White Album 2/Script/1005 - Revision history

Frogstat at 23:40, 28 December 2021

2021-12-28T23:40:43Z

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	\|225\|武也\|Takeya		\|225\|武也\|Takeya
	\|「そうそう、それそれ！<br>で、そのシリーズの一番目がそのピアニストでさ」		\|「そうそう、それそれ！<br>で、そのシリーズの一番目がそのピアニストでさ」
	\|"Yeah, yeah, that! ~~The~~ pianist ~~got~~ first ~~place~~ in that series~~, right?~~"		\|"Yeah, yeah, that! Anyway, the pianist was the first one in that series."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|しかも学園に多大な寄付をしていたとなれば、<br>教職員も冬馬を色んな意味で<br>特別扱いせざるを得ないだろう。		\|しかも学園に多大な寄付をしていたとなれば、<br>教職員も冬馬を色んな意味で<br>特別扱いせざるを得ないだろう。
	\|And if she's also made such a large donation to the school, no wonder the staff would give Touma special treatment...		\|And if she's also made such a large donation to the school, no wonder the staff would give Touma special treatment..
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|471\|\|		\|471\|\|
	\|あの、二度目の出逢いの屋上。		\|あの、二度目の出逢いの屋上。
	\|On that rooftop, where we had our second meeting...		\|On that rooftop, where we had our second meeting..
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|927\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|927\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|[F14「なら最初から仕切ればいいのに…」]		\|[F14「なら最初から仕切ればいいのに…」]
	\|[F14"Could’ve just said so from the start then."]		\|[F14"Could’ve just said so from the start then.."]
	\|}}		\|}}

Frogstat at 22:49, 28 December 2021

2021-12-28T22:49:41Z

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	\|しかも学園に多大な寄付をしていたとなれば、<br>教職員も冬馬を色んな意味で<br>特別扱いせざるを得ないだろう。		\|しかも学園に多大な寄付をしていたとなれば、<br>教職員も冬馬を色んな意味で<br>特別扱いせざるを得ないだろう。
	\|And if she's also made such a large donation to the school, no wonder the staff would give Touma special treatment..		\|And if she's also made such a large donation to the school, no wonder the staff would give Touma special treatment...
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|471\|\|		\|471\|\|
	\|あの、二度目の出逢いの屋上。		\|あの、二度目の出逢いの屋上。
	\|On that rooftop, where we had our second meeting..		\|On that rooftop, where we had our second meeting...
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|927\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|927\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|[F14「なら最初から仕切ればいいのに…」]		\|[F14「なら最初から仕切ればいいのに…」]
	\|[F14"Could’ve just said so from the start then.."]		\|[F14"Could’ve just said so from the start then."]
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|1400\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|1400\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「潔いな北原。<br>そんなぬるい根性であたしを口説こうとしてたわけ？<br>…５年早いね」		\|「潔いな北原。<br>そんなぬるい根性であたしを口説こうとしてたわけ？<br>…５年早いね」
	\|"You're bold, Kitahara. Did you plan to ~~persuade~~ me with your tepid attitude...? You’re getting ahead of yourself."		\|"You're bold, Kitahara. Did you plan to convince me with your tepid attitude...? You’re getting ahead of yourself."
	\|}}		\|}}

Frogstat at 00:08, 28 December 2021

2021-12-28T00:08:09Z

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	\|1400\|かずさ\|Kazusa		\|1400\|かずさ\|Kazusa
	\|「潔いな北原。<br>そんなぬるい根性であたしを口説こうとしてたわけ？<br>…５年早いね」		\|「潔いな北原。<br>そんなぬるい根性であたしを口説こうとしてたわけ？<br>…５年早いね」
	\|"You're bold, Kitahara. Did you plan to ~~convince~~ me with your tepid attitude...? You’re getting ahead of yourself."		\|"You're bold, Kitahara. Did you plan to persuade me with your tepid attitude...? You’re getting ahead of yourself."
	\|}}		\|}}

Frogstat at 23:46, 27 December 2021

2021-12-27T23:46:28Z

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Frogstat at 20:40, 26 December 2021

2021-12-26T20:40:16Z

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	:*春希<br>「向こうの家に電話されて、一発でバレて、<br>友達と二人揃ってもの凄く叱られたとか」		:*春希<br>「向こうの家に電話されて、一発でバレて、<br>友達と二人揃ってもの凄く叱られたとか」

	~~== Text ==~~

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Frogstat at 14:48, 26 December 2021

2021-12-26T14:48:23Z

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	\|1070\|春希\|Haruki		\|1070\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「い、いただきます」		\|「い、いただきます」
	\|"I-~~Itadakimasu~~."		\|"L-Let's eat."
	\|}}		\|}}

