User talk:Aorii - Revision history

SonodaYuki at 09:38, 29 July 2015

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	XD looking forward to it [[User:Starwarscards\|Starwarscards]] ([[User talk:Starwarscards\|talk]]) 15:08, 15 July 2014 (CDT)		XD looking forward to it [[User:Starwarscards\|Starwarscards]] ([[User talk:Starwarscards\|talk]]) 15:08, 15 July 2014 (CDT)

	Dunno who else looks at your discussion page, but considering it's a publicly accessible page, I'll be brief, if somewhat cryptic. the least spoilerish thing I can say regarding your current alpha update is that from here to there, it feels like she's missing a spark of inspiration. If your offer to exchange mails as a beta is still on the table, I'll take it. I'm pretty sure you can get mine from Krytyk's wordpress. [[User:SonodaYuki\|SonodaYuki]] ([[User talk:SonodaYuki\|talk]]) 08:11, 29 July 2015 (UTC)		Dunno who else looks at your discussion page, but considering it's a publicly accessible page, I'll be brief, if somewhat cryptic. the least spoilerish thing I can say regarding your current alpha update is that from here to there, it feels like she's missing a spark of inspiration. If your offer to exchange mails as a beta (alpha?) reader is still on the table, I'll take it. I'm pretty sure you can get mine from Krytyk's wordpress. [[User:SonodaYuki\|SonodaYuki]] ([[User talk:SonodaYuki\|talk]]) 08:11, 29 July 2015 (UTC)

	== Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility ==		== Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility ==

SonodaYuki: "not for public consumption?" but it's on the interwebs already...

2015-07-29T08:11:24Z

"not for public consumption?" but it's on the interwebs already...

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	XD looking forward to it [[User:Starwarscards\|Starwarscards]] ([[User talk:Starwarscards\|talk]]) 15:08, 15 July 2014 (CDT)		XD looking forward to it [[User:Starwarscards\|Starwarscards]] ([[User talk:Starwarscards\|talk]]) 15:08, 15 July 2014 (CDT)

			Dunno who else looks at your discussion page, but considering it's a publicly accessible page, I'll be brief, if somewhat cryptic. the least spoilerish thing I can say regarding your current alpha update is that from here to there, it feels like she's missing a spark of inspiration. If your offer to exchange mails as a beta is still on the table, I'll take it. I'm pretty sure you can get mine from Krytyk's wordpress. [[User:SonodaYuki\|SonodaYuki]] ([[User talk:SonodaYuki\|talk]]) 08:11, 29 July 2015 (UTC)

	== Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility ==		== Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility ==

Starwarscards at 20:08, 15 July 2014

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			XD looking forward to it [[User:Starwarscards\|Starwarscards]] ([[User talk:Starwarscards\|talk]]) 15:08, 15 July 2014 (CDT)

	== Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility ==		== Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility ==

Aorii at 13:18, 15 July 2014

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	Great job! I really have enjoyed what you have written so far and look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work. :) [[User:Starwarscards\|Starwarscards]] ([[User talk:Starwarscards\|talk]]) 21:15, 29 January 2014 (CST)

	I picked an early chapter (3) to read to see if I’d like the story, and I just got sucked in. Not only did I read the first 2 I skipped, but I ended up reading for the rest of the night. The next night too. I just read the latest chapter (I was re-reading a couple of parts and noticed you posted it). Your characters are interesting and slowly changing(as any good characters should), and the world seems like it has some depth. I especially liked some of the details on the different types of magic , how they worked, and their strengths and weaknesses. My only gripe is that there is no more for me to read right now :) Keep up the good work! -- 21:26, 29 January 2014 (CST)		I picked an early chapter (3) to read to see if I’d like the story, and I just got sucked in. Not only did I read the first 2 I skipped, but I ended up reading for the rest of the night. The next night too. I just read the latest chapter (I was re-reading a couple of parts and noticed you posted it). Your characters are interesting and slowly changing(as any good characters should), and the world seems like it has some depth. I especially liked some of the details on the different types of magic , how they worked, and their strengths and weaknesses. My only gripe is that there is no more for me to read right now :) Keep up the good work! -- 21:26, 29 January 2014 (CST)
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			Great job! I really have enjoyed what you have written so far and look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work. :) [[User:Starwarscards\|Starwarscards]] ([[User talk:Starwarscards\|talk]]) 21:15, 29 January 2014 (CST)

