nor betray you? In that case please put a new curse on me. ~~Should~~ we go to this place where we first met? "		"...Or could it be that you cannot trust anyone but a slave who can never disobey nor betray you? In that case please put a new curse on me. Shall we go to this place where we first met? "

	"Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!"		"Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!"
Line 60:		Line 53:

	So if you are fine with it I would like to make the changes, especially since it is one of the most important scenes in Tate no Yushaa, I think it would be good to respect the original web novel as much as possible.		So if you are fine with it I would like to make the changes, especially since it is one of the most important scenes in Tate no Yushaa, I think it would be good to respect the original web novel as much as possible.


			[[User:Ushoran\|Ushoran]] ([[User talk:Ushoran\|talk]]) 20:57, 9 December 2014 (CST)

Ushoran at 02:53, 10 December 2014

2014-12-10T02:53:47Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 02:53, 10 December 2014
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	Chapter 22:		Chapter 22:
	you used:		you used:
	'' "I didn't do it!"

			"I didn't do it!"

	Pompf...		Pompf...
Line 18:		Line 20:

	"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." ''		"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." ''



	While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:		While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:




	"I didn't do it!"		"I didn't do it!"
Line 35:		Line 42:
	"Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!"		"Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!"

	What was that ~~voice~~!? Who?! ~~These~~ words... were forcing their way into my heart		What was that!? Who?! This voice... these words... were forcing their way into my heart

	"No matter what happens, I will always believe in you, Naofumi-sama"		"No matter what happens, I will always believe in you, Naofumi-sama"

Ushoran at 02:52, 10 December 2014

2014-12-10T02:52:52Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 02:52, 10 December 2014
Line 4:		Line 4:
	Chapter 22:		Chapter 22:
	you used:		you used:
			'' "I didn't do it!"

	"I didn't do it!"

	Pompf...		Pompf...
Line 20:		Line 18:

	"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." ''		"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." ''




	While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:		While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:




	"I didn't do it!"		"I didn't do it!"
Line 39:		Line 31:
	"...Eh?!"		"...Eh?!"

	"...Or could it be that you cannot trust anyone but a slave who can never disobey nor betray you? In that case please put a new curse on me. ~~Shall~~ we go to this place where we first met? "		"...Or could it be that you cannot trust anyone but a slave who can never disobey nor betray you? In that case please put a new curse on me. Should we go to this place where we first met? "

	"Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!"		"Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!"

	What was that!? Who?! ~~This voice... these~~ words... were forcing their way into my heart		What was that voice!? Who?! These words... were forcing their way into my heart

	"No matter what happens, I will always believe in you, Naofumi-sama"		"No matter what happens, I will always believe in you, Naofumi-sama"

Ushoran at 02:51, 10 December 2014

2014-12-10T02:51:27Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 02:51, 10 December 2014
Line 4:		Line 4:
	Chapter 22:		Chapter 22:
	you used:		you used:
	'' "I didn't do it!"

			"I didn't do it!"

	Pompf...		Pompf...
Line 18:		Line 20:

	"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." ''		"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." ''




	While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:		While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:




	"I didn't do it!"		"I didn't do it!"

Ushoran: Created page with "Hi Uguu, I would like make a few edits for the chapters of Tate no Yuusha that you translated. Chapter 22: you used: '' "I didn't do it!" Pompf... My frenzied self was cove..."

2014-12-10T02:50:34Z

Created page with "Hi Uguu, I would like make a few edits for the chapters of Tate no Yuusha that you translated. Chapter 22: you used: '' "I didn't do it!" Pompf... My frenzied self was cove..."

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Hi Uguu,
I would like make a few edits for the chapters of Tate no Yuusha that you translated.

Chapter 22:
you used:
'' "I didn't do it!"

Pompf...

My frenzied self was covered by something.
"No matter what, I will always believe in Naofumi-sama."
"Shut up! You people are just going to pin more crimes on me!"
"...I don't believe those rumors. You are a person who would never do such a thing."

I heard the words that I've been wanting to hear ever since arriving in this world.
Gently, the shadows that clouded my vision disappeared.
I received the tender warmth of another person.

"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all." ''

While the original version had some more lines and it goes rather like this:

"I didn't do it!"

Pompf...

My frenzied self was covered by something.

"Please calm yourself Naofumi-sama. Please hear me out and give me a chance to earn your trust."

"...Eh?!"

"...Or could it be that you cannot trust anyone but a slave who can never disobey nor betray you? In that case please put a new curse on me. Shall we go to this place where we first met? "

"Y-you're lying!... This is another trick to deceive me!"

What was that!? Who?! This voice... these words... were forcing their way into my heart

"No matter what happens, I will always believe in you, Naofumi-sama"

"Shut up! You people are just going to pin more crimes on me!"

"...I don't believe those rumors. You are a person who would never do such a thing."

Ever since I arrived in this world, it was the first time... that I heard the words I had been wishing for.

Gently, the shadows that clouded my vision disappeared.

I received the tender warmth of another person.

"Even if the whole world blames Naofumi-sama, I am different... No matter how many times it takes, I will refute them all."

So if you are fine with it I would like to make the changes, especially since it is one of the most important scenes in Tate no Yushaa, I think it would be good to respect the original web novel as much as possible.