White Album 2/Script/1008 050 - Revision history

Krizs: /* Text */

2021-12-18T18:21:42Z

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NaokiP: /* Editing */

2021-05-29T11:12:39Z

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	== Editing ==		== Editing ==
	Corrected some of the mistakes in tense as well as reworded some phrases to make better sense or flow better. ~~- (Naokip?)~~		Corrected some of the mistakes in tense as well as reworded some phrases to make better sense or flow better.
	*[[User:Nekiko\|Nekiko]]		*[[User:Nekiko\|Nekiko]]
	*[[User:Turbos\|turbos86]]		*[[User:Turbos\|turbos86]]

Turbos: /* Editing */

2018-08-17T01:38:39Z

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	Corrected some of the mistakes in tense as well as reworded some phrases to make better sense or flow better. - (Naokip?)		Corrected some of the mistakes in tense as well as reworded some phrases to make better sense or flow better. - (Naokip?)
	*[[User:Nekiko\|Nekiko]]		*[[User:Nekiko\|Nekiko]]
			*[[User:Turbos\|turbos86]]

	== Translation Notes ==		== Translation Notes ==

Turbos: /* Text */

2018-08-17T01:38:24Z

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	\|外から聞こえてくる同級生たちの喧騒も、<br>陽が沈むとともに、少しずつ静まってきてる。		\|外から聞こえてくる同級生たちの喧騒も、<br>陽が沈むとともに、少しずつ静まってきてる。
	\|I can still ~~hear the noise~~ outside, but with the sunset, it's gotten more quiet.		\|I can hear classmates still making a ruckus outside, but along with the sunset, it's gotten more quiet.
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|41\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|41\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「頑張ったもんね今日。<br>ううん、今日だけじゃなくて、今週ずっと」		\|「頑張ったもんね今日。<br>ううん、今日だけじゃなくて、今週ずっと」
	\|"You did a great job today. No, not just today, you've been giving it your all ~~the whole past~~ week."		\|"You did a great job today. No, not just today, you've been giving it your all this entire week."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|51\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|51\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「ううん。<br>春希くんは、十分男の子の役目、果たしたよ？」		\|「ううん。<br>春希くんは、十分男の子の役目、果たしたよ？」
	\|"It's fine.<br>Haruki-kun, you've already more than ~~filled~~ that role, you know?"		\|"It's fine.<br>Haruki-kun, you've already more than fulfilled that role, you know?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|70\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|70\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「あ～…歓声が耳に残ってる。<br>当分忘れられそうにないな。<br>目を閉じると、まだ夢の中にいるみたい」		\|「あ～…歓声が耳に残ってる。<br>当分忘れられそうにないな。<br>目を閉じると、まだ夢の中にいるみたい」
	\|"Aaah... I can still hear the cheering... I guess I won't be able to forget it for a while. If I close my eyes, it's like I'm ~~dreaming it all over..~~."		\|"Aaah... I can still hear the cheering... I guess I won't be able to forget it for a while. If I close my eyes, it's like I'm still in that dream."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|119\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|119\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「好きな人に、誉められて…<br>だから調子に乗って、ごほうびを、ねだって…」		\|「好きな人に、誉められて…<br>だから調子に乗って、ごほうびを、ねだって…」
	\|"The person I like praised me... So I got ~~conceited~~, ~~hoping~~ for a reward..."		\|"The person I like praised me... So I got carried away, looking for a reward..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|121\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|121\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「そしたらその人が、ちょっと苦笑いして、<br>甘えん坊のわたしを、やさしく抱きしめて…」		\|「そしたらその人が、ちょっと苦笑いして、<br>甘えん坊のわたしを、やさしく抱きしめて…」
	\|"~~That~~ that person, while smiling bitterly, would gently hug me, spoiled as I am..."		\|"Then that person, while smiling bitterly, would gently hug me, spoiled as I am..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|それは、雪菜が動いたから。<br>繋いだ両手を胸の前に、<br>額をこつんと、俺の胸に。		\|それは、雪菜が動いたから。<br>繋いだ両手を胸の前に、<br>額をこつんと、俺の胸に。
	\|Because she ~~moves~~... ~~She brings~~ our connected hands to her chest, then leans her head into my chest.		\|Because she moved... Bringing our connected hands to her chest, she then leans her head into my chest.
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|130\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|130\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「…そんな感じの、<br>都合のいい夢だったんだけどなぁ」		\|「…そんな感じの、<br>都合のいい夢だったんだけどなぁ」
	\|"...Since something like that is... Just a convenient dream for me, see."		\|"...Since something like that is... Just a convenient dream for me, you see."
	\|}}		\|}}

