User talk:Dark Kaito - Revision history

Tasear: /* Thanks */

2014-09-10T05:55:03Z

Thanks

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	== Thanks ==		== Thanks ==
	Don't have a DeviantArt account to comment on your page. Just wanted to say thanks for all the Slime Tensei summaries. They're extremely enjoyable and I appreciate all the hard work! :)		Don't have a DeviantArt account to comment on your page. Just wanted to say thanks for all the Slime Tensei summaries. They're extremely enjoyable and I appreciate all the hard work! :)

			Thanks for everything --[[User:Tasear\|Tasear]] ([[User talk:Tasear\|talk]]) 00:55, 10 September 2014 (CDT)

	==Regarding Mushoku==		==Regarding Mushoku==

Onii Sama: /* Muhsoku Tensei 153, 154, 157 */

2014-08-28T04:17:40Z

Muhsoku Tensei 153, 154, 157

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	I finished 157 today.		I finished 157 today.

	153 and 154 were not by my hands. Two unknown /a/non provided the scripts. 154 has permission to share on BT listed near the bottom of the script, but I do not know of 153. If permission cannot be found, I'm willing to redo 153 if requested. -[[User:Onii Sama\|Onii Sama]] ([[User talk:Onii Sama\|talk]]) 23:16, 27 August 2014 (CDT)		153 and 154 were not by my hands. Two unknown /a/non provided the scripts. 154 has permission to share on BT listed near the bottom of the script, but I do not know of 153. If permission cannot be found, I'm willing to redo 153 if requested.

			[[User:Deadgye]] will probably post chapters with proper permissions on BT soon. - [[User:Onii Sama\|Onii Sama]] ([[User talk:Onii Sama\|talk]]) 23:17, 27 August 2014 (CDT)

Onii Sama: /* Muhsoku Tensei 153, 154, 157 */

2014-08-28T04:16:35Z

Muhsoku Tensei 153, 154, 157

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	I feel privileged that the great Kaito offered to put these chapters in my care. I have news to report:		I feel privileged that the great Kaito offered to put these chapters in my care. I have news to report:

	153 Done http://pastebin.com/ee4kEGWs		* 153 Done http://pastebin.com/ee4kEGWs
	154 Done http://pastebin.com/AwCS8jdi		* 154 Done http://pastebin.com/AwCS8jdi
	157 Done http://pastebin.com/fiNiKtnD		* 157 Done http://pastebin.com/fiNiKtnD

	I finished 157 today.		I finished 157 today.

	153 and 154 were not by my hands. Two unknown /a/non provided the scripts. 154 has permission to share on BT listed near the bottom of the script, but I do not know of 153. If permission cannot be found, I'm willing to redo 153 if requested. -[[User:Onii Sama\|Onii Sama]] ([[User talk:Onii Sama\|talk]]) 23:16, 27 August 2014 (CDT)		153 and 154 were not by my hands. Two unknown /a/non provided the scripts. 154 has permission to share on BT listed near the bottom of the script, but I do not know of 153. If permission cannot be found, I'm willing to redo 153 if requested. -[[User:Onii Sama\|Onii Sama]] ([[User talk:Onii Sama\|talk]]) 23:16, 27 August 2014 (CDT)

Onii Sama: /* Muhsoku Tensei 153, 154, 157 */ new section

2014-08-28T04:16:07Z

Muhsoku Tensei 153, 154, 157: new section

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	Do you mind if I have a private conversation with you? I'll like to discuss some matters.--[[User:Teh Ping\|Teh Ping]] ([[User talk:Teh Ping\|talk]]) 06:16, 25 August 2014 (CDT)		Do you mind if I have a private conversation with you? I'll like to discuss some matters.--[[User:Teh Ping\|Teh Ping]] ([[User talk:Teh Ping\|talk]]) 06:16, 25 August 2014 (CDT)

			== Muhsoku Tensei 153, 154, 157 ==

			I feel privileged that the great Kaito offered to put these chapters in my care. I have news to report:

			153 Done http://pastebin.com/ee4kEGWs
			154 Done http://pastebin.com/AwCS8jdi
			157 Done http://pastebin.com/fiNiKtnD

			I finished 157 today.

