User talk:Xersax - Revision history

AnimeFan9001 at 06:03, 12 May 2014

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	It's been a month since you last did anything. Are you busy IRL or has something happened to you?--[[User:Kemm\|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm\|talk]]) 16:08, 8 May 2014 (CDT)		It's been a month since you last did anything. Are you busy IRL or has something happened to you?--[[User:Kemm\|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm\|talk]]) 16:08, 8 May 2014 (CDT)

	Seriously, if you have some irl issues or something, its cool, but it'd be great if you could let us know if you intend to finish the chapter or not.		Seriously, if you have some irl issues or something, its cool, but it'd be great if you could let us know if you intend to finish the chapter or not.--[[User:AnimeFan9001\|AnimeFan9001]] ([[User talk:AnimeFan9001\|talk]]) 01:03, 12 May 2014 (CDT)

AnimeFan9001 at 06:03, 12 May 2014

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	===What happened?===		===What happened?===
	It's been a month since you last did anything. Are you busy IRL or has something happened to you?--[[User:Kemm\|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm\|talk]]) 16:08, 8 May 2014 (CDT)		It's been a month since you last did anything. Are you busy IRL or has something happened to you?--[[User:Kemm\|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm\|talk]]) 16:08, 8 May 2014 (CDT)

			Seriously, if you have some irl issues or something, its cool, but it'd be great if you could let us know if you intend to finish the chapter or not.

Kemm at 21:08, 8 May 2014

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	=== Tokyo Ravens ===		=== Tokyo Ravens ===
	Thanks for helping with the TL. Hope translating v6c1 is going well. --[[User:AnimeFan9001\|AnimeFan9001]] ([[User talk:AnimeFan9001\|talk]]) 23:42, 28 April 2014 (CDT)		Thanks for helping with the TL. Hope translating v6c1 is going well. --[[User:AnimeFan9001\|AnimeFan9001]] ([[User talk:AnimeFan9001\|talk]]) 23:42, 28 April 2014 (CDT)


			===What happened?===
			It's been a month since you last did anything. Are you busy IRL or has something happened to you?--[[User:Kemm\|Kemm]] ([[User talk:Kemm\|talk]]) 16:08, 8 May 2014 (CDT)

AnimeFan9001 at 04:42, 29 April 2014

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	=== Tokyo Ravens ===		=== Tokyo Ravens ===
	Thanks for helping with the TL. Hope translating v6c1 is going well. --[[~~Special~~:~~Contributions/207.62.170.219~~\|~~207.62.170.219~~]] 23:41, 28 April 2014 (CDT)		Thanks for helping with the TL. Hope translating v6c1 is going well. --[[User:AnimeFan9001\|AnimeFan9001]] ([[User talk:AnimeFan9001\|talk]]) 23:42, 28 April 2014 (CDT)

207.62.170.219 at 04:41, 29 April 2014

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	Thanks for helping with the TL. Hope translating v6c1 is going well.		Thanks for helping with the TL. Hope translating v6c1 is going well. --[[Special:Contributions/207.62.170.219\|207.62.170.219]] 23:41, 28 April 2014 (CDT)

207.62.170.219 at 04:40, 29 April 2014

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	[[User:Irbored\|Irbored]] ([[User talk:Irbored\|talk]]) 07:51, 3 February 2014 (CST)		[[User:Irbored\|Irbored]] ([[User talk:Irbored\|talk]]) 07:51, 3 February 2014 (CST)

			=== Tokyo Ravens ===
			Thanks for helping with the TL. Hope translating v6c1 is going well.

Irbored at 13:51, 3 February 2014

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	[[~~Special~~:~~Contributions/79.118.125.189~~\|~~79.118.125.189~~]] 07:49, 3 February 2014 (CST)		[[User:Irbored\|Irbored]] ([[User talk:Irbored\|talk]]) 07:51, 3 February 2014 (CST)

79.118.125.189 at 13:49, 3 February 2014

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Irbored at 18:17, 13 January 2014

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 '''Editing Check for TnJtRnK'''<br />
-Your changed "Minerva lying down, looking at this image - at this moment, she is aware that ..." which was present tense to " Minerva was lying down, looking at this image - at that moment, she was aware that ..." to past tense.
+Leave those as is. As I said before it's an author/Chinese translator thing.
-She does not become aware of that in the past. She becomes aware right at that point in time. [[User:Irbored|Irbored]] ([[User talk:Irbored|talk]]) 06:20, 26 December 2013 (CST)
+Editing based on what I can gather: Babies just grow sparse amounts of hair, however this baby's hair looked as though it was infected at birth with a blood-like red. She opened her eyes, looking at life first followed by the rays of light, '''then looking towards here(?)'''
-"From the moment she began to accept supporting vision predicted, she means not to sleep, and gradually became a habit. From the moment she started having prophecy's, it would not allow her to sleep soundly, gradually it became a habit." . No it's not meant as a repeat. When I translate I do write it first as a rough draft (1st sentence) then i go over it a few times to write it "properly" so it makes sense. The 2nd sentence is the one that should have went in in the "final" version. You might see more stuff like these, because i don't go over the entire chapter to proofread. [[User:Irbored|Irbored]] ([[User talk:Irbored|talk]]) 08:10, 26 December 2013 (CST)
+P.S. Leave the () (-- ) (--... (...-- (... , as they are. ( can be inner thought so can--, -- can also be a slight pause or change in thinking from one idea to another.
-"Your Majesty, I humbly offer greet you. " . This kind of stuff is also bad. Should be something like "I humbly offer my greetings" or "i humbly greet you". This happens when i have one idea in my head then i start writing and think of something else that sounds better xD.[[User:Irbored|Irbored]] ([[User talk:Irbored|talk]]) 08:18, 26 December 2013 (CST)
+P.S.S. Stop writing both on my talk page and the forums for TLC. Pick one and stick with it. Fastest way would be to write on my talk page.
-You should also add yourself as an editor if you will actively edit the volume. [[User:Irbored|Irbored]] ([[User talk:Irbored|talk]]) 08:12, 26 December 2013 (CST)
+'''"I'm still like rest''', we will have to wait." Galerius said to the person that accompanied him.
-Give me 1-2 paragraphs so I know what you are talking about [[User:Irbored|Irbored]] ([[User talk:Irbored|talk]]) 05:14, 27 December 2013 (CST)
+Edit: I've changed all the "--" used in the narrative and speech to another style of dash\
-" But it's long. Like really long." = how many lines are we talking about?. The reason I don't proofread is because I don't have the time to go over everything again and again. So if you're talking about a whole chapter ="really long" then really don't bother. I'm not trying to be an ass or anything but it takes me 7-10 hours to translate each chapter.
+DONT DO THAT. Again that -- is there for a reason. it's a pause. it's a change in ideas. or it's simply instead of ;DONT DO THAT.
-SO as I said before just do your best and try not to add context or change the tenses. If you change the tense to a sentence and the meaning seems to have changed then don't change it.
+[[User:Irbored|Irbored]] ([[User talk:Irbored|talk]]) 12:17, 13 January 2014 (CST)

Xersax at 14:39, 9 January 2014

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	'''Editing Check for TnJtRnK'''<br />		'''Editing Check for TnJtRnK'''<br />

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	[[User:Irbored\|Irbored]] ([[User talk:Irbored\|talk]]) 03:17, 6 January 2014 (CST)		[[User:Irbored\|Irbored]] ([[User talk:Irbored\|talk]]) 03:17, 6 January 2014 (CST)

	~~'''Expressing Gratitude'''<br />~~