Dokdek: /* Text */

2018-08-13T14:09:08Z

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	\|「おはよ春希くん。<br>そして、お疲れさま」		\|「おはよ春希くん。<br>そして、お疲れさま」
	\|"Good morning, ~~Haruki—kun~~. And, good work."		\|"Good morning, Haruki-kun. And, good work."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|28\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|28\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「そんなことしたら、<br>春希くんの寝顔がゆっくり楽しめないよ。<br>もったいない」		\|「そんなことしたら、<br>春希くんの寝顔がゆっくり楽しめないよ。<br>もったいない」
	\|"If I'd done that, I wouldn't have been able to take my time looking at ~~Haruki—kun~~'s sleeping face. It'd be such a waste."		\|"If I'd done that, I wouldn't have been able to take my time looking at Haruki-kun's sleeping face. It'd be such a waste."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|51\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|51\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「ううん。<br>春希くんは、十分男の子の役目、果たしたよ？」		\|「ううん。<br>春希くんは、十分男の子の役目、果たしたよ？」
	\|"It's fine.<br>~~Haruki—kun~~, you've already more than filled that role, you know?"		\|"It's fine.<br>Haruki-kun, you've already more than filled that role, you know?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|73\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|73\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「ね、春希くん」		\|「ね、春希くん」
	\|"Hey, ~~Haruki—kun~~."		\|"Hey, Haruki-kun."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|91\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|91\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「一緒にいてね、春希くん」		\|「一緒にいてね、春希くん」
	\|"You'll be with me... Right, ~~Haruki—kun~~?"		\|"You'll be with me... Right, Haruki-kun?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|97\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|97\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「もしもわたしが留年して、<br>春希くんの後輩になっちゃったとしても」		\|「もしもわたしが留年して、<br>春希くんの後輩になっちゃったとしても」
	\|"Even if I fail a year, and become ~~Haruki—kun~~'s underclassman..."		\|"Even if I fail a year, and become Haruki-kun's underclassman..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|109\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|109\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「ね、春希くん」		\|「ね、春希くん」
	\|"Hey, ~~Haruki—kun~~..."		\|"Hey, Haruki-kun..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|134\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|134\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「ね、春希くん…」		\|「ね、春希くん…」
	\|"Hey, ~~Haruki—kun~~..."		\|"Hey, Haruki-kun..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|179\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|179\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「ごめん…春希くん」		\|「ごめん…春希くん」
	\|"I'm sorry... ~~Haruki—kun~~."		\|"I'm sorry... Haruki-kun."
	\|}}		\|}}

Dokdek: /* Text */

2018-07-24T20:46:01Z

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	\|「おはよ春希くん。<br>そして、お疲れさま」		\|「おはよ春希くん。<br>そして、お疲れさま」
	\|"Good morning, ~~Haruki-kun~~. And, good work."		\|"Good morning, Haruki—kun. And, good work."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|28\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|28\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「そんなことしたら、<br>春希くんの寝顔がゆっくり楽しめないよ。<br>もったいない」		\|「そんなことしたら、<br>春希くんの寝顔がゆっくり楽しめないよ。<br>もったいない」
	\|"If I'd done that, I wouldn't have been able to take my time looking at ~~Haruki-kun~~'s sleeping face. It'd be such a waste."		\|"If I'd done that, I wouldn't have been able to take my time looking at Haruki—kun's sleeping face. It'd be such a waste."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|51\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|51\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「ううん。<br>春希くんは、十分男の子の役目、果たしたよ？」		\|「ううん。<br>春希くんは、十分男の子の役目、果たしたよ？」
	\|"It's fine.<br>~~Haruki-kun~~, you've already more than filled that role, you know?"		\|"It's fine.<br>Haruki—kun, you've already more than filled that role, you know?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|73\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|73\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「ね、春希くん」		\|「ね、春希くん」
	\|"Hey, ~~Haruki-kun~~."		\|"Hey, Haruki—kun."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|91\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|91\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「一緒にいてね、春希くん」		\|「一緒にいてね、春希くん」
	\|"You'll be with me... Right, ~~Haruki-kun~~?"		\|"You'll be with me... Right, Haruki—kun?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|97\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|97\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「もしもわたしが留年して、<br>春希くんの後輩になっちゃったとしても」		\|「もしもわたしが留年して、<br>春希くんの後輩になっちゃったとしても」
	\|"Even if I fail a year, and become ~~Haruki-kun~~'s underclassman..."		\|"Even if I fail a year, and become Haruki—kun's underclassman..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|109\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|109\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「ね、春希くん」		\|「ね、春希くん」
	\|"Hey, ~~Haruki-kun~~..."		\|"Hey, Haruki—kun..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|134\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|134\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「ね、春希くん…」		\|「ね、春希くん…」
	\|"Hey, ~~Haruki-kun~~..."		\|"Hey, Haruki—kun..."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|179\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|179\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「ごめん…春希くん」		\|「ごめん…春希くん」
	\|"I'm sorry... ~~Haruki-kun~~."		\|"I'm sorry... Haruki—kun."
	\|}}		\|}}