			153 and 154 were not by my hands. Two unknown /a/non provided the scripts. 154 has permission to share on BT listed near the bottom of the script, but I do not know of 153. If permission cannot be found, I'm willing to redo 153 if requested. -[[User:Onii Sama\|Onii Sama]] ([[User talk:Onii Sama\|talk]]) 23:16, 27 August 2014 (CDT)

DaiZzed: /* Web Chapter 53 */

2014-08-26T04:09:43Z

Web Chapter 53

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	If you were to stop by the Shirone Kingdom on the way to the Dragon King Kingdom it's like the other two kingdoms, a vassal state.		If you were to stop by the Shirone Kingdom on the way to the Dragon King Kingdom it's like the other two kingdoms, a vassal state.

			=====Part 2=====

			位置的に離れているためか、それとも紛争地帯の防波堤として役だっているためか。

			In order to keep the location a bit separated otherwise it acted as a breakwater for the strife zone.

			This location was kept a bit separate to act as a buffer to the strife zone.

			あるいは休耕しているのか、クローバーのような牧草の植えられた区画。

			Possibly it was left to fallow, there was an area that had something like clovers and grass.

			I haven't tried to edit this- "fallow" would mean plowed but not cultivated, but it's just... really antiquated English.

	====Misc Notes====		====Misc Notes====

Teh Ping at 11:16, 25 August 2014

2014-08-25T11:16:08Z

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	== Thanks ==		== Thanks ==
	Don't have a DeviantArt account to comment on your page. Just wanted to say thanks for all the Slime Tensei summaries. They're extremely enjoyable and I appreciate all the hard work! :)		Don't have a DeviantArt account to comment on your page. Just wanted to say thanks for all the Slime Tensei summaries. They're extremely enjoyable and I appreciate all the hard work! :)

			==Regarding Mushoku==

			Do you mind if I have a private conversation with you? I'll like to discuss some matters.--[[User:Teh Ping\|Teh Ping]] ([[User talk:Teh Ping\|talk]]) 06:16, 25 August 2014 (CDT)

71.20.188.62 at 00:38, 23 August 2014

2014-08-23T00:38:48Z

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	Hey Dark Kaito, just wanted to apologize for taking up Chapter 104.5 in Mushoku Tensei, took it on during the spur of the moment. While it is a bit late, I want to know if it is okay to keep the work I have done on the page. If you don't agree, I can go ahead and take it down. I will also talk to Kazeboy as well since it looks like the both of you have a majority of this volume.		Hey Dark Kaito, just wanted to apologize for taking up Chapter 104.5 in Mushoku Tensei, took it on during the spur of the moment. While it is a bit late, I want to know if it is okay to keep the work I have done on the page. If you don't agree, I can go ahead and take it down. I will also talk to Kazeboy as well since it looks like the both of you have a majority of this volume.
	[[User:Fighter747\|Fighter747]] ([[User talk:Fighter747\|talk]]) 21:24, 7 August 2014 (CDT)		[[User:Fighter747\|Fighter747]] ([[User talk:Fighter747\|talk]]) 21:24, 7 August 2014 (CDT)


			== Thanks ==
			Don't have a DeviantArt account to comment on your page. Just wanted to say thanks for all the Slime Tensei summaries. They're extremely enjoyable and I appreciate all the hard work! :)

John Woodward at 01:51, 20 August 2014

2014-08-20T01:51:50Z

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	=== John Woodward ===		=== John Woodward ===
	Hi Dark Kaito, I'm John Woodward, one of the editors:		Hi Dark Kaito,

			I'm John Woodward, one of the editors:

