User talk:Kanziel - Revision history

Pudding321 at 15:00, 17 October 2012

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	- [[User:Kira0802\|Kira]] ([[User_talk:Kira0802\|Talk]]) 18:02, 2 October 2012 (CDT)		- [[User:Kira0802\|Kira]] ([[User_talk:Kira0802\|Talk]]) 18:02, 2 October 2012 (CDT)

			== Minor Translating Issues ==
			I happened to have a glimpse at your translation. You seem to be using Chinese Names directly in your translation e.g. Sho- Tai Shi. I understand that you are translating from Chinese, but still, as this originally is Japanese, you should find the Romaji for the names, so others who know the series elsewhere can know who you mean. I'll leave other matters for the editors. - [[User:Pudding321\|Pudding321]] ([[User_talk:Pudding321\|Talk]]) 10:00, 17 October 2012 (CDT)

Kanziel at 13:35, 3 October 2012

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	For your translations, always remember to use past tense for the narration. Present tense should only be used sometimes in speech or first person thoughts. How to tell if it's first person? Usage of words like 我 and such, or perhaps overly casual/speech-like grammar. Try to write it like.... your English narrative essay at school. I hope this helps. [[User:Florza\|Florza]] ([[User talk:Florza\|talk]]) 08:22, 3 October 2012 (CDT)		For your translations, always remember to use past tense for the narration. Present tense should only be used sometimes in speech or first person thoughts. How to tell if it's first person? Usage of words like 我 and such, or perhaps overly casual/speech-like grammar. Try to write it like.... your English narrative essay at school. I hope this helps. [[User:Florza\|Florza]] ([[User talk:Florza\|talk]]) 08:22, 3 October 2012 (CDT)

			Ok thanks, I will take note of it and improve my translation next time.--[[User:Kanziel\|Kanziel]] ([[User talk:Kanziel#top\|talk]]) 08:35, 3 October 2012 (CDT)

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Kanziel at 13:28, 3 October 2012

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	~~== Prologue of Saiunkoku Monotgatari ==~~

	~~Legend tells of the establishing of Saiunkoku.~~

	~~Saiunkoku was once infested by demons who threw the country into turmoil~~

	~~In a seemly never-ending chaos, a youth went on a journey.~~

	~~The youth slayed demons and monsters, and sincerely praying for the safety and happiness of the people, while continuing his long never-ending journey.~~

	~~Finally his sincerity touched the eight gods.~~

	~~Ran sage, Hong sage, Heki sage, Ko sage, Haku sage, Koku sage, Sa sage and the Shi sage—the Eight Coloured Sages named after the colours.~~

	~~The sages used their divine powers to help the youth.~~

	~~The youth name is So Gen, and with the help of the Eight Coloured Sages, So Gen forged an era of peace with the nation of Saiunkoku and became its first emperor.~~

	After the death of So Gen, the Eight Coloured Sages disappeared without a trace too. However, the elegant palace built for the Eight Coloured Sages, named as the residence of the Eight Coloured Sages—Sento Palace, is said to stand in one corner of the royal palace.
	~~<Legend of the founding of Saiunkoku—Author unknown>~~

	~~Prologue~~

	~~In the late night—deep in the royal palace, a group of court ministers of state are having a secret discussion.~~

	~~“……indeed it is a big problem.”~~

	~~“Exactly, it is a bad situation.”~~

	~~“The emperor has already ascended the throne for half a year.”~~

	~~“Are we really not able to do anything......?”~~

	~~“We originally thought that everything would turn out for the best……”~~

	~~“This group of old men really cannot follow the youth trend.”~~

	~~“Rubbish! What kind of trend is that!?”~~

	An old court minister of state roared resentfully. He was an active general in the battlefield in his youth, and even though he is over sixty, he has not changed his impatient temper even up to this day.