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2018-03-11T12:12:23Z

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	\|23\|春希\|Haruki		\|23\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「…もうそんな時間なのか。<br>だいぶ寝てたなぁ」		\|「…もうそんな時間なのか。<br>だいぶ寝てたなぁ」
	"...It's that late already? I sure slept in, huh."		\|"...It's that late already? I sure slept in, huh."
	\|}}		\|}}

Observer of Time: /* Text */

2018-03-11T11:11:22Z

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	\|23\|春希\|Haruki		\|23\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「…もうそんな時間なのか。<br>だいぶ寝てたなぁ」		\|「…もうそんな時間なのか。<br>だいぶ寝てたなぁ」
	\|"... It's that late already? I sure slept in, huh."		"...It's that late already? I sure slept in, huh."
	\|}}		\|}}

Kannagumi: /* Text */

2018-03-09T05:58:48Z

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	\|突然、ささやくような、でも艶めかしい声が、<br>俺の顔に触る。		\|突然、ささやくような、でも艶めかしい声が、<br>俺の顔に触る。
	\|... Suddenly, a quiet, yet captivating voice touches my face.		\|...Suddenly, a quiet, yet captivating voice touches my face.
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|31\|春希\|Haruki		\|31\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「…冗談だよな？」		\|「…冗談だよな？」
	\|"... You're joking, right?"		\|"...You're joking, right?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|…時々拗ねたりして完璧じゃないところが、<br>また、俺に強い責任感を与えてくれて。		\|…時々拗ねたりして完璧じゃないところが、<br>また、俺に強い責任感を与えてくれて。
	\|... Although her flaws sometimes shone through when she was sulking, it only reawoke my sense of responsibility.		\|...Although her flaws sometimes shone through when she was sulking, it only reawoke my sense of responsibility.
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|66\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|66\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「…そういえば振りつけとか全然やらなかったね」		\|「…そういえば振りつけとか全然やらなかったね」
	\|"... Come to think of it, I didn't even wave to them!"		\|"...Come to think of it, I didn't even wave to them!"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|123\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|123\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「…でも、ちょっと想像してたのと違うね、これ」		\|「…でも、ちょっと想像してたのと違うね、これ」
	\|"... But this is... a bit different from what I had in mind."		\|"...But this is... a bit different from what I had in mind."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|130\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|130\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「…そんな感じの、<br>都合のいい夢だったんだけどなぁ」		\|「…そんな感じの、<br>都合のいい夢だったんだけどなぁ」
	\|"... Since something like that is... Just a convenient dream for me, see."		\|"...Since something like that is... Just a convenient dream for me, see."
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|…俺の方が雪菜に押しつけていた。		\|…俺の方が雪菜に押しつけていた。
	\|... But then, I violently force myself back on Setsuna.		\|...But then, I violently force myself back on Setsuna.
	\|}}		\|}}

NaokiP: /* Text */

2018-02-12T20:01:27Z

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	\|75\|雪菜\|Setsuna		\|75\|雪菜\|Setsuna
	\|「これからも、ずっと一緒にいてね？」		\|「これからも、ずっと一緒にいてね？」
	\|"Will ~~you~~... ~~always stay~~ together ~~with me~~?"		\|"Will we be... together forever from now on?"
	\|}}		\|}}

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	\|76\|春希\|Haruki		\|76\|春希\|Haruki
	\|「…雪菜さえよければ」		\|「…雪菜さえよければ」
	\|"... If you~~'re okay with it~~, Setsuna."		\|"...If that's what you wish for, Setsuna."
	\|}}		\|}}