User talk:DevilByMySide - Revision history

94.196.218.60: /* Heavy Objects edits */

2014-01-17T06:11:44Z

Heavy Objects edits

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	I admit a couple of the tense changes were correct, but a lot of them were unnecessary and a few even made the sentence awkward. Changing the would/will and could/can were mostly pointless, and "machinegun" is just an alternative way to spell machine gun, just like how machine-gun is. May and might can have slightly different intended meanings, but neither were incorrect in their usages. —[[User:EnigmaticRepose\|EnigmaticRepose]] ([[User talk:EnigmaticRepose\|talk]]) 00:06, 17 January 2014 (CST)		I admit a couple of the tense changes were correct, but a lot of them were unnecessary and a few even made the sentence awkward. Changing the would/will and could/can were mostly pointless, and "machinegun" is just an alternative way to spell machine gun, just like how machine-gun is. May and might can have slightly different intended meanings, but neither were incorrect in their usages. —[[User:EnigmaticRepose\|EnigmaticRepose]] ([[User talk:EnigmaticRepose\|talk]]) 00:06, 17 January 2014 (CST)

			Okay. Thank you for the correction. I will be careful in the next edits if ever I find one. -[[User:DevilByMySide]]

EnigmaticRepose at 06:06, 17 January 2014

2014-01-17T06:06:09Z

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	I'm sorry if I ever left and made some mistakes on my editing. You can revert it if you deem some of the edits are unreasonable. About my edits, well as I read throughout, some phrases/sentences need a bit of words to be understood and the rest were grammar fixes (in my opinion) because some paragraphs have sentences with verbs in inconsistent time like past phrases/sentences in between present ones and vice versa and some character lines which are in double apostrophes are not in present form. But anyways, sorry for the trouble. -[[User:DevilByMySide]]		I'm sorry if I ever left and made some mistakes on my editing. You can revert it if you deem some of the edits are unreasonable. About my edits, well as I read throughout, some phrases/sentences need a bit of words to be understood and the rest were grammar fixes (in my opinion) because some paragraphs have sentences with verbs in inconsistent time like past phrases/sentences in between present ones and vice versa and some character lines which are in double apostrophes are not in present form. But anyways, sorry for the trouble. -[[User:DevilByMySide]]

			I admit a couple of the tense changes were correct, but a lot of them were unnecessary and a few even made the sentence awkward. Changing the would/will and could/can were mostly pointless, and "machinegun" is just an alternative way to spell machine gun, just like how machine-gun is. May and might can have slightly different intended meanings, but neither were incorrect in their usages. —[[User:EnigmaticRepose\|EnigmaticRepose]] ([[User talk:EnigmaticRepose\|talk]]) 00:06, 17 January 2014 (CST)

DevilByMySide: /* Heavy Objects edits */

2014-01-17T05:46:51Z

Heavy Objects edits

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	==Heavy Objects edits==		==Heavy Objects edits==
	Could you explain your edits for Heavy Object 7? I see little reason for nearly all of your changes. Your edits don't improve readability or sentence flow, but use different choice words than what the translator chose. I also noticed you leaving a few mistakes behind, and would like to revert all of your edits. —[[User:EnigmaticRepose\|EnigmaticRepose]] ([[User talk:EnigmaticRepose\|talk]]) 22:34, 16 January 2014 (CST)		Could you explain your edits for Heavy Object 7? I see little reason for nearly all of your changes. Your edits don't improve readability or sentence flow, but use different choice words than what the translator chose. I also noticed you leaving a few mistakes behind, and would like to revert all of your edits. —[[User:EnigmaticRepose\|EnigmaticRepose]] ([[User talk:EnigmaticRepose\|talk]]) 22:34, 16 January 2014 (CST)

			I'm sorry if I ever left and made some mistakes on my editing. You can revert it if you deem some of the edits are unreasonable. About my edits, well as I read throughout, some phrases/sentences need a bit of words to be understood and the rest were grammar fixes (in my opinion) because some paragraphs have sentences with verbs in inconsistent time like past phrases/sentences in between present ones and vice versa and some character lines which are in double apostrophes are not in present form. But anyways, sorry for the trouble. -[[User:DevilByMySide]]

EnigmaticRepose: Heavy Object edits inquiry.

2014-01-17T04:35:00Z

Heavy Object edits inquiry.

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==Heavy Objects edits==
Could you explain your edits for Heavy Object 7? I see little reason for nearly all of your changes. Your edits don't improve readability or sentence flow, but use different choice words than what the translator chose. I also noticed you leaving a few mistakes behind, and would like to revert all of your edits. —[[User:EnigmaticRepose|EnigmaticRepose]] ([[User talk:EnigmaticRepose|talk]]) 22:34, 16 January 2014 (CST)