Frogstat at 13:22, 26 December 2021

2021-12-26T13:22:03Z

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	:*春希<br>「友達と一緒に夜の繁華街うろついててさ、<br>お互いにアリバイ工作してたんだけど」		:*春希<br>「友達と一緒に夜の繁華街うろついててさ、<br>お互いにアリバイ工作してたんだけど」
	:*春希<br>「向こうの家に電話されて、一発でバレて、<br>友達と二人揃ってもの凄く叱られたとか」		:*春希<br>「向こうの家に電話されて、一発でバレて、<br>友達と二人揃ってもの凄く叱られたとか」

			== Text ==

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	\|1068\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|1068\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「それじゃ、いただきます。\k\n		\|「それじゃ、いただきます。\k\n
	\|"Well then, ~~let's~~ eat. \k		\|"Well then, let’s eat. \k
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|1070\|春希\|Haruki		\|1070\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「い、いただきます」		\|「い、いただきます」
	\|"Y-~~Yeah, let's eat~~."		\|"I-Itadakimasu."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|1393\|\|		\|1393\|\|
	\|そんな、半年間一度も見せたことのない表情は、<br>夜空の宝石の煌めきに負けないくらいに輝いていて。		\|そんな、半年間一度も見せたことのない表情は、<br>夜空の宝石の煌めきに負けないくらいに輝いていて。
	\|~~In the~~ past six months~~, I'd never seen this expression on her face... The expression that now~~ shines brighter than ~~the gems~~ in the night sky.		\|This expression that she has kept hidden from me these past six months shines brighter than any gem in the night sky.
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|1394\|\|		\|1394\|\|
	\|…さっきまで<br>『大して綺麗でもない、いつも通りの夜空』<br>と表現していたのは棚に上げて。		\|…さっきまで<br>『大して綺麗でもない、いつも通りの夜空』<br>と表現していたのは棚に上げて。
	\|...~~I take back~~ my earlier description of the night sky~~: “commonplace~~, and not too beautiful.”		\|...Setting aside my earlier lackluster description of the night sky as "commonplace, and not too beautiful", that is.
	\|}}		\|}}

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	{{WA2ScriptTableEnd}}		{{WA2ScriptTableEnd}}

	~~== Script Chart ==~~
	~~{{:White_Album_2/ScriptChart}}~~

Frogstat: Undo revision 574383 by Frogstat (talk)

2021-12-26T13:18:48Z

Undo revision 574383 by Frogstat (talk)

← Older revision		Revision as of 13:18, 26 December 2021
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			Return to the main page [[White Album 2\|here]].

			== Translation ==
			*[[User:Velocity7\|velocity7]]
			*[[User:KagetsukiArk\|KagetsukiArk]]

			== Editing ==
			*[[User:Alamanc_of_Mishappening\|Alamanc_of_Mishappening]]
			*[[User:kyoycz\|kyoycz]]
			*[[User:Nekiko\|Nekiko]]
			*[[User:Turbos\|turbos86]]

			== Translation Notes ==
			1. Segments of this file will coincide with the digital novels from the [[White Album 2 Omake]] page. If any edits are made, please make sure both match up. They are as follows:
			:* Lines 1-46 and 328-391 coincide with [[White_Album_2_Omake/Story01/Chapter_1\|Chapter 1]] of ''The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで)''.
			:**The VN side appears to have extra sfx text that was added.
			:* Lines 534-595 coincide with [[White_Album_2_Omake/Story01/Chapter_2\|Chapter 2]] of ''The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで)''.
			:* Lines 676-677 coincide with the [[White_Album_2_Omake/Story01/Epilogue\|Epilogue]] of ''The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで)''.
			:**Line 676 is a bit extended in the VN version.
			:* Line 836 coincides with [[White_Album_2_Omake/Story04/Chapter_3/All\|Chapter 3 (all-ages)]] of ''The Idol Who Forgot How To Sing / 歌を忘れた偶像（アイドル）''.
			2. The PS3 version changed line 1352 and replaced it with two different lines (likely in order to maintain CERO D rating):
			:*春希<br>「友達と一緒に夜の繁華街うろついててさ、<br>お互いにアリバイ工作してたんだけど」
			:*春希<br>「向こうの家に電話されて、一発でバレて、<br>友達と二人揃ってもの凄く叱られたとか」

	== Text ==		== Text ==

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	\|1068\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|1068\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「それじゃ、いただきます。\k\n		\|「それじゃ、いただきます。\k\n
	\|"Well then, ~~let’s~~ eat. \k		\|"Well then, let's eat. \k
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|1070\|春希\|Haruki		\|1070\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「い、いただきます」		\|「い、いただきます」
	\|"I-~~Itadakimasu~~."		\|"Y-Yeah, let's eat."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|1393\|\|		\|1393\|\|
	\|そんな、半年間一度も見せたことのない表情は、<br>夜空の宝石の煌めきに負けないくらいに輝いていて。		\|そんな、半年間一度も見せたことのない表情は、<br>夜空の宝石の煌めきに負けないくらいに輝いていて。
	\|~~This expression that she has kept hidden from me these~~ past six months shines brighter than ~~any gem~~ in the night sky.		\|In the past six months, I'd never seen this expression on her face... The expression that now shines brighter than the gems in the night sky.
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|1394\|\|		\|1394\|\|
	\|…さっきまで<br>『大して綺麗でもない、いつも通りの夜空』<br>と表現していたのは棚に上げて。		\|…さっきまで<br>『大して綺麗でもない、いつも通りの夜空』<br>と表現していたのは棚に上げて。
	\|...~~Setting aside~~ my earlier ~~lackluster~~ description of the night sky ~~as "commonplace~~, and not too beautiful~~", that is~~.		\|...I take back my earlier description of the night sky: “commonplace, and not too beautiful.”
	\|}}		\|}}