	In the latest chapters within the labyrinth volume, especially "Guardian of the Teleport Labyrinth", would it be OK to translate kaa-san to mom? Or would another english term be better?		In the latest chapters within the labyrinth volume, especially "Guardian of the Teleport Labyrinth", would it be OK to translate kaa-san to mom? Or would another english term be better?
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	[[User:John Woodward\|John Woodward]] ([[User talk:John Woodward\|talk]]) 20:07, 16 August 2014 (CDT)		[[User:John Woodward\|John Woodward]] ([[User talk:John Woodward\|talk]]) 20:07, 16 August 2014 (CDT)

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	Kaito,		Kaito,
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	Warm regards,		Warm regards,

			[[User:John Woodward\|John Woodward]] ([[User talk:John Woodward\|talk]])

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			Hello Kaito,

			How are you? I have a low-priority storytelling question. It's about during non-Rudeus Perspectives (Eris, Roxy, Others), should I lean towards telling in past OR present verb styles (She spoke vs She speaks)?

			For instance in Eris' Side Story, when around current moments for Eris, I revised Vanant's translation leaning towards present-tense verbs. Here was what Vanant said:

			"I always felt that using past-only was satisfactory, since it'd be a sort of 'side story' that didn't focus on the main character himself (the view we take is of an omniscient 3rd person narrator), but if you feel you can make improvements to the tense, please go ahead. I'm quite picky with wording since I'm the one doing the translating, but I definitely don't claim to know better about tenses (often present tense stories in JP are translated to past tense stories in EN). Someone better at storywriting than me should decide on that."

			I am just biding time until somewhat of a consensus is reached.

			Thanks I appreciate it,

	[[User:John Woodward\|John Woodward]] ([[User talk:John Woodward\|talk]])		[[User:John Woodward\|John Woodward]] ([[User talk:John Woodward\|talk]])

John Woodward: /* John Woodward */

2014-08-18T07:41:09Z

John Woodward

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	Kaito,		Kaito,

	Thanks for the well-written response~~. I think~~ it helped me figure out the problems between revisions ~~and fix them~~. ~~Let's look at~~ the ~~main issues firstly~~, ~~then the minor issue secondly:~~		Thanks for the well-written response, it helped me figure out the problems between revisions. I attached the fixes, will this be OK?


	First fix:		'''First fix:'''

	Before:		''Before:''

	“The trap teleport magic circles surround the correct answer teleport magic circle.		''“The trap teleport magic circles surround the correct answer teleport magic circle. ''

	In other words, it's not the exterior, if you jump onto a certain interior part in the center, arrival on the next floor should be possible.”		''In other words, it's not the exterior, if you jump onto a certain interior part in the center, arrival on the next floor should be possible.”''

	After:		After:
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	Second fix:		'''Second fix:'''

	Before:		''Before:''

	“However, where Roxy was wandering around was a section restricted to only one-way magic circle use.		''“However, where Roxy was wandering around was a section restricted to only one-way magic circle use. ''

	Inside of that section, Roxy had over thirty one-way magic circles that she had no choice other than to try in order to return.”		''Inside of that section, Roxy had over thirty one-way magic circles that she had no choice other than to try in order to return.” ''

	After:		After:

John Woodward: /* Mushoku Tensai edits */ formatting

2014-08-18T07:35:07Z

Mushoku Tensai edits: formatting

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	I was looking over the latest edits for Chapter 126 and noticed that some of the changes made by John Woodward seem to be a little off. I also noticed that his and several other people's edits on previous chapters also seem to be the same way. Can a supervisor or translator check them? Might be just me though.--[[Special:Contributions/24.196.214.144\|24.196.214.144]] 00:01, 15 August 2014 (CDT)		I was looking over the latest edits for Chapter 126 and noticed that some of the changes made by John Woodward seem to be a little off. I also noticed that his and several other people's edits on previous chapters also seem to be the same way. Can a supervisor or translator check them? Might be just me though.--[[Special:Contributions/24.196.214.144\|24.196.214.144]] 00:01, 15 August 2014 (CDT)

			=== John Woodward ===
	Hi Dark Kaito, I'm John Woodward, one of the editors:		Hi Dark Kaito, I'm John Woodward, one of the editors:

	In the latest chapters within the labyrinth volume, especially "Guardian of the Teleport Labyrinth", would it be OK to translate kaa-san to mom? Or would another english term be better?		In the latest chapters within the labyrinth volume, especially "Guardian of the Teleport Labyrinth", would it be OK to translate kaa-san to mom? Or would another english term be better?