	LOL ya I have been using this username forever so just stick with what you know right? But yep still do enjoy reading your story just have one problem... I WANT MORE!!!! :P [[User:Starwarscards\|Starwarscards]] ([[User talk:Starwarscards\|talk]]) 12:10, 14 July 2014 (CDT)		LOL ya I have been using this username forever so just stick with what you know right? But yep still do enjoy reading your story just have one problem... I WANT MORE!!!! :P [[User:Starwarscards\|Starwarscards]] ([[User talk:Starwarscards\|talk]]) 12:10, 14 July 2014 (CDT)

			Responses on userpage - Aorii

	== Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility ==		== Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility ==

Starwarscards at 17:10, 14 July 2014

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			LOL ya I have been using this username forever so just stick with what you know right? But yep still do enjoy reading your story just have one problem... I WANT MORE!!!! :P [[User:Starwarscards\|Starwarscards]] ([[User talk:Starwarscards\|talk]]) 12:10, 14 July 2014 (CDT)

	== Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility ==		== Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility ==

Onizuka-gto: /* Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility */

2014-07-14T15:05:49Z

Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility

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			- Compatibility fixed. Volume 01 & 02 is showing up and chapters are downloading fine now. Thank you Aorii.
			Onizuka-GTO 10:05, 14 July 2014 (CDT)

Onizuka-gto: /* Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility */ new section

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Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility: new section

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			== Daybreak of Hyperion: Android App Compatibility ==

			Dear Aorii,

			Please be aware that the OLN titled above, is currently incompatible with the Baka Reader App, please ensure the layout of the index project page follows the guidelines here: [[Baka-Tsuki:Project_Overview_Page_Conventions\|Project Overview Convention]]

			If you wish to find an example of a working OLN project please see the following:

			*[[Dantega\|Dantega]]
			*[[Mother of Learning\|Mother of Learning]]

			Best Regards,

			Onizuka-GTO 09:34, 14 July 2014 (CDT)

Aorii at 17:53, 1 July 2014

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	Finished reading volume 2 chapter 1 to 8, and the military aspect [not] hitting home [yet] was quite right. Thanks for the awesome read XD.		Finished reading volume 2 chapter 1 to 8, and the military aspect [not] hitting home [yet] was quite right. Thanks for the awesome read XD.
	Also after reading the synopsis (just now). I noticed that I don't really want Kaede to be the third wheel that "supported their entire journey through", kind of hoping shes one of the "two wills joined" to alter a continent, even when that doesn't seem all that likely. Also I know you probably wont, but no spoilers please. [[User:Zeenu8skyfire\|Zeenu]] ([[User talk:Zeenu8skyfire\|talk]]) 01:32, 28 June 2014 (CDT)		Also after reading the synopsis (just now). I noticed that I don't really want Kaede to be the third wheel that "supported their entire journey through", kind of hoping shes one of the "two wills joined" to alter a continent, even when that doesn't seem all that likely. Also I know you probably wont, but no spoilers please. [[User:Zeenu8skyfire\|Zeenu]] ([[User talk:Zeenu8skyfire\|talk]]) 01:32, 28 June 2014 (CDT)

	~~Answered on userpage - Aorii~~

	My thought on volume 2 hmmm......		My thought on volume 2 hmmm......
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	So everything considered and me being a layman, cant find anything wrong with anything I read. It was awesome and hope for continued awesomeness.And wars, hoping for more appropriately timed wars. [[User:Zeenu8skyfire\|Zeenu]] ([[User talk:Zeenu8skyfire\|talk]]) 19:00, 29 June 2014 (CDT)		So everything considered and me being a layman, cant find anything wrong with anything I read. It was awesome and hope for continued awesomeness.And wars, hoping for more appropriately timed wars. [[User:Zeenu8skyfire\|Zeenu]] ([[User talk:Zeenu8skyfire\|talk]]) 19:00, 29 June 2014 (CDT)