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	{{WA2ScriptTableEnd}}		{{WA2ScriptTableEnd}}

			== Script Chart ==
			{{:White_Album_2/ScriptChart}}

Frogstat at 13:18, 26 December 2021

2021-12-26T13:18:12Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 13:18, 26 December 2021
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	~~Return to the main page [[White Album 2\|here]].~~

	~~== Translation ==~~
	*[[User:Velocity7\|velocity7]]
	*[[User:KagetsukiArk\|KagetsukiArk]]

	~~== Editing ==~~
	*[[User:Alamanc_of_Mishappening\|Alamanc_of_Mishappening]]
	*[[User:kyoycz\|kyoycz]]
	*[[User:Nekiko\|Nekiko]]
	*[[User:Turbos\|turbos86]]

	~~== Translation Notes ==~~
	~~1. Segments of this file will coincide with the digital novels from the [[White Album 2 Omake]] page. If any edits are made, please make sure both match up. They are as follows:~~
	~~:* Lines 1-46 and 328-391 coincide with [[White_Album_2_Omake/Story01/Chapter_1\|Chapter 1]] of ''The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで)''.~~
	~~:**The VN side appears to have extra sfx text that was added.~~
	~~:* Lines 534-595 coincide with [[White_Album_2_Omake/Story01/Chapter_2\|Chapter 2]] of ''The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで)''.~~
	~~:* Lines 676-677 coincide with the [[White_Album_2_Omake/Story01/Epilogue\|Epilogue]] of ''The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで)''.~~
	~~:**Line 676 is a bit extended in the VN version.~~
	~~:* Line 836 coincides with [[White_Album_2_Omake/Story04/Chapter_3/All\|Chapter 3 (all-ages)]] of ''The Idol Who Forgot How To Sing / 歌を忘れた偶像（アイドル）''.~~
	~~2. The PS3 version changed line 1352 and replaced it with two different lines (likely in order to maintain CERO D rating):~~
	~~:*春希<br>「友達と一緒に夜の繁華街うろついててさ、<br>お互いにアリバイ工作してたんだけど」~~
	~~:*春希<br>「向こうの家に電話されて、一発でバレて、<br>友達と二人揃ってもの凄く叱られたとか」~~

	== Text ==		== Text ==

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	\|1068\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|1068\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「それじゃ、いただきます。\k\n		\|「それじゃ、いただきます。\k\n
	\|"Well then, ~~let's~~ eat. \k		\|"Well then, let’s eat. \k
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|1070\|春希\|Haruki		\|1070\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「い、いただきます」		\|「い、いただきます」
	\|"Y-~~Yeah, let's eat~~."		\|"I-Itadakimasu."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|1393\|\|		\|1393\|\|
	\|そんな、半年間一度も見せたことのない表情は、<br>夜空の宝石の煌めきに負けないくらいに輝いていて。		\|そんな、半年間一度も見せたことのない表情は、<br>夜空の宝石の煌めきに負けないくらいに輝いていて。
	\|~~In the~~ past six months~~, I'd never seen this expression on her face... The expression that now~~ shines brighter than ~~the gems~~ in the night sky.		\|This expression that she has kept hidden from me these past six months shines brighter than any gem in the night sky.
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|1394\|\|		\|1394\|\|
	\|…さっきまで<br>『大して綺麗でもない、いつも通りの夜空』<br>と表現していたのは棚に上げて。		\|…さっきまで<br>『大して綺麗でもない、いつも通りの夜空』<br>と表現していたのは棚に上げて。
	\|...~~I take back~~ my earlier description of the night sky~~: “commonplace~~, and not too beautiful.”		\|...Setting aside my earlier lackluster description of the night sky as "commonplace, and not too beautiful", that is.
	\|}}		\|}}

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	{{WA2ScriptTableEnd}}		{{WA2ScriptTableEnd}}

	~~== Script Chart ==~~
	~~{{:White_Album_2/ScriptChart}}~~

Frogstat at 08:39, 23 December 2021

2021-12-23T08:39:58Z

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	\|1068\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|1068\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「それじゃ、いただきます。\k\n		\|「それじゃ、いただきます。\k\n
	\|"Well then, ~~itadakimasu~~. \k		\|"Well then, let's eat. \k
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|1070\|春希\|Haruki		\|1070\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「い、いただきます」		\|「い、いただきます」
	\|"I-~~Itadakimasu~~."		\|"Y-Yeah, let's eat."
	\|}}		\|}}