	Also, I read the above comment mentioning my edits as "a little off". Please don't worry too much- I will go over and check my edits now. I appreciate any of your time, though. Thank you and please feel free to refer me to a translator for verifying my edits, as well. Since I don't want to interrupt your speed translating. Thanks again,		Also, I read the above comment mentioning my edits as "a little off". Please don't worry too much- I will go over and check my edits now. I appreciate any of your time, though. Thank you and please feel free to refer me to a translator for verifying my edits, as well. Since I don't want to interrupt your speed translating.

			Thanks again,

	[[User:John Woodward\|John Woodward]] ([[User talk:John Woodward\|talk]]) 20:07, 16 August 2014 (CDT)		[[User:John Woodward\|John Woodward]] ([[User talk:John Woodward\|talk]]) 20:07, 16 August 2014 (CDT)

	Kaito,
			Kaito,

	Thanks for the well-written response. I think it helped me figure out the problems between revisions and fix them. Let's look at the main issues firstly, then the minor issue secondly:		Thanks for the well-written response. I think it helped me figure out the problems between revisions and fix them. Let's look at the main issues firstly, then the minor issue secondly:


	First fix:		First fix:

	Before:		Before:
	“The trap teleport magic circles surround the correct answer teleport magic circle. In other words, it's not the exterior, if you jump onto a certain interior part in the center, arrival ~~onthe~~ next floor should be possible.”
			“The trap teleport magic circles surround the correct answer teleport magic circle.

			In other words, it's not the exterior, if you jump onto a certain interior part in the center, arrival on the next floor should be possible.”

	After:		After:
	“A trap teleport magic circle concentrically outside the correct answer teleport magic circle. In other words, it's not the exterior; if you jump onto the innermost circle, arrival on the next floor is possible.”
			“A trap teleport magic circle concentrically outside the correct answer teleport magic circle.

			In other words, it's not the exterior; if you jump onto the innermost circle, arrival on the next floor is possible.”


	Second fix:		Second fix:

	Before:		Before:
	“However, where Roxy was wandering around was a section restricted to only one-way magic circle use. Inside of that section, Roxy had over thirty one-way magic circles that she had no choice other than to try in order to return.”
			“However, where Roxy was wandering around was a section restricted to only one-way magic circle use.

			Inside of that section, Roxy had over thirty one-way magic circles that she had no choice other than to try in order to return.”

	After:		After:

	“However, where Roxy was wandering around, it was a cavern that you can't enter without using a two-way magic circle. ~~Inside of that cavern's maze, Roxy had over thirty one-way magic circles that she was forced to try in order to return to the two-way magic circle.”~~		“However, where Roxy was wandering around, it was a cavern that you can't enter without using a two-way magic circle.

	(Reminds me a tiny of the Gym Leader Sabrina in Pokemon Red/Blue and her one-way portals) The minor fix~~, per~~ your suggestion fixed kaa-chan--> mother, but I left ~~the~~ Paul's ~~last~~ "Save your mom, even if you have to die." ~~as it is arguably more epic when informally said from Paul.~~		Inside of that cavern's maze, Roxy had over thirty one-way magic circles that she was forced to try in order to return to the two-way magic circle.”

			(Reminds me a tiny bit of the Gym Leader Sabrina in Pokemon Red/Blue and her one-way portals)

			The minor fix:

			Per your suggestion, fixed kaa-chan--> mother, but I left Paul's quote: "Save your mom, even if you have to die."

	Warm regards,		Warm regards,

	[[User:John Woodward\|John Woodward]] ([[User talk:John Woodward\|talk]])		[[User:John Woodward\|John Woodward]] ([[User talk:John Woodward\|talk]])