			Responses on userpage - Aorii

Zeenu8skyfire at 01:06, 30 June 2014

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	*Pascals inhumanity was the biggest surprise for me, I mean seriously it being "intelligent" "to spare those who surrendered". It even sounds fun to think of how Kaede will find out and how her reaction would be.		*Pascals inhumanity was the biggest surprise for me, I mean seriously it being "intelligent" "to spare those who surrendered". It even sounds fun to think of how Kaede will find out and how her reaction would be.
	*Sylviane finding out about Kaede was unexpected, I thought it would be a secret between Kaede and Pascal at least until the latter volumes.		*Sylviane finding out about Kaede was unexpected, I thought it would be a secret between Kaede and Pascal at least until the latter volumes.
	*"Blazing corpses, burning pools, and the disentangling limbs of crashed ski infantry scattered across the ravaged fields around her.", that was the most interesting thing that happened so far. Hope she becomes some kind of war idol, I wonder if she'll get a medal or something after this is over. [disentangling - I think it should be -dismembered-]		*Kaede and her greek fire thrower- "Blazing corpses, burning pools, and the disentangling limbs of crashed ski infantry scattered across the ravaged fields around her.", that was the most interesting thing that happened so far. Hope she becomes some kind of war idol, I wonder if she'll get a medal or something after this is over. [disentangling - I think it should be -dismembered-]

	So everything considered I a layman, cant find anything wrong with anything I read. It was awesome and hope for continued awesomeness.And wars, hoping for more appropriately timed wars. [[User:Zeenu8skyfire\|Zeenu]] ([[User talk:Zeenu8skyfire\|talk]]) 19:00, 29 June 2014 (CDT)		So everything considered and me being a layman, cant find anything wrong with anything I read. It was awesome and hope for continued awesomeness.And wars, hoping for more appropriately timed wars. [[User:Zeenu8skyfire\|Zeenu]] ([[User talk:Zeenu8skyfire\|talk]]) 19:00, 29 June 2014 (CDT)

Zeenu8skyfire at 00:00, 30 June 2014

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	Guess that's the most extreme of cussing I've written thus far? I try not to use much but I won't hold back profanities when the situation warrants though. - Aorii		Guess that's the most extreme of cussing I've written thus far? I try not to use much but I won't hold back profanities when the situation warrants though. - Aorii

	Finished reading volume 2 chapter 1 to 8, and the military aspect no hitting home was quite right. Thanks for the awesome read XD.		Finished reading volume 2 chapter 1 to 8, and the military aspect [not] hitting home [yet] was quite right. Thanks for the awesome read XD.
	Also after reading the synopsis (just now). I noticed that I don't really want Kaede to be the third wheel that "supported their entire journey through", kind of hoping shes one of the "two wills joined" to alter a continent, even when that doesn't seem all that likely. Also I know you probably wont, but no spoilers please. [[User:Zeenu8skyfire\|Zeenu]] ([[User talk:Zeenu8skyfire\|talk]]) 01:32, 28 June 2014 (CDT)		Also after reading the synopsis (just now). I noticed that I don't really want Kaede to be the third wheel that "supported their entire journey through", kind of hoping shes one of the "two wills joined" to alter a continent, even when that doesn't seem all that likely. Also I know you probably wont, but no spoilers please. [[User:Zeenu8skyfire\|Zeenu]] ([[User talk:Zeenu8skyfire\|talk]]) 01:32, 28 June 2014 (CDT)

	Answered on userpage - Aorii		Answered on userpage - Aorii

			My thought on volume 2 hmmm......
			*Pascals inhumanity was the biggest surprise for me, I mean seriously it being "intelligent" "to spare those who surrendered". It even sounds fun to think of how Kaede will find out and how her reaction would be.
			*Sylviane finding out about Kaede was unexpected, I thought it would be a secret between Kaede and Pascal at least until the latter volumes.
			*"Blazing corpses, burning pools, and the disentangling limbs of crashed ski infantry scattered across the ravaged fields around her.", that was the most interesting thing that happened so far. Hope she becomes some kind of war idol, I wonder if she'll get a medal or something after this is over. [disentangling - I think it should be -dismembered-]

			So everything considered I a layman, cant find anything wrong with anything I read. It was awesome and hope for continued awesomeness.And wars, hoping for more appropriately timed wars. [[User:Zeenu8skyfire\|Zeenu]] ([[User talk:Zeenu8skyfire\|talk]]) 19:00, 29 June 2014 (CDT)