	~~“But if this continued—“~~

	~~“You are right, if this continue, it is hard to say that corrupted officials will not appear.”~~

	~~“That’s not all; mutineers are planning to move as well.”~~

	~~“The upmost important issue right now is—“~~
	~~One of the court ministers of state’s tone is clearly calmer than other court ministers of state, but with a worried look and said low garrulously:~~
	~~“…… to think of a solution to stop all rumours that is causing uproar.”~~

	~~The court ministers immediately quiet down. Indeed, the upmost important issue right now is that problem.~~

	~~“You, you are right!”~~
	~~Another court minister wiped his sweat and dry cough few times.~~

	~~“Instead of worrying of the corrupted official that may appear, I think that it is most important to appease the emotions of the people.”~~

	~~“But… We have already tried everything!”~~

	~~“What should we do?”~~
	~~“—I have a planned.”~~
	~~As this man is the court minister with the most power in the country, the surrounding immediately went silent; everyone looked at him with expectation.~~

	~~“—as the saying goes,”~~
	~~The old court minister says: “the wife is also the husband’s nemesis.”~~
	~~--[[User:Kanziel\|Kanziel]] ([[User talk:Kanziel#top\|talk]]) 02:01, 3 October 2012 (CDT)~~

Florza at 13:22, 3 October 2012

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	At the bottom...you mean here? I suggest you do it on your "user page" (top panel) where you gave your intro. Remove the prologue from here. Its better then. For the link do this: <nowiki>[[series name]]</nowiki>. For other needs, just have a look at "Project Presentations" (top left panel) . --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 08:11, 3 October 2012 (CDT)		At the bottom...you mean here? I suggest you do it on your "user page" (top panel) where you gave your intro. Remove the prologue from here. Its better then. For the link do this: <nowiki>[[series name]]</nowiki>. For other needs, just have a look at "Project Presentations" (top left panel) . --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 08:11, 3 October 2012 (CDT)

			For your translations, always remember to use past tense for the narration. Present tense should only be used sometimes in speech or first person thoughts. How to tell if it's first person? Usage of words like 我 and such, or perhaps overly casual/speech-like grammar. Try to write it like.... your English narrative essay at school. I hope this helps. [[User:Florza\|Florza]] ([[User talk:Florza\|talk]]) 08:22, 3 October 2012 (CDT)

	== Kira here~~ ==		== Kira here~~ ==

Chancs at 13:11, 3 October 2012

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	How do I add the link to the novel at the bottom?--[[User:Kanziel\|Kanziel]] ([[User talk:Kanziel#top\|talk]]) 08:01, 3 October 2012 (CDT)		How do I add the link to the novel at the bottom?--[[User:Kanziel\|Kanziel]] ([[User talk:Kanziel#top\|talk]]) 08:01, 3 October 2012 (CDT)

			At the bottom...you mean here? I suggest you do it on your "user page" (top panel) where you gave your intro. Remove the prologue from here. Its better then. For the link do this: <nowiki>[[series name]]</nowiki>. For other needs, just have a look at "Project Presentations" (top left panel) . --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 08:11, 3 October 2012 (CDT)
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Kanziel at 13:01, 3 October 2012

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	I have created the main page for the [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Saiunkoku_Monogatari series]. Post your prologue as well as chapter 1 in the appropriate. Just have a look at the synopsis. I have copied it from the manga summary so ám not sure. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 06:49, 3 October 2012 (CDT)		I have created the main page for the [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Saiunkoku_Monogatari series]. Post your prologue as well as chapter 1 in the appropriate. Just have a look at the synopsis. I have copied it from the manga summary so ám not sure. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 06:49, 3 October 2012 (CDT)

			How do I add the link to the novel at the bottom?--[[User:Kanziel\|Kanziel]] ([[User talk:Kanziel#top\|talk]]) 08:01, 3 October 2012 (CDT)
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Chancs at 11:49, 3 October 2012

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	Wait. Do one thing. Post the prologue on the forum. By this every1 will know about the translation and project initiation. I will create the main page for the series, and then we can post it here on wiki. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 05:47, 3 October 2012 (CDT)		Wait. Do one thing. Post the prologue on the forum. By this every1 will know about the translation and project initiation. I will create the main page for the series, and then we can post it here on wiki. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 05:47, 3 October 2012 (CDT)

			I have created the main page for the [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Saiunkoku_Monogatari series]. Post your prologue as well as chapter 1 in the appropriate. Just have a look at the synopsis. I have copied it from the manga summary so ám not sure. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 06:49, 3 October 2012 (CDT)
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Kanziel at 10:53, 3 October 2012

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	On a side note, those mentioned on the left panel are not the only LNs here. Before the final confirmation by the admins the new project is termed as a "Teaser Project" (on left side panel below the picture). Minimum requirement for the final approval is atleast 2 completely translated chapters and a dedicated translator. When the requirements are met a template is added for bringing it to the admins' attention. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 05:03, 3 October 2012 (CDT)		On a side note, those mentioned on the left panel are not the only LNs here. Before the final confirmation by the admins the new project is termed as a "Teaser Project" (on left side panel below the picture). Minimum requirement for the final approval is atleast 2 completely translated chapters and a dedicated translator. When the requirements are met a template is added for bringing it to the admins' attention. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 05:03, 3 October 2012 (CDT)

	Monogatari series is different from Saiunkoku ~~Monotagari~~. Totally different stories with different title.		Monogatari series is different from Saiunkoku Monogatari. Totally different stories with different title.
	Saiunkoku ~~Monotagari~~ is not a teaser project as well. I have already translated chapter 1 and prologue. How do I bring it to admins? Send to them? --[[User:Kanziel\|Kanziel]] ([[User talk:Kanziel#top\|talk]]) 05:34, 3 October 2012 (CDT)		Saiunkoku Monogatari is not a teaser project as well. I have already translated chapter 1 and prologue. How do I bring it to admins? Send to them? --[[User:Kanziel\|Kanziel]] ([[User talk:Kanziel#top\|talk]]) 05:34, 3 October 2012 (CDT)

	Wait. Do one thing. Post the prologue on the forum. By this every1 will know about the translation and project initiation. I will create the main page for the series, and then we can post it here on wiki. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 05:47, 3 October 2012 (CDT)		Wait. Do one thing. Post the prologue on the forum. By this every1 will know about the translation and project initiation. I will create the main page for the series, and then we can post it here on wiki. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 05:47, 3 October 2012 (CDT)
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	== Prologue of Saiunkoku ~~Monotagari~~ ==		== Prologue of Saiunkoku Monotgatari ==

	Legend tells of the establishing of Saiunkoku.		Legend tells of the establishing of Saiunkoku.

Chancs at 10:47, 3 October 2012

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	Monogatari series is different from Saiunkoku Monotagari. Totally different stories with different title.		Monogatari series is different from Saiunkoku Monotagari. Totally different stories with different title.
	Saiunkoku Monotagari is not a teaser project as well. I have already translated chapter 1 and prologue. How do I bring it to admins? Send to them? --[[User:Kanziel\|Kanziel]] ([[User talk:Kanziel#top\|talk]]) 05:34, 3 October 2012 (CDT)		Saiunkoku Monotagari is not a teaser project as well. I have already translated chapter 1 and prologue. How do I bring it to admins? Send to them? --[[User:Kanziel\|Kanziel]] ([[User talk:Kanziel#top\|talk]]) 05:34, 3 October 2012 (CDT)

			Wait. Do one thing. Post the prologue on the forum. By this every1 will know about the translation and project initiation. I will create the main page for the series, and then we can post it here on wiki. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 05:47, 3 October 2012 (CDT)
	== Kira here~~ ==		== Kira here~~ ==

Kanziel at 10:34, 3 October 2012

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	On a side note, those mentioned on the left panel are not the only LNs here. Before the final confirmation by the admins the new project is termed as a "Teaser Project" (on left side panel below the picture). Minimum requirement for the final approval is atleast 2 completely translated chapters and a dedicated translator. When the requirements are met a template is added for bringing it to the admins' attention. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 05:03, 3 October 2012 (CDT)		On a side note, those mentioned on the left panel are not the only LNs here. Before the final confirmation by the admins the new project is termed as a "Teaser Project" (on left side panel below the picture). Minimum requirement for the final approval is atleast 2 completely translated chapters and a dedicated translator. When the requirements are met a template is added for bringing it to the admins' attention. --[[User:Chancs\|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs\|talk]]) 05:03, 3 October 2012 (CDT)

			Monogatari series is different from Saiunkoku Monotagari. Totally different stories with different title.
			Saiunkoku Monotagari is not a teaser project as well. I have already translated chapter 1 and prologue. How do I bring it to admins? Send to them? --[[User:Kanziel\|Kanziel]] ([[User talk:Kanziel#top\|talk]]) 05:34, 3 October 2012 (CDT)
	== Kira here~~ ==		== Kira here~~ ==